■ [Blankets]
I) Literary elements:
1. The story: Choker, a man carried up to a yard at night after he had knifed three times. Someone threw a dirty blanket on him. Then flashbacks of memories linked to blankets start to appear in his mind one by one, before the ambulance came late in the early morning to carry him to hospital.
2. Characters:
• Round character: Choker
• Flat characters: the cap/attendants
3. Plot:
• Exposition: the author begins to describe the setting when the story takes place, and the situation of choker who was laying down in the yard.
• Rising action: Choker begins to hear some sort of clatter voices of people discussing him. He opens his eyes to see a crowd of people surrounding him.
• Climax: Somebody in the crowd threw an old, dirty blanket over the stabbed Choker. The flashbacks of his miserable past appeared in his mind after he had inspected the torn blanket.
• Falling action: The sun rises up, and ambulance finally arrives, and one of the attendants asked Choker if he felt any pain.
• Resolution: Choker was carried in the ambulance and covered with a new warm blanket.
4. Setting:
• Place: Yard
• Time: night / early morning
5. Point of view: Omniscient ( the Narrator doesn’t take place in the story and uses the third person to narrate the story)
II) Literary devices:
1. Title: The title is linked to the story. Blankets are used by everyone, all the classes of society, but in the story we do not deal with any type of blankets, dirty, thin and smelled blankets reflect poverty, especially the noticed selfishness by refusing to share blankets. The author here uses the term blankets to link among past and present events.
2. Names of characters:
• Choker: the name has several meanings and I think it was chosen carefully by the author to reflect a hidden message, which is how some circumstances lead a person to act subconsciously. As long as Choker means someone who is killed by strangling, we see the same image in the story, a man is strangled by pain and the environment surrounds him. Also, the term Choker means an unfortunate person who is unable to perform effectively because of nervous tension or agitation. Moreover, the general meaning is close-fitting necklaces worn around the neck. It can be made of a variety of materials. In the story we dealt with some sort of hard times which play as a necklace in Choker's neck, such as poverty, selfishness, ignorance.
3. Motif: Blankets is repeated in the story, not any blankets, but the worn, dirty unwashed ones. Every flashback in the story is linked with the same blanket. Choker was familiar with that blanket even in his childhood (a boy used to share a blanket with his brother), prison (a guard chose a blanket for him, which means he had no choice and he was not in his own home) and as an adult man (sharing a blanket with a woman and a baby sleeping in a bathtub). Blankets reflect how Choker was, a poor man lives in misery, stabbed several times in revenge, attended prison, may of his involvement in crime. (Poverty is evil, and can lead to evil)
4. DE-FAMILIARIZATION: Through the name of the main character (Choker), the writer wants to show us how the government in South Africa then controls people by starving them. The hunger seems like a necklace. Through (the blankets), he shows us how poverty breeds violence and creates a selfish society that fights each other to survive, instead of gathering to face the conditions that made them in that situation. Through (the flashbacks), how Africans born, live and die poorly without any simplest conditions of life.
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■ [The Gladiators]
I ) Literary elements:
1) The story: The story begins with describing feelings of fear and anxiety expressed by the narrator about Keeny who is described as an aggressive reckless person, moreover, his selfish and narcissistic manner in how he traits with him. They have started to debate the case until the perms end. Nour Abbas announced the start of the game by ringing the bell. Keeny gets surprised by a strong hit in his face from the Black panther, that is after many tries to hit and get the Black Panther down. In the final round, Black Panther hit Keeny many times in his whole face, which made Kenny lose the game. Black Panther won the game. Keeny lost and went out of the ring in a very agitated state.
2) The plot:
• Exposition: The story begins with describing feelings of fear and anxiety expressed by the narrator and Gogs about Keeny who is described as an aggressive reckless person, moreover, his selfish and narcissistic manner in how he traits with them. They have started to debate the case until the perms end.
• Rising actions: Keeny's anger increases، and he begins to rash after Nour Abbas announced the start of the game by ringing the bell
• Climax: Keeny gets surprised by a strong hit in his face from the Black panther, that is after many tries to hit and get the Black Panther down.
• Falling actions: At the end of the sixth round, Black Panther hit Keeny many times in his whole face, which made Kenny lose the game.
• Resolution: Panther’s boy won the game. Keeny lost and went out of the ring in a very agitated state.
3) The characters:
• Round character:
-keeny
• Flat characters:
- The Narrator
- Black Panther
- Farny
- Gogs
- Noor Abbas
4) The setting:
• Place: Boxing Gym / Wrestling ring
• Time : Night
5) The point of view:
• Explicit (The Narrator takes place in the story)
II ) Literary devices:
1) The title:
The title is linked to the story after a historical event. In the time of the Roman Empire, a gladiator was a man who had to fight against other men or wild animals in order to entertain an audience. So the title of the story is in plural form which is (Gladiators). It shows us that two boxers (black people) are fighting each other probably until death in order to get the audience (white people and superior Africans) who don’t care, amused.
2) The names of characters:
• The Narrator: a coloured man who had the role as a trainer of Keeny. Despite that, he wasn’t thinking like keeny. He claimed that the important thing is to trait like a sporter, the racial difference doesn’t make sense.
• Gogs: a man named Gogs because he was wearing glasses. The term "Gogs" is used as a reference to any person that has any type of glasses or visual gear. It is usually yelled as a quick statement with the purpose of diminishing the person's security, therefore causing them to feel insecure about their eye wear. The man in the story claimed that even the blacks or the coloured ones, they are all treated the same by white people and superior Africans.
