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The Twelve Realms
There are messages told through language.
There are messages told through symbols.
And there are messages told through terror.
Nabii, a young Moorish royal, endures harrowing nights of chilling visions.
When an eccentric priest and a mysterious shaman seek to end her horrors, they unveil a series of cryptic messages and discover that her dreams are linked to an ages-old mystical prophecy with global implications.
The Twelve Realms is a historical reimagining that links kings and paupers, priests and soldiers, shamans and witches in an epic adventure. Nabii is the key within a tapestry of intertwined people, from Western Africa to the Far East and the British Isles, who must join forces and find a weapon that will defeat the shadows prophesized to rise from the deep.
There are messages told through symbols.
And there are messages told through terror.
Nabii, a young Moorish royal, endures harrowing nights of chilling visions.
When an eccentric priest and a mysterious shaman seek to end her horrors, they unveil a series of cryptic messages and discover that her dreams are linked to an ages-old mystical prophecy with global implications.
The Twelve Realms is a historical reimagining that links kings and paupers, priests and soldiers, shamans and witches in an epic adventure. Nabii is the key within a tapestry of intertwined people, from Western Africa to the Far East and the British Isles, who must join forces and find a weapon that will defeat the shadows prophesized to rise from the deep.
456 pages, Paperback
First published January 28, 2020
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A.D. Sloane
1 book47 followersA.D. Sloane spent her childhood skating and biking in the summer with winters dedicated to reading, writing, and conjuring adventures in her mind. After graduating from the University of Illinois-Chicago and DePaul University, she enjoyed a career as a development officer for nonprofits and universities.
She currently lives near Chicago, Illinois with her husband and two children. THE TWELVE REALMS is her debut novel. You can find her online at www.adsloane.com or Instagram @adsloane11.
She currently lives near Chicago, Illinois with her husband and two children. THE TWELVE REALMS is her debut novel. You can find her online at www.adsloane.com or Instagram @adsloane11.
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December 27, 2020Thanks to Edelweiss for an ARC of this book!
DNF at 17%
I was going to try to get a little further before I DNFed this one to give it more time to improve, but I just can't keep reading it. It just didn't work for me no matter how hard I tried.
The plot moved so slowly that 17% in I couldn't tell anything happened! The writing also felt disjointed, as if the author could not finish a thought before moving on to another one. I liked the characters enough, but they weren't enough to carry a book with no plot. It didn't have any kind of worldbuilding either, which is always an important part of a high fantasy book.
I wish I was able to stick with it longer to see if it improves, but I just can't force myself to keep reading. This wasn't for me, but I hope you enjoy it if you give it a try!
DNF at 17%
I was going to try to get a little further before I DNFed this one to give it more time to improve, but I just can't keep reading it. It just didn't work for me no matter how hard I tried.
The plot moved so slowly that 17% in I couldn't tell anything happened! The writing also felt disjointed, as if the author could not finish a thought before moving on to another one. I liked the characters enough, but they weren't enough to carry a book with no plot. It didn't have any kind of worldbuilding either, which is always an important part of a high fantasy book.
I wish I was able to stick with it longer to see if it improves, but I just can't force myself to keep reading. This wasn't for me, but I hope you enjoy it if you give it a try!
December 24, 2019
Full disclosure: I was given a copy of The Twelve Realms by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
I usually read thrillers, crime, and fantasy novels, and rarely, if ever, Young Adult titles. But I was intrigued by the historical and multicultural elements and the cover is visually stunning, so I figured what the heck.
Wow! I loved it.
What started off as mild interest turned into full blown obsession through the humor and the expressiveness of the author. The main characters, Bleda the Hun, as in Attila's brother, Nabii Akachi, and her sister Nahlah are the central characters. Nabii was marketed as the main character. For the first few chapters, it appeared she was, but truth be told, Nahlah is much more compelling.
The depth of the characters kept me going, and the pace picked up significantly in Part II. It's obviously going to be an epic series! The first quarter of the book was an introduction of the characters and their role in the grand conflict. I read ALL of the Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) books, so I enjoyed the way the author wove all the characters together. There are several story lines that intersect the central one, and that really takes off in Part II of the novel.
Although YA is usually not my cup of tea, the fantasy components more than make up for the fact it's written for teens. The intertwining of historic figures and settings with fictional ones was well done. All in all a good read that I would recommend to anyone who enjoys fantasy and or historical fiction.
I usually read thrillers, crime, and fantasy novels, and rarely, if ever, Young Adult titles. But I was intrigued by the historical and multicultural elements and the cover is visually stunning, so I figured what the heck.
Wow! I loved it.
What started off as mild interest turned into full blown obsession through the humor and the expressiveness of the author. The main characters, Bleda the Hun, as in Attila's brother, Nabii Akachi, and her sister Nahlah are the central characters. Nabii was marketed as the main character. For the first few chapters, it appeared she was, but truth be told, Nahlah is much more compelling.
The depth of the characters kept me going, and the pace picked up significantly in Part II. It's obviously going to be an epic series! The first quarter of the book was an introduction of the characters and their role in the grand conflict. I read ALL of the Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) books, so I enjoyed the way the author wove all the characters together. There are several story lines that intersect the central one, and that really takes off in Part II of the novel.
Although YA is usually not my cup of tea, the fantasy components more than make up for the fact it's written for teens. The intertwining of historic figures and settings with fictional ones was well done. All in all a good read that I would recommend to anyone who enjoys fantasy and or historical fiction.
