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Even when finding oneself engaged in interstellar war, good form must be observed. Our story is set thousands of years after the Terran Exodus, where two powerful, planet-dominating families―the elegant House Jakabitus and the less refined Hahn Empire―have reached a critical point in their generations-long war. Master Hennik, the Hahn ruler’s only son, has been captured, and the disposition of his internment may represent a last and welcome chance for peace. Enter Wollard, the impeccably distinguished and impossibly correct Master of Formalities for House Jakabitus. When he suggests that Master Hennik be taken in as a ward of the House, certain complications arise. Wollard believes utterly and devotedly in adhering to rules and good etiquette. But how does one inform the ruler of a planet that you are claiming his son as your own―and still create enough goodwill to deescalate an intergalactic war?

434 pages, Paperback

First published July 14, 2015

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Scott Meyer

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Scott Meyer has been a radio DJ, a stand-up comic, a writer for video games, an office manager, and a pretend ghost bellhop.

He is the creator of the comic strip Basic Instructions, and has now written a novel.

He and his wife live in Florida, to be close to their cats.

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Profile Image for Rob.
889 reviews581 followers
November 30, 2015
Executive Summary: A fun little story, but for me not as enjoyable as his Magic 2.0 series. 3.5 Stars.

Audio book: Luke Daniels is one of my favorite narrators. When reviewing An Unwelcome Quest, Mr. Daniels tweeted at me that he had the "next one" in the queue.

Sadly, I think he might have thought this book was the fourth installment of Mr. Meyer's Magic 2.0 series. Much like that series (and everything else Mr. Daniels narrates) he does an excellent job.

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Between how much I've enjoyed Mr. Meyer's Magic 2.0 series and the fact that he lucked into Luke Daniels as a narrator, there was no way I could pass this one up.

I found the book a bit uneven. The start and the end were both slower than I'd like, but it seemed to really hit its stride in the middle. Overall I didn't find it as funny as his Magic series, but it was still funny at times.

The concept of Master of Formalities guiding the rulers of the galaxy through their rules of etiquette is pretty amusing for a premise. It took a bit longer to set things up than I'd have liked.

The best part for me was the Sports. I don't mean like how football and baseball fall under the category of sports. It's a competition that is apparently the most important thing to the men of Jakabitus home world, while the women focus on more important things, like ruling the planet. The whole thing is just so over the top ridiculous that I found those parts especially enjoyable.

The characters were pretty good, though they did remind me a lot of the characters in his Magic 2.0 series, so maybe that's why. I could draw parallels between most of the main characters to those of that series, but I see little value in that.

Overall, I think if you're hoping for a fourth Magic 2.0 book, you'll be a bit disappointed to have this instead. However if you're looking for another fun and light book to read/listen to in between heavier fare, this is a good option.
Profile Image for Bruce Gargoyle.
874 reviews141 followers
July 23, 2015
I received a digital copy of this title from the publisher via Netgalley.

Ten Second Synopsis:
Yes Minister in space.

What a strange and amusing little offering I found this to be! I fear I am going through a minor aversion to science fiction at the moment, simply because engaging in new futuristicky worlds seems to be far too much effort. I must say though, that I thoroughly enjoyed this little romp for the strangely compatible senses of familiarity and originality that it provided.

I did find the first two or three chapters a little confusing as Meyer drops the reader in at the deep end of world-building, requiring that salient points about the world be deduced from general conversation. By the time we’re introduced to Master Rayzo’s first “Sports” meet though, I was swinging along with the strata of characters and revelling in the dry, understated approach of Meyer’s humour.
As I mentioned at the start of this post, I honestly think that this book is going to have a much wider appeal than just to those who enjoy science fiction, because while the setting is a futuristic, interplanetary society, the subterfuge, social manipulation and general political skulduggery will be familiar to and enjoyed by lovers of any type of social comedy. While the blurb might give the impression that there are fairly solemn issues at play here, Meyer keeps the tone firmly tongue-in-cheek and I found it very easy to be drawn into the various awkward social conflicts of the various characters.

