When I started this book, I thought it was brilliant; a witty protagonist and social commentary for the war era, how fantastic. But as I delved further, I picked up on a few flaws. And after finishing and thinking about it, I'd found quite a few issues with the novel.
For me, I think the problem is the set up is brilliant, but the pay-off really doesn't do it for me. The protagonist, Douglas Kingsley, is introduced as a disgraced detective due to his very open anti-war opinions. He doesn't object to the war because it's morally wrong, but only because he finds it 'illogical'. He's clever and highly motivated. Okay, you got me with the set up; a semi-relatable every-man who's either going to change or have his opinions confirmed. The issue is, I don't feel like Kingsley's character really develops. Elton sort of teases development, but never quite goes through with it. There's a part where Kingsley is subjected to the horrors of war in some really grim and disturbing scenes. I expected for this to have a hard impact for our protagonist, leading to some interesting inner turmoil. And it does...for one chapter. Then he's fine.
The other cast members also suffer. Abercrombie was my favourite character because he was close to being complex. He's a captain in the army, from an upper class background, hiding the fact he's gay but also struggling to cope with the horrors of war. He's probably the most interesting character, but we don't get further development because he dies.
His sort-of-not-really partner, Stamford, also begins kind of sympathetic but dissolves into a crying mess that crumbles at any kind of stress. he also sometimes comes across more of a stereotype than a real character, but that's just my opinion.
Kitty Murray, again, begins as an interesting character, given she's pretty fiery with strong views. But, she just sort of dissolves into a basic love interest. And while her an Kingsley have a little chemistry, she falls in-love with him suddenly and wants to be with him, despite her own principles. And it made me really dislike Kitty. And that's sort of what happened with me when it came to these characters; I really liked them, then I just found them annoying and wished the book would end.
The mystery itself doesn't work. While somewhat compelling, the reveal is kind of flat. The killer is the guy you totally expected it to be... because there was only one real suspect. The other two suspects are Hopkins and Stamford. Going in, you know it's not Hopkins because that's the point of the mystery, to prove it wasn't him. And you know it isn't Stamford because it's Stamford. Stamford doesn't do much. I get mysteries can be written in different ways, but I feel like it should at least engage with you; give the reader the clues and suspects, give them the chance to solve it first and see if they were right.
A positive I will give the book is it's war scenes. Any time there's conflict, it's harsh. There's an especially grim scene where Kingsley has to hack up a man (for detective reasons, trust me) and, in some areas, it is pretty well written. There's a small chapter that gives you the first insight into the mental ward for the soldiers, with some really melancholic imagery.
Would I recommend it? No. Probably not. I mean, it's not terrible, it's just not great. A lot of my review is, obviously, just to my tastes in a novel. Like I said, the war stuff is pretty grim and interesting, and the set-up is also pretty good... but pay-off, especially with character development, not so much.