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December 2, 2019How I read this: Free ebook copy received through NetGalley
DNF @ 15%
I thought I could maybe try fantasy, but it's just not for me, I guess. I tried getting into this book for 2 weeks, but it's just a chore for me. There are very many characters and worlds / situations, and from what I gather, it's just the setup of the story, but I just can't read on. Too many things to remember and I can't see where it's going at all. I'm sure in this case it's me, and not the book.
I thank the publisher for giving me a free copy of the ebook in exchange to my honest review. This has not affected my opinion.
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DNF @ 15%
I thought I could maybe try fantasy, but it's just not for me, I guess. I tried getting into this book for 2 weeks, but it's just a chore for me. There are very many characters and worlds / situations, and from what I gather, it's just the setup of the story, but I just can't read on. Too many things to remember and I can't see where it's going at all. I'm sure in this case it's me, and not the book.
I thank the publisher for giving me a free copy of the ebook in exchange to my honest review. This has not affected my opinion.
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September 25, 2020
Thanks to the publisher for providing an eARC of The Twelve Realms in exchange for an honest review.
First of all, I am so impressed with the amount of effort and research that clearly went into this book. Sloane weaves in years of different histories to their story and it is genuinely incredibly impressive. The problem is, the average reader has not done that same research and while Sloane sets their fantasy story against actual history, world building still had to occur and it didn't here.
We get very little frame of reference on what the situation in the world is or even who dozens of the name dropped characters are and it was even hard to get a handle on any of the main characters until a considerable amount of this book had already gone by. The Twelve Realms also has multiple long time jumps (1 year plus) and while that on its own isn't necessarily bad, paired with the difficulties I already had connecting to the characters and keeping track of the world were really heighted by suddenly picking up later on.
Conceptually, this is great. Writing wise, it's fairly good. But I had so much difficult getting a handle on anything that happened in this almost 500 page books and honestly, I started counting down the pages to finishing it.
First of all, I am so impressed with the amount of effort and research that clearly went into this book. Sloane weaves in years of different histories to their story and it is genuinely incredibly impressive. The problem is, the average reader has not done that same research and while Sloane sets their fantasy story against actual history, world building still had to occur and it didn't here.
We get very little frame of reference on what the situation in the world is or even who dozens of the name dropped characters are and it was even hard to get a handle on any of the main characters until a considerable amount of this book had already gone by. The Twelve Realms also has multiple long time jumps (1 year plus) and while that on its own isn't necessarily bad, paired with the difficulties I already had connecting to the characters and keeping track of the world were really heighted by suddenly picking up later on.
Conceptually, this is great. Writing wise, it's fairly good. But I had so much difficult getting a handle on anything that happened in this almost 500 page books and honestly, I started counting down the pages to finishing it.
February 23, 2020
I usually finish a book within a few days but the fact that this one took nearly a month gives an indication of how this book fared for me.
I love fantasy n was eager to read this . But just a few pages in , I was terribly disappointed! There were so many characters with intertwined plots with no explanation as to what was happening. Trying to keep up with who was who n from where made me want to pull my hair out! I almost thought of pushing it in the DNF pile.
However, I managed to persevere as the story got interesting as it progressed a bit. I was finally getting a handle on things. N the characters got my attention, specially Nahlah, who is so spirited n feisty.
So I did manage to finish the book. The story has promise but unfortunately lacked in the execution department. I just wish it had a more smooth flow with clear indication n references. A detailed glossary at the beginning would have helped a lot.
I love fantasy n was eager to read this . But just a few pages in , I was terribly disappointed! There were so many characters with intertwined plots with no explanation as to what was happening. Trying to keep up with who was who n from where made me want to pull my hair out! I almost thought of pushing it in the DNF pile.
However, I managed to persevere as the story got interesting as it progressed a bit. I was finally getting a handle on things. N the characters got my attention, specially Nahlah, who is so spirited n feisty.
So I did manage to finish the book. The story has promise but unfortunately lacked in the execution department. I just wish it had a more smooth flow with clear indication n references. A detailed glossary at the beginning would have helped a lot.
January 9, 2020
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
The concept is really cool but unfortunately the execution is lacking. Now, I'm not sure if it's because I'm missing frames of reference or if it's just too complicated without much explanation. My main note I had written in my little reading notebook is that I have to keep notes to understand what's happening and I still don't understand the realm numbers at the beginning of chapters.
When I got 10% of the way in I was already sceptical if I would get into it. Unfortunately I gave it another 10% and it did not improve. The story only just started to pick up. The main character Nabii is finally meeting one of the other main/introduced characters.
Honestly, I'm still so puzzled about the realm numbers. If someone could please explain that situation to me I'd really appreciate it. This book is an ambitious project but if I can't keep up while reading with a notebook in hand, I doubt most average readers will.
It took me a full month to decide to finally put it down because I really wanted to like it.
The concept is really cool but unfortunately the execution is lacking. Now, I'm not sure if it's because I'm missing frames of reference or if it's just too complicated without much explanation. My main note I had written in my little reading notebook is that I have to keep notes to understand what's happening and I still don't understand the realm numbers at the beginning of chapters.
When I got 10% of the way in I was already sceptical if I would get into it. Unfortunately I gave it another 10% and it did not improve. The story only just started to pick up. The main character Nabii is finally meeting one of the other main/introduced characters.