• Keeny: a man who thinks his himself is superior to Africans, his feelings of superiority and his arrogant personality did not deny him losing the game.
• Black Panther: a native African boxer who is described in the story as a good boy. The character had a crucial role to help us as readers know how vanity and haste can lead to loss.
• Noor Abbas: a rich man who was the promoter of the game.
3) The motif:
Keeny thought he would win through talking. He was named by the narrator as a boy not keeny. Here we understand that the narrator wants to show keeny as an arrogant and immature boxer.
4) Defamiliarization:
The gladiators should fight the people and conditions which made them in that lower case instead of fighting each other.
5) Language:
The story is written in incorrect English, and it reflects how native African people use the language. English was learned by Africans by force because of colonization. So they africanised it, which meant they made their own English. and it's a kind of resistance.
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■[At the Portagee's]
1) The story:
The story takes place in a cafe. Two friends were discussing how to attract two women who were sitting opposite them. A poor man attended the cafe and asked the narrator for sixpence, which wouldn't be enough to buy food, which made the cafe owner kick the poor man out. The narrator and his friend bought the two women a drink and succeeded in setting a date with them the same day, then they left to prepare themselves for the date.
2) The plot:
• Exposition: A discussion between the narrator and his friend Banjo on how to attract two women who were sitting near to them.
• Rising action: A man attended the cafe asking the narrator for sixpence, so he decided to give him what he was asking.
• Climax: The Portagee was yelling at the poor man, stating that sixpence was not enough to buy food. The portagee was trying to kick out the homeless because of his poverty.
• Falling action: The poor man chose to leave the cafe, and stated that there is no reason to cause all that chaos about some food.
• Resolution: The Narrator, Banjo, Heilda and Dolores left the cafe restaurant after they scheduled a meeting at 7 o’clock at a different place.
3) The characters:
• Round character:
- The man (protagonist)
• Flat characters:
- The portagee
- The Narrator
- Banjo
- Heilda
- Dolores
4) The setting:
• Time:
- General: Summer / after colonization
- Specific: Late afternoon
• Place:
- General: South Africa
- Specific: Cafe restaurant
5) The point of view:
the Narrator takes place in the story
II. Literary devices:
1. The title
The title of the story is chosen carefully by the author because it makes the reader predict what the story is about. So in title ( at the portagee’s), we noticed that it begins with determinate of position or location (at), also a ('s) of possession at the end of title. As long as (At) and ('s) refers to place, that is to say that the events in the story happened in a place which is a cafe owned by the portagee, so the event should be linked to the cafe and its owner. We discovered while reading the story that the title will be like this (at the portagee’s cafe).
2. The names of characters:
The author does not choose the names of characters in a random manner; rather, he picks names that reflect the content of the story and sends a hidden message through them. For example:
• Portagee: contains two words which are ( porto- portal), the term used to name someone carrying something or serving people. and (Portuguese) refers to nationality, which means that the cafe owner is not native, rather, he is a man who decided to stay in South Africa after colonisation and runs a business.
• The narrator: his name is still hidden, however his fact in the story is that he is a man who is generous because he gives some charity to the homeless.
• Banjo: in fact, the term is a musical instrument. The author here wants to tell us that Banjo in person is fat and has a shape like the musical instrument itself.
• Dolores: is used to name girls. In middle English, the term used to express pain and grief, it derives from the Latin term dolour, which is a mass noun.
• Heilda : is a term that means warrior, and it's used by the people in South America.
• The man: has no name, no money and no value, which reflects how capitalism gives value to just those who own money.
3. The Motif:
The events in any story revolve around a conflict between good and evil. So in the story “At the Portagee’s” by Alex La Guma, the guiding idea is just characters and events.
• There are characters which are NORMAL: two men and two women reflect the sexual desires of human beings which drive to evil (wasting of money and time).
• There is a character who is ABNORMAL: a thin, dirty man with no money attending the cafe asking for sixpence in order for some food, so he wants to survive, which is something good.
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■[Tattoo Marks and Nails]
1) Story :
The story begins by describing a crowded cell filled with prisoners who have various crimes. There was a prisoner named Ahmed the Turk, and in another corner of the cell, there was a gangster named the Creature. He was brutalizing a man, claiming that the new prisoner had killed his brother, and he recognized him with a tattoo on his chest. Ahmed the Turk asked the Creature to stop punishing the poor man, so the Creature and Ahmed began to discuss the matter until things turned out that the Creature asked Ahmed to take his shirt off.
2) Plot:
• The exposition:
The story is narrated by describing a crowded cell full of prisoners with different crimes. The narrator met a Turkish man prisoner who was called Ahmed.
• Rising action:
the Creature recognized the killer of his brother by a tattoo on his chest. The killer had just arrived at the cell as a prisoner that morning.
• Climax:
Ahmed the turk shots at the Creature asking him to stop persecuting the newcomer.
• Falling action:
Ahmed the Turk and the Creature are debating the case.
• Resolution:
the Creature askes ahmed to take off the shirt.
3) Characters:
• Round character: Ahmed the Turk
• Flat characters: The Narrator / The Creature /New prisoner
4) Setting:
• Place:
- General: South Africa
- Specific: cell / prison
• Time:
- General: summer
- Specific: weekend/ early afternoon
5) Point of view:
(the Narrator is a part of the story)