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Portrait of Smoke

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Danny April is obsessed. He buys out a little collection agency in Chicago, and that’s how he first meets Krassy. He’d never seen anyone so beautiful. She was Krassy Almauniski then, when he first runs across her picture in his files. She’s gone through several identities since then. As Danny tries to track her down, each new name presents him with a portrait of a woman on the move. Krassy is climbing up the social ladder, one sucker at a time. There’s the photographer who signs off on a charge account for her, later arrested for larceny. And the ad executive… he gets off lightly. He gets to walk away with his pride. Not all the men who Krassy meet are so lucky. But Danny knows he’ll be different. So he keeps looking… until at last he finds her.

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First published January 1, 1950

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Bill S. Ballinger

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Bill S Ballinger received his B.A. in 1934 at the University of Wisconsin. From 1934 he worked in advertising, and as a radio and television writer. After traving Europe and the Near East, Ballinger moved to southern California, to take advantage of the television 'boom' of the 1950s as a script writer. Between the years 1977 and 1979 he was an associate professor of writing at the California State University, Norhtridge. In 1960, Ballinger received for his TV work Edgar Allan Poe Award from Mystery Writers of America.

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1,446 reviews226 followers
March 10, 2022
What you have here is a classic case of a naive schnook, Danny April, obsessed with a drop dead gorgeous woman, Krassy, who turns out to be a wee bit of a sociopathic gold digger. It's a long slow build, told from their alternating perspectives. Danny methodically tracks her down, starting from a years old photograph that gets his engines roaring, conveniently overlooking all the signs of disaster and heartbreak she's left strewn in her wake. Krassy has been bewitching men with her siren song since she ran away from home as a teenager. She's devious, with unbridled ambition and a hunger for domination, and is intent on clawing her way up from the slums to the good life. The ending is hardly a surprise, leaving one with feelings of revulsion for Krassy tempered perhaps with a little sympathy. After all, she used the only gift that God gave her.
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328 reviews24 followers
February 1, 2021
Ballinger's uses his split-narration style; alternating between Krassy, a slippery temptress, and Danny, her wily stalker.

Both characters are driven instinctively. Stalking combines man's two most naturally-selected abilities: hunting and womanizing. Likewise, dreamboats such as Krassy know how to convert their beauty into prosperity at the expense of smitten men.

Both characters' pursuits become increasingly unscrupulous and ultimately criminal. Ballinger increases the tension with every chapter. Chase stories often fizzle out. Ballinger figures out a clever way to end the chase but still keep the embers smoldering.
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3,257 reviews233 followers
December 21, 2023
Bill Balinger, a prolific American author and screen writer, has been credited with being the master of the noir thriller, and one of the foremost exponents of the dual storyline.

Portrait In Smoke was his first major success, and later (in 1956) filmed as Wicked As They Come.
In parallel narratives, it initially concerns Danny April, the new owner of a small debt-collection agency in Chicago, and his obsessive search for Krassy Almauniski, the winner of a local beauty queen contest who has a shady background.

While Danny searches resolutely and single-mindedly, tracing her movements across the city, Krassy is set on achieving the high-life using her looks and a degree of cunning that enables her to get where she seeks to be.

Her unexpected rise to fame and wealth highlights the foolishness and peril of Danny’s desperate and misplaced infatuation.
The final scenes are particularly well done, and set it into the very special category.


