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Hattori Hachi #1
The Revenge of Praying Mantis
Hattie Jackson is an ordinary fiteen-year-old until her mother disappears and Hattie's life is turned upside down. With the help of her friend, Mad Dog, Hattie discovers the truth about her mother's 'other life' and the role she must now take on to defeat a terrifying army of evil ninjutsu warriors, led by Praying Mantis - the deadliest assassin ever known...
240 pages, Paperback
First published July 1, 2009
About the author
Jane Prowse
4 books41 followersJane lives in the New Forest, Hampshire, with her film editor husband, Ian, and their cat, Mitten. As well as writing teen fiction - the Hattori Hachi series, Jane writes and directs theatre and television. Her most recent play, adapted from the hugely successful autobiography by Jane Juska, A Round-Heeled Woman, transferred to the Aldwych theatre in London's West End at the end of 2011. TV credits include the BBC Christmas film, The Greatest Store in the World, Robson Green's Rocket Man, Brenda Blethyn, Alun Armstrong, Julie Graham and Richard Armitage in Kay Mellor's Between the Sheets, and her own original psychological thriller, Green-Eyed Monster starring Emma Fielding, Fay Ripley and Hugo Speer. www.janeprowse.com
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July 30, 2012
When I first read the description of "The Revenge of the Praying Mantis" by Jane Prowse, I thought the book would be a fun read and I added on my "to read" list. Soon after that, Jane announced me that her book is free to download on the series' site, and I jumped at the opportunity. Little did I know then how great the book would be, or that, in the next morning, I would win the second novel through Goodreads giveaways. As soon as I finished the book that I had been reading then, I started this first novel of Hattori Hachi's adventures and I was immediately hooked by the action.
I absolutely LOVE Asia, especially Japan, so I was thrilled to learn that Hattie, the protagonist, was half Japanese, and a big part of the book is based on Japanese culture and history. She could be a teenage girl like any other, but not with her mother secretly training her to be a ninja, testing how much she can hold her breath underwater, making her walk on thin surfaces at big heights and so on. But this so-called "little game" of theirs gets dangerous when her mother, Chiyoko, suddenly dissappears, and Hattie has to find out what happened to her, and figure out how to save her. She will discover who she and her mother really are, and learn how to be a ninja and fight, before the Kataki, lead by the Praying Mantis find and destroy her.
Hattie/Hachi was my favourite character, and not because she is the main one. I found her to be a very strong girl, despite her age, and her personality is credible. She has moments when she is scared, and lost, like any child would be in that situation, but she is trying to overcome her fear and do what is best to save her mother. She is very loyal to her friends, and expects them to act the same.
Yazuki is a very interesting character too. Pretending to be just an old laundry lady, she is in fact the person who will train Hachi in ninjutsu. She is a true master of disguise, and will teach Hachi very valuable lessons, which can aply in both ninja and normal life. Some of these are widely known, some you will read for the first time...
"Anything can be a weapon in imaginative hands."
"When all else fails, when you hit a brick wall, let the enemy reveal themselves by giving them what they're looking for."
"Knowing when to leave requires training."
An idea that especially intrigues me is that anyone has an animus, a spirit that defines one as a person. '"But it can also mean “animosity” which is why the animal shadows only usually come out in confrontational situations. For centuries, Ninja have looked to the earth for inspiration in ways to live and fight. This is why you see us all giving off animal shadows. We each study the species that mean most to us. We each have an “Animus” that is unique...'"
But strength is not what matters in the ninja world. You can be a weak fighter and defeat your enemy if you are smart enough.
"Think about Praying Mantis. The deadliest ninja predator. Why isn't his animus a lion or a polar bear - two of the most successful killing machines in the animal kingdom? The answer is that these animals would not be right for him. Think how a praying mantis is invisible on a leaf, how they are carnivores who will devour their own species. The female will even eat her own partner once they've mated and, as hatchlings, their first meal is often one of their own siblings. These are the things that matter to Praying Mantis - and if you study his attributes, they are elements that will help you defeat him."
But don't think this book was all about fighting and life lessons! It's also a book about friendship, altruism, family and trust. Mad Dog is a character that will spice things up a little during Hachi's training. He is an orphan boy wrongly believed to have been involved in Chiyoko's dissappearence, and who is hiding in Yazuki's dojo and training to be a ninja too. Despite being not as skilled as Hachi, and having lots of invisible barriers to overcome, such as his fear of water and rats, he is determined to protect her at all cost. There's even a little bit of romance between them at the end, which makes me very curious how things will develop in the next novels.
All in all, I recommend this book to all of my reading friends, young adult lovers or not. You will find this book to be a little atypical for the YA genre, and in a good way.
P.S.: The book can be downloaded for free, on the series' site, here.
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Când am citit prima dată descrierea cărţii "The Revenge of the Praying Mantis" (Răzbunarea călugăriţei) de Jane Prowse, m-am gândit că ar fi o lectură plăcută şi am adăugat-o în lista de cărţi pe care doream să le citesc. Curând după aceea, Jane m-a anunţat că pot să descarc gratuit cartea de pe site-ul seriei, aşa că nu am ratat oportunitatea. Nu ştiam eu pe atunci cât de grozavă era cartea, sau că, în dimineaţa următoare, voi câştiga cel de-al doilea volum, prin intermediul concursurilor de pe Goodreads. Imediat ce am terminat cartea pe care o citeam pe atunci, am început primul volum din aventurile lui Hattori Hachi şi acţiunea m-a captivat imediat.
Pur şi simplu ADOR Asia, mai ales Japonia, aşa că am fost încântată să aflu că Hattie, protagonista, e pe jumătate japoneză, şi că mare parte din carte e bazată pe cultura şi istoria Japoniei. Ea ar putea fi o adolescentă ca oricare alta, dar nu când mama ei o antrenează în secret să fie ninja, testând cât de mult timp îşi poate ţine respiraţia sub apă, făcând-o să meargă pe suprafeţe înguste la mari înălţimi şi aşa mai departe. Dar acest aşa-zis "joc" al lor devine periculor când mama ei, Chiyoko, dispare dintr-o dată, iar Hattie trebuie să afle ce i s-a întâmplat şi să-şi dea seama cum să o salveze. Va descoperi cine sunt ea şi mama ei cu adevărat şi va învăţa cum să fie ninja şi să lupte înainte ca gruparea Kataki, condusă de Călugăriţă, să o găsească şi să o distrugă.
Hattie/Hachi este personajul meu preferat, şi nu pentru că e cel principal. Mi s-a părut o fată foarte puternică, în ciuda vârstei ei, iar personalitatea pe care o are e credibilă. Are momente în care îi este frică şi se simte pierdută, cum ar fi orice copil în situaţia ei, dar încearcă să-şi învingă teama şi să facă ceea ce e bine pentru ca să-şi salveze mama. E foarte loială prietenilor ei, şi se aşteaptă ca şi ei să fie la fel.
Yazuki e şi ea un personaj foarte interesant. Prefăcându-se că e doar o spălătoreasă bătrână, ea este, de fapt, persoana care o va antrena pe Hachi în ninjutsu. Este o adevărată maestră a deghizării, şi o va învăţa pe Hachi lecţii foarte valoroase, care pot fi aplicate atât în viaţa de ninja, cât şi în cea normală. Unele din ele sunt foarte cunoscute, de unele veţi auzi pentru prima data...
"Orice poate fi o armă în mâinile celor cu imaginaţie."
"Când toate dau greş, când te izbeşti de un zid de cărămidă, lasă inamicii să se arate, dându-le ceea ce caută."
"E nevoie de antrenament ca să ştii când să pleci."