My favourite scenes were undoubtedly those featuring Rayzo and his “adopted” brother Hennik. I couldn’t help laughing aloud at Hennik’s valiant attempts to retain control over his predicament, as well as his impressive commitment to being a complete little turd at every opportunity, as dictated by his culture. The late inclusion of the ruler of a third planet – one that delights in finding himself in annoying and inconvenient situations for the opportunities these provide for self-betterment – added a wonderfully unexpected tonic to the superciliousness of the Hahn ruling family.

I feel I should also mention that another late highlight in the tale was the highly amusing and completely ridiculous walking chair that one of the rulers uses. It’s making me laugh again now just thinking about it.

I also enjoyed the ebb and flow of power in the novel, as those who appear to be on top take a metaphorical tumble, providing the impetus for some unexpected characters to rise to the top of the social food chain. I can’t say too much here without spoiling some of the twists, but Meyer has done a good job of fleshing out his characters so that you can never be certain that your alliances won’t change as more information comes to light.

Master of Formalities turned out to be an unexpectedly light and twisty foray back into science fiction
Profile Image for Tyler Patton.
217 reviews
July 13, 2015
I really wanted to like this one... I'm a huge fan of his Magic 2.0 series and preordered this book promptly after I heard about it. Unfortunately the plot bored me to tears and every single character has no substance nor likability. The only interesting parts were about "sports" and even then it was absurd
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437 reviews
April 16, 2017
Excellent narration. Very fun book. Love the play on words with the characters
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126 reviews9 followers
August 10, 2015
I really, really wanted to like this book wholeheartedly and without reservation, but that doesn't seem to be in the cards. It wasn't a horrible book, it was a little dull or, possibly, a lot dull. I wasn't overly impressed with the world building or, what to me, seemed to be a lack thereof. At no point in time did I ever feel like I couldn't put the book down (or stop audible).

It's entirely possible that the Mr. Belvedere-in-a-space-opera type of plot is just not my cup of tea, but I honestly don't feel like that was the problem I had with this story. It felt like the characters weren't much more than cardboard cutouts, acting out a story told by a slightly advanced child. Even the "twist" wasn't so much of a twist as a ... slight sidestep. There seemed to be more than a few loose ends, including one of the more prominent subplots (like Amelie and Gint's relationship), that ended up being carelessly and abruptly discarded, without any real resolution.

Again, it wasn't a horrible book, but by no stretch of the imagination was it stellar either. I guess my best description would be of your favorite dish, that has no surprises for you anymore, coming to you undercooked, despite looking cooked on the outside. There are bits and pieces that you can still enjoy, but overall, you're left disappointed and confused about what went wrong.
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765 reviews283 followers
July 23, 2015
Master of Formalities brings a lot to the table: interplanetary war, sharply conflicting cultures, and...a huge emphasis on etiquette?

That doesn't adequately describe the engaging story Meyer has written. Filled with droll comedy and subtle yet biting commentary, this sci-fi piece includes some surprising twists. I wasn't quite sure of the endgame, and snorted aloud at a reveal in the final paragraph.

I've seen other reviews bring up Downton Abbey in Space in an effort to describe the cast of characters. Not too far off the mark, as the story's focus constantly shifts between the members of the ruling family and the various palace workers surrounding them.

Although a stand-alone piece, Master of Formalities takes place in a sprawling landscape that just begs to be explored. I find myself hoping that Meyer will revisit this universe - whether to reveal more about the Terran Exodus and the changes humanity underwent, or to move forward in time to show us the results of the events we just witnessed. Either one would work for me!


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Profile Image for Elsi.
209 reviews28 followers
August 14, 2015
Master of Formalities was a delightful book. It's cataloged as science fiction, but other than that the date is announced at the beginning of every formal meeting (“Know that two thousand, one hundred, and seventy-one conventional years have passed since the Terran Exodus.”) and they must have some very fast space ships to hop from planet to planet almost overnight, there's not a lot of SF here. Rather, it's a humorous, and at times “hysterical” transposition of classic British aristocratic formality into a new setting. Think Downton Abbey in space.