James Ellroy rates it as one of his six favourite novels in a piece he wrote for Newsweek. Here’s what he says about it..
This is the ultimate evil woman novel. It's set in mid-century Chicago, and charts the comeuppance of an obsessed bill collector and a stunningly provocative psychopath. Ooooooooh, Daddy-O — this one will lash your libido and bite your boogaloo!!!!!
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Author 47 books53 followers
January 28, 2009
Cleverly and effectively constructed noir. Bill S. Ballinger's method is to juxtapose two narratives, one in first person and one in third, that come together at novel's end. In Portrait in Smoke, Danny April, a small-time bill collector, tells the story of how he becomes obsessed with a young woman named Krassy Almauniski and how he dedicates his life to finding her. His narrative (first person) alternates with Krassy's life story (third person), allowing Ballinger to dramatically contrast Danny's discoveries and theories and fantasies about Krassy with the truth about her life. This one is well worth seeking out.
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843 reviews202 followers
October 26, 2012
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Entre los aficionados al género es bien conocida la existencia de una de las mejores colecciones de novela negra que se ha publicado en este país, fue editada por Ediciones Júcar y el director era el gran Paco Ignacio Taibo II, se llamaba Etiqueta Negra y el contenido era simplemente excepcional (Westlake, Thompson, Hammett, Himes, McClure, Goodis, Ledesma, Juan Madrid, Pronzini, Manchette, Block, McBain…), así hasta conformar un largo etcétera que conjugaba clásicos, autores españoles y sudamericanos y lo último de la novela policíaca. Es tan buena que, poco a poco, haciendo arqueología en las librerías de segunda mano y ocasión, voy consiguiendo esos títulos que, en la mayoría de los casos no han sido reeditados en ningún sitio.


Si tenemos que hablar de quién ha cogido el legado de esta colección, está claro que debemos referirnos a Serie Negra de RBA que ha cogido el testigo y está construyendo una colección sencillamente magnífica, sobre todo porque gracias a publicar a ciertos autores más comerciales están consiguiendo al mismo tiempo ir recuperando más y más clásicos, inencontrables hoy en día. La fórmula está siendo la misma, una sana mezcla de clásicos (Thompson, Chandler, Himes, McDonald, Millar..), junto a autores de actuales más comerciales (Nesbo, Coben, Rankin, Kerr, Lehane…), escritores de habla hispana (Zanón, Ledesma, Salem, Ibáñez…) e incluso de novela detectivesca (Christie, Conan Doyle..). Además, para reforzar el conocimiento del género, están haciendo un trabajo estupendo en su web de novela negra (www.serienegra.es) y están más que activos en sus perfiles de Facebook y Twitter (@serienegra). La sensación es que les está yendo bien, tienen ya más de ciento sesenta títulos y no parece que se vaya a terminar a corto plazo, lo cuál me llena de satisfacción. ¿Para qué engañarnos? Uno de los listados que espero con más ganas todos los meses es el de RBA.

Esta semana, por lo tanto, en el rincón de recomendaciones policíacas, una recopilación con tres de las últimas obras publicadas en esta colección, tres obras imprescindibles en un podio de muchos quilates:

Miami Blues de Charles Willeford. Uno de esos títulos inencontrables y que acaban de recuperar es precisamente esta primera novela de Charles Willeford (1919-1988) de su serie con el detective Hoke Moseley. Estamos ante una de esas novelas donde la dicotomía investigador-criminal está presente desde casi el comienzo. El autor monta la novela desde los puntos de vista de los dos alternando capítulos de esta manera; así, por un lado tenemos al sociópata Frederick J. Freyer (“Tenía veintiocho años. Parecía mayor porque su vida había sido dura; las líneas en la comisura de los labios estaban demasiado profundas para alguien que no llegaba a los treinta años”); y por el otro a nuestro Hoke Moseley. La novela tiene la particularidad de estar ambientada en Miami con todo lo que ello conlleva (“Realmente me siento indefenso conduciendo y caminando por Miami sin un arma”). La absorbente trama se va enredando, las voces se suceden hasta mezclarse en los capítulos finales según se acerca la conclusión. Cada uno de ellos luchará por su identidad, uno por conservarla, otro por adoptar un estatus “respetable”, con consecuencias funestas. Es un hardboiled en su mejor tradición, al estilo de colosos como Bunker o Crumley: cruda y dolorosa, violenta. Solo queda que haya un poco de suerte y veamos la serie de Moseley publicada al completo.