O idee care m-a intrigat în mod special este faptul că oricine are un animus, un spirit care îl defineşte ca persoană. "Dar înseamnă şi "animozitate", iar de aceea umbrele de animale se arată în confruntări. De secole, ninja au găsit în pământ inspiraţie pentru modul de viaţă şi de luptă. De aceea ne vezi pe toţi cu umbre de animale. Fiecare din noi studiază specia care înseamnă cel mai mult pentru noi. Fiecare avem un "animus" unic."
Dar forţa nu e ceea ce contează în lumea ninja. Poţi fi un luptător slab şi să-ţi învingi duşmanul dacă eşti suficient de isteţ.
"Gândeşte-te la Călugăriţă. Cel mai periculos prădător dintre ninja. De ce animusul lui nu e un leu sau un urs polar - două dintre cele mai de succes maşini de ucis din regatul animalelor? Răspunsul e că aceste animale nu ar fi potrivite pentru el. Gândeşte-te cum o călugăriţă e invizibilă pe o frunză, cum ele sunt carnivore care vor devora propria specie. Femela chiar îşi va mânca partenerul odată ce s-au împerecheat, iar, ca nou născuţi, prima lor masă va fi adesea fratele sau sora. Astea sunt lucrurile care contează pentru Călugăriţă - şi dacă îi studiezi însuşirile, acestea sunt elementele care te vor ajuta să-l învingi."
Dar să nu credeţi că această carte este numai despre bătăi şi lecţii de viaţă! Este şi o carte despre prietenie, altruism, familie şi încredere. Mad Dog e un personaj care va pipera puţin lucrurile în timpul antrenamentelor lui Hachi. El e un orfan despre care se crede în mod eronat că ar fi implicat în dispariţia lui Chiyoko, şi care se ascunde în dojo-ul lui Yazuki, antrenându-se şi el ca să fie ninja. Deşi nu este la fel de talentat ca Hachi şi are multe bariere invizibile de depăşit, cum ar fi frica de apă şi de şoareci, el e determinat să o protejeze pe aceasta cu orice preţ. Este şi puţin romantism între ei la sfârşitul cărţii, ceea ce mă face curioasă în legătură cu felul în care se vor dezvolta lucrurile în următoarele volume.
Una peste alta, recomand această carte tuturor prietenilor mei care citesc, iubitori de cărţi Young Adult sau nu. Veţi găsi că această carte e puţin atipică pentru genul YA, şi într-un sens pozitiv.
P.S.: Cartea poate fi descărcată gratuit pe site-ul seriei, aici.
September 29, 2012
Is there a ninja in all of us? Ninja is actually a colloquial term of the more bona fide shinobi. The kanji for nin means temperance, restraint, whereas ninja literally refers to 'one who endures'. It seems that the characters from Hattori Hachi were created to do just that, to endure the test of time so this can be written as a 'franchise' for some time to come.
The book reads very much like a TV series. No wait, in fact, it's like a Karate Kid TV series, only this one is a female version with extra weapons.
Imagine a girl and Mr Miyagi with a bun instead of beard and you're just about there.
Now, Hachi (Hattie's ninja name) is a Mary Sue. She has no discernible faults and just seems to excel at everything she does (again, 'temper' doesn't count). If she's in a stump, someone or something would miraculously show up to save the day. And other characters were similarly given definitive roles with simplified outlines.
That's not to say though, that it's a bad thing. The stereotyping of characters somewhat works in this case because the writing style is also geared towards easy understanding and is well structured, each chapter being a 'lesson' in Hachi's path towards being a ninja.
And although Hachi's a Mary Sue character, she'd be a good role model for children or young teens. The story touches on, aside from societal biases, family ties, friendship, discerning the bad from the good, admitting your mistakes (and learning from it) and so on.
What's commendable is how the author introduces themes about common prejudices in today's modern society in a way that kids could understand, and she used her plot and characters to illustrate this finely, even at the expense of complexity that more mature readers might find 'necessary' for a good read.
Unlike most YA books, romance takes a backseat, with no insta-love or gorgeous-but-creepy-guy-that-makes-heroine-blind-to-all-faults. In fact, it's the first time in many that the love interest is what most girls would view as a 'loser' (it's even being implied by the character himself), and the story turns this prejudice on its feet and not come across as heavy-handed.
Using a modern ninja theme seemed like a good thing, given that it blends oriental folklore with real-world relevance. Unfortunately, for me that's where it fell short. When I said this felt like Karate Kid, I really meant it that way. Except that Karate Kid's an '80s film. The ninja training and the way the ninja clans fought felt a little detached from the modern era. Karate itself is being practiced even now so the Karate Kid franchise serves to glorify the sport and inspire learners. Now try finding a dojo where you can sign up and say "Hey, can you teach me ninjutsu?"
Perhaps this is the problem with compromising between pure fantasy (e.g. ninjas in a feudal era who could use spells - oh right, that's Naruto.) and modern sensibilities (e.g. depiction of underprivileged kids). In trying to address both fun and relevance, a little bit of both has got to give.
Now back to the first question I posed: is there a ninja in all of us? Certainly. When you held your temper even when you're angered because losing your calm would do zilch. When you suck in your tummy to appear nicer in photos. Those are all within the art of 'one who endures'.
So, if you apply those and hold in your more judgmental side and channel yourself (a high-level ninjutsu, according to this book!) into the shoes of a child, and just go along with the ride, you'd find that you can have fun and learn or affirm some coming-of-age wisdom. Or you could just hold on a while more and in the near future, this series might just come to a TV station near you.
Note: Obtained free PDF, courtesy of the author.
The book reads very much like a TV series. No wait, in fact, it's like a Karate Kid TV series, only this one is a female version with extra weapons.
Imagine a girl and Mr Miyagi with a bun instead of beard and you're just about there.
The story goes that Hattie, a 'normal' 15 year-old living in Camden Town, London, is actually, of course, more than your normal kid. Hattie is a half-British, half-Japanese teen whose mum had always trained her in ninjutsu, or the arts of being a ninja, disguised as 'fun, strange games' ever since she could remember. And it goes to say that Hattie had no inkling at all what these were supposed to mean other than the fact that it made her much more agile than other kids her age.
One day, her mum disappeared under mysterious circumstances and it's now up to Hattie to embrace her destiny as a ninja from one of the oldest lineages there is to solve the mystery and save her mother.
Now, Hachi (Hattie's ninja name) is a Mary Sue. She has no discernible faults and just seems to excel at everything she does (again, 'temper' doesn't count). If she's in a stump, someone or something would miraculously show up to save the day. And other characters were similarly given definitive roles with simplified outlines.
That's not to say though, that it's a bad thing. The stereotyping of characters somewhat works in this case because the writing style is also geared towards easy understanding and is well structured, each chapter being a 'lesson' in Hachi's path towards being a ninja.
And although Hachi's a Mary Sue character, she'd be a good role model for children or young teens. The story touches on, aside from societal biases, family ties, friendship, discerning the bad from the good, admitting your mistakes (and learning from it) and so on.
What's commendable is how the author introduces themes about common prejudices in today's modern society in a way that kids could understand, and she used her plot and characters to illustrate this finely, even at the expense of complexity that more mature readers might find 'necessary' for a good read.
Unlike most YA books, romance takes a backseat, with no insta-love or gorgeous-but-creepy-guy-that-makes-heroine-blind-to-all-faults. In fact, it's the first time in many that the love interest is what most girls would view as a 'loser' (it's even being implied by the character himself), and the story turns this prejudice on its feet and not come across as heavy-handed.
Using a modern ninja theme seemed like a good thing, given that it blends oriental folklore with real-world relevance. Unfortunately, for me that's where it fell short. When I said this felt like Karate Kid, I really meant it that way. Except that Karate Kid's an '80s film. The ninja training and the way the ninja clans fought felt a little detached from the modern era. Karate itself is being practiced even now so the Karate Kid franchise serves to glorify the sport and inspire learners. Now try finding a dojo where you can sign up and say "Hey, can you teach me ninjutsu?"