Honestly, I'm still so puzzled about the realm numbers. If someone could please explain that situation to me I'd really appreciate it. This book is an ambitious project but if I can't keep up while reading with a notebook in hand, I doubt most average readers will.
It took me a full month to decide to finally put it down because I really wanted to like it.
dnf
January 6, 2020DNF’d @ 20%
The author has really researched her lore and has the bearings to create a diverse world full of many characters - unfortunately we are introduced to too many too soon in different realms with different magic systems so I was unable to connect with a character for more than a chapter.
The beginning chapter (prologue) started off really strongly however going back in time so far for the second chapter (first chapter) seemed to do a disservice to the action-filled prologue.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
The author has really researched her lore and has the bearings to create a diverse world full of many characters - unfortunately we are introduced to too many too soon in different realms with different magic systems so I was unable to connect with a character for more than a chapter.
The beginning chapter (prologue) started off really strongly however going back in time so far for the second chapter (first chapter) seemed to do a disservice to the action-filled prologue.
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
December 28, 2019
The Twelve Realms is a unique take on YA fantasy. I really enjoyed the ensemble cast of five main characters. Although they’re great characters, they’re all haunted by their own demons. It’s an adventure, but the novel delves into their reactions to their newfound burdens.
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November 22, 2020*NEW EDITION RELEASED!*
Thanks to the early reviewers for your feedback and suggestions from 1st Edition.
In lieu of review, I'm gonna use this space to forward the hardcover blurb that gives an overview of this diverse cast who find each other and embark on a worldwide adventure:
An epic tale set during a period of great change, The Twelve Realms links five teenagers destined to combat evil forces from the deep. But in order to win the great war, they must first overcome the battles within.
NABII AKACHI, an intellectually curious princess, finds herself swept into a worldwide quest. Guided by a quirky bishop she uncovers a mysterious message and learns that her fate is tied to be ability to rise and claim it.
NAHLAH AKACHI'S touch exterior and wild spirit is shaken to the core by the ruthless deeds of the ones she trusts. Disillusioned, she embarks on a new and dangerous path that may yield disasterous consequences.
BLEDA THE HUN, tormented by memories of his dark past, is the unwilling heir to an ancient, ruthless bloodline that possesses power he longs to escape.
SEBINAH ABAUD, possessing the gift to decipher any language, holds an essential key to guide Nabii Akachi on her quest. But when she discovers the evil empress of Eastern Rome may have played a part in the death of her parents, her obsession with vengeance threatens to steer her from her path.
I spent over three years fleshing through (over and over and over again!) the historical and fantastical to create the reimagined world of The Twelve Realms. Although there's a glossary and a ton of goodies in the book, visit the website: www.adsloane.com where you can learn great tidbits about the real and imagined world. I hope that you enjoy!
Thanks to the early reviewers for your feedback and suggestions from 1st Edition.
In lieu of review, I'm gonna use this space to forward the hardcover blurb that gives an overview of this diverse cast who find each other and embark on a worldwide adventure:
An epic tale set during a period of great change, The Twelve Realms links five teenagers destined to combat evil forces from the deep. But in order to win the great war, they must first overcome the battles within.
NABII AKACHI, an intellectually curious princess, finds herself swept into a worldwide quest. Guided by a quirky bishop she uncovers a mysterious message and learns that her fate is tied to be ability to rise and claim it.
NAHLAH AKACHI'S touch exterior and wild spirit is shaken to the core by the ruthless deeds of the ones she trusts. Disillusioned, she embarks on a new and dangerous path that may yield disasterous consequences.
BLEDA THE HUN, tormented by memories of his dark past, is the unwilling heir to an ancient, ruthless bloodline that possesses power he longs to escape.
SEBINAH ABAUD, possessing the gift to decipher any language, holds an essential key to guide Nabii Akachi on her quest. But when she discovers the evil empress of Eastern Rome may have played a part in the death of her parents, her obsession with vengeance threatens to steer her from her path.
I spent over three years fleshing through (over and over and over again!) the historical and fantastical to create the reimagined world of The Twelve Realms. Although there's a glossary and a ton of goodies in the book, visit the website: www.adsloane.com where you can learn great tidbits about the real and imagined world. I hope that you enjoy!
December 9, 2019
**An ARC was provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.**
The Twelve Realms is an epic fantasy with historical fiction. To give a little background on the story and its’ characters: The Akachi’s are Moors of West African descent ruling in southern Spain (ancient Iberia) in the early 5th Century. They are a Gifted clan, possessing the gift of water among clans who possess the gift of air and fire. The story, combining historical locations and figures with fictional ones, takes a few liberties with historical timelines, but the glossary (yes, there’s a glossary) provides accurate dates and fascinating information.
The Twelve Realms’ story-line centers around locating a mystical weapon—the only protection against the prophesied punishment of humankind. Meanwhile, Bishop Orosius, the novel’s power-hungry central villain, has personal motives for the weapon. The plot, magic and history supports the crazy bunch of characters who try their best to balance their calling while dealing with the complications of teenage angst. The romance is cruelly manipulated by Seanán, The Druid Priest, King Amari, and the Divine. It’s what makes the romance so entertaining and heartbreaking—with moments that make you feel for their struggle. For once, the protagonists aren’t creating their own problems. They’re thrust into it. Despite feeling bad and heartbroken for them, I couldn’t help laughing my tail off as they stumbled through it all.
