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Fate and Consequences: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice
In Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice, Fitzwilliam Darcy fails to inform the populace of Meryton about the danger posed by having a rake such as George Wickham living in their midst. This was done to protect the reputation of his beloved sister; a sister who he fortunately prevented from eloping with the man. This failure leads to heartache for him and the family of the woman he loved. In Fate and Consequences, Georgiana Darcy does leave with George Wickham to elope. Darcy finds her in time to prevent the wedding, but not in time to stop the news of her ruin from spreading. Now a humbled man, he must try to find his and his sister's place in society. A twist of Fate introduces him at his darkest hour to the woman he otherwise might have resisted loving, and who helps him to restore his sister, and his wounded soul. This is a what-if story of love and reconciliation. This story ontains mature themes. Linda Wells is also the author of Chance Encounters and Perfect Fit.
508 pages, Paperback
First published March 9, 2009
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Linda Wells
10 books92 followersWelcome to my author page; let me tell you a little about myself. I worked for years in the environmental engineering world until I traded my career as a geographer for one as a mom to a challenging and really great son. One day, I saw the 2005 production of Pride and Prejudice, and I was fascinated. I bought a copy of Jane Austen's novel and read it so many times, falling under the spell of her unforgettable characters and story, and I could not help but wonder what happened next for them. That led me in search of Jane Austen Fan Fiction.
I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.
If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! Lindawellsbooknut@gmail.com
Books by Linda Wells:
Chance Encounters
Fate and Consequences
Perfect Fit
Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions
Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear
Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come
Imperative Volumes 1 and 2
I read many stories and then one of my own started nagging at me. So, I found an old notebook and started writing it down. Without it even being finished, I took the plunge and started posting. It was, and continues to be, a fantastic and rewarding experience to watch a story take shape while so many readers follow along. I have many ideas for new stories, and with luck and lots of imagining, they will be written too.
If you would like to email me, I would love to hear from you! Lindawellsbooknut@gmail.com
Books by Linda Wells:
Chance Encounters
Fate and Consequences
Perfect Fit
Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions
Memory: Volume 2, Trials to Bear
Memory: Volume 3, How Far We Have Come
Imperative Volumes 1 and 2
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December 19, 2017
12/20/16: I have again reread this book - usually a few pages or a chapter at bedtime. I especially like to reread the proposal scene beginning on page 100 - which is so different from the Hunsford proposal in canon.
I bought and read this book for the first time back in 2009. I have re-read the entire book at least three times. I have to say that this is one of my favorite JAFF books and I own over 100. I also own 7 other Linda Wells' books.
There were some grammar and spelling errors which I did pencil in. But that did not distract from the story for me. It was difficult to put down but, as it is very long, one must do so if one wants to eat, sleep, bath, dress, etc. LOL I did like the development in the story line and the epilogue both with other characters and their relationships developing.
I always want to shake people who complain about plots and characters being changed in variations - get over it - this IS A VARIATION, WHICH MEANS THINGS/CHARACTERS WILL CHANGE. I loved the courtship through the letters, which began so that Georgiana could thank Lizzy for the loan of her handkerchief when the elopement with Wickham is foiled as that couple is apprehended in Meryton. I love the angst when Elizabeth's letter to Darcy is lost and he thinks she has now rejected him due to his sister's fall from grace which he had explained to her in his most recent letter.
AND I just find the meadow scene in which he proposes to her as one of my favorite scenes in all of JAFF literature - I go back and re-read just that scene over and over again. Him carving their initials into the post in the meadow later with the date of their marriage is so touchingly sentimental. Then the meadow scene in which he rescues her from John Lucas' clutches - angst - how far was John intending to go to perhaps compromise her? Darcy to the rescue - drama!
Further drama which added to the enjoyment: John Lucas almost shoots Darcy in the head - was that intentional? Scenes in which Georgiana leaves a suicide note and runs away only to be followed by Elizabeth and THEN Wickham comes upon one and the other shows up. Really happy with Wickham's fate here! Don't care at all that it is a departure from canon.
Loved when Mr. Bennet is observing ODC at the assembly dance the same day as the proposal - he can tell something is going on but is in ignorance as to what it can be as he doesn't know that they are corresponding or that they met in the meadow that morning. And Mrs. Bennet standing toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine, who comes to berate Elizabeth at Longbourn. Yes, this is a very different Mrs. B. and then there is the whole story of the Bennets' marriage and then how it changes.
Darcy's parents are painted in a different light and that is a story explored in depth here. The fall out from their arranged marriage has lasting consequences for Darcy and his sister. The author does a very good job of exploring it through both characters' POV. While I don't know how most men think I am very happy to read of the man/Darcy's mental process and wish more people had this facility to process experiences. He is a better man for it.
Caroline had her Waterloo. Bingley finally grows some ***** and handles her as we wished he had in P&P. Loved Hurst as the resident detective. And Richard's family coming 360 degrees in learning about Elizabeth and then learning to love her also added to the ongoing twists in this story.
Sexual content - I am of the generation (as one other reviewer mentioned) during which many revolutions were occurring, one of which was the sexual revolution (60's) and then in the 70's Kathleen Woodiwiss introduced readers to the historical romance novel, which for the first time took us into a couple's bedroom. So I have read more than just a few novels with such scenes. I can take them or leave them as long as we are not talking about porn. I found most of the ones here as following the development of the sexual tension between our couple and relevant to point out how different this couple was in their marriage from other's in the "ton".
