I’ve never liked werewolf books, don’t know why, but I really want to find at least one book in the werewolf genre that can go on my favourites shelf, that’s why I really wanted to like Moon Spell. Unfortunately, I did not and my favourites shelf remains werewolf free.
The heroine, Caia, is one of the reasons the book sucked. She’s a straight out Mary Sue complete with all the traits that I absolutely hate seeing in my protagonists. Here’s what I’m talking about :
She is an orphan.
Has special powers.
Is an outcast.
Extremely beautiful but doesn’t know it.
Prophecy surrounding her birth.
She is the key to ending the supernatural war.
Has great high school grades.
Hot guys keep throwing themselves at her.
Is very quiet and shy.
Relies on men to solve her problems for her.
The items listed above would have been enough to make me hate her but her general behaviour is what irked me the most. She’s 17 but if the book hadn’t stated her age, I would have guessed 12. She’s extremely childish, whiny, dependent and spends too much time drowned in self pity. An example of this is when she meets one of the pack members, Yvanna. Yvanna blames Caia’s parents for the death of her husband and therefore by default, blames Caia too. In her grief, she insults Caia by calling her a “that” and giving her icy glares. Instead of understanding Yvanna’s pain and empathising on the loss of loved ones, as a 17 year old would do, Caia bursts into tears and runs to her room to cry because, as she says, she can’t stand it that someone hates her. You see, Caia expects everyone to fall to their knees in front of her. It hasn’t dawned on her immature little mind that in life you will meet people who won’t like you, who may even hate you. What Yvanna said wasn’t even that bad. She could’ve said a lot worse so I saw no reason for Caia to bawl her eyes out. I wished I could’ve jumped into the book and given Caia a well deserved slap.
Caia is extremely vain. Whenever she meets new people the first thing she assesses is their looks, and, if she meets a good looking person, pauses to compare her appearance to theirs. I cannot count the number of times Caia stresses because she is not as beautiful as the other women in the pack. It’s one of her constant worries and I feel she should grow the fuck up and understand that beauty isn’t everything.
I especially hated how women are portrayed in this book. It’s gravely inaccurate at best and seriously sexist at worst.
The females in the pack are all bitchy, vain and self centred. All the girls, apart from Jaeden, instantly hate Caia upon her arrival. The reason is given near the start of the book :
“ I’ve already made sure most of the mated females are clear that they have to welcome Caia home. It’s the young I’m worried about. They still fear what they don’t know . . . and the fact that she’s more competition for our males.”
Yes, Caia is hated because she’s, ahem, “competition “ for their males. Because, of course, women are only simple minded creatures who’s sole purpose in life is to find a husband - or “mate” as the werewolves refer to it. Therefore the girls go out of their way to be hostile to Caia and to ward her away from their men . Even Caia’s only female friend Jaeden, warns her to stay away from her crush.
No. No. Fuck no. Girls do not, should not, hate each other for such a ridiculous reason. Nor should their lives revolve around men. I hate how mating is the main conversation topic among women in this novel. Why don’t education, career, friendship or ambitions ever cross their minds ? Finding a mate and raising lots of werewolf cubs seems to be the only goal for women. It’s like Twilight only with werewolves instead of vampires. Caia is, after all, a perfect incarnation of Bella Swan.
The sexism gets even worse with Alexa. Alexa is one of the pack females who constantly tries to seduce the Alpha male, Lucien because being the Alpha male’s mate is the most powerful and coveted position among the females. This bothered me, this really bothered me. Can you tell why ? It’s because it gives the notion that the only way a woman can gain power and importance is through marriage to a powerful man. Forget hard work and determination. Marriage, it seems, is the only way to the top. No, not the top actually, because she will still always be under the control of the Alpha. So there you have it ladies : You will never be equal to men and must whore yourself for the highest status you can ever get - wife of the leader.
Speaking of the Alpha male, Lucien is one of the worst love interests I have ever read about. He’s controlling and possessive and should really be kept away from society. See for yourself :
“It doesn’t matter now. You’re my mate. End of.”
Lucien moved so fast she barely saw him until he had her caught up in his hands, his hand cupping her neck, holding her head back as if she were an offering. “Let’s get this straight,” he snarled. “I don’t care how angry you are with me, you are mine, Caia, and I will kill anyone who takes what’s mine.”
