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Need #2
Captive
Avec ses nouveaux amis, Zara croyait avoir gagné la bataille contre les lutins malfaisants. Mais la trêve est de courte durée : d'autres créatures envahissent la région et ses froides forêts et les malheurs pleuvent sur la population. Toujours aussi phobique et angoissée, Zara a désormais appris à faire confiance, notamment à Nick, le beau ténébreux devenu son petit ami et qui a le pouvoir de se transformer en loup-garou. Avec les autres métamorphes, ils vont devoir unir leurs forces pour empêcher le carnage qui se prépare. Au péril de leur vie, ils luttent contre les forces du mal. Dans leur combat, ils vont croiser une étrange walkyrie qui rôde tel un présage de mort... Et Zara devra se décider : accordera-t-elle sa confiance à cet étrange garçon blond qui la suit partout et dont le destin semble si étroitement lié au sien ?
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Carrie Jones
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Carrie Jones likes Skinny Cow fudgsicles and potatoes. She does not know how to spell fudgsicles. This has not prevented her from writing books. She lives with her cute family in Maine, but she grew up in Bedford, NH where she once had a séance with cool uber-comedian Sarah Silverman.
The Meyers brothers are from Bedford, too, so you’d think it would make Carrie funnier, coming from Bedford N.H. Obviously, something didn’t work.
Carrie has always liked cowboy hats but has never owned one. This is a very wrong thing. She graduated from Vermont College’s MFA program for writing. She has edited newspapers and poetry journals and has recently won awards from the Maine Press Association and also been awarded the Martin Dibner Fellowship as well as a Maine Literary Award.
Here’s the lowdown about Carrie…
1. Carrie can not drink coffee. It makes her insane. Do not give her caffeine.
2. Carrie is very responsive to loving strokes on the hair, kind of like a puppy. However, do not do this without asking first unless you are a ridiculously handsome man or an editor who is about to offer her a trillion dollars for the first draft of her novel.
3. Carrie is secretly really, really shy even though she’s pathetically outgoing in person. She has a very hard time calling people. So, if you want to talk to her, make the first move. And, if you’re her in-Maine female best friend, Jennifer, do NOT get mad at her because she is so bad at returning emails.
4. Carrie sometimes wears mismatched socks, if you do not think this is cool, do not tell her. You will hurt her feelings.
5. Carrie really, really wants you to like her books. Please like her books. PLEEEAASSSEEEE. She’ll be your best friend forever. That is, if you want a friend who is shy about calling and emailing and who wears mismatched socks and can’t drink caffeine and likes being pet on the head. Hhmmm….
6. Carrie is not above begging.
7. Carrie, like Belle in TIPS ON HAVING A GAY (ex) BOYFRIEND drinks Postum. It’s for the same reason, too.
8. Carrie loves Great Pyrenees dogs. They are huge and white, and furry and it looks like they have white eyeliner and mascara on, which is way too cute. Do you have one? Send a picture!
9. Carrie lives in Maine. She has a hard time with this in the winter. It is bleak in Maine in the winter. Imagine everything shades of gray and brown and no green anywhere except for in people’s noses. This is Maine in Winter. Maine in summer is the best place in the world, so it’s a trade-off. Feel free to invite Carrie to your house in the winter, but not if it’s in Greenland, Canada, or anywhere north of Florida.
10. Forget that. She’d still probably come.
I had been unable to get into my Goodreads account for years. If you have friended me, I have just friended you back (July 2021). If you have messaged me, I'm going to be working through those in the upcoming weeks.
Thank you all for reaching out and I'm so sorry.
Now onto the regularly scheduled bio:
Carrie Jones likes Skinny Cow fudgsicles and potatoes. She does not know how to spell fudgsicles. This has not prevented her from writing books. She lives with her cute family in Maine, but she grew up in Bedford, NH where she once had a séance with cool uber-comedian Sarah Silverman.
The Meyers brothers are from Bedford, too, so you’d think it would make Carrie funnier, coming from Bedford N.H. Obviously, something didn’t work.
Carrie has always liked cowboy hats but has never owned one. This is a very wrong thing. She graduated from Vermont College’s MFA program for writing. She has edited newspapers and poetry journals and has recently won awards from the Maine Press Association and also been awarded the Martin Dibner Fellowship as well as a Maine Literary Award.
Here’s the lowdown about Carrie…
1. Carrie can not drink coffee. It makes her insane. Do not give her caffeine.
2. Carrie is very responsive to loving strokes on the hair, kind of like a puppy. However, do not do this without asking first unless you are a ridiculously handsome man or an editor who is about to offer her a trillion dollars for the first draft of her novel.
3. Carrie is secretly really, really shy even though she’s pathetically outgoing in person. She has a very hard time calling people. So, if you want to talk to her, make the first move. And, if you’re her in-Maine female best friend, Jennifer, do NOT get mad at her because she is so bad at returning emails.
4. Carrie sometimes wears mismatched socks, if you do not think this is cool, do not tell her. You will hurt her feelings.
5. Carrie really, really wants you to like her books. Please like her books. PLEEEAASSSEEEE. She’ll be your best friend forever. That is, if you want a friend who is shy about calling and emailing and who wears mismatched socks and can’t drink caffeine and likes being pet on the head. Hhmmm….
6. Carrie is not above begging.
7. Carrie, like Belle in TIPS ON HAVING A GAY (ex) BOYFRIEND drinks Postum. It’s for the same reason, too.
8. Carrie loves Great Pyrenees dogs. They are huge and white, and furry and it looks like they have white eyeliner and mascara on, which is way too cute. Do you have one? Send a picture!
9. Carrie lives in Maine. She has a hard time with this in the winter. It is bleak in Maine in the winter. Imagine everything shades of gray and brown and no green anywhere except for in people’s noses. This is Maine in Winter. Maine in summer is the best place in the world, so it’s a trade-off. Feel free to invite Carrie to your house in the winter, but not if it’s in Greenland, Canada, or anywhere north of Florida.
10. Forget that. She’d still probably come.
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August 20, 2011
Captivate picks up where Need left off. The first half of the book is pretty much about building up the importance of Zara's and Nick's relationship and how in love they are. They try to go on with their lives and live normally after imprisoning Zara's Dad and his pixie subjects. More pixies are coming to their town and they can't figure out why. Zara, Nick, Devyn, and Issie all capture the pixies that come to the town and trap them in the house. This is obviously only a temporary solution.
Two other pixie kings find out that Zara's Dad is imprisoned and weak so they decide they want to kill him and take his territory. Astley is one of the pixie kings and he is actually saved by Zara in the beginning. After meeting him she starts to wonder if all pixies are bad and if the situation is so black and white.
I had a lot of problems with this book. First off, Nick and Zara's relationship becomes the main focal point for the better half of the novel. This is definitely done so the second half of the book and Zara's decisions will make sense, but I quickly became sick of all the shivering and hand-holding between the two. I know they're teens, but come on, touching hands isn't such a momentous thing. The puppy love, pun intended, really got on my nerves.
Then we get some new players on the field that really made me roll my eyes. Let's just say there are more creatures than pixies and weres and it gets a little ridiculous at times. It seems like Jones is just throwing whatever mythological or supernatural creatures she wants into the story. I kept waiting for a kraken to rise up from the lake or something.
Also missing from this was a bit of the creepiness that was in Need. It was kind of spooky when Zara's Dad was following her around and staring at her from the woods. The pixies just feel neutered in this one, I liked it better when they were all evil, or at least had that sense of otherness about them. Astley, the other pixie king, had some potential in the beginning but toward the end I just found him boring.
I liked the end. Sort of. I need to know what happens next even though the story is so haphazardly told. Thankfully, I borrowed this from work and actually read most of it on my shift so I can't say I really wasted any time or money on it. I'd say borrow it from a friend or the library if you're interested, but I wouldn't buy the hardcover because it's just not worth it.
My reviews of Need (Need, #1) and Entice (Need, #3).
Two other pixie kings find out that Zara's Dad is imprisoned and weak so they decide they want to kill him and take his territory. Astley is one of the pixie kings and he is actually saved by Zara in the beginning. After meeting him she starts to wonder if all pixies are bad and if the situation is so black and white.
I had a lot of problems with this book. First off, Nick and Zara's relationship becomes the main focal point for the better half of the novel. This is definitely done so the second half of the book and Zara's decisions will make sense, but I quickly became sick of all the shivering and hand-holding between the two. I know they're teens, but come on, touching hands isn't such a momentous thing. The puppy love, pun intended, really got on my nerves.
Then we get some new players on the field that really made me roll my eyes. Let's just say there are more creatures than pixies and weres and it gets a little ridiculous at times. It seems like Jones is just throwing whatever mythological or supernatural creatures she wants into the story. I kept waiting for a kraken to rise up from the lake or something.
Also missing from this was a bit of the creepiness that was in Need. It was kind of spooky when Zara's Dad was following her around and staring at her from the woods. The pixies just feel neutered in this one, I liked it better when they were all evil, or at least had that sense of otherness about them. Astley, the other pixie king, had some potential in the beginning but toward the end I just found him boring.
I liked the end. Sort of. I need to know what happens next even though the story is so haphazardly told. Thankfully, I borrowed this from work and actually read most of it on my shift so I can't say I really wasted any time or money on it. I'd say borrow it from a friend or the library if you're interested, but I wouldn't buy the hardcover because it's just not worth it.
