The Challenges of Writing a Collaged Text
Why revisit "Reality Hunger"? The book's central argument is that the devices of the novel, including plot or narrative, character, voice, and genre, are obsolete, and that appropriation, randomness, fragmentation, and other strategies of collage can restore a sense of the "real." In its general form, that question is still open in contemporary fiction. Yet I still find "Reality Hunger" unconvincing. Here I will try to pose two questions.
1. What counts as "collage" in Shields's book?
As Wojciech Drąg has pointed out, Shields's principal models were the concept of the lyric essay and collage or "mosaic." The former is an unevenly theorized form. It is associated with John d'Agata, and carries associations of first-person or lyric address, but for Shields it was apparently mostly a matter of "eclecticism, heterogeneity and fragmentation." The latter, collage or "mosaic," is the subject of Drąg's book. In his words:
Collage embodies most aspects of the idea of art advocated in Shields’s manifesto, including the central proposition of drawing on "reality" in the form of "raw," unprocessed material. As he explains in the collage section, borrowing the words of the poet Charles Simic, "found objects [and] ready-mades . . . abolish the separation between art and life" (340). Their familiarity helps create "an immediate identification . . . between the viewer and the work of art" (364).
Drąg suggests that Shields's main points of reference are D’Agata, Jonathan Lethem (especially his essay "The Ecstasy of Influence: A Plagiarism," 2007), Jonathan Raban, and Dave Eggers. What Shields has in mind is perhaps clearest in this passage:
A deliberate unartiness: “raw” material, seemingly unprocessed, unfiltered, uncensored, and unprofessional. . . . Randomness, openness to accident and serendipity, spontaneity; artistic risk, emotional urgency and intensity, reader/viewer participation; an overly literal tone, as if a reporter were viewing a strange culture; plasticity of form, pointillism; criticism as autobiography; self-reflexivity, self-ethnography, anthropological autobiography; a blurring (to the point of invisibility) of any distinction between fiction and nonfiction: the lure and blur of the real.
["Reality Hunger," 3; Drąg, "Collage in Twenty-First-Century Literature in English," 87]
It's interesting that Shields likes the word "mosaic," because it imples the fragments add to form a single continuous image. Tesserae would have been nearer the mark. What he is aiming at is in irrecuperable state of fragmentation, because the operation of fragmentating is itself what will restore "reality" and expunge the obsolete elements of the novel. This kind of collage needs to avoid being a single coherent image, a mosaic.
(Parenthetically: the identification of fragments, appropriation, and discontinuity with the "real" makes Shields's argument susceptible to James Wood's objection that Shields poses reality in an overly facile way against fiction. Writers like Reznikoff and Metcalf might well have agreed with what Wood implies: fragmentation and appropriation, in their work, hardly make the texts more "real." (See Wood, "Keeping It Real," The New Yorker, 7 March 2010). Benjamin, here, is the better example, but even his work is not intended to produce a heightened effect of reality: he might have found that an amusing symptom of a certain bourgeois longing in relation to literature. His own project was about assembling a dossier to exhibit certain thoughts about culture.)
2. Is "Reality Hunger" original?
Why does Lydia Davis think "every page abounds with fresh observations"? In Drąg's count, over two-thirds of the entries are exact or modified quotations from other writers. Shields says his editors told him he had to acknowledge his sources, and as a result it's possible to see which entries he wrote himself. The original sections make disappointing reading. They tend to be either cliches of literary criticism and history, or undeveloped literary theory.
Section 58 reads, in its entirety, "My medium is prose, not the novel." Why, I wonder, doesn't he feel it is necessary to look more closely at the word "prose" here, since it is doing so much work for him?
Section 140 reads: "Plot, like erected scaffolding, is torn down, and what stands in its place is the thing itself." This is part truism, and part surprisingly naive realism. Perec, for example, could be said to have wanted to "tear down" plot, but he wouldn't have said that what remains is "the thing itself": that almost sounds like George Steiner in "Real Presences" (1986).
Section 457 is another example of a one-sentence manifesto that doesn't quite get to the end without a twist into ambiguity or obscurity. It reads: "So: no more masters, no more masterpieces. What I want (instead of God the novelist) is self-portrait in a convex mirror." This is over-complicated: the first part is against the naturalistic novel and the traditional role of the author, as in Foucault's or Barthes's critiques; but the last clause is an allusion to John Ashbery's "Self Portrait in a Convex Mirror," and to the Parmigianino original: and those allusions are semi-opaque, unnecessarily metaphorical, and unaccountably coy.