El asesinato como diversión de Fredric Brown (1906-1972). Algunas novelas simplemente necesitan una premisa potente para ser escritas, luego puedes acabarlo bien o mal pero en la mente de quien lo lea siempre se va a quedar esa idea; si a una premisa interesante le unes inteligencia, entonces tienes una novela tan sobresaliente como ésta. El punto de partida es tan innovador como divertido: una serie de crímenes empieza a producirse y el único punto en común para todos ellos está en los guiones para radionovelas escrito por el protagonista que… sorprendentemente, no se los ha enseñado a nadie. El estupendo escritor de novelas de ciencia ficción y relatos breves nos focaliza la narración en el peculiar Bill Tracy al que caracteriza maravillosamente (“Tracy os hubiera caído bien, a pesar de los extraños rumbos por los que su lógica lo conducía de vez en cuando. Pero os hubiera caído mucho mejor aún cuando estaba entonado”; “sobrio os resultaría un tanto cínico. Pero no se le podría culpar por ello; escribir guiones para radionovelas vuelve cínico al más santo y Tracy no era un santo”) utilizando un narrador omnisciente divertidísimo y que busca la complicidad con el lector. Con todo ello creó una novela divertida, ingeniosa, espléndidamente tejida, sin duda un clasicazo del género que no debe pasar desapercibido para nadie.

Y la joya de la corona entre estas maravillas, en lo más alto del podio, para Retrato de Humo de Bill Ballinger (1912-1980). Este escritor y guionista norteamericano creó en esta novela una de esas obras maestras imperecederas. Para ello utilizó uno de esos personajes que pasan a la historia por sus perversidades y grado de enrevesamiento: la protagonista femenina Krassy Almauniski, capaz de hacer cualquier cosa por ganarse un hueco en la sociedad (“Encontraba justo servirse del sexo, lo mismo que otras mujeres se servían de la educación, el talento o las relaciones sociales… o de un trabajo duro”). La historia comienza con la narración en primera persona del protagonista Danny April que, tras encontrar una foto de Krassy, se enamora y la empieza a buscar sin descanso. Todo es nebuloso, ella es un “retrato de humo”, él no sabe casi nada de ella y tiene que empezar a construir su historia hablando con las personas que la han conocido. El escritor alterna esta voz con la de un narrador omnisciente que refleja la historia de Krassy con todas sus vicisitudes. Ahí está la magia, él conoce parte de lo que es Krassy pero no todo, eso solo lo sabemos los lectores y cuenta lo que cree conveniente para que sea así; la narración no es lineal y hay elipsis en todo momento. De esta manera consigue que la historia sea muy fluida y enigmática según pasas las páginas, absorbente, sin esconder lo descarnado de la historia, pero sin regodearse en esa brutalidad palpable en cada página. El resultado, un final apoteósico que no hace más que subrayar un relato magnífico.
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241 reviews22 followers
December 11, 2022
“Darling, do you have much money?” A recommendation from the Demon Dog no less this is a corker of a read. Krassy Almauniski, in third person reportage, works her way out of an abusive family background and up the social ladder in search of cool hard cash; she embodies a twisted, hall-of-mirrors, version of the American Dream. Tracking her in first person and with gripping fastidiousness is single guy bill collector Danny April who we slowly start to realise is getting just a tad obsessed with the Krassy of his imagination; this has got Hitchcock and specifically “Vertigo” written all over it. The result is page-turning fun for us although you’d probably want to steer well clear of both of these types in real life.

There’s not a lot of psychobabble in this novel and that is a good thing. Danny April escapes exactly the same sort of abusive background as Krassy so it’s possible that explains the gonzo-bananas lengths he goes to find the girl and then ludicrously assume she’ll just fall into his arms but we’re never outright told that. Krassy comes from a similarly grim family life but takes this as motivation to manipulate and rinse every man she comes across in her quest to take the fast lift up to the penthouse suite. In another life, both would probably have been perfect for each other. Ballinger, on the basis of “Portrait”, can certainly write and while soft-pedalling any analysis he still manages to avoid his story coming across as misogynistic. There are certainly many queasier versions of this tale (I was particularly put in mind of Patricia Highsmith) and yet you never really end up disliking either Danny or Krassy. You certainly end up thinking Danny is a schmuck who only we know is obviously being played by a dangerous sociopath in the finale and Krassy herself – despite the gun-play and framing people for murder an’ all – gets an inner life and is no nut-job. In fact you’ve gotta hand it to the dame, she’s almost admirable in her determination to put a money wall up between her and her past. Danny, once her gets to her, might as well have wandered into the lion’s den at Chicago Zoo.