The Five Protagonists
Nabii and Nahlah Akachi are twin girls from an ancient bloodline that traces back from Gaul (ancient France) and Nigeria. I found this interesting since Nigeria has the highest rate of twins in the world. Nabii is intellectually curious and ambitious. In the early chapters she behaves like a middle-aged woman versus a nine-year old, which makes for some funny scenes. Her sister, Nahlah is physical and unruly. She lacks the refinement of her twin sister whom she worships. While Nabii’s journey is tied to the main storyline of saving the world—Nahlah’s makes you laugh, cry and cheer as she deals with her internal struggles.
Bleda the Hun is the main male character. He’s a historical figure—the brother of Attila the Hun. I wasn’t sure why Bleda was featured instead of the well-known Attila, but it was probably easier for the author to use him in the storyline. He’s a quiet, tragic figure and the main love interest.
Flavius Aetius is another historical figure. He’s a struggling soldier with a dream of being a military leader until he meets Sebinah who changes his priorities.
Sebinah Abaud is the servant to Empress Eudoxia of East Rome. She’s supposed to help Nabii Akachi solve the puzzle that will lead them to the weapon, but her justifiable grudge against the empress consumes her.
The book’s fresh take drew me in and got better and better the further I dug in. The short chapters and my interest in the characters moved the story forward. If you can’t deal with more than two protagonists this book is not for you. But for me, the unique personalities and the relationships was more make it all the worthwhile.
The story felt like a first book of a series. It was centered around the birth of a “chosen” unborn child who’s key to finding the weapon. He’s introduced in the fast-paced prologue and reappears after you experience his mother’s nuanced and complex coming-of-age story that spans an eleven-year period.
These are complicated, conflicted characters trying to do the best that they can. The Twelve Realms begins with the characters at nine and ten years of age. It’s initial Harry Potter-like charm and whimsy (Nabii reminded me of a sophisticated Hermione) eventually grows darker with much higher stakes. The set-up is definitely paved for a lot to happen in future books and I intend to be there with them when it happens.
The Twelve Realms is an epic fantasy with historical fiction. To give a little background on the story and its’ characters: The Akachi’s are Moors of West African descent ruling in southern Spain (ancient Iberia) in the early 5th Century. They are a Gifted clan, possessing the gift of water among clans who possess the gift of air and fire. The story, combining historical locations and figures with fictional ones, takes a few liberties with historical timelines, but the glossary (yes, there’s a glossary) provides accurate dates and fascinating information.
The Twelve Realms’ story-line centers around locating a mystical weapon—the only protection against the prophesied punishment of humankind. Meanwhile, Bishop Orosius, the novel’s power-hungry central villain, has personal motives for the weapon. The plot, magic and history supports the crazy bunch of characters who try their best to balance their calling while dealing with the complications of teenage angst. The romance is cruelly manipulated by Seanán, The Druid Priest, King Amari, and the Divine. It’s what makes the romance so entertaining and heartbreaking—with moments that make you feel for their struggle. For once, the protagonists aren’t creating their own problems. They’re thrust into it. Despite feeling bad and heartbroken for them, I couldn’t help laughing my tail off as they stumbled through it all.
The Five Protagonists
Nabii and Nahlah Akachi are twin girls from an ancient bloodline that traces back from Gaul (ancient France) and Nigeria. I found this interesting since Nigeria has the highest rate of twins in the world. Nabii is intellectually curious and ambitious. In the early chapters she behaves like a middle-aged woman versus a nine-year old, which makes for some funny scenes. Her sister, Nahlah is physical and unruly. She lacks the refinement of her twin sister whom she worships. While Nabii’s journey is tied to the main storyline of saving the world—Nahlah’s makes you laugh, cry and cheer as she deals with her internal struggles.
Bleda the Hun is the main male character. He’s a historical figure—the brother of Attila the Hun. I wasn’t sure why Bleda was featured instead of the well-known Attila, but it was probably easier for the author to use him in the storyline. He’s a quiet, tragic figure and the main love interest.
Flavius Aetius is another historical figure. He’s a struggling soldier with a dream of being a military leader until he meets Sebinah who changes his priorities.
Sebinah Abaud is the servant to Empress Eudoxia of East Rome. She’s supposed to help Nabii Akachi solve the puzzle that will lead them to the weapon, but her justifiable grudge against the empress consumes her.
The book’s fresh take drew me in and got better and better the further I dug in. The short chapters and my interest in the characters moved the story forward. If you can’t deal with more than two protagonists this book is not for you. But for me, the unique personalities and the relationships was more make it all the worthwhile.
The story felt like a first book of a series. It was centered around the birth of a “chosen” unborn child who’s key to finding the weapon. He’s introduced in the fast-paced prologue and reappears after you experience his mother’s nuanced and complex coming-of-age story that spans an eleven-year period.
These are complicated, conflicted characters trying to do the best that they can. The Twelve Realms begins with the characters at nine and ten years of age. It’s initial Harry Potter-like charm and whimsy (Nabii reminded me of a sophisticated Hermione) eventually grows darker with much higher stakes. The set-up is definitely paved for a lot to happen in future books and I intend to be there with them when it happens.
October 13, 2020
Thank you to the publiher for the 2nd Edition ARC in exchange for an honest review
The story opens with Nabii Akachi, a nineteen-year-old prodigy and the lone survivor a raid, on the run from unknown forces in West Africa.