Perhaps this is the problem with compromising between pure fantasy (e.g. ninjas in a feudal era who could use spells - oh right, that's Naruto.) and modern sensibilities (e.g. depiction of underprivileged kids). In trying to address both fun and relevance, a little bit of both has got to give.
Now back to the first question I posed: is there a ninja in all of us? Certainly. When you held your temper even when you're angered because losing your calm would do zilch. When you suck in your tummy to appear nicer in photos. Those are all within the art of 'one who endures'.
So, if you apply those and hold in your more judgmental side and channel yourself (a high-level ninjutsu, according to this book!) into the shoes of a child, and just go along with the ride, you'd find that you can have fun and learn or affirm some coming-of-age wisdom. Or you could just hold on a while more and in the near future, this series might just come to a TV station near you.
Note: Obtained free PDF, courtesy of the author.
September 17, 2012
Sitting here breathless after reading the most incredible young adult book, I can honestly say that I am not only extremely grateful for having the opportunity of reading this book but also thoroughly excited by an author whose remarkable series has exceeded all expectations by producing something of such high caliber. Hattori Hachi: revenge of the praying Mantis is the debut novel by Jane Prowse, about a young girl called Hattie Jackson whose family holds a remarkable secret that is revealed following the disappearance of her mother Chiyoko (her name meaning the child of a thousand generations). I was already captivated by the book’s striking, eye-catching red cover as I lost myself within the most exciting, thrilling and intense story imaginable.
Hattie Jackson soon learns about the Nijutsu warriors who along with the terrifying Praying Mantis plan to abduct those off the streets, the old and frail, vulnerable and destitute to teach them the ways of the Nijutsu martial arts and become deadly fighting Ninja warrior assassins. The terror that is slowly revealed to the heroine and main character evolves around ‘the foundry’ where a young lad named ‘Mad Dog’ or Michael is to be found. With the help of a teacher Hattie learns that she must accept her destiny if she is going to save her mother, her friends but most importantly to expose more about one of the greatest, most powerful secret societies who threaten the entire future of Japan and its historic, traditional foundations (whilst they branch out underpinning entire countries with their schemes). With the aid of her best friends, her mentor and guide and two clever rats named Bushi and Akira, Hattie learns what it takes to become a Ninja whilst not only facing extreme physical challenges but her deeper inner demons. As more of the mystery is revealed to you the pace quickens, in which as you just begin to grasp what you think is the truth then the author goes and surprises you once again with another twist in the tale that shocks and astonishes. Building up to the most dramatic conclusion I have ever read in a book, I was blown-away by the sheer scale on which the author leaves you guessing right up to the most gripping, intense ending to a thrilling adventure.
The inspired, totally original storyline will have you sitting on the edge of your seat with excitement, chills running down your spine as you read about walking on water, flying through the air and balancing in trees whilst delving into the remarkable study of a Ninja’s heritage. I loved how each chapter had a single quote being the messages that a Ninja must learn and acquire to become highly skilled in all the five Dans, with chapter one being Cliché with how Hattie had to accept her chosen destiny planned since birth. I could also see how much research had gone into creating such a story that was realistic, believable and fascinating, from the Samurai warriors of old Japan to name meanings, rituals, beliefs of there country and the detailed fighting itself (weaponry included). I found the combination of martial arts, memorable and distinctive characters and a well-structured plot to be a winner, with the mixture of fast-paced action and drama alongside poignant and heartwarming parts making it something very special. To keep ones attention throughout as well as making a story meaningful, thought-provoking and truth-drawing (where the reader can actually relate and connect to the words), is something very great indeed hence I feel that this is in a whole different league to many books within that ‘stereotypical young-adult’ genre category. The constant clues made it feel as if I was Sherlock Holmes on one of his cases in the middle of London where those that dwell below ground and those whom you pass and not notice lying on the streets are also connected to this great conspiracy, like with ‘the Golem’. With the energy of a Jackie Chan film and the class of 007 Bond, this book will delight all those who long for adventure, a journey into the unknown as you put the pieces together of the puzzle that points to the heart of the mystery. As stunned as the main character herself in finding out the culprit whom one least expects, I felt elated as well as numb because the quest had thus ended with a spectacular finish as the Kataki vanish into the shadows with the shapes of animals slinking away until next time.
I would highly recommend this book to not only those who love this genre but readers who enjoy action, adventure and storylines that are unique being something totally terrific and exceptional. There is so much depth of feeling poured into the pages that touches your heart, as the characters seem to epitomize real human emotion that speaks to you personally. I cannot wait to continue the journey that has only just begun, reading the next book in a series that is now a firm favorite of mine.
Hattie Jackson soon learns about the Nijutsu warriors who along with the terrifying Praying Mantis plan to abduct those off the streets, the old and frail, vulnerable and destitute to teach them the ways of the Nijutsu martial arts and become deadly fighting Ninja warrior assassins. The terror that is slowly revealed to the heroine and main character evolves around ‘the foundry’ where a young lad named ‘Mad Dog’ or Michael is to be found. With the help of a teacher Hattie learns that she must accept her destiny if she is going to save her mother, her friends but most importantly to expose more about one of the greatest, most powerful secret societies who threaten the entire future of Japan and its historic, traditional foundations (whilst they branch out underpinning entire countries with their schemes). With the aid of her best friends, her mentor and guide and two clever rats named Bushi and Akira, Hattie learns what it takes to become a Ninja whilst not only facing extreme physical challenges but her deeper inner demons. As more of the mystery is revealed to you the pace quickens, in which as you just begin to grasp what you think is the truth then the author goes and surprises you once again with another twist in the tale that shocks and astonishes. Building up to the most dramatic conclusion I have ever read in a book, I was blown-away by the sheer scale on which the author leaves you guessing right up to the most gripping, intense ending to a thrilling adventure.
The inspired, totally original storyline will have you sitting on the edge of your seat with excitement, chills running down your spine as you read about walking on water, flying through the air and balancing in trees whilst delving into the remarkable study of a Ninja’s heritage. I loved how each chapter had a single quote being the messages that a Ninja must learn and acquire to become highly skilled in all the five Dans, with chapter one being Cliché with how Hattie had to accept her chosen destiny planned since birth. I could also see how much research had gone into creating such a story that was realistic, believable and fascinating, from the Samurai warriors of old Japan to name meanings, rituals, beliefs of there country and the detailed fighting itself (weaponry included). I found the combination of martial arts, memorable and distinctive characters and a well-structured plot to be a winner, with the mixture of fast-paced action and drama alongside poignant and heartwarming parts making it something very special. To keep ones attention throughout as well as making a story meaningful, thought-provoking and truth-drawing (where the reader can actually relate and connect to the words), is something very great indeed hence I feel that this is in a whole different league to many books within that ‘stereotypical young-adult’ genre category. The constant clues made it feel as if I was Sherlock Holmes on one of his cases in the middle of London where those that dwell below ground and those whom you pass and not notice lying on the streets are also connected to this great conspiracy, like with ‘the Golem’. With the energy of a Jackie Chan film and the class of 007 Bond, this book will delight all those who long for adventure, a journey into the unknown as you put the pieces together of the puzzle that points to the heart of the mystery. As stunned as the main character herself in finding out the culprit whom one least expects, I felt elated as well as numb because the quest had thus ended with a spectacular finish as the Kataki vanish into the shadows with the shapes of animals slinking away until next time.
I would highly recommend this book to not only those who love this genre but readers who enjoy action, adventure and storylines that are unique being something totally terrific and exceptional. There is so much depth of feeling poured into the pages that touches your heart, as the characters seem to epitomize real human emotion that speaks to you personally. I cannot wait to continue the journey that has only just begun, reading the next book in a series that is now a firm favorite of mine.
October 6, 2012
WARNING SPOILERS AHEAD
I was sent a free pdf copy of this book by the author. This has not effected my ability to review it fairly, but critically.