Wollard is the Master of Formalities for House Jakabitus. He's had this job for a long time and is quite proud of the role he plays. But, he's going to be challenged in ways he could never have anticipated. The Master of Formalities makes sure that all public action—particularly those of the ruler or executive he serves—follow the proper protocols and decorum. But teenaged Master Hennik has been raised to flout protocols and act as obnoxiously as possible. And once he enters the Jakabitus household, Wollard's life will never be the same. And it's funny to watch Wollard's growing dismay as things begin to fall apart.

I highly recommend Master of Formalities . I found it difficult to put the book down, and wound up with some sleepy mornings because I had been reading well past bedtime. I'd welcome additional books set in this universe. Are you listening, Mr. Meyer?
Profile Image for Dawn.
329 reviews108 followers
March 31, 2016
Eh... I mainly read (listened to) this because the audio book was on sale, Luke Daniels was the narrator (love), and I like Scott Meyer's Magic 2.0 series well enough. Unfortunately, I can't say much more about this other than it was ok. I wish I could give it more than two stars, because honestly.. I wasn't necessarily bored by it, and I didn't DNF it. It just was sort of "meh". The plot meandered and didn't really have any direction. It seemed way too long for the amount of story accomplished. And while there was some interesting stuff (Arbitrators and Masters of Formality and all), it was far and few between.

That said.. If there were a follow up with more on the Arbitrators, and if said follow up were narrated by Luke Daniels (love), I'd probably read it.

So maybe it's 2.5 stars after all. Story was ok, plot was slow, characters kind of dry, but somehow it wasn't boring. Just... "meh".
Profile Image for Synia.
Author 1 book5 followers
July 17, 2019
I will answer your most pressing question first:
Yes, there is a guy getting hit in the crotch in the book, just like in all four of the Magic 2.0 books. Yes, somehow it is tied into the plot intrinsically. I thought Scott Meyers couldn't beat how he ret-conned Merlin's crotch shield from a weird inexplicable gag in 'Off to Be the Wizard' into a major plot point in 'An Unwelcome Quest', but he totally did. There is basically an entire chapter dedicated to the art of the crotch-hit in 'Master of Formalities' and it is honestly the most hysterical part of the book. If you only skim this novel for laughs, read the Sports Meet chapters, they're by far funnier than all the other parts which tend to be drier and more subtle.
The seeming antagonist in this book, Hennic Han is one part Angelica from the Rugrats and one part Daffy Duck from Looney Toons and basically every scene he's in I was laughing out loud. One thing that really impressed me is that the psychology of not just him, but all the characters in this book, really checks out even though the situations are so outlandish at times. Scott's writing is a lot stronger in this novel than the previous ones. Even more kudos is deserved because this novel finally has some female characters that aren't totally bland and unfunny compared to their male costars. ( The Chef is probably the funniest woman in the book, though the Queen comes pretty close. )
This novel also has an antagonist I could get mad at. When the actual villain of the book was revealed, I remember feeling so betrayed it gave me a minor stomach ache. I was really concerned for our leads for a long time, the stakes in the novel get really high and there often seems like there's no solution in sight.
The twist at the end really reminded me of something that might happen in a British comedy. The surprising way everything resolves itself highlights the comedic cynicism that was always boiling beneath the surface of the Magic 2.0 books but never quite made it to the surface. It's by no means dark or hopeless, but there's a definite tension between the way things would be in a moral, fair world and the reality the characters have to endure that I really appreciated.
Overall it's a really strong novel, although it doesn't have the pop-culture appeal of the Magic 2.0 books I think it stands on its own merits. The character developement, narrative arcs, world-building, and over-all atmosphere is unique and something I really enjoyed.
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7 reviews1 follower
July 4, 2015
I was expecting to read a "My-Man-Jeeves-Conquers-Space" kind of story. Maybe it was the comedic past of the author that fooled me or the title itself. Don't get me wrong, the book is quite funny at places, especially when the two empires collide. But the worldbuilding, the cast of characters, and the ample dialogue point to something way bigger. It is a very well written space opera.
It took me a while to get into the story, but at the end of part 1 I couldn't put the thing down. It was a really fast read if you exclude the first 70-80 pages (hence my 3 out of 5 stars rating).
Another weird feeling that I got reading this book was the cinematic value of the text. Maybe it is due to the heavy dialogue, or maybe it is just me loving to replay what I read in my mind as a series. The truth is I was able to fly through the story as if I was watching a marathon of a really good tv show. Some might not like this episodic way of writing, with cliffhangers at the end of each part, but for me this is a plus.
You might argue that the characters are a bit wooden, at first. They never become deep enough to love or hate with passion, but they do grow as time goes by. No one is really evil, or really benevolent. Every action relies heavily on the cultural background of the actor.
So, if you like a light, funny book about court intrigue in space, you might like this one. I will check back for a sequel.