Eleven years earlier, Nabii is nine-years-old and on the family ship with her grandfather, King Amari Akachi. We discover early on that the King is desperate for help: Nabii is suffering from horrific and debilitating nightmares--vision of a ravaged humanity if she does not find an ancient message. The Twelve Realms is an ensemble cast centered around Akachi who is dead set on unlocking the message.
The cast of characters featuring three central families, shaman, witches, mystical creatures, etc. make up this epic fantasy. The chief characters possess the "Trait": the ability to control one of the four elements passed through their bloodlines.
The cast, hailing from Mongolia, West Africa and throughout the Roman Empire, are supported by flying beasts, mighty whales and other mystical creatures—but at its core, it's a character-focused book that weaves a connection among people from all over the world and how that connection and the powers they possess affects their choices, desire and lives.
My interest in the storyline lies with the incorporation of African history, West African lore and the Orisha. The central players in this global odyssey are the Akachis, Moors from pre-colonized West Africa whose ancestors settled near the bottom tip of Spain generations earlier. Sloane shared her motivation to not only feature West Africa before colonization in the Author's Note. This intricately woven alternate history incorporates fictional kingdoms with the real—The Mali Empire, the Nok Empire, and Ekoi Tribe.
The Akachi’s legacy and power, drawn from elemental control of water, is weaved with the West African god, Olokun, who wields command of the sea. Nabii and Nahlah Akachi, the youngest among the novel’s central family, are children during the first part of the novel, laying the groundwork for their adventures and the emotional entanglements that will ensue as teenagers. I was sucked in by all of the characters: They’re flawed, funny, dynamic, and tragic at the same time. You root for them and wonder what will happen past the end of the journey. There was a grand and satisfying end—but you know that it's not truly the end because you want them to get what they truly want. You need for them to get what they truly want, because in truth...these great characters deserve it.
The story opens with Nabii Akachi, a nineteen-year-old prodigy and the lone survivor a raid, on the run from unknown forces in West Africa.
Eleven years earlier, Nabii is nine-years-old and on the family ship with her grandfather, King Amari Akachi. We discover early on that the King is desperate for help: Nabii is suffering from horrific and debilitating nightmares--vision of a ravaged humanity if she does not find an ancient message. The Twelve Realms is an ensemble cast centered around Akachi who is dead set on unlocking the message.
The cast of characters featuring three central families, shaman, witches, mystical creatures, etc. make up this epic fantasy. The chief characters possess the "Trait": the ability to control one of the four elements passed through their bloodlines.
The cast, hailing from Mongolia, West Africa and throughout the Roman Empire, are supported by flying beasts, mighty whales and other mystical creatures—but at its core, it's a character-focused book that weaves a connection among people from all over the world and how that connection and the powers they possess affects their choices, desire and lives.
My interest in the storyline lies with the incorporation of African history, West African lore and the Orisha. The central players in this global odyssey are the Akachis, Moors from pre-colonized West Africa whose ancestors settled near the bottom tip of Spain generations earlier. Sloane shared her motivation to not only feature West Africa before colonization in the Author's Note. This intricately woven alternate history incorporates fictional kingdoms with the real—The Mali Empire, the Nok Empire, and Ekoi Tribe.
The Akachi’s legacy and power, drawn from elemental control of water, is weaved with the West African god, Olokun, who wields command of the sea. Nabii and Nahlah Akachi, the youngest among the novel’s central family, are children during the first part of the novel, laying the groundwork for their adventures and the emotional entanglements that will ensue as teenagers. I was sucked in by all of the characters: They’re flawed, funny, dynamic, and tragic at the same time. You root for them and wonder what will happen past the end of the journey. There was a grand and satisfying end—but you know that it's not truly the end because you want them to get what they truly want. You need for them to get what they truly want, because in truth...these great characters deserve it.
August 8, 2021
I’m both humbled and excited by the opportunity to welcome readers into the world of The Twelve Realms!
The story, a blend of historical and fantastical Earth in the early 5th century, features a royal family of Yoruba descent who rule a quaint kingdom in southern Spain during beginning of the fall of the Roman Empire and the meteoric rise of Christianity.
Five young people take part in an international quest that stretches from the Far East to the coastlines of West Africa.
There were many inspirations that contributed to the conception of The Twelve Realms with “The Journey of Man: A Genetic Odyssey” by Spencer Wells being the most influential. While reading about the interconnectedness of man is fascinating, I figured a worldwide adventure with witches, prophets, wraiths, and magical creatures was a bit more fun. Oh, and romance. If you don’t dig epics with battles, a large cast, diversity, and romance—this won’t be your cup of tea. If you do, I hope that you enjoy the ride!
The Twelve Realms features “A Glossary of Rediscoveries and Relics” and “Highlights of Earth’s Lost Civilizations” for those who would like to learn historical tidbits of great kingdoms, influential figures, and archeological discoveries. If you visit www.adsloane.com you can peek into both the historical and fantastical that comprises The Twelve Realms.
Early readers have spoken and I have listened! The Second Edition of The Twelve Realms, scheduled for release November 17, 2020, will have a restructured and streamlined storyline as well as feature more goodies in the glossary and highlights sections.
Until then...
The story, a blend of historical and fantastical Earth in the early 5th century, features a royal family of Yoruba descent who rule a quaint kingdom in southern Spain during beginning of the fall of the Roman Empire and the meteoric rise of Christianity.
Five young people take part in an international quest that stretches from the Far East to the coastlines of West Africa.
