Well this was a trip.
A lot of interesting aesthetics, sometimes quite nauseating use of colours and images but I'm sure that was intentional. Part of my brain is stubbornly telling me that this was really a pretty ordinary, not a particularly well-plotted or well-observed story stuck through the psychedelic meatgrinder. The other part of my brain is giving the author the benefit of the doubt. The plot was disjointed in that multiple viewpoints were meshed together and ran concurrently, side by side - it was a bit much to handle at first (the impressionistic surrealist drawings didn't really help) but these plotlines eventually converge to tell a story that wasn't as unusual as the reader was initially led to expect. I think part of the reason why the plot feels a little flat to me is because Sienkiewicz doesn't have quite the sensitivity or the deftness to really crack into his characters' head. He knows that they are disturbed because he is telling a very bizarre story situated in a very intense, oppressive city landscape and hence, as a result, they should think differently from the everyday average person. Expounding on this, he chooses to follow their internal monologues, which either take the form of seething intensities or child-like sing-song speech, a primitive mind that only has enough space for its simple (and destructive) preoccupations, which are themselves governed by a strangely vivid brand of logic. That's all well and good but the internal monologues never become much more than the result of Sienkiewicz's aesthetic choices. This is especially the case in regards to Dahlia, where her psychological intensity and obsessions felt oddly flat to me, in part because her obsessions were too vividly described, too eloquent. Obsessions, I think, are focused on the fact of the matter and not the details of the matter - to have Dahlia be obsessive of dirt/filth/corruption is okay, I guess; to have her internal monologue essentially comprise this vivid string of details of corruptions and dirt feels inauthentic to me, for some reason that I'm not quite able to put into words.
Same thing with Harvard, the lawyer. I guess maybe that's just an unfortunate side-effect having the story told in just 4 volumes, so it's a sort of balancing act for Sienkiewicz - having the story sprawl out over more books would work against the vividness of the drawings and the atmosphere of the world in Stray Toasters; having the story compressed squeezes some of the life out of the characters since the universe doesn't feel quite real to the touch. All we are told is that these characters have very intense emotions (some of which feels definitely contrived to me) which is to be expected after all since they are characters are living in a fucked-up world caught in a fucked up situation. And that's it. From then onwards, the reader peers from a distance as these characters slowly inch their ways towards their violent collision with one another, impelled by the motives spelled out to us by Sienkiewicz. I don't want to harp on the importance of characterisation because that feels like a lazy argument but if the characters don't feel on some level real then there's going to be a degree of disconnect, and since this graphic novel actively courts the attention of its audience/reader from page to page, I doubt that that is Sienkiewicz's intention.
I can't help but compare this with Sam Kieth's The Maxx (or really, most of his other comics) since both authors have a tendency for the surrealistic. Kieth, to his credit, has a sense of humour in the comics; he also isn't satisfied with emotional banality when it comes to his characters and is often willing to take his time in letting circumstances reveal who the characters are without pushing for a particular result. Sienkiewicz does without both these things to the detriment, in my opinion, of this particular story. Still, much of the artwork is great and there are some nice moments in this book. I particularly like the scene where Egon wakes up in the lair of Dr. Violet - "electricity arcing from metal to metal" indeed.
3.5 stars.