Two stars for that Gothic motif/early imagery. I'm a sucker for heroines in billowing gowns dreaming of supernatural creatures.
I've read a few Amanda Ashleys in my day. I was all in for the broody vamp who falls for the bright-eyed heroine. Given that this was a Gothic novel (in the first part, anyway), I was ok with Sara Jayne not having too much going for her other than professional ballerina and running from her feeling towards Gabriel (and the momentary big-bad). What I wasn't cool with was... the, shall we say, age gap (and he starts off on a father-daughter note too? Ick🤢🤮!!)? Our girl is literally thirteen at the start of this novel?! Why?
In terms of writing style, we were doing ok until... well: we've got so much repetition/corniness of both inner emotional dialogue (don't get me going on the line "You puny fool!" being said unironically. It was like a really bad soap), copy/paste scenes all across our character board (if I had to listen to Sarah Jayne string both men along one more damn chapter 😠), as well as bits that just make no sense: ex: in part two, new Sarah laments that her situation with Gabriel reminds her of some vague French film she can't quite recall, one where a monster holds a woman captive while showering her with gifts, but she's a captive all the same. One page later, in the same bubble, she's waxing the same thought, although she knows BATB with certainty, talking about "he's the Beast to my Beauty". So do you know it or not? Pick a lane! And that abrupt tonal shift: suddenly, we're not in an historical-paranormal romance anymore. It's modern (for the publication anyway) day 1995, baby! Also, OG Sara Jayne is dead, having lived her life with Gabriel as a mortal. He's literally at her graveside. But wait! Hark! Another Sarah who cries alone?! Could it be!? Why yes! Her re-incarnation. This one is mourning the loss of her infant daughter and husband via a car accident... but she then gets over that pretty quick, realizing SHE REALLY IS SARAH JAYNE VIA DREAMS?! Honestly, the way she brushed off her family's deaths, cold-hearted. A few meetings with Gabriel and she's made peace with her daughter's death and is packing up her clothes/nursery (the dick must be magical 🙄). Also, there's a big bad, Nina (AKA the vampire who turned Gabriel), and for a time she's a threat, jealously wanting to kill Sarah Jayne unless Gabriel becomes her love slave. Very Angelique from DS for a minute... but then she's stabbed with part of a cross by Gabriel before we even get to part 2.
This is a long book to have so many repeat scenes. And then part 2 just felt like some strange soft reboot to a show. I got to page 250 and thought, "Huh. Am I driving in circles?". I will be trying to read the others I've got. This is my first 2 star from her and that includes her short stories. Whomp, Whomp. Great cover though. Gotta love that green 💚📗.