3.5 STARS
Audrey Howard is a bit hit-and-miss for me. I *loved* A PLACE CALLED HOPE, and just couldn't get into THE LONG WAY HOME, and couldn't make my mind up about ROSE ALLEY.
THE FLIGHT OF SWALLOWS had good and bad points, of which the main ones are listed below:
GOOD:
- I liked Charlotte, and her strength of character and convictions, her determination to save the 'fallen women' (although I was grinding my teeth in frustration at the earlier part of the book where she was constantly brushing off her husband to fuss over her brother, who was determined to have her all to himself)
- Said 'fallen women', particularly Jenny and Aisling, were likeable and sympathetic, and it was lovely to see them start their new lives
- The ending was well done, and without spoiling anything, certain people got their just desserts and others got their happiness, which was heart-warming.
- Ms Howard knows how to draw the reader in, and, without wanting to sound cliched, I really felt absorbed in their world and time.
HOWEVER, there were a couple of bad points, which lowered the star rating to a (generous) 3.5 as opposed to a 4 or 4.5 -
BAD:
- Brooke's violent tendencies in the bedroom. I liked him a lot as a character because of how sensitive and kind he was, but then Ms Howard obviously had some existential crisis and worried that he wasn't 'manly' enough, so wrote in several near-rape scenes between him and Charlotte! And we were still meant to find him likeable, as if he was just so hot for her he couldn't help himself, he was just being a 'real man'. I'm sorry, but it is unacceptable to portray sexual violence as a positive thing AT ALL. Both Charlotte and Brooke admit to themselves more than once that their various encounters have been "almost rape" but still love and trust each other. Huh.
- Audrey Howard's overuse of exclamation marks!! Constantly! At the end of every! Chapter! I normally enjoy Ms Howard's writing, but in this book she went decidedly Enid Blyton in her style and ended about 90% of chapters with an exclamatory sentence! And not just at the end of the chapters, either!!!!!!!!!! (apologies for sarcastic exclamation marks)
Overall, I enjoyed THE FLIGHT OF SWALLOWS, despite the roasting I've just given it, but would recommend A PLACE CALLED HOPE over it, I'm afraid.