My reviews of Need (Need, #1) and Entice (Need, #3).
March 29, 2010
Reading Captivate was so thoroughly unenjoyable that I found myself doubting how much I loved Need to begin with. Which is crazy, because I truly did enjoy Need and thought it was a great stand alone book.
So many probelems with Captivate I don't even know where to start. The story itself was....odd. There just wasn't a flow. Lot's of dangerous action scenes. Lots of pukey teen romace between Zara and Nick. But a clear plot never seemed to take shape. When everything was said and done, Captivate read more like a filler novel. There was no blooming romance, no intrigue or mystery to discover. We only meet a handful of new characters. And while their actions definately play a role in the story, we don't spend more than a few sentences with them.
Another issue I have with the story is the lack of growth seen in the characters. Granted, these are teens and the story takes place over a span of a fews weeks. But considering everything they have done and gone through ~ I expect a little more self discovery and character development. I think Jones expects the reader to accept the characters based on Need, rather than based on any insights in this story. While I found Zara to be a quirky, likeable girl in Need, here she is ridicuously attached to Nick and incredibly stubborn and singleminded. Zara and Nick's relationship ~ as many have pointed out ~ is barely tolerable to read about. I am ok with sappy displays of teen love ~ in small doses. Or if there is some danger or steamy scenes to balance out the, "I love you more than you love me" stuff. But Captivate was simply undying love. All the time. It was so bad that I was actually rooting against Nick in the battle scenes. Cause if he gets killed off, I won't have to read about him anymore & Zara is free to pursue a more interesting guy.
I just get the feeling that Jones wrote Need as a one time thing and never had intentions or ideas for a squel. But after it was published, Need's popularity encouraged her to quickly poop out this one. Clearly, this series is now meant to at least be a trilogy but I don't know if I will be inspired to muddle my way through another mess.
So many probelems with Captivate I don't even know where to start. The story itself was....odd. There just wasn't a flow. Lot's of dangerous action scenes. Lots of pukey teen romace between Zara and Nick. But a clear plot never seemed to take shape. When everything was said and done, Captivate read more like a filler novel. There was no blooming romance, no intrigue or mystery to discover. We only meet a handful of new characters. And while their actions definately play a role in the story, we don't spend more than a few sentences with them.
Another issue I have with the story is the lack of growth seen in the characters. Granted, these are teens and the story takes place over a span of a fews weeks. But considering everything they have done and gone through ~ I expect a little more self discovery and character development. I think Jones expects the reader to accept the characters based on Need, rather than based on any insights in this story. While I found Zara to be a quirky, likeable girl in Need, here she is ridicuously attached to Nick and incredibly stubborn and singleminded. Zara and Nick's relationship ~ as many have pointed out ~ is barely tolerable to read about. I am ok with sappy displays of teen love ~ in small doses. Or if there is some danger or steamy scenes to balance out the, "I love you more than you love me" stuff. But Captivate was simply undying love. All the time. It was so bad that I was actually rooting against Nick in the battle scenes. Cause if he gets killed off, I won't have to read about him anymore & Zara is free to pursue a more interesting guy.
I just get the feeling that Jones wrote Need as a one time thing and never had intentions or ideas for a squel. But after it was published, Need's popularity encouraged her to quickly poop out this one. Clearly, this series is now meant to at least be a trilogy but I don't know if I will be inspired to muddle my way through another mess.
December 27, 2018
This is the sequel Captivate by Carrie Jones which follows the events after Need. This book follows Zara, as she must try and find Nick, who died and was taken to Valhalla. She meets up with the Pixie king, Astley who swears to protect her. She must find and nick and save him but will he forgive her for what she's done?
CHARACTERS-
I still love Zara, she is so cool and now she's a pixie queen and that's super awesome.
I love Astley, he is such a great character and I love him. He obviously really loves Zara and would do anything to protect her.
I still hate Nick. He is just too protective and I know that's maybe a good thing but he's just too clingy and not very interesting.
ROMANCE-
I'm sorry I ship Astley and Zara, they belong together They ar king and queen and I hope they get bonded.
PLOT-
I loved the plot it was so unique and perfect.
ENDING-
It was so good and I can't wait to read the next book
Characters-10/10
Romance-10/10
Plot-10/10
Ending-10/10
Speed-10/10
CHARACTERS-
I still love Zara, she is so cool and now she's a pixie queen and that's super awesome.
I love Astley, he is such a great character and I love him. He obviously really loves Zara and would do anything to protect her.
I still hate Nick. He is just too protective and I know that's maybe a good thing but he's just too clingy and not very interesting.
ROMANCE-
I'm sorry I ship Astley and Zara, they belong together They ar king and queen and I hope they get bonded.
PLOT-
I loved the plot it was so unique and perfect.
ENDING-
It was so good and I can't wait to read the next book
Characters-10/10
Romance-10/10
Plot-10/10
Ending-10/10
Speed-10/10
November 22, 2011
I loved this more than the first one! Why probably because of Astley! I'm such a sucker for the "other guy" I swear it is my downfall in books. I so rarely prefer the main guy.
The evil pixies are still trapped in the house in the woods. Zara and the gang continue to monitor them but something is up. A bunch of new pixies have been coming to town and they are up to something. Nick believes they should just continue to kill them off one by one. But when Zara runs into one tied up to a tree near death, she just can't let him die. She helps Astley escape and learns that he is also a King. Her pixie blood is drawn to him and turns her skin blue and makes her faint when she is near him. Talk about falling for a guy except she is in love with Nick.
Nick doesn't believe any pixie can be good or should be trusted. He is way to keen to just kill them all off without another thought. But the more Zara hangs out with Astley the more she believes maybe there can be good pixies. Maybe she shouldn't judge all pixies the same since we shouldn't judge all people the same. She wants there to be good ones since she is after all half pixie. I loved Astley. He was so sweet and also funny when he was naive to human ways. "You hold it right there" "Hold what?" Astley asks and I swear I think he really means it. "It's an expression," I hiss "It means stay still.'" I loved his protectiveness of Zara but didn't find it overly zealous like I did with Nick. I looked forward to his every scene. I glanced ahead just to see if he was going to be in the next scene.
Zara's dad says that while he is stuck in that house wreak, pixies and Kings will continue to come to try to take over his territory. When another King shows up, he is far from Astley's kind. There are some truly evil pixies out there. He destroys the house and injures Nick beyond repair. Zara will do the unthinkable to save him. What I also loved about this one was the big game changer. I love when an author takes a character to a place she doesn't want to go. Zara hated pixies and never wanted to turn but sometimes it is the scary thing that is right for the character. Zara has big changes ahead of her but I am positive Astley won't let her down. This one ends of kind of abruptly. Not a total cliffhanger but everything is still up in the air unresolved. I must get the next one immediately. I felt like this one had way more action than the first and I can't wait to see where the story leads next and of course more Astley.
The evil pixies are still trapped in the house in the woods. Zara and the gang continue to monitor them but something is up. A bunch of new pixies have been coming to town and they are up to something. Nick believes they should just continue to kill them off one by one. But when Zara runs into one tied up to a tree near death, she just can't let him die. She helps Astley escape and learns that he is also a King. Her pixie blood is drawn to him and turns her skin blue and makes her faint when she is near him. Talk about falling for a guy except she is in love with Nick.
Nick doesn't believe any pixie can be good or should be trusted. He is way to keen to just kill them all off without another thought. But the more Zara hangs out with Astley the more she believes maybe there can be good pixies. Maybe she shouldn't judge all pixies the same since we shouldn't judge all people the same. She wants there to be good ones since she is after all half pixie. I loved Astley. He was so sweet and also funny when he was naive to human ways. "You hold it right there" "Hold what?" Astley asks and I swear I think he really means it. "It's an expression," I hiss "It means stay still.'" I loved his protectiveness of Zara but didn't find it overly zealous like I did with Nick. I looked forward to his every scene. I glanced ahead just to see if he was going to be in the next scene.
Zara's dad says that while he is stuck in that house wreak, pixies and Kings will continue to come to try to take over his territory. When another King shows up, he is far from Astley's kind. There are some truly evil pixies out there. He destroys the house and injures Nick beyond repair. Zara will do the unthinkable to save him. What I also loved about this one was the big game changer. I love when an author takes a character to a place she doesn't want to go. Zara hated pixies and never wanted to turn but sometimes it is the scary thing that is right for the character. Zara has big changes ahead of her but I am positive Astley won't let her down. This one ends of kind of abruptly. Not a total cliffhanger but everything is still up in the air unresolved. I must get the next one immediately. I felt like this one had way more action than the first and I can't wait to see where the story leads next and of course more Astley.
June 26, 2010
I really wanted to like this series but I give up halfway through this book. I can't finish it right now, maybe one day I will. It is just too silly. Nick and Zara are driving me crazy all with all their mushy love talk (and I'm a big fan of romance in books). If you are like me and thought the first book was okay and hoped this was better I'm afraid you might be disappointed.