6/10 - I am enjoying the story so far, but am finding the writing a little juvenile for my advanced age. I am trying to imagine I'm 12 again, at which age I would be giving this 4.5-5 stars. Another reviewer likened it to The Karate Kid, but with a girl in Ralph Macchio's place, this was the story line for The Next Karate Kid (Hilary Swank played the girl). More proof that I would have loved this book as a 12 year old, as I was a big fan of The Karate Kid at that age. To be continued...
7/10 - Alright, I am channeling my inner 12 year old. Even my inner 12 year old finds it hard to believe that a 15 year old would become quite so skilled, so quickly, at all the different training techniques Yazuki is teaching her. Also the falling 10 metres numerous times without hurting yourself is a bit far-fetched. Since I began to read it as I would have as a young adult, I have been able to enjoy it more and am finding myself reading 10+ pages without even realising it. To be continued...
8/10 - I just finished chapter 6 and Hattie's outburst at Mad Dog, Neena and Yazuki after they taught her that 'betrayal can be a ninja's best lesson' (also the title of chapter 6) is the best writing of the book so far. Jane was really able to capture what a 14 year old girl would be feeling and how she'd react to the situation. Her sense of betrayal really tugged at my heart and caused me to tear up while I was reading it. I could really relate the scene to my own life (I've never been betrayed by friends in order to teach me another ninjutsu lesson, but something along those lines) - it's probably exactly what I would have done (might still do now). Writing like that is what I'm looking for when I read YA fiction. To be continued...
8/10 (much later at night) - I only meant to read a few chapters before bed, but after Hattie's outburst the pace of the book really picked up. The action became much more urgent and exciting and at the end of each chapter I said to myself "Just one more, it's not that late." until I had finished the book and it was WAY past 'late.' I enjoyed this a lot more than someone reading the first two part-way-through reviews would think. I would have to say that, except for Hattie's outburst and a very well described fight scene, I don't think the dialogue/writing improved from the beginning of the book to the end, but for the last 100 or so pages I didn't care. I was so focussed on the action, wondering whether my suspicions about who were the bad and who were the good guys were correct and wondering how it was going to end, that I didn't even notice sentences and paragraphs where the conversations or descriptions could have been written in a way that read more easily for the reader. I think the author should seriously consider reading her future books out loud to someone or have someone read them out loud to her, as this is the best way to pick up clumsy or awkward grammar. Where it just doesn't sound right and might make a reader go back over it thinking "I'm not sure that makes sense.", which ruins the flow and the sense of getting lost in the story. Prior to Hattie's outburst I was wondering if I would be able to work up the enthusiasm to read the second and third books in this trilogy, now I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes and what happens between Hattie and Mad Dog (got to have a little bit of romance in my YA fiction).
I was sent a free pdf copy of this book by the author. This has not effected my ability to review it fairly, but critically.
6/10 - I am enjoying the story so far, but am finding the writing a little juvenile for my advanced age. I am trying to imagine I'm 12 again, at which age I would be giving this 4.5-5 stars. Another reviewer likened it to The Karate Kid, but with a girl in Ralph Macchio's place, this was the story line for The Next Karate Kid (Hilary Swank played the girl). More proof that I would have loved this book as a 12 year old, as I was a big fan of The Karate Kid at that age. To be continued...
7/10 - Alright, I am channeling my inner 12 year old. Even my inner 12 year old finds it hard to believe that a 15 year old would become quite so skilled, so quickly, at all the different training techniques Yazuki is teaching her. Also the falling 10 metres numerous times without hurting yourself is a bit far-fetched. Since I began to read it as I would have as a young adult, I have been able to enjoy it more and am finding myself reading 10+ pages without even realising it. To be continued...
8/10 - I just finished chapter 6 and Hattie's outburst at Mad Dog, Neena and Yazuki after they taught her that 'betrayal can be a ninja's best lesson' (also the title of chapter 6) is the best writing of the book so far. Jane was really able to capture what a 14 year old girl would be feeling and how she'd react to the situation. Her sense of betrayal really tugged at my heart and caused me to tear up while I was reading it. I could really relate the scene to my own life (I've never been betrayed by friends in order to teach me another ninjutsu lesson, but something along those lines) - it's probably exactly what I would have done (might still do now). Writing like that is what I'm looking for when I read YA fiction. To be continued...
8/10 (much later at night) - I only meant to read a few chapters before bed, but after Hattie's outburst the pace of the book really picked up. The action became much more urgent and exciting and at the end of each chapter I said to myself "Just one more, it's not that late." until I had finished the book and it was WAY past 'late.' I enjoyed this a lot more than someone reading the first two part-way-through reviews would think. I would have to say that, except for Hattie's outburst and a very well described fight scene, I don't think the dialogue/writing improved from the beginning of the book to the end, but for the last 100 or so pages I didn't care. I was so focussed on the action, wondering whether my suspicions about who were the bad and who were the good guys were correct and wondering how it was going to end, that I didn't even notice sentences and paragraphs where the conversations or descriptions could have been written in a way that read more easily for the reader. I think the author should seriously consider reading her future books out loud to someone or have someone read them out loud to her, as this is the best way to pick up clumsy or awkward grammar. Where it just doesn't sound right and might make a reader go back over it thinking "I'm not sure that makes sense.", which ruins the flow and the sense of getting lost in the story. Prior to Hattie's outburst I was wondering if I would be able to work up the enthusiasm to read the second and third books in this trilogy, now I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes and what happens between Hattie and Mad Dog (got to have a little bit of romance in my YA fiction).
September 28, 2012
4.5 Stars!
Hattie has a mixed heritage as she is born to a British father and a Japanese mother. Her mother had been training her from the time she was a child. At the age of fifteen, when her mother disappears, Hattie realizes that she plays a key role in a legacy. She has to train harder to master the art if she wants to find her mother in time. Also, she has help – but who does she trust? Is Hattie really prepared for what her fate has in store for her? Will she be able to fulfill her destiny?
My experience in martial arts begins and ends at watching ‘Enter the Dragon’ a few years back after which I was so sure that it is not my cup of tea. Then couple of months back I read ‘The Weeping Empress’ by Sadie S. Forsythe and realized that it may after all hold my interest. Still my experience was very limited. When I came across Jane Prowse’s website and got a free pdf copy of this book, I thought that it was a perfect chance for me to venture further and learn a bit more. Boy, am I glad that I came across this book. It has completely changed my mind about martial arts!
It is pretty evident that the author has put in a lot of effort into researching Martial Arts. Even a person like me, to whom martial arts mean three words & two names – Karate, Nunchaku, Katana, Bruce Lee and Jet Li – this book a learning step. At no point did I feel lost or overwhelmed. I learned what I needed to know from the book itself. That was quite an experience.
The characters were amazing. I loved Hattie. She is young and such a kick-ass sort of girl. Though it may sound too larger than life for a fifteen year old girl to face the destiny that Hattie has, the author made it impossible to not believe in Hattie. Hattie did not become a ninjutsu expert overnight. Her progress was somewhat faster than normal, but then most people learn/develop faster under dire situations. Mad Dog is a chivalrous character, whom I enjoyed knowing through Hattie’s story. Yazuko should get a special mention as an awesome character too.
The plot is unique, well for me at least as I haven’t read much about martial arts. The storyline and martial arts have been weaved together so well that each would seem incomplete without the other. It is larger than life – yet completely believable and for that I have to give credit to the author’s style of writing. She had me right from the first chapter.
Who would I recommend this book to? Well, everyone! If this book can make me want to research and know more about martial arts then I think it can appeal to a lot of people.
Hattie has a mixed heritage as she is born to a British father and a Japanese mother. Her mother had been training her from the time she was a child. At the age of fifteen, when her mother disappears, Hattie realizes that she plays a key role in a legacy. She has to train harder to master the art if she wants to find her mother in time. Also, she has help – but who does she trust? Is Hattie really prepared for what her fate has in store for her? Will she be able to fulfill her destiny?