A big thank you to the publisher and NetGalley, who allowed me to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
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965 reviews57 followers
January 23, 2017
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The Value of a Star: Ratings Explained

If you like to laugh, enjoy reading books, and like to laugh while you read books, I highly recommend you start reading books by Scott Meyer. He wrote the awesome and original Wizard 2.0 series, and I strongly suggest you go check it out.

Apparently, awesome and original is something Scott Meyer is very, very good at, because Master of Formalities was just as awesome and just as original.

Master of Formalities is a lot Downton Abby, plus a little bit of Dune, and sprinkled with a heavy dose of Monty Python throughout. It's a hilarious scyfy space opera that makes you laugh while keeping you guessing about what comes next.

Other reviewers obviously aren't as fun as I am...I see many fans of Wizard 2.0 didn't enjoy Master of Formalities as much.

Those people are boring.

Luckily you are reading my review and not theirs. Go read Master of Formalities.

Nothing inappropriate with the content here.

Happy Reading!
Profile Image for Andrew Stirling MacDonald.
24 reviews3 followers
July 21, 2015
Meyer continues to cement his place as our generation's master of blending science fiction and comedy together. In Master of Formalities, Meyer creates the perfect blend of epic political space opera with interesting and compelling personal growth and interaction between the characters at the center of the narrative.

Comparisons to Douglas Adams are inevitable, and well-deserved - the book references pays deft homage to classics like The Long, Dark Tea-Time of the Soul - but Meyer has never been a one-trick pony, and his literary style has hints of several masters while still maintaining its own unique feeling. In Master of Formalities, the scale and political atmosphere definitely invoke Frank Herbert's Dune, and the novel's protagonist Wollard would find himself feeling distinctly at home in any of P.G. Wodehouse's works.

Master of Formalities is a hilarious, interesting, well-paced novel written by the sci-fi comedy master of our generation. Go read it now.
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1,346 reviews24 followers
June 22, 2015
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Publisher: 47 North

Publishing Date: July 2015

ISBN: 9781477830918

Genre: SciFi

Rating: DNF

Publisher Description: Even when finding oneself engaged in interstellar war, good form must be observed. Our story is set thousands of years after the Terran Exodus, where two powerful, planet-dominating families—the elegant House Jakabitus and the less refined Hahn Empire—have reached a critical point in their generations-long war. Master Hennik, the Hahn ruler’s only son, has been captured, and the disposition of his internment may represent a last and welcome chance for peace.

Review: I just couldn’t get through this. Just too much dialogue and a lack of movement deadened the whole story line. The characters were, meh.
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1,503 reviews15 followers
July 27, 2017
I tried, I really did.