May 15, 2022
Need (2): Captivate ~ Carrie Jones
Bloomsbury, ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Na het lezen van Elfenstof moést ik gewoon weten hoe het verder ging. En menn wat ben ik blij dat ik op Vinted de complete engelse serie heb geacoord. Dit tweede deel was echt heerlijk op te lezen!!! Nog steeds met een lekkere dosis sarcasme, iets meer bloed en geweld, maar vooral een heerlijke verhaallijn. Ik ga snel verder met deel 3. ♡
Bloomsbury, ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Na het lezen van Elfenstof moést ik gewoon weten hoe het verder ging. En menn wat ben ik blij dat ik op Vinted de complete engelse serie heb geacoord. Dit tweede deel was echt heerlijk op te lezen!!! Nog steeds met een lekkere dosis sarcasme, iets meer bloed en geweld, maar vooral een heerlijke verhaallijn. Ik ga snel verder met deel 3. ♡
June 11, 2016
Finished!
It was really good. I would say that it is better than the first book. I thought this book went into more detailed than the first book and it was written better too. I can't wait to start the next book!
It was really good. I would say that it is better than the first book. I thought this book went into more detailed than the first book and it was written better too. I can't wait to start the next book!
February 6, 2010
I Need more! I was completely Captivate-d..... I devoured this novel. This is such a fun and entertaining series, I absolutely loved it.
Zara, my favorite phobic is back, and even more entangled in a pixie web. I did not see the story developing this way at all. The introduction of Valhalla, took the story to a whole new level and I can not wait to see what Jones has in store for us next.
The plot was an emotional roller coaster, I was up, I was down, I was thrown for a loop and it came screeching to a stop all too quickly. I mean really! How could you do this to me Carrie Jones, you KNOW what I am talking about!
Loved the new character of Astley. I still don’t have him figured out and I think that is exactly where Jones wants readers to be. Is he good, is he bad? Is he playing Zara for a fool, or is he really there to give a helping hand? I DON’T KNOW! And I can’t stand it.
Overall Captivate is a fantastic read! Intriguing characters, engrossing plot, blood thirsty pixies... can it get any better?
Zara, my favorite phobic is back, and even more entangled in a pixie web. I did not see the story developing this way at all. The introduction of Valhalla, took the story to a whole new level and I can not wait to see what Jones has in store for us next.
The plot was an emotional roller coaster, I was up, I was down, I was thrown for a loop and it came screeching to a stop all too quickly. I mean really! How could you do this to me Carrie Jones, you KNOW what I am talking about!
Loved the new character of Astley. I still don’t have him figured out and I think that is exactly where Jones wants readers to be. Is he good, is he bad? Is he playing Zara for a fool, or is he really there to give a helping hand? I DON’T KNOW! And I can’t stand it.
Overall Captivate is a fantastic read! Intriguing characters, engrossing plot, blood thirsty pixies... can it get any better?
April 16, 2010
Likes:
1. The main plot
2. This new Astley Character
3. The fact that Nick is gone.... I know that's mean, but he's not really gone is he?!?!?!
4. Zara's turning into a pixie.
5. All the little pixie tips in the beginning's of new chapters
6. Deveyn and Issie are finally together
7. The Cover of the book
8. The lists of phobias throughout... Atleast I can semi-feel like I'm learning something.
Dislikes:
1. The author's need to make Nick call Zara Baby every 5 seconds.
2. The Ending... which is not really a ending at all, just an introdution the the next book.
3.This Cassidy Character... until the very end.
4. How utterly and completely in love that Zara THINKS she is with Nick.
5. The Buffy references.
6. The name Zara
7. How worried Zara is about turning Pixie and losing herself... really, Ugh I sincerally hope the next book does not go that route.
8. the fact that I'm invested now... so I will have to read the next book.
9. The dailoge between all the characters... So fake, no flow... Come on, make them talk like normal people.
1. The main plot
2. This new Astley Character
3. The fact that Nick is gone.... I know that's mean, but he's not really gone is he?!?!?!
4. Zara's turning into a pixie.
5. All the little pixie tips in the beginning's of new chapters
6. Deveyn and Issie are finally together
7. The Cover of the book
8. The lists of phobias throughout... Atleast I can semi-feel like I'm learning something.
Dislikes:
1. The author's need to make Nick call Zara Baby every 5 seconds.
2. The Ending... which is not really a ending at all, just an introdution the the next book.
3.This Cassidy Character... until the very end.
4. How utterly and completely in love that Zara THINKS she is with Nick.
5. The Buffy references.
6. The name Zara
7. How worried Zara is about turning Pixie and losing herself... really, Ugh I sincerally hope the next book does not go that route.
8. the fact that I'm invested now... so I will have to read the next book.
9. The dailoge between all the characters... So fake, no flow... Come on, make them talk like normal people.
June 11, 2010
May contain spoilers from Need, please read at your own risk.
Captivate was an amazingly entertaining read. Like its predecessor, Need, the novel is full of creative elements. The words fly off the pages, sucking readers into this unique world that Jones has created. The plot picks up right where Need left off: Zara is beginning to settle into her new life with her grandmother, her relationship with Nick is going strong, everything seems to be a positive... except Zara's father. He and the other pixies are a sore spot that Zara just cannot ignore. And to top everything off, a new pixie king emerges causing Zara to question everything.
While this novel is missing a few elements that made Need so special for me (Zara's continuous listing of phobias and the creepiness factor), Jones more than makes up for it through her usage of powerful emotions. This novel will make you laugh, make you sigh, and more than likely, make you cry.
In regards to the characters, I am happy to report that for the most part, they remained true to their personalities: Zara is still her phobia-loving self, Nick is still a little over possessive, etc. However, it is the newer characters made me scratch my head a few times while trying to understand their purpose. Astley is a prime example of this. While he has the possibility to be a wonderful, sexy character, he can sometimes come off a little boring. Yes, this is his introduction novel, but I wanted to get to know him better... I wanted to see if you can trust a pixie. Unfortunately, with this novel, readers are only able to put out their feelers for him, and the truth behind his character and motivation will not be revealed at least until the next novel. Having enjoyed novels similar to these, I am very curious to see what path Jones will take with Astley. I have a few hunches, but I will have to wait and see if I am right.
While I did not overall love Captivate as much as Need, Captivate still has a lot going for it. There is plenty of romance, sadness, changes in character development, etc. For those of you who enjoyed Need, Captivate is a must read. For those who have been a little hesitant about reading this series, I say, give it a try. It is a truly amazing series.
Captivate was an amazingly entertaining read. Like its predecessor, Need, the novel is full of creative elements. The words fly off the pages, sucking readers into this unique world that Jones has created. The plot picks up right where Need left off: Zara is beginning to settle into her new life with her grandmother, her relationship with Nick is going strong, everything seems to be a positive... except Zara's father. He and the other pixies are a sore spot that Zara just cannot ignore. And to top everything off, a new pixie king emerges causing Zara to question everything.
While this novel is missing a few elements that made Need so special for me (Zara's continuous listing of phobias and the creepiness factor), Jones more than makes up for it through her usage of powerful emotions. This novel will make you laugh, make you sigh, and more than likely, make you cry.
In regards to the characters, I am happy to report that for the most part, they remained true to their personalities: Zara is still her phobia-loving self, Nick is still a little over possessive, etc. However, it is the newer characters made me scratch my head a few times while trying to understand their purpose. Astley is a prime example of this. While he has the possibility to be a wonderful, sexy character, he can sometimes come off a little boring. Yes, this is his introduction novel, but I wanted to get to know him better... I wanted to see if you can trust a pixie. Unfortunately, with this novel, readers are only able to put out their feelers for him, and the truth behind his character and motivation will not be revealed at least until the next novel. Having enjoyed novels similar to these, I am very curious to see what path Jones will take with Astley. I have a few hunches, but I will have to wait and see if I am right.
While I did not overall love Captivate as much as Need, Captivate still has a lot going for it. There is plenty of romance, sadness, changes in character development, etc. For those of you who enjoyed Need, Captivate is a must read. For those who have been a little hesitant about reading this series, I say, give it a try. It is a truly amazing series.
July 13, 2014
Unfortunately this book was just as bad as the first.
Zara continued to state the obvious “This is not good.”, although I was quite impressed at a choice she made towards the end of the book. Issie on the other hand whined and felt sorry for herself a lot.
The storyline once again seemed a little immature and dragged. I wasn’t really interested, and didn’t really care what happened. The supposedly interesting events made me roll my eyes, and I can’t say I was particularly impressed.
The ending was a little more interesting, but did end with a bit of a cliff-hanger.
6 out of 10.
Zara continued to state the obvious “This is not good.”, although I was quite impressed at a choice she made towards the end of the book. Issie on the other hand whined and felt sorry for herself a lot.
The storyline once again seemed a little immature and dragged. I wasn’t really interested, and didn’t really care what happened. The supposedly interesting events made me roll my eyes, and I can’t say I was particularly impressed.
The ending was a little more interesting, but did end with a bit of a cliff-hanger.
6 out of 10.
January 7, 2018
“Captivate” is such an interesting sequel to “Need” as it takes our characters in very different directions from where they were before. I enjoyed the addition of some of the new characters, and also the additional development in the pixie mythology.
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February 10, 2017
I couldn't put this one down. Finally Zara is becoming more interesting. She has lost her beloved Nick and she's gone all pixie. I like Nick but in my opinion there isn't much chemistry between Zara and Nick. I can't wait to find out if she gets him back, or if she ends up with the other guy. And what secrets is the other guy hiding? Hopefully in the next book Ms. Jones will leave out gag inducing lines like "His face was a worried ball of cute" Please!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 15, 2014
“What happens to us all is partially up to me and it is my job, my duty, to protect my friends”
Zara, Nick, Issie, and Devyn maintain a tenuous hold on normality. Sure, Zara is half-pixie, Nick is a werewolf and Devyn is a were-eagle, and the entire gang keeps a watch for new pixies, but life goes on. Until a new pixie king arrives warning of danger to come.