Section 307 reads (also in its entirety): "There's no longer any such thing as fiction or nonfiction; there's only narrative. (Is there even narrative?)" No graduate student would be allowed to write like this: his leading terms, in this case "narrative," are allowed to stand without explanation, and his positions are at once polemical and vague.
Sections 234 to 236 are also original; they are unremarkable observations about popular culture. Section 236, for example, begins: "What does it mean to set another person before the camera, trying to extract something of his or her soul? When are we exploiting? When are we caressing?" Other people have said these things so much more exactly, at such length, so much more eloquently.
Section 310 is another original section, on popular reality TV. It breezes over themes that need to be more closely articulated: "The bachelorette on the brink of true love with one of several men she has known for seven hours; the cad who manipulates his beloved on cue--two narratives: false actualization and authentic shame. The success of the genre [of reality TV] reflects our lust for emotional meaning." Does Lydia Davis really admire criticism like this?
There are more sections similar to these; section 428, for example, is a page-long contribution on Nabokov, which is used to make an unremarkable point about autobiography and its independence from plot. Section 456 is also a relatively long passage on how "plot isn't a tool: intelligence is." Section 473 is autobiography: it's informative but nearly free of interest.
Snide literary jokes are also scattered through the sections of the book that Shields wrote. Section 458 quotes Nabokov, but in the footnote Shields says that "in honor of the author's Olympian hauteur" he "corrected" Nabokov's grammar.
Section 139 begins, "In the end, I missed the pleasure of a fully imagined work..."; this turns out to be a quotation from a review of one of Shields's books.
Section 145, another original section, is a mean-spirited listing of a "Verboten thematic: secular Jews, laureates of the real, tend to be better at analyzing reality than re-creating it:... Harold Brodkey, most of the essays; Philip Lopate's introduction to "The Art of the Personal Essay"; Vivian Gornick, pretty much everything..." At the end of this list he tries to patch things up by associating these authors with certifiably important people: "And, of course, less recently, Marx, Proust, Freud, Wittgenstein, Einstein." That gambit, of putting someone down and then trying to make it sound like a compliment, never works: it betrays a superficial sense of rhetoric. And the passage is painted with such a broad brush that it's impossible to make much sense of it anyway.
The original texts in "Reality Hunger" don't strike me as original. (Benjamin's original interpolations in the "Arcades Project" can be much more thoughtful.) In a certian sense they shouldn't, because they argue for unoriginality. But there is a crucial difference between arguing for a practice of unoriginal writing, and claiming that the argument itself does not need to be original. Shields's book presents itself as a polemic: i.e., a timely and therefore original intervention.
There is a historical problem with the implicit claim that collage or "mosaic" are needed now. In one sense this is unproblematic. Perloff's book "Unoriginal Genius" traces a history of collaged texts to Benjamin, and she includes postmodern texts like Anne Carson, Kenny Goldsmith, and Jan Baetens. (I wish she'd said more about Charles Reznikoff and especially Paul Metcalf, whom I've written about on this site: their senses of what to do with collaged texts are among the most interesting.) Collage, as a literary strategy, has a genealogy in early 20th century modernism. But in what sense, then, is it a postmodern or contemporary gesture?
In fact, "shards" (another of Shields's many terms) and fragmentation are not only not specifically postmodern: they are premodern. First-generation German romantics like Novalis explored fragments as ways of discovering a new kind of unity. Novalis's "Notes for a Romantic Encyclopedia" is still amazing, and it is not a realist manifesto. There is also scholarship on the romantic nature of the shard, for example by the philosopher Guy Sircello. So what's at stake in Shields's book is a particular reaction against a particular sense of the novel, one that draws selectively on a restricted history.
Conclusion
If I read "Reality Hunger" straight through, without looking at the notes, I do get a collage, but then there's the question of what kind of collage it is: whether it is disruptive, dissociative, genuinely and constitutionally fragmented, or whether it develops and depends on resonances and unexpected harmonies between its isolated entries. I don't mind genuinely random assemblies of fragments, as in Burroughs, but most literary collages, from Pound and Eliot to Benjamin, Reznikoff, Metcalf, and Markson work by implying or proposing new forms of order. In that sense "Reality Hunger" is an uninteresting collage: its thesis is simple, and so are its ideas about what counts as interesting juxtaposition.