He pushed her away as if he was disgusted and stepped back from her. “You’ve had a shock, you’re not thinking clearly. We’ll discuss this in the morning.”
“I’m not falling in love with anyone. Neither are you for that matter because you are my mate. Mine. So deal with it.”
You can tell from this just what kind of love interest Lucien is. He lies to Caia on a number of occasions, withholds important information from her, threatens any male who so much as speaks to her and forbids her from going away to train her magic skills. He loses his temper easily and stomps all over the place in rage. It’s established that werewolves are quick to anger but I still feel, that’s no excuse for Luciens abusive behaviour. Because that’s what he is. Abusive. I’m sick of this kind of thing being portrayed as romantic because it’s anything but.
Right, anyway. As this is YA, a love triangle is given. Sebastian is a guy from Caia’s school. He’s kind, thoughtful and treats Caia like a person rather than a possession. But he’s not as good looking as Lucien so Caia doesn’t choose him. That’s the end of that.
For some reason Ms Young felt the uncontrollable urge to start altering the dictionary. Vampire became vampyre, lycan became lykan, magic became magik, demon became daemon etc. I don’t mind when authors change a word to give it a special touch but Samantha Young went a bit over the top and changed words that didn’t need changing. There was no significant point to the changes and they added nothing to the story. I think she did it to make the book look cool. She failed though, I rolled my eyes every time I saw another modified word.
The amount of info dumping is unbelievable and done very badly. From the very start you will be bombarded with names of various pack members and the names of their parents and the names of their sisters and the names of their brothers and the names of their cousins and the names of their grandparents and the names of their aunts and the names of their uncles and the names of their pets . . . After a few chapters I forgot everyone’s names and their connections . Not that it mattered, most of them were introduced but then never mentioned or spoken of again. I kept waiting for them to make an appearance but they didn’t so I though ‘well why bring them up in the first place ?’.
The origins and history of the lycans - sorry, lykans - and other supernaturals are given in one helluva flashback. Amazingly Caia remembers hearing one of the Elders telling her lykan history when she was just a little toddler. Even more astonishingly, she remembers it in perfect clarity even though some of the language was far too complex for a toddler to comprehend, let alone remember. The entire flashback story lasted 6 pages and was overloaded with information. It’s too unrealistic to say she could’ve recalled all that. If you’re going to info dump, Ms Young, at least make the circumstances plausible.
I had problems with what the info dump was saying too. It is said that werewolves, vampires, faeries, witches etc were all created by the Greek gods. I know some readers will like this twist but personally I feel Greek mythology and European folklore each have their own distinct charm and should not be mixed like this. It is told that each of the supernaturals were created by different gods. This is where it gets complicated. Samantha Young goes on to try and add her own personal touch to the myths and story which would have been fine but it was too confusing. Gaia allows some humans a taste of her blood which turns them into witches and warlocks. Hades created vampires out of people who arrived in the Underworld without a coin. Hemera created faeries who can change their appearance anytime. Meaning faeries are shifters. Shifters are faeries. Artemis then creates lykans because . . . she likes animals or something. As revenge for kidnapping Persephone, Demeter changes the vampires by giving them fertility and ability to walk in the sun. Erm, how that’s revenge, I don’t know. Anyway, the witches and warlocks don’t like the other supernaturals and want to kill them for some bizarre reason. The witches create daemons - still don’t know what those actually are - to attack vampires and lycans. Vampires and lycans get scared and create a Daylight Coven which I guess is kind of like a club for vampires and lycans and some faeries. The witches create the Midnight Coven. The two covens go to war and bad stuff happens.
This ^^^ can only be described as a train wreck. Half of it doesn’t make sense and the other half is just too stupid to be taken seriously. It’s not solid enough to make a story. Why did the gods create them ? Why aren’t the gods stopping their creations from killing each other ? Why don’t witches and warlocks like the other supernaturals even though they have the same divine origins ? So many unanswered questions.
Overall, you can clearly deduce that I hated this book. But that’s just me and my opinion. Try it if you want, you might love it, it might become your favourite book and you’ll go on with the series and continue to love it. But I plan on going no further.