NOTE: After reading the third book and being hugely disappointed - enough to sell this book back! - I have gone back and downrated this to three stars.
I Liked:
The primary new character in the book, Astley, was very welcomed. Even though it is obvious he is supposed to be part of the budding Romantic Triangle (see below for my thoughts on that), I felt he brought interesting dimension to the book. Up to this point, all the pixies that have been shown are mean, evil, controlled by their “needs”. Astley shows the Big Four (Zara, Nick, Issie, and Devyn) that pixies don't have to be evil...they have a choice.
Which brings me to the amazing themes in this book. I don't normally talk about themes in a review, but there are so many good, important lessons in here (unlike in many other teenaged vampire romance novels) that I just have to spend some time talking about them.
Firstly, Zara may be dating Nick, she may love him dearly, but never once does she let him govern her life. In fact, she even declares (page 195): “He didn't make my choices for me when he was here and he's not going to start now”. This is a great message to young women, a counter to our culture and other media that tell women that A) they need a man (something else this book also counters, see page 268 and 120) and B) once they have a man, the man makes all the decisions. This is one big reason I adore Zara as a character. She is independent, she makes her own thoughts, she takes life in her own hands and actually does something to change her destiny and save her friends.
The second big theme is bigotry. Let's face it, before Astley arrives, the Big Four believe all pixies are inherently bad and can't be redeemed. Hence why capturing them in an iron clad house is okay—because they can't change from their evil selves. The best way I can detail this change in thought is to quote the book once again (page 233): “Bigotry isn't that straight and easy. It isn't there and then suddenly gone. It's like a bad germ waiting to pounce and infect you even when you think an antibiotic has eradicated it from your system.”
Carrie Jones used Captivate to include more Norse mythology, a very welcome change of pace from the oversaturation of “traditional” vampires and faerie mythology. This is the first time I've read of Valhalla and Valkyries in a young adult novel, as well as were-tigers, eages, and bears. I honestly can't wait to see what else she includes and definitely want to do more research into Norse mythology.
I also liked how Jones added more action to this book. The second half especially gets pretty intense—even Issie, our dear sweet girl, takes up a crossbow to fend off pixies attacking Betty's house (talk about intense!).
I Didn't Like:
One of the things that made Need such a wonderful book was its decidedly ominous, creepy tone. It was less “urban fantasy” and borderline horror (Stephen King, Dean Koontz). Well, that sense of foreboding is pretty much gone in Captivate. There is no building tension, building horror, no wanting to peer behind your shoulder in paranoia. It's just straight-laced young adult urban fantasy.
While I liked Astley as a character, I groaned at the inclusion of the obligatory Romantic Triangle. Why does every novel have to have two guys competing for our heroine's affections? I wasn't that fond of Nick (and again, I like Astley), but I am so tired of treading this road. No matter how much I want Zara to go with Astley, I am afraid (per Romantic Lead Rule #57) that it will all be for naught and Zara will end up with Nick in the end.
And the writing! It wasn't that long ago that I read Need, in which Carrie Jones handled the first person present really well (it isn't that easy to use). Here, it is literally like I am reading a sixth grade short story assignment. I try not to dole that complaint out a lot (it tends to lose its meaning), but seriously, the writing here is positively atrocious and embarrassing. Sentences are constructed at about the third grade reading level. “I saw the cat jump up the tree. The cat was yellow and fat.” This strikes me as odd A) because Need wasn't written that way and B) this is in the young adult section, not the children. And in case you think I'm lying, here are some excerpts that I happened to note:
In the first half, the story is incredibly boring. I can see where Jones is including hints to what is to come (Valkyries, Valhalla, Astley, etc.), but while waiting for this interesting stuff to take place, we have to suffer through romantic melodrama between Devyn and Issie and Cassidy (rolls eyes) and the romantic googly eyes that Zara and Nick exchange (just old after awhile).
Betty and Mrs. Nix are absent for a lot of the book, which was a shame. Both of them were really interesting. I also kept wondering what happened to Zara's pixie father.
Dialogue/Sexual Situations/Violence:
Cr*p, da**, and he** are as extreme as it gets.
Zara and Nick exchange kisses (Zara explicitly says they haven't had sex). Devyn, Issie, and Cassidy are part of their own Romantic Triangle. There is the needs the pixies have, which could be construed possibly as sexual needs (not sure though).
This book is way more violent than the last one. Zara kills at least three pixies, and it is fairly detailed. Nick is abducted; Zara is injured on two occasions.
Overall:
Compared to Need, this is a disappointment. The creepy edge is gone and the writing itself has plummeted. Even the plot starts off weakly. Fortunately, the second half and the inclusion of very empowering themes of acceptance and independence make up for the beginning and the clunky writing. Plus, Jones begins to hint at an enormous battle, which is definitely more interesting than the objectives of other teenaged urban fantasy (“Does so-and-so get X or Y?”). 3.5 stars rounded generously to 4 stars.
Zara, Nick, Issie, and Devyn maintain a tenuous hold on normality. Sure, Zara is half-pixie, Nick is a werewolf and Devyn is a were-eagle, and the entire gang keeps a watch for new pixies, but life goes on. Until a new pixie king arrives warning of danger to come.
NOTE: After reading the third book and being hugely disappointed - enough to sell this book back! - I have gone back and downrated this to three stars.
I Liked:
The primary new character in the book, Astley, was very welcomed. Even though it is obvious he is supposed to be part of the budding Romantic Triangle (see below for my thoughts on that), I felt he brought interesting dimension to the book. Up to this point, all the pixies that have been shown are mean, evil, controlled by their “needs”. Astley shows the Big Four (Zara, Nick, Issie, and Devyn) that pixies don't have to be evil...they have a choice.
Which brings me to the amazing themes in this book. I don't normally talk about themes in a review, but there are so many good, important lessons in here (unlike in many other teenaged vampire romance novels) that I just have to spend some time talking about them.
Firstly, Zara may be dating Nick, she may love him dearly, but never once does she let him govern her life. In fact, she even declares (page 195): “He didn't make my choices for me when he was here and he's not going to start now”. This is a great message to young women, a counter to our culture and other media that tell women that A) they need a man (something else this book also counters, see page 268 and 120) and B) once they have a man, the man makes all the decisions. This is one big reason I adore Zara as a character. She is independent, she makes her own thoughts, she takes life in her own hands and actually does something to change her destiny and save her friends.
The second big theme is bigotry. Let's face it, before Astley arrives, the Big Four believe all pixies are inherently bad and can't be redeemed. Hence why capturing them in an iron clad house is okay—because they can't change from their evil selves. The best way I can detail this change in thought is to quote the book once again (page 233): “Bigotry isn't that straight and easy. It isn't there and then suddenly gone. It's like a bad germ waiting to pounce and infect you even when you think an antibiotic has eradicated it from your system.”
Carrie Jones used Captivate to include more Norse mythology, a very welcome change of pace from the oversaturation of “traditional” vampires and faerie mythology. This is the first time I've read of Valhalla and Valkyries in a young adult novel, as well as were-tigers, eages, and bears. I honestly can't wait to see what else she includes and definitely want to do more research into Norse mythology.
I also liked how Jones added more action to this book. The second half especially gets pretty intense—even Issie, our dear sweet girl, takes up a crossbow to fend off pixies attacking Betty's house (talk about intense!).
I Didn't Like:
One of the things that made Need such a wonderful book was its decidedly ominous, creepy tone. It was less “urban fantasy” and borderline horror (Stephen King, Dean Koontz). Well, that sense of foreboding is pretty much gone in Captivate. There is no building tension, building horror, no wanting to peer behind your shoulder in paranoia. It's just straight-laced young adult urban fantasy.
While I liked Astley as a character, I groaned at the inclusion of the obligatory Romantic Triangle. Why does every novel have to have two guys competing for our heroine's affections? I wasn't that fond of Nick (and again, I like Astley), but I am so tired of treading this road. No matter how much I want Zara to go with Astley, I am afraid (per Romantic Lead Rule #57) that it will all be for naught and Zara will end up with Nick in the end.
And the writing! It wasn't that long ago that I read Need, in which Carrie Jones handled the first person present really well (it isn't that easy to use). Here, it is literally like I am reading a sixth grade short story assignment. I try not to dole that complaint out a lot (it tends to lose its meaning), but seriously, the writing here is positively atrocious and embarrassing. Sentences are constructed at about the third grade reading level. “I saw the cat jump up the tree. The cat was yellow and fat.” This strikes me as odd A) because Need wasn't written that way and B) this is in the young adult section, not the children. And in case you think I'm lying, here are some excerpts that I happened to note:
Page 118: “I am not who you should be worried about.” [said Astley] I shake my head. “...Of course you're who I should worry about.” (Okay, I know it's dialogue, but why does Zara all of a sudden phrase things exactly like Astley?)
Page 168: “Something wet falls from my face and hits his cheek. Tears.” No duh, really? Tears? Let me guess: they are also Zara's tears! D'oh! This sort of “revelation” or “style” is repeated ad nauseum.