I adore Basic Instructions (and if you haven't read that webcomic, go right now. Sorry if you had other plans for the day, but you'll thank me.) I actually almost got sucked back in just looking up the link, and I've read the entire run at least twice. I actually enjoyed his Off to Be the Wizard series, so I figured this would be at least a nice diversion.

Man, I tried. I really tried, twice. I got to page 332 and just couldn't get any farther. It was neither funny nor interesting; I didn't care about any of the characters; and I felt bad for not liking it more.
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218 reviews
July 14, 2015
The author described it as Downton Abby in the Dune universe and I can definitely see that. I saw the Dune relation right away with the ruling houses in a post-Earth future. I've long enjoyed Meyer's humor and combining that with a space-opera story told through the eyes of the palace servants definitely clicked for me.

I'm unsure if this story is a one-off or setting up a new series but I would be willing to revisit this universe.
490 reviews27 followers
December 13, 2017
A delightful and unexpectedly gripping comedy of manners (and sport) in an aristocratic society of the fare future galaxy. The Masters of Formalities have to deal with the war between two noble houses, complications in the kitchen, and disgruntled heirs.... making sure that everything is done in proper form. While nothing going on is exactly what it seems. Will eagerly look for more by Scott Meyer
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348 reviews28 followers
March 29, 2025
This book concludes with enough loose threads that the overall feeling is that of a first entry in a series rather than that of a standalone work, but it's witty enough that I would welcome a follow-up.
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264 reviews74 followers
March 7, 2019
What to say about Master of Formalities ? Well, I didn't really like it. It wasn't horrible, but the whole story didn't seem go to anywhere, and, having finished, I don't feel that it went anywhere in the end either. There was no build-up, no big confrontation, no major issues to be resolved, just like the sound a balloon makes as it deflates across the room. It kept meandering with no real purpose and everything that was happening had me frustratingly yelling at my car (where I listen to the audiobook most of the time) about different, easier solutions to deal with their 'problems'.

There was no attachment to any of the characters and I kep wishing someone would end up dead, just to spice things up a bit. Sadly, this is not that kind of book, bruv'.

On the bright side, there were some funny moments, some nice turns of phrase, but not enough to carry the story.

2 stars, because it was just 'ok'.
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594 reviews9 followers
December 29, 2017
I enjoyed Scott Meyer's Magic 2.0 series, so it was only obvious that i check out this book as well. It is not as enjoyable as Magic 2.0, but i appreciate what it was trying to achieve. My major concern of the book was the really unlikable characters - i know some where not meant to be liked, but the ones you wanted to cheer for - were also a little rubbish.
There were some great moments in the story, but also a fair few stinkers as well.
All in all, i am glad i read the book, but i doubt i would read it again.
Profile Image for Vicki Popdan.
13 reviews
March 11, 2021
Clever and witty

I really enjoy Scott Meyer's writing. I was a big fan of the Magic 2.0 series, but I think I like Master of Formalities even more. If you are a sci-fi/fantasy nerd who appreciates order, structure, and a clever turn of phrase, then you might enjoy this novel as well.

Incidentally, the Audible version of Master of Formalities is narrated by the peerless Luke Daniels (who also narrated all seven of the Magic 2.0 series).
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103 reviews34 followers
April 24, 2024
4.5
I'm honestly surprised by how much I liked this book! Randomly picked this audiobook for the cover and "butler in space" and then the world building and politics surprised me especially since it has a light-hearted tone to the writing
I've got to check out his other books I think 😄
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888 reviews35 followers
June 25, 2025
3,8 stars
this book takes a long time to start, it's very peculiar, and the story isn't at all what I was expecting. however, if you just go along with the ride, it becomes quite a nice read. I loved the little turd Hennik (I listened to the audio and might be spelling it wrong) and just wished his story arc had been different.
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76 reviews1 follower
October 18, 2017
There is no reason to not like this book, there is also no reason to love this book. It’s a fun read and a good way to pass the time, not something I would re-read.
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186 reviews18 followers
May 12, 2018
Quite funny in places and a very unique story. Not as entertaining as the Wizard series.
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290 reviews21 followers
July 26, 2015
Imagine if you will, a cross between Yes, Minister, and Jeeves and Wooster. Then set it in space. That's the premise behind Scott Meyer's new novel Master of Formalities (published 28 July by 47 North, one of Amazon's imprints, who were kind enough to give me a review copy through NetGalley).