My experience in martial arts begins and ends at watching ‘Enter the Dragon’ a few years back after which I was so sure that it is not my cup of tea. Then couple of months back I read ‘The Weeping Empress’ by Sadie S. Forsythe and realized that it may after all hold my interest. Still my experience was very limited. When I came across Jane Prowse’s website and got a free pdf copy of this book, I thought that it was a perfect chance for me to venture further and learn a bit more. Boy, am I glad that I came across this book. It has completely changed my mind about martial arts!
It is pretty evident that the author has put in a lot of effort into researching Martial Arts. Even a person like me, to whom martial arts mean three words & two names – Karate, Nunchaku, Katana, Bruce Lee and Jet Li – this book a learning step. At no point did I feel lost or overwhelmed. I learned what I needed to know from the book itself. That was quite an experience.
The characters were amazing. I loved Hattie. She is young and such a kick-ass sort of girl. Though it may sound too larger than life for a fifteen year old girl to face the destiny that Hattie has, the author made it impossible to not believe in Hattie. Hattie did not become a ninjutsu expert overnight. Her progress was somewhat faster than normal, but then most people learn/develop faster under dire situations. Mad Dog is a chivalrous character, whom I enjoyed knowing through Hattie’s story. Yazuko should get a special mention as an awesome character too.
The plot is unique, well for me at least as I haven’t read much about martial arts. The storyline and martial arts have been weaved together so well that each would seem incomplete without the other. It is larger than life – yet completely believable and for that I have to give credit to the author’s style of writing. She had me right from the first chapter.
Who would I recommend this book to? Well, everyone! If this book can make me want to research and know more about martial arts then I think it can appeal to a lot of people.
September 17, 2012
I mostly liked this book, I'm in the process of reading the second one and I'll probably read the third one as well. It's clearly a YA book, with a relatively simple story, but an interesting twist with ninjas. I like ninjas. Even though the story is simple, it's well written and draws you in and makes you want to know what happens next. I bought the second one within minutes of finishing the first.
However, some parts are a bit confusing or clumsily written, but that's not surprising when it's the author's first book. Everyone gets better with experience, and it's a good first book. Some things annoyed me a bit, like you just don't get that many Dans that quickly at the age of 15, even if you're trained for it by your mum. Just doesn't happen. Or the whole animal shadow thing, the idea is nice, but the way it's described could be better. The way it is now, it seems very unrealstic and it made me fall out of the story for a bit.
All in all it's a good book though. You should read it.
However, some parts are a bit confusing or clumsily written, but that's not surprising when it's the author's first book. Everyone gets better with experience, and it's a good first book. Some things annoyed me a bit, like you just don't get that many Dans that quickly at the age of 15, even if you're trained for it by your mum. Just doesn't happen. Or the whole animal shadow thing, the idea is nice, but the way it's described could be better. The way it is now, it seems very unrealstic and it made me fall out of the story for a bit.
All in all it's a good book though. You should read it.
August 28, 2012
I am not really the target demographic for Hattori Hachi – a good 30 years too old, but you know what - I really enjoyed it. It is FUN! Very entertaining.
It is a great, positive story of good vs evil, coming of age, friendship, family and success through adversity – and it has Ninjas too! There is no brooding teenage angst, no supernatural nonsense, and thankfully, not one mention of anyone ever needing a good stylist. In short it is exactly the sort of fiction kids should read, without any of the usual subconscious pressures.
I like the 'cool Japan' elements and positive female role models too, and I think this would make a great Manga/Anime.
I was fortunate enough to be invited to download this first book for free by the author, via the GoodReads giveaway program. I am glad I did because it has made my day more cheerful.
It is a great, positive story of good vs evil, coming of age, friendship, family and success through adversity – and it has Ninjas too! There is no brooding teenage angst, no supernatural nonsense, and thankfully, not one mention of anyone ever needing a good stylist. In short it is exactly the sort of fiction kids should read, without any of the usual subconscious pressures.
I like the 'cool Japan' elements and positive female role models too, and I think this would make a great Manga/Anime.
I was fortunate enough to be invited to download this first book for free by the author, via the GoodReads giveaway program. I am glad I did because it has made my day more cheerful.
August 21, 2012
(As featured on my blog All the Ups and Downs )
I've never read a book about ninjas or anything ninja related before. It never really interested me. However, I am glad I came across Revenge of Praying Mantis by Jane Prowse. I found it to be extremely interesting, and not once did my attention waver!
Revenge of the Praying Mantis is the first book in the series of Hattori Hachi, a fifteen year old girl whose mother goes missing under suspicious circumstances. Hattie must learn ninjutsu if she wishes to find out what happened to her mother. She also must learn who to trust.
I loved loved loved the characters in Revenge. I felt they were all very well developed especially those of Hattie, Mad Dog, and Yazuki. I loved the fact that finally a mixed race person was the main character of a book as you don't often see that. I also loved the fact that Hattie could hold her own. She didn't act like a damsel in distress either. She was a kick butt girl!! I found Mad Dog to be a perfect gentlemen. He didn't try to overshadow Hattie at all, and he was always willing to do his own thing. I also loved the fact that he was always willing to risk his life for Hattie. Yazuki was definitely my favourite character. I found her to be a very strong character throughout the book. She says and does some very funny things, but she is very wise. Yazuki becomes Hattie's mentor and friend. I'm really hoping Yazuki will be featured in all of the books because she feels like part of my family for some reason.
Throughout the book, I felt like I was being taught ninjutsu as well. It is very obvious throughout the book that Ms Prowse has definitely done her research in ninjutsu. I loved how each chapter started out with a saying about ninjutsu.
I found the pacing to be absolutely perfect. It wasn't too fast that I didn't understand what was going on, nor was it too slow where I got bored. Every chapter held my interest, and I was desperate to know what would happen in the next chapter.
The dialogue is very easy to understand especially as this is a YA book. It's not condescending either. I felt it used the right dialogue that would appeal to pre-teens, teens and adults alike.
Okay, I have to mention the cover now. I love it, and I find it very appealing! The cover definitely matches the story of the book especially with the shadow on the front. I like the fact that the cover is very simple yet beautiful. It's not cluttered like a lot of covers sometimes are.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I believe it appeals to both boys and girls, young and old. I'd definitely recommend this book to anyone and everyone even if martial arts aren't your thing as there's so much more going on in this book!!
I've never read a book about ninjas or anything ninja related before. It never really interested me. However, I am glad I came across Revenge of Praying Mantis by Jane Prowse. I found it to be extremely interesting, and not once did my attention waver!
Revenge of the Praying Mantis is the first book in the series of Hattori Hachi, a fifteen year old girl whose mother goes missing under suspicious circumstances. Hattie must learn ninjutsu if she wishes to find out what happened to her mother. She also must learn who to trust.
I loved loved loved the characters in Revenge. I felt they were all very well developed especially those of Hattie, Mad Dog, and Yazuki. I loved the fact that finally a mixed race person was the main character of a book as you don't often see that. I also loved the fact that Hattie could hold her own. She didn't act like a damsel in distress either. She was a kick butt girl!! I found Mad Dog to be a perfect gentlemen. He didn't try to overshadow Hattie at all, and he was always willing to do his own thing. I also loved the fact that he was always willing to risk his life for Hattie. Yazuki was definitely my favourite character. I found her to be a very strong character throughout the book. She says and does some very funny things, but she is very wise. Yazuki becomes Hattie's mentor and friend. I'm really hoping Yazuki will be featured in all of the books because she feels like part of my family for some reason.
Throughout the book, I felt like I was being taught ninjutsu as well. It is very obvious throughout the book that Ms Prowse has definitely done her research in ninjutsu. I loved how each chapter started out with a saying about ninjutsu.