Page 196: “ I will shower. I will shower and think. I will shower and think and not shake. I will shower and think and not shake and I will imagine what it'll be like to see Nick again.” Good GOD IN HEAVEN! I get the point! No need to repeat the same thing in triplicate to make sure the audience knows.
In the first half, the story is incredibly boring. I can see where Jones is including hints to what is to come (Valkyries, Valhalla, Astley, etc.), but while waiting for this interesting stuff to take place, we have to suffer through romantic melodrama between Devyn and Issie and Cassidy (rolls eyes) and the romantic googly eyes that Zara and Nick exchange (just old after awhile).
Betty and Mrs. Nix are absent for a lot of the book, which was a shame. Both of them were really interesting. I also kept wondering what happened to Zara's pixie father.
Dialogue/Sexual Situations/Violence:
Cr*p, da**, and he** are as extreme as it gets.
Zara and Nick exchange kisses (Zara explicitly says they haven't had sex). Devyn, Issie, and Cassidy are part of their own Romantic Triangle. There is the needs the pixies have, which could be construed possibly as sexual needs (not sure though).
This book is way more violent than the last one. Zara kills at least three pixies, and it is fairly detailed. Nick is abducted; Zara is injured on two occasions.
Overall:
Compared to Need, this is a disappointment. The creepy edge is gone and the writing itself has plummeted. Even the plot starts off weakly. Fortunately, the second half and the inclusion of very empowering themes of acceptance and independence make up for the beginning and the clunky writing. Plus, Jones begins to hint at an enormous battle, which is definitely more interesting than the objectives of other teenaged urban fantasy (“Does so-and-so get X or Y?”). 3.5 stars rounded generously to 4 stars.
January 18, 2023
They annoyed me sometimes..... Except Astley
July 14, 2014
Actual rating - 2.5
I was hoping this would be better than Need, but unfortunately, it wasn't.
Zara annoyed me in the last book, and she annoyed me just as much in this one.
She continued to chant phobias like she did in book one, but thankfully, she didn't do it as much in this one.
The book just bored me, and i couldn't get interested in it at all. When the "interesting" things happened, i didn't really care.
The only thing that i liked was the ending - Not what happened at the end, just the fact that i had finished.
Overall, Slow, dull, and had an annoying main character.
I was hoping this would be better than Need, but unfortunately, it wasn't.
Zara annoyed me in the last book, and she annoyed me just as much in this one.
She continued to chant phobias like she did in book one, but thankfully, she didn't do it as much in this one.
The book just bored me, and i couldn't get interested in it at all. When the "interesting" things happened, i didn't really care.
The only thing that i liked was the ending - Not what happened at the end, just the fact that i had finished.
Overall, Slow, dull, and had an annoying main character.
August 9, 2023
*re-read, I read this book when it first came out and thought it would be fun to read it again years later.
October 31, 2016
First read: March 2012 4/5 stars
Second read: October 2016 4/5 stars
Second read: October 2016 4/5 stars
January 4, 2024
Flawless. A true literary masterpiece. No notes.
January 11, 2010
Quick & Dirty: This is a fierce tale that will evoke every emotion and leave you wanting more.
Opening Sentence: Sometimes there are these bizarre people who actually like physical education class.
The Review:
Our favorite lovable phobic is back. Once again, Zara takes the reader on an amazing journey filled with heartbreak and death. We get a glimpse at some of Zara's new phobias, but we also get a "Top Ten Things to Remember When Dealing with Pixies" list, as well as some pixie tips and hints. Captivate picks up shortly after the ending of Need. Zara and The Scooby Gang know that their previous pixie solution is only a temporary fix. Zara struggles with her decisions and starts to question how pixies should be treated. The deadly pixies are becoming increasingly harder to detain, and more are flocking to Bedford, Maine at an alarming rate. Matters further intensify when a new pixie king arrives looking to claim Zara as his queen, as well as takeover the territory. The new king is unlike any other pixie that Zara has met. This completely throws her emotions into a tailspin. She foolishly puts her trust in him knowing that it could prove to be disastrous. Zara is willing to give up everything and become the one thing that she fears the most. With an impending pixie war looming, Zara starts to realize the effects that her decisions have caused. A bloody power struggle is underway and there is nothing that Zara can do to stop it. Zara's motivations and conflicts really drive this absorbing tale.
Ms. Jones also introduces a few new characters. I absolutely loved Astley. I'm not sure that I entirely trust him, but he does have some redeeming qualities. While he did help Zara in many ways, doing so also served his purposes. I definitely want to get to know him better.
I was a bit surprised by the ending. The book ends on a cliffhanger, leaving room to have major plot points continued in the next installment. I can't wait to read about the events that unfold between Astley, Zara, and Nick. It's so clear to see that the dynamics of Zara's relationship with Nick have been changed forever. Ms. Jones creates intriguing and compelling characters, and makes you care about them.
Overall, Captivate is definitely worth reading. I really enjoyed visiting this world again. It will keep you engaged and guessing at every turn. Ms. Jones continues to do an excellent job of world-building. Captivate continued to build on the established lore from the first book in the series, Need, as well as introducing a new mythology. With the vulnerable king's needs spinning out of control and ravenous and rampaging pixies on the loose, Bedford, Maine is deadlier than ever.
Notable Scene:
He pulls me into his chest, but I've already seen. I've already seen and it's stuck inside my brain like panic and terror, like a bad horror movie image that won't let go: bodies twisted on the marble floor; blood splashed across walls like arteries have been cut; hands severed in the middle of the floor not connected to anything; eyes open; mouths stuck in screams. I yank away from Nick and stare. Then I start moving. I hold my breath as I go from one corpse to another.
FTC Advisory: Bloomsbury provided me with an ARC of Captivate. No goody bags, sponsorships, "material connections," or bribes were exchanged for my review. In addition, I don't receive affiliate fees for anything purchased via links from my site.
Opening Sentence: Sometimes there are these bizarre people who actually like physical education class.
The Review:
Our favorite lovable phobic is back. Once again, Zara takes the reader on an amazing journey filled with heartbreak and death. We get a glimpse at some of Zara's new phobias, but we also get a "Top Ten Things to Remember When Dealing with Pixies" list, as well as some pixie tips and hints. Captivate picks up shortly after the ending of Need. Zara and The Scooby Gang know that their previous pixie solution is only a temporary fix. Zara struggles with her decisions and starts to question how pixies should be treated. The deadly pixies are becoming increasingly harder to detain, and more are flocking to Bedford, Maine at an alarming rate. Matters further intensify when a new pixie king arrives looking to claim Zara as his queen, as well as takeover the territory. The new king is unlike any other pixie that Zara has met. This completely throws her emotions into a tailspin. She foolishly puts her trust in him knowing that it could prove to be disastrous. Zara is willing to give up everything and become the one thing that she fears the most. With an impending pixie war looming, Zara starts to realize the effects that her decisions have caused. A bloody power struggle is underway and there is nothing that Zara can do to stop it. Zara's motivations and conflicts really drive this absorbing tale.
Ms. Jones also introduces a few new characters. I absolutely loved Astley. I'm not sure that I entirely trust him, but he does have some redeeming qualities. While he did help Zara in many ways, doing so also served his purposes. I definitely want to get to know him better.
I was a bit surprised by the ending. The book ends on a cliffhanger, leaving room to have major plot points continued in the next installment. I can't wait to read about the events that unfold between Astley, Zara, and Nick. It's so clear to see that the dynamics of Zara's relationship with Nick have been changed forever. Ms. Jones creates intriguing and compelling characters, and makes you care about them.
Overall, Captivate is definitely worth reading. I really enjoyed visiting this world again. It will keep you engaged and guessing at every turn. Ms. Jones continues to do an excellent job of world-building. Captivate continued to build on the established lore from the first book in the series, Need, as well as introducing a new mythology. With the vulnerable king's needs spinning out of control and ravenous and rampaging pixies on the loose, Bedford, Maine is deadlier than ever.
Notable Scene:
He pulls me into his chest, but I've already seen. I've already seen and it's stuck inside my brain like panic and terror, like a bad horror movie image that won't let go: bodies twisted on the marble floor; blood splashed across walls like arteries have been cut; hands severed in the middle of the floor not connected to anything; eyes open; mouths stuck in screams. I yank away from Nick and stare. Then I start moving. I hold my breath as I go from one corpse to another.
FTC Advisory: Bloomsbury provided me with an ARC of Captivate. No goody bags, sponsorships, "material connections," or bribes were exchanged for my review. In addition, I don't receive affiliate fees for anything purchased via links from my site.
February 21, 2010
Review courtesy of AllThingsUrbanFantasy.blogspot.com
One of the reasons I enjoyed Need (the first book in this series) so much was because of the honest and thoughtful voice of the protagonist, Zara. She was understandably melancholy (read my review HERE), but completely lacking in self pity. She was a realistic teenager without any of the CW-esque superficiality. In Captivate, after surviving a series of earth shattering experiences, and nearly loosing her life, I expected Zara to be even more grounded and serious about the new direction her life had taken. Unfortunately the older and wiser Zara is notably absent this time out.