There were many inspirations that contributed to the conception of The Twelve Realms with “The Journey of Man: A Genetic Odyssey” by Spencer Wells being the most influential. While reading about the interconnectedness of man is fascinating, I figured a worldwide adventure with witches, prophets, wraiths, and magical creatures was a bit more fun. Oh, and romance. If you don’t dig epics with battles, a large cast, diversity, and romance—this won’t be your cup of tea. If you do, I hope that you enjoy the ride!
The Twelve Realms features “A Glossary of Rediscoveries and Relics” and “Highlights of Earth’s Lost Civilizations” for those who would like to learn historical tidbits of great kingdoms, influential figures, and archeological discoveries. If you visit www.adsloane.com you can peek into both the historical and fantastical that comprises The Twelve Realms.
Early readers have spoken and I have listened! The Second Edition of The Twelve Realms, scheduled for release November 17, 2020, will have a restructured and streamlined storyline as well as feature more goodies in the glossary and highlights sections.
Until then...
November 1, 2020
Beautifully written! A truly compelling read. A timeless read with so many intricate layers.
August 16, 2020
**Second Edition ebook obtained by publisher in exchange for an honest review**
4.5/5 Stars
The Twelve Realms is a refreshing take on YA Fantasy that I needed.
I read quite a few ebooks that are quick reads. With this book being over 400 pages, I was pleasantly surprised by the pacing. There are five central characters with the main narrative centered around Nabii, a half-Nigerian, half-French princess.
The novel begins with a flash forward that starts this sprawling epic with a bang. Eleven years prior you meet Nabii as a nine-year old with the weight of the world on her shoulders. This approach is unheard of in the world of YA fiction—and it works. I’m assuming the author chose this approach because of the sheer scale of traveling in the middle-ages and to give readers time and circumstance to really attach to these likable, three-dimensional characters who begin with a certain innocence before getting their asses kicked as they come-of-age. I mean, you want them to find happiness. You love them. You like them. You root for them and curse the author’s name for tormenting them. I really enjoyed it!
I would recommend to folks who enjoy fantasy and adventure (it’s fast-paced). If you enjoy romance, that’s a bonus.
4.5/5 Stars
The Twelve Realms is a refreshing take on YA Fantasy that I needed.
I read quite a few ebooks that are quick reads. With this book being over 400 pages, I was pleasantly surprised by the pacing. There are five central characters with the main narrative centered around Nabii, a half-Nigerian, half-French princess.
The novel begins with a flash forward that starts this sprawling epic with a bang. Eleven years prior you meet Nabii as a nine-year old with the weight of the world on her shoulders. This approach is unheard of in the world of YA fiction—and it works. I’m assuming the author chose this approach because of the sheer scale of traveling in the middle-ages and to give readers time and circumstance to really attach to these likable, three-dimensional characters who begin with a certain innocence before getting their asses kicked as they come-of-age. I mean, you want them to find happiness. You love them. You like them. You root for them and curse the author’s name for tormenting them. I really enjoyed it!
I would recommend to folks who enjoy fantasy and adventure (it’s fast-paced). If you enjoy romance, that’s a bonus.
February 11, 2020
I received a copy of this book through a Goodreads Giveaway. I'm quite partial to high fantasy, and I expected to like this one as a result. However, it takes a certain writer to be able to write a comprehensive high fantasy story. Unfortunately, when reading this one, it seems as though the author's focus isn't on telling a story and weaving details into that rendition, but instead is trying to just get everything down on paper and throws a bunch of information at the reader as a result. It's dense and convoluted. It doesn't flow, and the story doesn't unfold. As a result, there's a distinct inability to connect with, sympathize with, or empathize with any of the characters. All in all, it reads like a first draft. And that's fine, but that doesn't mean it's ready for publication. I believe that the author is aware of this, however, given that there was the inclusion of a letter saying that the version that was sent will only be published for a day and then the second edition will come out with additional "extras."
September 27, 2020
So sweeping and epic historical fantasy is hard to pull off, but The Twelve Realms does it expertly. Sloane digs up forgotten nuggets from history and inserts them into the tapestry of this book, pulling from African and Druidic lore and blending them with elemental magic: water, air, and fire. *swoon*
Though vastly different (an intellectual vs a warrior), Nabii and her twin Nahlah both control water, and their story is one of two powerful sisters who carry the fate of the world in their hands. Even when they make decisions you know they shouldn’t, you can’t help wanting them to succeed because the world they’re living in is so ruthless, magical, beautiful, and often times deeply patriarchal—you want these two women to overcome the challenges facing them.
Yet the elemental and prophetic conflicts are, at bottom, human stories. I enjoyed the painstaking vividness of being plunged into ancient Africa and Mesopotamia. The characters stole my heart. If there’s a book 2, I’m in.
Thanks to the publisher for the 2nd edition of this book.
Though vastly different (an intellectual vs a warrior), Nabii and her twin Nahlah both control water, and their story is one of two powerful sisters who carry the fate of the world in their hands. Even when they make decisions you know they shouldn’t, you can’t help wanting them to succeed because the world they’re living in is so ruthless, magical, beautiful, and often times deeply patriarchal—you want these two women to overcome the challenges facing them.
Yet the elemental and prophetic conflicts are, at bottom, human stories. I enjoyed the painstaking vividness of being plunged into ancient Africa and Mesopotamia. The characters stole my heart. If there’s a book 2, I’m in.
