I am always a little wary when a man writes a story with a woman's voice. Alma's perspective at times feels void of emotion and detached. I have a hard time buying into her (a 7 year old) and John Warren's (a 10 year old) immediate attachment as life long partners. The author does do a good job growing that attachment, but throughout it seems as if they should be older.
The book gets bogged down in a lot of unnecessary details and descriptions. They do not further the story, sometimes even becoming a distraction. The chapters are long and ruin on and on. It would be helpful to have a better timeline than just years at the beginning of chapters. At some point the Civil War ended, but I'm not sure where that was in the novel. When the soldiers come is the war over? When the lawyer comes is it during reconstruction? Thus it lacks helpful details.
This is a life story an old woman is telling to her daughter and granddaughters. At times she wonders off and adds details for a further point in the story. Knowing that helps the reader understand the storyteller's voice, but the author doesn't tell us that until the end.
The ending was a disappointment and anti climatic for me. Alma finally experiences strong emotions, but then we're back to the emotionless trudging through her life. She learned a lot and was good with plants and horses, but what was she passionate about? How did her disappointments effect her? What did she think about the war and how it tore her community apart? How did that shape her thinking, decisions, and life? Why wasn't the 7-year old attachment to John Warren just a childhood fancy? Why couldn't she let him go?
The story line was interesting and moved along. The characters were likable and there is a feeling of community and care among them. I would wonder if the setting was in the grasslands of Kentucky where horses are raised and trained or closer to the mountains with a totally different cultural aspect.