**Spoilers if you haven’t read Need**
Captivate begins with Zara and Co. still hunting stray pixies and trapping them inside the iron enforced hidden mansion with her pixie king father. Zara is increasingly anxious about her werewolf boyfriend Nick’s solo missions, while he is equally upset by her sudden softening towards one particular pixie, Astley. Astley, a pixie king himself, challenges Zara’s long held belief that all pixies are evil. He makes no secret of his desires to have her as his pixie queen, but he does not force her either. He encourages her to consider the fate of the humans she loves as they are in danger once again with more and more pixies arriving and the reality of the temporary ‘pixie prison’ inevitable collapse, not to mention another king whose evil surpasses any that Zara has imagined.
Captivate introduces some new mythology into the Need universe, specifically Norse mythology. Valhalla, valkyries, the great battle of Ragnarök, and the god Odin. We don’t get a full explanation of how this added mythology will impact the already established world building. That information seems to be reserved for the as yet untitled Need book 3.
The basic plot is a fun continuation of the original premise of Zara trying to come to terms with both her human and pixie heritage and the nature of good and evil within all of us, but because of the lack of depth with the main characters, this sequel seems somewhat shallow. Zara and her friends are now inordinately consumed with junior high-ish angst over their respective crushes. The dialogue (which was so smart and snappy in Need) is now bogged down with plenty freaking ’s and cool ’s etc. And Zara makes several TSTL (To stupid to live) choices that really grated. I did enjoy the love triangle that was created with the introduction of Astley (I predict a Team Nick vs Team Astley war will be ensuing, and for the record: I’m going with Team Astley).
Despite some significant flaws, Captivate is still a good read though no where near as captivating as Need. Carrie Jones proved her talent to me with the first book in this series, and while the second effort was a bit of a stumble, I’m hoping the third book will more than make up for it.
Sexual Content: (YA books receive a more thorough breakdown) Kissing
My Rating: 3 out of 5
One of the reasons I enjoyed Need (the first book in this series) so much was because of the honest and thoughtful voice of the protagonist, Zara. She was understandably melancholy (read my review HERE), but completely lacking in self pity. She was a realistic teenager without any of the CW-esque superficiality. In Captivate, after surviving a series of earth shattering experiences, and nearly loosing her life, I expected Zara to be even more grounded and serious about the new direction her life had taken. Unfortunately the older and wiser Zara is notably absent this time out.
**Spoilers if you haven’t read Need**
Captivate begins with Zara and Co. still hunting stray pixies and trapping them inside the iron enforced hidden mansion with her pixie king father. Zara is increasingly anxious about her werewolf boyfriend Nick’s solo missions, while he is equally upset by her sudden softening towards one particular pixie, Astley. Astley, a pixie king himself, challenges Zara’s long held belief that all pixies are evil. He makes no secret of his desires to have her as his pixie queen, but he does not force her either. He encourages her to consider the fate of the humans she loves as they are in danger once again with more and more pixies arriving and the reality of the temporary ‘pixie prison’ inevitable collapse, not to mention another king whose evil surpasses any that Zara has imagined.
Captivate introduces some new mythology into the Need universe, specifically Norse mythology. Valhalla, valkyries, the great battle of Ragnarök, and the god Odin. We don’t get a full explanation of how this added mythology will impact the already established world building. That information seems to be reserved for the as yet untitled Need book 3.
The basic plot is a fun continuation of the original premise of Zara trying to come to terms with both her human and pixie heritage and the nature of good and evil within all of us, but because of the lack of depth with the main characters, this sequel seems somewhat shallow. Zara and her friends are now inordinately consumed with junior high-ish angst over their respective crushes. The dialogue (which was so smart and snappy in Need) is now bogged down with plenty freaking ’s and cool ’s etc. And Zara makes several TSTL (To stupid to live) choices that really grated. I did enjoy the love triangle that was created with the introduction of Astley (I predict a Team Nick vs Team Astley war will be ensuing, and for the record: I’m going with Team Astley).
Despite some significant flaws, Captivate is still a good read though no where near as captivating as Need. Carrie Jones proved her talent to me with the first book in this series, and while the second effort was a bit of a stumble, I’m hoping the third book will more than make up for it.
Sexual Content: (YA books receive a more thorough breakdown) Kissing
My Rating: 3 out of 5
March 12, 2010
Geez, what a mess. Where do I start?
First-Setting up the story: When did Zara become valley girl in her speaking? And when did the words "Baby" and "Oh (insert name here)" become manly for a werewolf?! And then you have Devyn appearing to be cheating on Issie? And all in the first two chapters? This is wrong on so many levels and completely turned me off before I even knew what was going on in the book.
Second-Writing Style: I don't remember Need being written like Captivate. If you like short choppy sentences with bad grammar, then this is the book for you. Sentences such as "We actually haven't had actual sex yet" (yes, this is word for word) Or "He did something. He called 911." (yes, word for word again) - they lack just about everything I've taught in writing lessons to my 5th grade class. Oh, and dialogue lacked contractions so it sounded fake - another pet peeve of mine.
THIS WILL GET SPOILER-ISH - STOP IF YOU HAVE NOT READ NEED
Third-Plot eerily familiar: Need was criticized for being too much like Twilight - Zara moves from hot southern town to the far cold north to small town to live with Grandmother that she barely knows. Zara finds out weres and pixies exist. Zara gets caught in battle and yada, yada, yada (insert spoons and forks here)(okay, I just through that in for giggles) (but yes, it's still totally absurd that forks was the weapon of choice to defeat the bad guys). In Captivate - Zara faces a big decision and the way it was written reminded me a of a little book called Breaking Dawn and well, being the 4th book of Twilight, just a little something to make you think...hmmmmm.
OKAY - SO NOW THAT I HAVE THAT OFF MY CHEST - THE GOOD PARTS
While I HATED Nick in this book because he was a total pansy with his "Baby" talk and gag me this and gag me that - Astley totally kicks ass. That is what a male MC should be like. Keep him around.
There is a chapter near the end that isn't written choppy!! I went back and checked and it actually flowed. Kudos!
The cover is beautiful just like Need's cover.
And um...so I like the killing and gore stuff that finally happened. It livened the book up to the point that it earned a star back.
Will I read a book 3 if it's coming out? Probably not. Captivate just wasn't for me - I need a bit more sustenance to a story as well as a deeper level of writing to keep my interest on a book-likable level.
First-Setting up the story: When did Zara become valley girl in her speaking? And when did the words "Baby" and "Oh (insert name here)" become manly for a werewolf?! And then you have Devyn appearing to be cheating on Issie? And all in the first two chapters? This is wrong on so many levels and completely turned me off before I even knew what was going on in the book.
Second-Writing Style: I don't remember Need being written like Captivate. If you like short choppy sentences with bad grammar, then this is the book for you. Sentences such as "We actually haven't had actual sex yet" (yes, this is word for word) Or "He did something. He called 911." (yes, word for word again) - they lack just about everything I've taught in writing lessons to my 5th grade class. Oh, and dialogue lacked contractions so it sounded fake - another pet peeve of mine.
THIS WILL GET SPOILER-ISH - STOP IF YOU HAVE NOT READ NEED
Third-Plot eerily familiar: Need was criticized for being too much like Twilight - Zara moves from hot southern town to the far cold north to small town to live with Grandmother that she barely knows. Zara finds out weres and pixies exist. Zara gets caught in battle and yada, yada, yada (insert spoons and forks here)(okay, I just through that in for giggles) (but yes, it's still totally absurd that forks was the weapon of choice to defeat the bad guys). In Captivate - Zara faces a big decision and the way it was written reminded me a of a little book called Breaking Dawn and well, being the 4th book of Twilight, just a little something to make you think...hmmmmm.
OKAY - SO NOW THAT I HAVE THAT OFF MY CHEST - THE GOOD PARTS
While I HATED Nick in this book because he was a total pansy with his "Baby" talk and gag me this and gag me that - Astley totally kicks ass. That is what a male MC should be like. Keep him around.
There is a chapter near the end that isn't written choppy!! I went back and checked and it actually flowed. Kudos!
The cover is beautiful just like Need's cover.
And um...so I like the killing and gore stuff that finally happened. It livened the book up to the point that it earned a star back.
Will I read a book 3 if it's coming out? Probably not. Captivate just wasn't for me - I need a bit more sustenance to a story as well as a deeper level of writing to keep my interest on a book-likable level.
April 4, 2016
Finsteres Gold ist eines dieser Bücher bei denen ich Probleme habe eine Rezension zu schreiben. Warum? Ganz einfach: Es war okay, ich fand's jetzt nicht schlecht, aber positiv ist mir auch nichts aufgefallen. Besonders die erste Hälfte des Romanes kam mir vor, als würde ich Flüsterndes Gold nochmal lesen. Es ist nicht viel passiert, der Zustand war derselbe und im Prinzip hätte man diesen Teil einfach überspringen können. Besonders, da es so beginnt wie Teil eins, nämlich mit einem Elfen, der Zara verfolgt und Nick, der seine Alleingänge startet. Generell hat mich Nick im zweiten Teil etwas gestört, da er sich wirklich aufführt wie der Supermacho höchstpersönlich. Er will alles bestimmen, Zara darf nichts alleine machen, er selbst aber macht, was er will. Da war mir Astley sogar sympathischer, obwohl der immerhin ein Elf war.