I found the pacing to be absolutely perfect. It wasn't too fast that I didn't understand what was going on, nor was it too slow where I got bored. Every chapter held my interest, and I was desperate to know what would happen in the next chapter.
The dialogue is very easy to understand especially as this is a YA book. It's not condescending either. I felt it used the right dialogue that would appeal to pre-teens, teens and adults alike.
Okay, I have to mention the cover now. I love it, and I find it very appealing! The cover definitely matches the story of the book especially with the shadow on the front. I like the fact that the cover is very simple yet beautiful. It's not cluttered like a lot of covers sometimes are.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. I believe it appeals to both boys and girls, young and old. I'd definitely recommend this book to anyone and everyone even if martial arts aren't your thing as there's so much more going on in this book!!
September 24, 2012
I try not to add every book to my favorites list. I try to really consider why I liked it so much and why it deserves to be there when others don't. Well, at the end of this book, all I could think was to clap at how much much I loved it.
Okay, maybe I'm just using that as an excuse to use a gif. Have I mentioned I figured out how to do that? Because I did.
In all seriousness, I really did love this book. I think what I admired most was the use of language. Prowse managed to slip in a few Japanese phrases, and do so correctly, without sounding like a weeaboo and without confusing the reader. Once a phrase was established, any further use of it was in English. It was explained once, and then we moved on to something more exciting. I was so happy about that. I loved Stormdancer, but what kept it from being in my favorites was the use of language. Prowse managed to sound professional and keep me entertained and I love that.
I love ninjas. Always have. Even before my Naruto phase. I've always been fascinated by them and how they deceive people, I've even done a few projects on them for school. Despite my love for ninjas, I'm hesitant to read fiction about them because from my experience, they aren't done so well. I love Hattori Hachi, though, and I am so glad it was done well. The characters were lovable, even the antagonists, scenarios were believable, even though we were talking about children "flying" through trees, and the tiniest bit of romance that, again, is believable for the time line. So often books will throw two characters together and immediately have them fall in love. Here, it's almost non-existent and the relationship grows at a natural pace.
I loved the twists and turns the story took, people deceiving others, riddles left behind, mysteries to be solved, action scenes...the only reason I would put it down was because I have it in a PDF file, and those are a pain to read on the kindle. Can't highlight or make notes, and one way is too small, and one way you don't get the full page...it's a hassle. A hassle that was worth it with Hattori Hachi. I'd read them all in this format if it meant I can continue the series. I must find the rest and see where Hattie ends up in her ninja journey.
Okay, maybe I'm just using that as an excuse to use a gif. Have I mentioned I figured out how to do that? Because I did.
In all seriousness, I really did love this book. I think what I admired most was the use of language. Prowse managed to slip in a few Japanese phrases, and do so correctly, without sounding like a weeaboo and without confusing the reader. Once a phrase was established, any further use of it was in English. It was explained once, and then we moved on to something more exciting. I was so happy about that. I loved Stormdancer, but what kept it from being in my favorites was the use of language. Prowse managed to sound professional and keep me entertained and I love that.
I love ninjas. Always have. Even before my Naruto phase. I've always been fascinated by them and how they deceive people, I've even done a few projects on them for school. Despite my love for ninjas, I'm hesitant to read fiction about them because from my experience, they aren't done so well. I love Hattori Hachi, though, and I am so glad it was done well. The characters were lovable, even the antagonists, scenarios were believable, even though we were talking about children "flying" through trees, and the tiniest bit of romance that, again, is believable for the time line. So often books will throw two characters together and immediately have them fall in love. Here, it's almost non-existent and the relationship grows at a natural pace.
I loved the twists and turns the story took, people deceiving others, riddles left behind, mysteries to be solved, action scenes...the only reason I would put it down was because I have it in a PDF file, and those are a pain to read on the kindle. Can't highlight or make notes, and one way is too small, and one way you don't get the full page...it's a hassle. A hassle that was worth it with Hattori Hachi. I'd read them all in this format if it meant I can continue the series. I must find the rest and see where Hattie ends up in her ninja journey.
September 29, 2012
I picked up this book because the bright red cover caught my eye. And I have to say it definitely meets my expectations in a Young Adult Tween book. This book started out a little odd for me. But that changed so quickly I sat there going okay what the heck happened! It starts out with Hattie daydreaming in her room, she hears some wind chimes and next thing you know she’s being attacked by her MOTHER! But it’s all in fun except Hattie seriously didn’t feel like playing along on this day. But little does she know her mother is teaching her an important lesson for survival. Hattie’s mother disappears and with the help of Mad Dog she must now take on one of the most deadly assassin’s. I have to say this is definitely a seat grabber. The Hattori name itself is part of a great legacy and until her mother’s disappearance Hattie didn’t know anything about it. But now she discovers she’s part of this legacy.
There are a few parts of the book that seemed to be a little hard to take in, but this is the author’s first book so that is almost to be expected. I also can’t see a child at the age of 15 learning Ninja skills at the speed in which Hattie does so. But we can almost forget about that since she was unknowingly being trained by her mother from birth.
The story itself is NOT predictable and it was an original take on the entire Ninja scene. In fact is there a ninja scene? I can’t say I have seen anything since Teenage Mutant Turtles that has anything to do with Ninja’s in it. Regardless this story is a powerful story of Good versus Evil, a coming of age tale dealing with friendships, family and succeeding by doing your best through all adversaries.
This book is perfect for boys or girls ages 9 and up. My son is currently reading it and enjoying it totally. I’m impressed with the Author for being able to write a book which young and old can enjoy.
I would recommend this book to anyone in the Tween age up. I plan on reading the next book in the series to see what Hattie gets into next.
Details/Disclaimer: Review copy was provided to me in exchange for a fair and honest review. The free book held no determination on my personal review.
There are a few parts of the book that seemed to be a little hard to take in, but this is the author’s first book so that is almost to be expected. I also can’t see a child at the age of 15 learning Ninja skills at the speed in which Hattie does so. But we can almost forget about that since she was unknowingly being trained by her mother from birth.
The story itself is NOT predictable and it was an original take on the entire Ninja scene. In fact is there a ninja scene? I can’t say I have seen anything since Teenage Mutant Turtles that has anything to do with Ninja’s in it. Regardless this story is a powerful story of Good versus Evil, a coming of age tale dealing with friendships, family and succeeding by doing your best through all adversaries.
This book is perfect for boys or girls ages 9 and up. My son is currently reading it and enjoying it totally. I’m impressed with the Author for being able to write a book which young and old can enjoy.
I would recommend this book to anyone in the Tween age up. I plan on reading the next book in the series to see what Hattie gets into next.
Details/Disclaimer: Review copy was provided to me in exchange for a fair and honest review. The free book held no determination on my personal review.
March 19, 2012
I enjoyed this book much more than I thought I would. Hattie is a normal fifteen year old girl with a life of annoying parents, best friends, boys and school troubles. That is, until her mum disappears and she is whisked off to a life of - wait for it - a ninja.
I love how even though it is about assassins and warriors, a typical teenage girl can relate to this book. I thought that the synopsis sounded interesting and I presumed that it would be a normal thriller with just action, not much else. However, as Hattie is trying to get used to her new life, problems stand it the way that an average girl would experience. For example, everyone thinks the new boy is so 'nice' and 'normal' but she sees right through him (or she thinks she does). People begin to think that she has a crush on him which leads Hattie to even more despair.
The author writes with description that isn't very detailed but manages to create a clear image in your head. When reading this, it was like I was there in the scenes, watching the heart-thumping action.
One of my favourite things about the Hattori Hachi series is the fabulous quotes I can retrieve from it. If I took part in the Teaser Tuesday meme, I would have to share more than just two! Here are some:
"To deceive the enemy, you must first deceive your own side..."
"Knowing when to leave requires training."
"Betrayal can be a ninja's best lesson."
"Gentleness shall defeat harshness."