Thanks to the publisher for the 2nd edition of this book.
September 26, 2020
Sloane has created a far-reaching, rich, and diverse world in The Twelve Realms! Sloane has successfully woven entertaining fantasy with fundamental, yet little known, moments of history. I have found myself googling related facts regarding Moorish culture and the Roman Church, which only increased my desire to read the book further. Though values are shared in a household- the perspective, goals, and expectations can vary from sibling to sibling. This is highlighted in Nabii Akachi and her twin sister, Nahlah. They are not quite Cain and Abel, but are neither Castor and Pollux. Almost every culture and people have felt tied to the earth that nourishes and provides for them. The link to elemental magic is a comforting connection to the familiar. It is a peaceful anchor to the known, as we explored this tumultuous unknown journey. The lovable characters, humorous lines, and engulfing story had me rereading parts of this book for pure enjoyment. I cannot wait for the next installment!
October 12, 2020
I love how A.D. Sloane twists fantasy and history in this well-researched and captivating novel. While it's over 400 pages, The Twelve Realms was a fast and enjoyable read.
In addition to the thrilling story with remarkable characters, this book has not only a map but a chart of the clans and a glossary to boot! I'm a sucker for extras like this.
I can't wait to read more from Sloane!
In addition to the thrilling story with remarkable characters, this book has not only a map but a chart of the clans and a glossary to boot! I'm a sucker for extras like this.
I can't wait to read more from Sloane!
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February 13, 2020I just could not get into this YA historical fantasy. DNF at 16%.
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November 16, 2020Thank you Edelweiss for giving me a chance to read this book!
DNF for now. I couldn't focus on this book, most likely because of the MANY POVs that changed with every chapter. I'll return to it most likely after the release. Sorry, A.D., but I just can't right now.
DNF for now. I couldn't focus on this book, most likely because of the MANY POVs that changed with every chapter. I'll return to it most likely after the release. Sorry, A.D., but I just can't right now.
December 12, 2020
Since receiving this version of the book, I was sent another newer edition of the book from the author.
I enjoyed reading this book - the story was different and the world that has been created was an interesting concept. The only criticism is that there are many characters and I found myself lost at times with who was who. The story was also a slow burner and by the time we go to the end, I was wanting more. I really hope there is a second book
I enjoyed reading this book - the story was different and the world that has been created was an interesting concept. The only criticism is that there are many characters and I found myself lost at times with who was who. The story was also a slow burner and by the time we go to the end, I was wanting more. I really hope there is a second book
October 24, 2020
The Twelve Realms is not only a great read but it takes you through little known history lessons ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
January 3, 2022
This one I wanted to love but sadly it just wasn't for me. It was just so slow and boring and I just couldn't love anything about it.
December 21, 2019
I received a digital copy of this novel via Netgalley. This does not influence my opinion of this book in any way.
The book gives a refreshing take on the fantasy genre by including bits and pieces of existing historical places and mixing them with characters who contain the gift of the elements. We follow several characters with intertwined story lines while they are trying to find themselves in a world that is anything but gentle to them, overcoming several obstacles while trying to meet everyone's expectations.
I have seen several reviews for this book saying that it is too difficult to follow or that there are too many characters to remember. While this is pretty common in the fantasy genre, I sadly need to agree with these opinions. Throughout the book I have been struggling with names and places, making me feel detached and distracted from the actual story and (only to find out there is a GLOSSARY at the end). While I liked the main characters, sometimes the writing refrained me from feeling or rooting for them, having to read pieces of text several times to see if I did not miss anything, only to find out it was the writing that was unclear.
Depending on how this series will progress, I am not sure I will be around to follow it. Although there were parts that really enjoyed (basically anything Nahlah-related) a good coherent story in a fantasy series is a must for me and this book made me go "What just happened?" and moving a couple of pages back too many times.
The book gives a refreshing take on the fantasy genre by including bits and pieces of existing historical places and mixing them with characters who contain the gift of the elements. We follow several characters with intertwined story lines while they are trying to find themselves in a world that is anything but gentle to them, overcoming several obstacles while trying to meet everyone's expectations.
I have seen several reviews for this book saying that it is too difficult to follow or that there are too many characters to remember. While this is pretty common in the fantasy genre, I sadly need to agree with these opinions. Throughout the book I have been struggling with names and places, making me feel detached and distracted from the actual story and (only to find out there is a GLOSSARY at the end). While I liked the main characters, sometimes the writing refrained me from feeling or rooting for them, having to read pieces of text several times to see if I did not miss anything, only to find out it was the writing that was unclear.
Depending on how this series will progress, I am not sure I will be around to follow it. Although there were parts that really enjoyed (basically anything Nahlah-related) a good coherent story in a fantasy series is a must for me and this book made me go "What just happened?" and moving a couple of pages back too many times.
December 24, 2019
**An ARC was provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.**
Let me preface this by saying I’ve loved medieval fantasy ever since I was a child and my dad got me the Narnia books. I also enjoyed Lord of the Rings and had an unhealthy obsession with the BBC’s Merlin, but I honestly haven’t read many adult epic fantasy books.
I wanted to give this story a try and I enjoyed this book. I really felt transported into the setting of this world, with its castles, ships, markets and mercenaries. It is an epic fantasy. Lots of characters and a really involved plot, so keep that in mind when you pick up this book.