Die Thematik, dass vielleicht doch nicht alle Elfen böse sind, war recht interessant, auch wenn diese erst gegen Ende wirklich angeschnitten wird. Generell hat mir das Ende von der ganzen Geschichte am besten gefallen, da es sehr spannend geschrieben war und sich vor allem anderen vom ersten Teil abhob. Die Wendungen, die die Geschichte nimmt, sind wirklich interessant, weshalb ich auch sehr gern Verhängnisvolles Gold noch lesen werde. Carrie Jones geht hier auch ein wenig von der simplen Elfengeschichte weg und lässt Elemente der Mythologie einfließen, die die Götter betreffen. Besonders darauf bin ich bei Band drei sehr gespannt.
Insgesamt war dieser zweite Teil deutlich gewaltsamer und auch blutiger als noch Band eins, aber auch hier war dem erst gegen Mitte bis Ende der Fall. Ich hätte mir einfach gewünscht, dass man die erste Hälfte vielleicht ein wenig gekürzt hätte. Ein paar weniger Szenen, in denen Zara ihren Nick anhimmelt und das Buch wäre fantastisch geworden. So war es ein wenig schlechter als Band eins, was sehr schade ist, da es mehr Potential gehabt hätte.
FAZIT
Ein zweiter Teil, der aufgrund der Thematik und der zum Ende hin sehr spannenden Stellen mehr Potential hatte als Band eins, im Gesamtbild aber doch etwas schwächer gewesen ist. Für Fans des ersten Teiles trotzdem ein Muss. Ich freue mich auf Teil drei und hoffe, dass die Götter auch tatsächlich vorkommen werden!
Die Thematik, dass vielleicht doch nicht alle Elfen böse sind, war recht interessant, auch wenn diese erst gegen Ende wirklich angeschnitten wird. Generell hat mir das Ende von der ganzen Geschichte am besten gefallen, da es sehr spannend geschrieben war und sich vor allem anderen vom ersten Teil abhob. Die Wendungen, die die Geschichte nimmt, sind wirklich interessant, weshalb ich auch sehr gern Verhängnisvolles Gold noch lesen werde. Carrie Jones geht hier auch ein wenig von der simplen Elfengeschichte weg und lässt Elemente der Mythologie einfließen, die die Götter betreffen. Besonders darauf bin ich bei Band drei sehr gespannt.
Insgesamt war dieser zweite Teil deutlich gewaltsamer und auch blutiger als noch Band eins, aber auch hier war dem erst gegen Mitte bis Ende der Fall. Ich hätte mir einfach gewünscht, dass man die erste Hälfte vielleicht ein wenig gekürzt hätte. Ein paar weniger Szenen, in denen Zara ihren Nick anhimmelt und das Buch wäre fantastisch geworden. So war es ein wenig schlechter als Band eins, was sehr schade ist, da es mehr Potential gehabt hätte.
FAZIT
Ein zweiter Teil, der aufgrund der Thematik und der zum Ende hin sehr spannenden Stellen mehr Potential hatte als Band eins, im Gesamtbild aber doch etwas schwächer gewesen ist. Für Fans des ersten Teiles trotzdem ein Muss. Ich freue mich auf Teil drei und hoffe, dass die Götter auch tatsächlich vorkommen werden!
April 14, 2013
There is a standard to which I judge fantasy YA books. I ask myself, is this worse than Twilight? If the answer is no, I keep reading. The answer this time was nearly yes.
The fact is, there were so many problems with this book I rarely felt like a book. It felt like a rough draft of a novice writer looking to get published. There was no fluidity to the writing. There was certainly nothing engaging. And the characters. God, the characters.
I'll admit, Zara had charm in the first book. She was little headstrong, and short tempered, but she's a teen, so I'm willing to let a lot slide. But this time around she's just plain annoying. She doesn't listen to reason. she acts without thinking. She gets mad and storms off. And worst of all, she goes from a fairly independent girl, to hanging off the end of her boyfriend's arm. Apparently now she can't do anything without his approval, or at least asking forgiveness after, and without his attention she's likely to wilt. He's now the focus of her world, which turns her into nothing but a prop, and destroys the entire book.
And Nick? He seriously comes close to Edward Cullen status in this book with how controlling he is. He was relatively likable in the first book. But now he's telling her what to do, and trying to control her thoughts and shaming her for thinking independently and overall being a total asshole. I nearly got out the pompoms when we were introduced to the new love interest, Astley. Astley had more personally in twenty pages than Nick had in two books.
All the other character felt flat, or were dull, or unlikeable/uninteresting. The plot felt like nothing but a setup for the next books, or maybe like the author didn't know where it was going. It's a mess.
The first book had serious problems too, but it actually had charm, which is why I sort of, kind of, a little bit enjoyed it, and picked up the sequel. This book has no charm, no appeal, and I warrant the only people who'll like this book are sixteen or haven't ever had a boyfriend and idealize the concept. I feel like that should be a warning on the book.
The fact is, there were so many problems with this book I rarely felt like a book. It felt like a rough draft of a novice writer looking to get published. There was no fluidity to the writing. There was certainly nothing engaging. And the characters. God, the characters.
I'll admit, Zara had charm in the first book. She was little headstrong, and short tempered, but she's a teen, so I'm willing to let a lot slide. But this time around she's just plain annoying. She doesn't listen to reason. she acts without thinking. She gets mad and storms off. And worst of all, she goes from a fairly independent girl, to hanging off the end of her boyfriend's arm. Apparently now she can't do anything without his approval, or at least asking forgiveness after, and without his attention she's likely to wilt. He's now the focus of her world, which turns her into nothing but a prop, and destroys the entire book.
And Nick? He seriously comes close to Edward Cullen status in this book with how controlling he is. He was relatively likable in the first book. But now he's telling her what to do, and trying to control her thoughts and shaming her for thinking independently and overall being a total asshole. I nearly got out the pompoms when we were introduced to the new love interest, Astley. Astley had more personally in twenty pages than Nick had in two books.
All the other character felt flat, or were dull, or unlikeable/uninteresting. The plot felt like nothing but a setup for the next books, or maybe like the author didn't know where it was going. It's a mess.
The first book had serious problems too, but it actually had charm, which is why I sort of, kind of, a little bit enjoyed it, and picked up the sequel. This book has no charm, no appeal, and I warrant the only people who'll like this book are sixteen or haven't ever had a boyfriend and idealize the concept. I feel like that should be a warning on the book.
November 4, 2009
My Thoughts:
If you know me, you know I love fantasy. Absolutely anything fantastical, especially urban fantasy. But, let's be honest, who isn't tired of vampires and werewolves? While there are some truly great vampire and werewolf books out there, I was so ready for something new. So, when I got Captivate, the sequel to Need, by Carrie Jones a couple of weeks ago, it soared straight to the top of my TBR pile.
If you don't know, Need is the story of Zara discovering that she is half-pixie and that her boyfriend is a werewolf (yes, I said werewolf. I like this werewolf, so be quiet!). Captivate picks up right where Need left off. Like, exactly where Need left off. As in, it seems to pick up the very next day. I'm not sure if this is the case but it speaks loads that Carrie is able to make it feel like you just finished Need and immediately started Captivate.
Captivate easily could have been just the continuation of the pixie war along with some couple troubles for Zara and Nick, but it was so much more than that! The new characters and lore Carrie introduces are weaved seamlessly into the already seamless piece of work that is Zara's story. I love that Zara is a character that fits perfectly into both the fantasy world and the 'real' world represented in the novel. So often I see a character that is perfectly at home among the fantastical but has trouble in school and dealing with the human aspect of their lives. Again, not the case with this book.
I think the only problem that I had with Captivate is the fact that it made me show emotion. I bawled my head off while reading. The pages of my book have water damage I cried so hard. I'm not used to a book making me cry. I don't cry. Ever. I commend Carrie on making me cry; it is quite a feat. The ending is truly sad, yet at the same time full of hope.
The Verdict: If I could give Captivate 6/5 stars, I would. This book is truly fantastic. Just, be prepared with a few boxes of tissues.
If you know me, you know I love fantasy. Absolutely anything fantastical, especially urban fantasy. But, let's be honest, who isn't tired of vampires and werewolves? While there are some truly great vampire and werewolf books out there, I was so ready for something new. So, when I got Captivate, the sequel to Need, by Carrie Jones a couple of weeks ago, it soared straight to the top of my TBR pile.
If you don't know, Need is the story of Zara discovering that she is half-pixie and that her boyfriend is a werewolf (yes, I said werewolf. I like this werewolf, so be quiet!). Captivate picks up right where Need left off. Like, exactly where Need left off. As in, it seems to pick up the very next day. I'm not sure if this is the case but it speaks loads that Carrie is able to make it feel like you just finished Need and immediately started Captivate.
Captivate easily could have been just the continuation of the pixie war along with some couple troubles for Zara and Nick, but it was so much more than that! The new characters and lore Carrie introduces are weaved seamlessly into the already seamless piece of work that is Zara's story. I love that Zara is a character that fits perfectly into both the fantasy world and the 'real' world represented in the novel. So often I see a character that is perfectly at home among the fantastical but has trouble in school and dealing with the human aspect of their lives. Again, not the case with this book.
I think the only problem that I had with Captivate is the fact that it made me show emotion. I bawled my head off while reading. The pages of my book have water damage I cried so hard. I'm not used to a book making me cry. I don't cry. Ever. I commend Carrie on making me cry; it is quite a feat. The ending is truly sad, yet at the same time full of hope.