"Only the living seek revenge..."
"The heart confuses the mind."
Penultimately, I enjoyed reading this book but it isn't the best. I loved how the ideas were drawn together but sometimes I just didn't feel like I wanted to carry on. However, I am still interested to read the second book because I would like to know what happens to Hattie next. Thank you so much to the author for sending me this series to review!
I love how even though it is about assassins and warriors, a typical teenage girl can relate to this book. I thought that the synopsis sounded interesting and I presumed that it would be a normal thriller with just action, not much else. However, as Hattie is trying to get used to her new life, problems stand it the way that an average girl would experience. For example, everyone thinks the new boy is so 'nice' and 'normal' but she sees right through him (or she thinks she does). People begin to think that she has a crush on him which leads Hattie to even more despair.
The author writes with description that isn't very detailed but manages to create a clear image in your head. When reading this, it was like I was there in the scenes, watching the heart-thumping action.
One of my favourite things about the Hattori Hachi series is the fabulous quotes I can retrieve from it. If I took part in the Teaser Tuesday meme, I would have to share more than just two! Here are some:
"To deceive the enemy, you must first deceive your own side..."
"Knowing when to leave requires training."
"Betrayal can be a ninja's best lesson."
"Gentleness shall defeat harshness."
"Only the living seek revenge..."
"The heart confuses the mind."
Penultimately, I enjoyed reading this book but it isn't the best. I loved how the ideas were drawn together but sometimes I just didn't feel like I wanted to carry on. However, I am still interested to read the second book because I would like to know what happens to Hattie next. Thank you so much to the author for sending me this series to review!
October 2, 2012
The first book in the Hattori Hachi series was surprisingly good. I had chosen to read it on a whim since I enjoy books that involve ninjas or samurai, but I was skeptical on how good it would be considering I didn't know if an English writer could pull off a good ninja story. The stories I have read that involved ninjas have all been written by people with Japanese origins and they were all very excellent books. I found this book to be almost equal to the book I have read that were written by Japanese authors. This book gave me a look into the ninja world how it actually was without all the smoke and mirrors that made ninjutsu seem like magic. I saw the characters grow both in mind and body. I enjoyed reading about all the tricks and schemes that they came up with, along with how they solved many puzzles and problems that came their way as their fight with Praying Mantis and the Kataki came to a climax. There was surprises around ever corner as the book neared this climax and I just had to keep reading. Although it had a great plot and was really good, I found the beginning of the book to be a little confusing at times as the foundation for the story was set as the story went on though it became a lot less confusing. Overall the book was written very well. In my opinion I feel that this book has a chance to become popular. I feel that this series has the potential to be as good as Rick Riordan's series or Flanagan's "Ranger's Apprentice" series. I feel that if a few changes are made to the way it is written then it will as good as the series listed above. I greatly enjoyed this book and I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series. I can't wait to see all the tricks and stunts they'll pull in the next book as well as what trouble they'll get into next.
July 31, 2012
taken from my book review blog: http://thebookreviewlibrary.blogspot....
I thought this book was interesting and differant when I saw it, I don't think I have seen a ninja book before! It definately looked like a great book.
I was right! It was excellent. Although the idea of the book was unrealistic, it was made more beliveable by setting it in a normal place, with the main character being a normal 15 year old girl. The story was original and not predictable, and apart from eventually meeting the villian, Praying Mantis, I couldn't tell what was going to happen.
The book wasn't full of action and excitement to start with, but this didn't make it boring - it was interesting to read about Hattie's ninja training and all the events that happened. However, at the end it got very fast paced and exciting! It did get *slightly* confusing as it was so fast paced. I loved how there were explanations for everything odd going on, clearing up everything that might have seemed strange during the book.
Parts of this (for some reason) reminded me of the Power of Five books by Anthony Horowitz - I think it was the 'enemies in disguise slowly taking over the world' bits that came into it sometimes.
I liked how each character was individual - none of them seemed similar and had differant good and bad things about them, which made them seem like real people.
Overall I loved this book. It had a great story, plot and an unusual idea! I've just seen there is a second book, I will be definately reading this.
I thought this book was interesting and differant when I saw it, I don't think I have seen a ninja book before! It definately looked like a great book.
I was right! It was excellent. Although the idea of the book was unrealistic, it was made more beliveable by setting it in a normal place, with the main character being a normal 15 year old girl. The story was original and not predictable, and apart from eventually meeting the villian, Praying Mantis, I couldn't tell what was going to happen.
The book wasn't full of action and excitement to start with, but this didn't make it boring - it was interesting to read about Hattie's ninja training and all the events that happened. However, at the end it got very fast paced and exciting! It did get *slightly* confusing as it was so fast paced. I loved how there were explanations for everything odd going on, clearing up everything that might have seemed strange during the book.
Parts of this (for some reason) reminded me of the Power of Five books by Anthony Horowitz - I think it was the 'enemies in disguise slowly taking over the world' bits that came into it sometimes.
I liked how each character was individual - none of them seemed similar and had differant good and bad things about them, which made them seem like real people.
Overall I loved this book. It had a great story, plot and an unusual idea! I've just seen there is a second book, I will be definately reading this.
October 4, 2012
This book was all kinds of fantastic! Hattie Jackson is just a typical teenager going through regular problems for a girl her age. Except for the crazy challenges her mother always tests her with. Then her mother disappears and Hattie's world is turned on its end in several ways. She learns that her mother was training her all this time as a ninja and in the art of Ninjutsu. With the help of a neighbor and an orphan boy she learns the five stages of Ninjutsu. Soon she's almost flying through the air, running up trees, and somersaulting off walls. Hattie learns she is really Hattori Hachi and comes from an ancient fighting family. She is their golden child. The prophesied one. She must fight her unknown enemies and survive to find out if her mother is still alive.
Author Jane Prowse creates an engaging and fascinating character in Hattie. Some truly hilarious and wonderful side characters. And even a hint of romance along the way. Full of action as well as life lessons as Hattie goes through the levels of Ninjutsu. Hattie must look within herself and find the strength to pass all 5 levels of Ninjutsu before it is too late because her enemies are lurking alot closer than she thinks.
Author Jane Prowse creates an engaging and fascinating character in Hattie. Some truly hilarious and wonderful side characters. And even a hint of romance along the way. Full of action as well as life lessons as Hattie goes through the levels of Ninjutsu. Hattie must look within herself and find the strength to pass all 5 levels of Ninjutsu before it is too late because her enemies are lurking alot closer than she thinks.
August 28, 2012
(I won this book at Goodreads.com) Alright, I enjoyed reading this book so much! At first I didn't know what to expect, so my expectations were pretty low, but when I finished the book, I absolutely loved it.
I loved the characters, and especially Mad Dog (he had a very humorous nickname, plus he was the kind of person you actually have to get to know before judging them.) The variety of surprises in this book were wonderful, and kept me wanting to continue on reading more.
One thing that I had some problems with was the relationship between Mad Dog and Hattori. In my opinion, the story lacked some details about their relationship. To me, it felt like them being together was kind of pushed towards the end and not really shown through the rest of the book. Other than this, I loved this book, and I am very excited to read the rest of the series. :)
I loved the characters, and especially Mad Dog (he had a very humorous nickname, plus he was the kind of person you actually have to get to know before judging them.) The variety of surprises in this book were wonderful, and kept me wanting to continue on reading more.
One thing that I had some problems with was the relationship between Mad Dog and Hattori. In my opinion, the story lacked some details about their relationship. To me, it felt like them being together was kind of pushed towards the end and not really shown through the rest of the book. Other than this, I loved this book, and I am very excited to read the rest of the series. :)
September 13, 2012
Although it seemed slightly confusing in setting the foundation, it continued to escalate until the very end.
The Hattori name was accompanied by a great legacy. Upon the sudden disappearance of Her mother, Hatti discovers she is a key part of this legacy. Will she be able to find he mother before it is too late?
will she advance in the things she must learn to saver her mother?