As humanity has colonised the stars, and civilisations and cultures have diverged, proper etiquette has become ever more important in regulating how cultures interact. A central Council of Arbiters supplies the ruler of each world with a Master of Formalities who is trained and educated in etiquette and protocol, and able to access details of historical precedent to help guide the decision-making of rulers. Each Master of Formalities must obey a single golden rule: they can never tell a ruler what to do, only advise on options and the likely consequences of taking particular actions.

Wollard is the Master of Formalities assigned to assist Lady Jackabitus, the ruler of Apios. Although pompous, he is devoted to his work, and the household staff who work with and for him view him with affection, as do the members of the ruling family. Lady Jackabitus is an authoritarian figure, disinterested in her useless son Rayzo. His raising is left to her husband, Lord Jackabitus, whose most fervent wish is for Rayzo to excel at the form of wrestling that is the main activity for young men on Apios.

Apios has been at war with the Hahn home world for generations, although that war has mostly reached an uneasy stalemate on a battleground planet. But as the novel opens, the Hahn increase hostilities, and in the ensuing conflict, the Hahn son and heir is captured and brought back to Apios. On Wollard's advice, Lady Jackabitus decides to adopt him into her own family and raise him as her son. Inevitably, this launches a chain of events that leaves no-one unaffected.

Master of Formalities is a light and frothy comic novel, in the grand tradition of comedies of manners. It's setting in space adds little to the form, but it is great fun nonetheless.
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24 reviews
September 21, 2017
In the future humanity has left earth and populated many different planets. All 'civilized' worlds have agreed to 'arbitration' which means all the world leaders agree to be guided by "Master of Formalities". The duty of the Master of Formalities is "to inform those around us of what the consequences of [their actions] will be and to suggests a course of action that will be less ... consequential." Each Master of Formalities is constantly in contact with the Arbiters to find precedents for almost every action that can be taken. The lead character, Master of Formalities Wollard, is in the employ of of the Lady Jakabitus who rules the planet Apios. He thinks he has found a way to end the war between Apios and Hahn. The war has been in stale mate for generations. Recently however, the Hahn have escalated and actually started sending in solders to kill. During the hostilities a Hahn scion is captured. Wollard suggests that Lady Jakabitus adopt the boy rather than hold him hostage or kill him as a way to end hostilities and perhaps the war. There are, according the Arbitors, precedents for this and it could work. Lady Jakabitus allows herself to be guided by Wallard which is unfortunate for Wollard because Hennik, the scion in question, is a monster. Lady Jakabitus suspects Wallard of knowing full well how disruptive Hennik would be. Hennik takes great pleasure and is quite good at making everyone around him as miserable as possible. As it turns out, this is true of all the Hahn. This book is a mix of "Ransom of Red chief" by O Henry and Jonathan Swift's "Gulliver's travels". It is very very funny. I highly recommend it.
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48 reviews
September 22, 2017
The premise of this book is really intriguing. The narrator (audiobook version) does an excellent job. But I simply couldn't get into the book and enjoy it the way that comes naturally to my favorite stories.

There we're times where I sensed something was supposed to be funny. The juxtaposition of ideas and concepts which occasionally amused me but mostly fell flat. Either because of the expense they took at the characters with in the book or a pessimistic humor. Amusing for the sheer absurdity of it all. That gets me occasionally, but not for an entire book

Our characters pretty much all have a happily ever after at the end. Life pretty much goes back to normal and their starry-eyed views on the society have been challenged and changed. Some are better for it and others are not. All in all, I think it was just not my cup of tea.
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