As the novel progressed and Danny started outing himself as stalker of the year the novel’s title unpacked as cleverer than I first thought. There are a lot of fluctuating, wraith-like, identities going on; both Krassy and Danny adopt and discard personae like hats and eventually this plays into the final act, Ballinger landing the novel in an unexpected yet satisfying manner and Danny’s last adopted persona disappearing into the ether. “Portrait” has aged well too, it would need only the lightest of tweaks to modernise it. Krassy may no longer be able to rock up at Deutsche Bank and talk herself into a job but in its play with young men getting obsessed with images of young women who then turn out to be far more cunning and willing to do anything to stay afloat (“She believed in using her sex as other women used an education, or a trained talent, or social connections…or hard work”) this could have just as easily been the project for Affleck and De Armas rather than “Deep Water”. The Demon Dog has good taste. “Believe me, it was a hell of a situation.”
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397 reviews11 followers
September 24, 2024
Portrait in Smoke (1950) by Bill S. Ballinger is a pretty good & well written noir. It's one of the better 'frame-up' novels I've read...About a beauty from the wrong side of the tracks (or in this case the 'yard' or slaughter house district of Chicago) who makes her way up the social ladder by scamming and framing her targets...and...The collections agent on her trail who has fallen in love from a distance...I expected the ending to close with a wallop but it didn't quite deliver...Still a page turner of a read...-3.5 outta 5.0 but I'll raise it up to a 4.0...
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August 28, 2023
El final es muy previsible. La traducción contenía la correcta pero sorprendente expresión «era dable»
75 reviews
December 2, 2019
This book is one of the most compelling things I have ever read. I don't know anything else by Ballinger. I believed every page of it. Since this is about an obsession with a woman, I think the intense focus of it is what I loved most. Chicagoans like me will love the descriptions of setting even more! The official description on GR calls it "a noir masterpiece". Sounds about right!
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160 reviews1 follower
April 9, 2021
Per algun motiu que no comprenc, la major part de gent conserva les mateixes inicials quan canvia de nom. Potser els és més fàcil de recordar, o els passarà com al noiet a qui van donar un nou bumeran per Nadal. Va passar molt mala estona per voler desprendre’s del vell llençant-lo; sempre li tornava a les mans.

La investigació del protagonista Dan April per seguir la pista de Krassy Almauniski intercalant capítols de la mateixa Krassy donant els passos que surten a la investigació m’ha semblat sensacional, veure la realitat des de dos punts de vista m’ha sobtat i m’ha intrigat mentre anava agafant simpatia pels dos protagonistes, l’una portada a fer les accions per sobreviure i fugir d’un present miserable i l’altre obsessionat per la noia vista en una foto. Els dos últims capítols i el final ja no m’han sorprès tant però l’obra manté la qualitat i és molt recomanable. Un autor a tenir en compte per seguir-lo llegint. (8/10)
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November 29, 2019
"She looked out from the picture with a special, proud smile on her lips. I laid the picture to one side, then picked it up again and studied it closely. Her eyes were light, either gray or blue, but heavily lashed and her blond hair was in thick braids around her head. There was a certain dignity to her that I can't explain. She was very young and without a doubt one of the most beautiful girls I've ever seen."
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614 reviews17 followers
April 16, 2019
There are none so blind as those who will not see. This is a fairly conventional yarn about a skip tracer trying to find a beautiful women with whom he once fell in love (from afar). It has a brilliant denouement. It is about obsession and calculation. Not an ideal combination for love.
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November 9, 2020
Written in 1950 and very much rooted in that period of time, Portrait in Smoke is the twisted story of a man in love with a woman's image who hunts her down and finds she is not the person he thought she was.
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36 reviews
October 1, 2024
Muy bueno, muy entretenido, me gustó que se narrase desde las dos perspectivas para entrelazarse finalmente. Muy recomendable!!
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Author 3 books5 followers
October 8, 2016
Really enjoyed this one. Romance vs. Realism. Hard-bitten and cynical. Cuts back and forth between Krassy, a beautiful, deadly woman who uses a series of men to (eventually) move up to ladder to 40 million bucks, and a debt-collector who's smitten with her from afar.
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