Maybe it’s just me, but there is something cozy about reading epic fantasy. I feel the same when I play games like Skyrim. Reading this story makes me want to be wrapped up in a blanket near a fireplace with a cup of coco and this book in hand. It was well written and good descriptions of the settings. I like the extra care the author took to illustrate the characters and the map.
My only issue with the book is more of a personal one, but I love books with one main character, maybe two, and with epic fantasy there is a lot going on and a lot of perspectives. The story line is less linear and more plot-driven than emotion driven. I think I like character driven books where we really get into a characters head. However, there are some great characters here. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and would recommend to lovers of epic historical fantasy.
Let me preface this by saying I’ve loved medieval fantasy ever since I was a child and my dad got me the Narnia books. I also enjoyed Lord of the Rings and had an unhealthy obsession with the BBC’s Merlin, but I honestly haven’t read many adult epic fantasy books.
I wanted to give this story a try and I enjoyed this book. I really felt transported into the setting of this world, with its castles, ships, markets and mercenaries. It is an epic fantasy. Lots of characters and a really involved plot, so keep that in mind when you pick up this book.
Maybe it’s just me, but there is something cozy about reading epic fantasy. I feel the same when I play games like Skyrim. Reading this story makes me want to be wrapped up in a blanket near a fireplace with a cup of coco and this book in hand. It was well written and good descriptions of the settings. I like the extra care the author took to illustrate the characters and the map.
My only issue with the book is more of a personal one, but I love books with one main character, maybe two, and with epic fantasy there is a lot going on and a lot of perspectives. The story line is less linear and more plot-driven than emotion driven. I think I like character driven books where we really get into a characters head. However, there are some great characters here. Overall, I really enjoyed this story and would recommend to lovers of epic historical fantasy.
December 24, 2019
**An ARC was provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review.**
Let me preface this by saying I’ve loved medieval fantasy ever since I was a child and my dad got me the Narnia books. I also enjoyed Lord of the Rings and had an unhealthy obsession with the BBC’s Merlin, but I honestly haven’t read many adult epic fantasy books.
I wanted to give this story a try and I enjoyed this book. I really felt transported into the setting of this world, with its castles, ships, markets and mercenaries. It is an epic fantasy. Lots of characters and a really involved plot, so keep that in mind when you pick up this book.
Maybe it’s just me, but there is something cozy about reading epic fantasy. I feel the same when I play games like Skyrim. Reading this story makes me want to be wrapped up in a blanket near a fireplace with a cup of coco and this book in hand. It was well written and good descriptions of the settings. I like the extra care the author took to illustrate the characters and the map.
My only issue with the book is more of a personal one, but I love books with one main character, maybe two, and with epic fantasy there is a lot going on and a lot of perspectives.There were times when the plot got confusing or I was confused who was saying wha. But overall, I really enjoyed this story and would recommend to lovers of epic historical fantasy.
Let me preface this by saying I’ve loved medieval fantasy ever since I was a child and my dad got me the Narnia books. I also enjoyed Lord of the Rings and had an unhealthy obsession with the BBC’s Merlin, but I honestly haven’t read many adult epic fantasy books.
I wanted to give this story a try and I enjoyed this book. I really felt transported into the setting of this world, with its castles, ships, markets and mercenaries. It is an epic fantasy. Lots of characters and a really involved plot, so keep that in mind when you pick up this book.
Maybe it’s just me, but there is something cozy about reading epic fantasy. I feel the same when I play games like Skyrim. Reading this story makes me want to be wrapped up in a blanket near a fireplace with a cup of coco and this book in hand. It was well written and good descriptions of the settings. I like the extra care the author took to illustrate the characters and the map.
My only issue with the book is more of a personal one, but I love books with one main character, maybe two, and with epic fantasy there is a lot going on and a lot of perspectives.There were times when the plot got confusing or I was confused who was saying wha. But overall, I really enjoyed this story and would recommend to lovers of epic historical fantasy.
December 29, 2019
In exchange for an honest review, I received an Advanced Readers Copy of The Twelve Realms.
With a scope that spans years and numerous characters, this is truly an epic YA adventure unlike any other on the market. From Spain to Constantinople to ancient Britain this is a globe-trotting adventure.
The Good:
The character relationships are the strongest part of the novel especially between the twin sisters Nabii and Nahlah. Everyone felt like a real person with understandable motivations.
-The fight scenes were well choreographed and bloody without being gory.
The Bad
The pacing drags in the middle once romance becomes the main focus.
-There was a lot of magic and interesting magical creatures in the first part of the novel but it doesn't really show up much until the final third of the novel.
With a scope that spans years and numerous characters, this is truly an epic YA adventure unlike any other on the market. From Spain to Constantinople to ancient Britain this is a globe-trotting adventure.
The Good:
The character relationships are the strongest part of the novel especially between the twin sisters Nabii and Nahlah. Everyone felt like a real person with understandable motivations.
-The fight scenes were well choreographed and bloody without being gory.
The Bad
The pacing drags in the middle once romance becomes the main focus.
-There was a lot of magic and interesting magical creatures in the first part of the novel but it doesn't really show up much until the final third of the novel.
July 9, 2020
Thanks to Netgalley for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Didn't like this, and I didn't finished it.
It was just too much, and at the same time it was sooo slow. Maybe it would be good for someone, but not to me.
Didn't like this, and I didn't finished it.
It was just too much, and at the same time it was sooo slow. Maybe it would be good for someone, but not to me.
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