These are only a couple of questions she must strive to answer as many new characters abound. Who can she trust? Which are there to deceive her?
There is so much she has to learn that a fourteen year old should not have to deal with.
Many events follow which tries her mental and physical stamina to the limit.
What a great story for adults though written for young adults. There is plenty of action, suspense and drama.
The Hattori name was accompanied by a great legacy. Upon the sudden disappearance of Her mother, Hatti discovers she is a key part of this legacy. Will she be able to find he mother before it is too late?
will she advance in the things she must learn to saver her mother?
These are only a couple of questions she must strive to answer as many new characters abound. Who can she trust? Which are there to deceive her?
There is so much she has to learn that a fourteen year old should not have to deal with.
Many events follow which tries her mental and physical stamina to the limit.
What a great story for adults though written for young adults. There is plenty of action, suspense and drama.
September 14, 2009
I read this as a favour to a friend - it's certainly not something I would normally pick up, especially since it's for 10 years and upwards ... But it actually turned out to be one of the most entertaining books I've read in a long while. You have to suspend disbelief almost from the outset (from about paragraph 10 of Charpter 1, to be precise ...) but once you accept the basic premise of a suburban 15 year old girl being descended from a long line of respected and renowned ninjutsu warriors ...
As befits a book for younger readers, Jane Prowse doesn't drag her feet with the plot and it gallops along at a very snappy pace before an ending that leaves us happily poised for Book Two. Thoroughly recommended.
As befits a book for younger readers, Jane Prowse doesn't drag her feet with the plot and it gallops along at a very snappy pace before an ending that leaves us happily poised for Book Two. Thoroughly recommended.
September 15, 2012
This book was a real marvel to read. first time that I learnt about the word 'ninjutsu'. Was captivated by the suspense element and thrill of this story. while reading the book i could actually imagine the characters making each and every move and disguising in other forms of creatures. This is not only about the ninjas; i loved the way the issue of underprivileged children was approached in this story together with the way hattie and her friends kept their cover perfectly as a normal people in every possible situation. I would definitely recommend people to read this book and can't wait to read book 2 of the series entitled HATTORI HACHI: STALKING THE ENEMY.
September 16, 2012
The story is really nice, I was enjoying this so much! I hope I could review it nicely with my not-really-good English.
Having a ninja mum is awesome and Hattie is very lucky. I love how the story go... all the ninjutsu things, everything. Hattie's adventure begin after her mother dissapeared, she got to use all her practice experience in real situation, facing her destiny as a Ninja to save her mother with the help from Yazuki (oh, she is real good!) and Mad Dog and Neena too. I found Mad Dog so cute reacting to Bushi and Akira, two smart rats.
I can't wait to read the second book, Jane! xDDD
Having a ninja mum is awesome and Hattie is very lucky. I love how the story go... all the ninjutsu things, everything. Hattie's adventure begin after her mother dissapeared, she got to use all her practice experience in real situation, facing her destiny as a Ninja to save her mother with the help from Yazuki (oh, she is real good!) and Mad Dog and Neena too. I found Mad Dog so cute reacting to Bushi and Akira, two smart rats.
I can't wait to read the second book, Jane! xDDD
July 24, 2012
Thouroughly enjoyable read. Tremendous use of foreshadowing makes the story unpredictable.
Hattie Jackson is a 15 year old girl of mixed race. Her father is British and her mother is Japanese. This "coming of age with a twist" story tells the story of Hatti and her mom training in martial arts. Her mother disapears and is feared dead. Hattie refuses to believe her mother is gone and with the help of her mysterious but kindly neighbor Yakuzi trains to face the forces that have her Mum. A wonderfully told story.
My son will be reading the e copy that I have and i know he will enjoy it.
Hattie Jackson is a 15 year old girl of mixed race. Her father is British and her mother is Japanese. This "coming of age with a twist" story tells the story of Hatti and her mom training in martial arts. Her mother disapears and is feared dead. Hattie refuses to believe her mother is gone and with the help of her mysterious but kindly neighbor Yakuzi trains to face the forces that have her Mum. A wonderfully told story.
My son will be reading the e copy that I have and i know he will enjoy it.
October 4, 2012
These days I find myself reading different genres more, and although this is definitely a YA book you shouldn't let that stop you from reading it. It's well written and the characters and their adventure made this a fun, quick, and easy read. Hattie's martial arts training and fighting techniques does bring back memories of Saturday afternoon-dubbed kungfu movies from decades ago (climbing walls and all) and even reminded me of the original karate kid movie. I'm already sharing this with 3 kids I know.
I heard the next book is as good as this one. My advice is to buy this book now!
I heard the next book is as good as this one. My advice is to buy this book now!
July 26, 2012
This is the first of the Hattori Hachi books and tells the story of Hatti who thinks she is just an ordinary mixed race teenager. During this book she discovers that she is in fact descended from a very important family and has an unusual destiny to fill. I really enjoyed this book, it's full of action with a little bit of romance thrown in, the strong main female character is wonderful. Would be enjoyed by both girls and boys but particularly good for girls not into 'pink fluffy' books!
August 13, 2012
Ninjutsu training/fighting, honour, true friendship, deceit and even double deceit turns this story into an incredibly good book for everyone. Especially for people performing (or performed) martial arts like myself. This book is a reminder why we do what we do namely: for the sake of the good!
I am really curious about book 2 and 3 and want to thank the author for sending me this e-book for reading and reviewing as a giveaway!
I am really curious about book 2 and 3 and want to thank the author for sending me this e-book for reading and reviewing as a giveaway!
August 26, 2012
As I followed along Hattie Jackson's training, I kept hoping it was not too late for her to learn enough to defeat the army of evil ninjutsu warriors. Reading this story made me look out my window for shadows moving in the night and thinking of what would be my animal spirit and how it could assist her and Mad Dog in founding out what happened to her mother? Looking forward to the ending of this book and other adventures of Hattie Jackson and friends.
September 12, 2012
This was an amazing book!
I couldn't put it down! Hachi is such an easy character to relate to, it felt like I was fighting ninjas along side her! All the twists and turns in this book make it impossible to stop reading it cause you just want to know what's going to happen next!
I would definitely recommend this book to everyone, no matter how old they are! And I really can't wait to read what happens next!
I couldn't put it down! Hachi is such an easy character to relate to, it felt like I was fighting ninjas along side her! All the twists and turns in this book make it impossible to stop reading it cause you just want to know what's going to happen next!
I would definitely recommend this book to everyone, no matter how old they are! And I really can't wait to read what happens next!
August 23, 2012
It is easy to read and understand.
Kids AND ADULTS will surely gain a lot from reading it, though it is primarily written for kids.
As I began reading the book, I did not want to let it go. But, because of the tight schedule I had then, I simply resigned to reading it in bits.
I cannot wait to read the other books in the series!
Kids AND ADULTS will surely gain a lot from reading it, though it is primarily written for kids.
As I began reading the book, I did not want to let it go. But, because of the tight schedule I had then, I simply resigned to reading it in bits.
I cannot wait to read the other books in the series!
February 4, 2012
The last book will only get published if we pledge to buy it! http://www.unbound.co.uk/books/hattor... here, you can buy and simultaneously pledge to do so... it's complicated, but please check it out! We need to know what happens!
October 14, 2012
The Revenge of Praying Mantis is undoubtedly a good book for young adults, but I bet many adults could not resist its cute story too :) I am amazed how a non-Japanese author could narrate the fight scenes so well. Kudos to Jane! Expecting a film from this, surely kids would love it!
August 10, 2012
This was an excellent read. Strong male and female lead characters, mystery and ninja action - perfect teenage mixture!
August 28, 2012
Fast and easy, fun and interesting. I enjoyed this book quite a bit, and am looking forward to starting book 2 this week.
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