The Verdict: If I could give Captivate 6/5 stars, I would. This book is truly fantastic. Just, be prepared with a few boxes of tissues.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 13, 2010
Captivate, the second installment in the Need series continues to impress me. In the first novel, Zara's battle with the pixie king was a constant whisper in the wind. With the help of her supportive gang, problems were temporarily sustained. However, this time around more pixies start to surface, especially one in particular...his name is Astley. A charming and delectable figure who tickled me pink from his first words. Now don't get me wrong, Nick, has a piece of my heart. However, his usage of "baby" just might be getting a little too old for me. I find myself getting confused for which team I'm rooting for. Carrie has a talent for originating swoon-worthy men, which doesn't help my inner emotions. Hopefully, Entice doesn't introduce another one, or I just might need to start a 'Need Men Love Team.'
Issie and Devyn's character definition strides to a new point where I understand their personalities better. I enjoy them both and respect their unconditional love for Zara. Another element added was the idea of Valhalla, a hidden world that's brewing an upcoming war. Now, my favorite climax in the novel was the last 100 pages. Wow, I was literally blown away. The detailed fights and sad, unexpected circumstances made me read the chapters lightening fast. Carrie added a twist that stunned me and enticed me to read the next installment (literally!) I really am hooked on this pixie series (with a few other supernatural beings, don't worry my lips are sealed.) I am on the edge of my seat to see Zara grow into her own skin and grab the destiny she's meant to fulfill. My review for Entice will be posted on December 30th, so make sure you tune in then! :)
Issie and Devyn's character definition strides to a new point where I understand their personalities better. I enjoy them both and respect their unconditional love for Zara. Another element added was the idea of Valhalla, a hidden world that's brewing an upcoming war. Now, my favorite climax in the novel was the last 100 pages. Wow, I was literally blown away. The detailed fights and sad, unexpected circumstances made me read the chapters lightening fast. Carrie added a twist that stunned me and enticed me to read the next installment (literally!) I really am hooked on this pixie series (with a few other supernatural beings, don't worry my lips are sealed.) I am on the edge of my seat to see Zara grow into her own skin and grab the destiny she's meant to fulfill. My review for Entice will be posted on December 30th, so make sure you tune in then! :)
September 23, 2010
I'm really, really disappointed.
What happened?! The magic that was Need was absent in Captivate. I definitely had my fill with all the problems that arose that were cured by a kiss on the cheek or a hug. And what the heck was up with Devyn? When did he become a premenstrual crybaby? I also didn't like how there would be this huge, life-changing discovery that would be overtaken by giggling and relationship talk in the midst of serious discussion. It almost felt as if these characters were totally different from the characters I loved in the first book.
I mean... I hate to say it, but I felt like I was watching an episode of Barney and Friends with some very Full House moments where everything is solved by a big hug from an Olsen twin. And the whole "you can do ANYTHING, Zara! You're SUPER SPECIAL!" attitude grated on my nerves. It's okay to grieve when something bad happens. It wasn't very realistic to go through a traumatic event and then wipe your tears away and go to the prom and act as if nothing happened. Characters dealing with their pain is accpetable. Interesting, even.
As with Need, Zara had her moments of hilarious snark that shone through, which is the reason that I gave it two stars and not one. It was pretty difficult to get through this book. I hope that the use of the word "baby" is significantly toned down in the next book. It sounds reasonable in everyday speaking, but typed? Not so much.
I hope that the series bounces back in the conclusion of the trilogy, because I had high hopes for Captivate after the awesomeness that was Need.
What happened?! The magic that was Need was absent in Captivate. I definitely had my fill with all the problems that arose that were cured by a kiss on the cheek or a hug. And what the heck was up with Devyn? When did he become a premenstrual crybaby? I also didn't like how there would be this huge, life-changing discovery that would be overtaken by giggling and relationship talk in the midst of serious discussion. It almost felt as if these characters were totally different from the characters I loved in the first book.
I mean... I hate to say it, but I felt like I was watching an episode of Barney and Friends with some very Full House moments where everything is solved by a big hug from an Olsen twin. And the whole "you can do ANYTHING, Zara! You're SUPER SPECIAL!" attitude grated on my nerves. It's okay to grieve when something bad happens. It wasn't very realistic to go through a traumatic event and then wipe your tears away and go to the prom and act as if nothing happened. Characters dealing with their pain is accpetable. Interesting, even.
As with Need, Zara had her moments of hilarious snark that shone through, which is the reason that I gave it two stars and not one. It was pretty difficult to get through this book. I hope that the use of the word "baby" is significantly toned down in the next book. It sounds reasonable in everyday speaking, but typed? Not so much.
I hope that the series bounces back in the conclusion of the trilogy, because I had high hopes for Captivate after the awesomeness that was Need.
January 21, 2012
The second book of the Need series continues with where it last left off. I was really excited to read more of Zara, whom I thought was an independent, loving person, but I ended up uber dissapointed. Captivate is a pretty ironic name, since I experienced nothing close to captivation. Authors shouldn't put thoughts into their readers' heads from their titles. This second installment deals with the unmentionable importance of Nick and Zara's (sappy and pukey) love for each other. It was cute at first, but the repetition of it bugged me! This book made me doubt how much I liked Need in the first place. Why would you make me doubt my (positive) feelings towards your first book from/with this second book?! You've ruined me, Jones. I won't be visiting your next book, Entice, either.
Another negative: Jones' writing style had NO flow and the plot had NO shape to it. All I noticed was the consistency to the development of the two lovebirds' relationship. I figured something was to happen soon to hinder their 'togetherness', and if that was the case..I would say "forget it", since it would be totally predictable. But I just couldn't wait to see if my prediction played out..Zara and Nick's (gross) infatuation for each other made me want to close the book and burn it immediately (but I didn't burn it only because it was a library book). :/
Another negative: Jones' writing style had NO flow and the plot had NO shape to it. All I noticed was the consistency to the development of the two lovebirds' relationship. I figured something was to happen soon to hinder their 'togetherness', and if that was the case..I would say "forget it", since it would be totally predictable. But I just couldn't wait to see if my prediction played out..Zara and Nick's (gross) infatuation for each other made me want to close the book and burn it immediately (but I didn't burn it only because it was a library book). :/
February 4, 2010
I literally just finished reading this book minutes ago and I'm actually very annoyed. As the end of the book margin got smaller and smaller I knew I was going to finish the book and still want more. I HATE when authors leave endings like that. So here's my basic review.
"Captivate" maintained the gripping plot of "Need" but was actually much more enjoyable. The writing was hard to get used to at first because it is written in 1st person and seems juvenile (some incomplete sentences, poor grammar and word usage). However, since this is the mind of a teenage girl it probably should be (and I don't mean that in a derogatory way since I myself am one). I LOVED the new characters (Astley and Cassidy). Astley is my new book crush. I like him so much more than Nick. (slight spoilers ahead) I'm not sure where Carrie Jones is going with him but good or evil I think he'll remain my favorite character. Devyn annoys me and Nick is a little too vanilla for my taste. This book had more of a Melissa Marr/Holly Black feel to it. They're both wonderful writers so that's certainly a compliment. I can't wait to see where Carrie Jones goes with book 3 (there better be a book 3 after that ending!!!), I just hope I can wait for however long it takes to come out.
"Captivate" maintained the gripping plot of "Need" but was actually much more enjoyable. The writing was hard to get used to at first because it is written in 1st person and seems juvenile (some incomplete sentences, poor grammar and word usage). However, since this is the mind of a teenage girl it probably should be (and I don't mean that in a derogatory way since I myself am one). I LOVED the new characters (Astley and Cassidy). Astley is my new book crush. I like him so much more than Nick. (slight spoilers ahead) I'm not sure where Carrie Jones is going with him but good or evil I think he'll remain my favorite character. Devyn annoys me and Nick is a little too vanilla for my taste. This book had more of a Melissa Marr/Holly Black feel to it. They're both wonderful writers so that's certainly a compliment. I can't wait to see where Carrie Jones goes with book 3 (there better be a book 3 after that ending!!!), I just hope I can wait for however long it takes to come out.
September 13, 2013
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Captivate starts a while after Need with Zara’s father being trapped in the house with his pixies and the friends are stopping other pixies which are arriving more often.
In the first half of the book Nick and Zara are in love, Issie is jealous of Devyn’s friendship with a girl called Cassidy. Also Zara, after rescuing a pixie called Astley, has an internal debate about whether all pixies are evil. I love the addition of Norse mythology as I did not know much about it and I found it fascinating.
The second half of the book is the saddest part in the entire series and I won’t spoil it for those who have not read it, but Zara has an important decision which could affect her life forever.
This is a captivating book with many twists and turns and I could not guess at the ending. I would recommend it to people who have read Need and those who like YA paranormal romances.
Captivate starts a while after Need with Zara’s father being trapped in the house with his pixies and the friends are stopping other pixies which are arriving more often.
In the first half of the book Nick and Zara are in love, Issie is jealous of Devyn’s friendship with a girl called Cassidy. Also Zara, after rescuing a pixie called Astley, has an internal debate about whether all pixies are evil. I love the addition of Norse mythology as I did not know much about it and I found it fascinating.
The second half of the book is the saddest part in the entire series and I won’t spoil it for those who have not read it, but Zara has an important decision which could affect her life forever.
This is a captivating book with many twists and turns and I could not guess at the ending. I would recommend it to people who have read Need and those who like YA paranormal romances.
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