Although there are many amazing short stories in Updike's collection most of my favorites come from the section titled, "The Tarbox Tales" A&P is by far my favorite because Sammy is such a honest character and Updike perfectly depicts the mind of a teenage boy in this story. Instead of critiquing the book as whole, I decided to focus on one specific story.
“IN WALKS these three girls in nothing but bathing suits,” is perhaps one of the best opening lines to a story I have ever read. John Updike writes with such humor and wit you can’t help but laugh. In A&P he doesn’t leave out a single description, everything is detailed from the types of items you can find at the A&P to the types of people that shop there, mostly sheep muttering grocery lists to themselves. Sammy notices every minute detail about the three girls that walk in that is both provocative and respectful at the same time. He is careful to mention as well as his coworker Stokesie, that they are nowhere near a beach, so girls wearing nothing but swimsuits are going to attract a crowd by default. Updike pulls off the life of a bored teenager such as Sammy with such angst, flawlessly. Sammy knows the ins and outs of one thing and that is working at a grocery store, more importantly working at the A&P. Sammy is only nineteen, lives in a small town where not a lot happens, he is so bored with his life he treats his job like it is a game, making it clear that he wants more out of it, than to simply be a cashier at the local A&P. Updike explains Sammy’s boredom with such vivid imagery and playful sounds, that you can hear the arcade that Sammy creates in his mind. The isles of store are like slots on pin-ball table and he plays guessing games on where the customers will show up next. “The whole store was like a pinball machine and I didn’t know which tunnel they’d come out of.” The cash register is a musical instrument, “Hello (bing) there, you (gung) hap-py pee-pul (splat).” For a character as bored as Sammy these three girls are the highlight to his day, probably his week; while he looks at them he studies them. Updike uses the kind of language that any teenage boy with promiscuous thoughts and tendencies would use. When Sammy looks at these girls he is thinking of one thing, their bodies, but really he is only interested in one of the girls, the prettiest one, the one he calls “Queenie” because she seems to lead the rest of the group, for some reason she is of special interest to him. “I uncrease the bill, tenderly as you may imagine, it just having come from between the two smoothest scoops of vanilla I had ever known were there, and pass a half and a penny into her narrow pink palm, and nestle the herrings in a bag and twist its neck and hand it over, all the time thinking.” A&P is full of descriptions, but what I like best about this story is that the narrator is telling us this story in the present so he already knows how it is going to end. Throughout the story Updike breaks it up into sections of what will happen next, for example, “Now here comes the sad part of the story,” “Then everybody’s luck begins to run out.” I normally don’t care for these kinds of transitions in a story, but Updike works them in flawlessly with Sammy’s character and they don’t fell out of place but flow with the story. The realization at the end where Sammy tries to be the hero to the girls is what brings the story together, “I felt how hard the world was going to be to me hereafter.” This sort of epiphany works well because he just reminds us that sometimes we have to do things like work at the A&P.