Blergh. It's really hovering around 1.5 stars. Again, the style differences threw me, as the "Scandinavian mystery writer voice" (which I can only base off Girl w/ Dragon Tattoo and this, so, grain of salt) seems very stilted and matter of fact and just... there's nothing hidden, is the best I can come up with? It's not that it's plain, because I don't really have a problem with that, but there's nothing to ever decipher or wonder about. That said, there are far less mentions of SANDWICHES in this book than Dragon Tattoo, and I don't know whether to be pleased or disappointed.
So here are my major issues with this book (Massive massive spoilers, including the end of the book, deaths, I mean everything):
STYLE: I got into in that first paragraph, but a MAJOR MAJOR problem for me was the handling of the third person limited POV. The two places I had to just give in and start laughing were (SPOILERS, SWEETIE) the deaths of two of the POV characters, Hong Qiu and then her brother Ya Ru. Here's the scene of Hong Qiu's death, and keep in mind that everything up to this point in this scene has really been from Hong Qiu's POV (although 3rd person) --
"Hong Qiu had no time to gather what was happening before she was also hit by a bullet that smashed her jaw, was deflected downward, and broke her spine."
The scene then abruptly changes to Ya Ru's POV so we can follow the action of him covering up the murders he's just committed, and then read about him also killing his right-hand man/hit man. It's just supremely awkward in terms of transitions and I'm assuming it's not a translation issue either.
PLOT/CHARACTERIZATION: At first I was actually sort of believing the hype that EW had put behind this book, with that opening murder mystery scene that actually drew me in. Then I met the "hero" of the book, Birgitta. She's got pretty much zero personality beyond once being a Communist and having marital troubles with her husband and oh yes, she's a judge. That's really about it. The explanation for the opening mass murder of pretty much an entire sleepy town full of boring old people ends up being... revenge for the mistreatment of a Chinese guy's ancestors, but the Chinese guy happens to be a behind-the-scenes player who's risen to the top of the heap via shady deals, bribery, you know the deal AND he happens to be a player in the Communist party too. This somehow ties into the fact that there's a secret plan in the Communist party to ship a metric shitton of their dirt-poor peasants to uninhabited sections of Africa, which means wheeling and dealing with real-life African presidents? I didn't say it made sense. It ends up a sprawling mess with plenty of connections that end up feeling forced and unneeded.
DIALOGUE: Eh, this should really fall in with style, but I'm going to open the book to three random places and I guarantee you I'll find a clunker of a line on each page. Ready? BREAK.
p. 189: "Everybody owes everybody else something. If somebody starts asking about people, there's usually money involved somewhere."
p.295: "It's over now. I can go home. I've got my purse back and I've seen the Great Wall of China. I've convinced myself that the Chinese peasants' revolt has made enormous strides forward. What has happened in this country is nothing less than a human miracle. When I was young I longed to be one of those marching with Mao's Little Red Book in my hand, surrounded by thousands of other young people. You and I are about the same age. What did you dream of?" (WHO TALKS LIKE THIS? YOU'RE IN A BAR. RELAX.)
p. 392: But Mao tolerated the poets. I suppose you could say that was because he wrote poetry himself. But I think he knew hat artists could show the big political stage in a new light. When other political leaders wanted to clamp down on artists who wrote the wrong words or painted with dodgy brushstrokes, Mao always put his foot down and stopped them. To the bitter end. What happened to artists during the Cultural Revolution was of course his responsibility, but not his intention. Even if the last revolution he setin motion had cultural overtones, it was basically political. When Mao realized that some of the young rebels were going to far, he slammed on the brakes. Even if he couldn't express it in so many words, I think he regretted the havoc caused during those years. But he knew better than anyone else that if you want to make an omelette, you have to break an egg. Isn't that what people used to say?"
HOLY EXPOSITION, BATMAN. Seriously, that entire paragraph from page 392 is Birgitta's friend Karin just info-dumping about Mao and Chinese historical shit that has absolutely NOTHING to do with the central plot. And this isn't the only place it happens. I understand her friend is a scholar on China, but wow. She's only that to give Mankell and excuse to send Birgitta to China to move the plot forward.
And one other thing that bugged me an irrational amount: one of main clues Birgitta pursues in her initial investigation of the mass murder is a red ribbon that is found out near the crime scene in the snow. She tracks it to a local restaurant, which helps her get on the right track to figuring out that it's Ya Ru's main dude Liu Xin. Then in the last 20 pages, Birgitta's all LOL NEVER DID FIGURE OUT WHY HE SNIPPED THAT RIBBON OFF A LIGHT FIXTURE AT THE LOCAL CHINESE BUFFET AND CARRIED IT AROUND WHILE HE MURDERED 19 DEFENSELESS PEOPLE, NO BIG DEAL.
In short: Wow. So I'm never really going to trust Entertainment Weekly's book reviewer again. It's basically the opposite of the pull quote on the cover ("A complex and enormously satisfying thriller... Grade: A"). Crammed full of meandering plots and details, devoid of any 3D characters (the closest is MAYBE Hong Qiu), I'd actively push this out of someone's hands and give them a solid mystery/thriller (AKA Into the Woods by Tana French, and then I'd stack The Likeness right on top of that).
I didn't think I could actually rate Girl with a Dragon Tattoo favorably when compared to another book, but it's definitely better than this one. And not just for the sandwiches.