Well done. I highly recommend this book.
I bought and read this book for the first time back in 2009. I have re-read the entire book at least three times. I have to say that this is one of my favorite JAFF books and I own over 100. I also own 7 other Linda Wells' books.
There were some grammar and spelling errors which I did pencil in. But that did not distract from the story for me. It was difficult to put down but, as it is very long, one must do so if one wants to eat, sleep, bath, dress, etc. LOL I did like the development in the story line and the epilogue both with other characters and their relationships developing.
I always want to shake people who complain about plots and characters being changed in variations - get over it - this IS A VARIATION, WHICH MEANS THINGS/CHARACTERS WILL CHANGE. I loved the courtship through the letters, which began so that Georgiana could thank Lizzy for the loan of her handkerchief when the elopement with Wickham is foiled as that couple is apprehended in Meryton. I love the angst when Elizabeth's letter to Darcy is lost and he thinks she has now rejected him due to his sister's fall from grace which he had explained to her in his most recent letter.
AND I just find the meadow scene in which he proposes to her as one of my favorite scenes in all of JAFF literature - I go back and re-read just that scene over and over again. Him carving their initials into the post in the meadow later with the date of their marriage is so touchingly sentimental. Then the meadow scene in which he rescues her from John Lucas' clutches - angst - how far was John intending to go to perhaps compromise her? Darcy to the rescue - drama!
Further drama which added to the enjoyment: John Lucas almost shoots Darcy in the head - was that intentional? Scenes in which Georgiana leaves a suicide note and runs away only to be followed by Elizabeth and THEN Wickham comes upon one and the other shows up. Really happy with Wickham's fate here! Don't care at all that it is a departure from canon.
Loved when Mr. Bennet is observing ODC at the assembly dance the same day as the proposal - he can tell something is going on but is in ignorance as to what it can be as he doesn't know that they are corresponding or that they met in the meadow that morning. And Mrs. Bennet standing toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine, who comes to berate Elizabeth at Longbourn. Yes, this is a very different Mrs. B. and then there is the whole story of the Bennets' marriage and then how it changes.
Darcy's parents are painted in a different light and that is a story explored in depth here. The fall out from their arranged marriage has lasting consequences for Darcy and his sister. The author does a very good job of exploring it through both characters' POV. While I don't know how most men think I am very happy to read of the man/Darcy's mental process and wish more people had this facility to process experiences. He is a better man for it.
Caroline had her Waterloo. Bingley finally grows some ***** and handles her as we wished he had in P&P. Loved Hurst as the resident detective. And Richard's family coming 360 degrees in learning about Elizabeth and then learning to love her also added to the ongoing twists in this story.
Sexual content - I am of the generation (as one other reviewer mentioned) during which many revolutions were occurring, one of which was the sexual revolution (60's) and then in the 70's Kathleen Woodiwiss introduced readers to the historical romance novel, which for the first time took us into a couple's bedroom. So I have read more than just a few novels with such scenes. I can take them or leave them as long as we are not talking about porn. I found most of the ones here as following the development of the sexual tension between our couple and relevant to point out how different this couple was in their marriage from other's in the "ton".
Well done. I highly recommend this book.
January 9, 2024
I loved it!
Darcy is to late when he reaches Ramsgate, Georgiana is already gone with Wickham. He sets after her and catches up with them at the Meryton inn. A kind gesture from Elizabeth to Georgiana etches her into his mind and letters are exchanged.
ODC reaches an understanding early in this novel but their troubles are fare from over.
Wickham, Lady C and John Lucas are not helping them along and the level of angst is high at points but not unbearable.
The novel contains mature content.
This is the first novel I have read of this author but I suspect I will soon have them all.
Unputdownable!
Darcy is to late when he reaches Ramsgate, Georgiana is already gone with Wickham. He sets after her and catches up with them at the Meryton inn. A kind gesture from Elizabeth to Georgiana etches her into his mind and letters are exchanged.
ODC reaches an understanding early in this novel but their troubles are fare from over.
Wickham, Lady C and John Lucas are not helping them along and the level of angst is high at points but not unbearable.
The novel contains mature content.
This is the first novel I have read of this author but I suspect I will soon have them all.
Unputdownable!
March 31, 2025
A Different Perspective
Reviewed in Canada on April 17, 2019
This story presents a variation that has Georgiana actually face ruin and the subsequent consequences, even though she is rescued by Darcy and Fitzwilliam before Wickham actually takes away her virtue. The love story of ODC is always there throughout. The storyline also presents a different perspective in that Darcy’s parents were unkind towards him as a boy and how that effected him as a man. Lots of mature content. I was disappointed in having ODC experience very intimate moments before marriage. They don’t actually consummate, but it’s mighty close. This isn’t a true depiction of them in my opinion. After the wedding is fine, and I don’t mind reading about it, but please don’t make them a modern couple. To me, it makes them no better than the Lydia and Wickham we read in so many variations. In this book, Darcy did not behave in a gentlemanly manner before marriage, and Lizzy was wrong to allow it. I hate when writers remove their morality completely. Again, I don’t mind reading about their intimacy, as long as they’ve taken their vows.
January 23, 2021 Update
My, my! Wasn't I the self-righteous, judgmental Austen wannabe purist in April 2019! I was so new to JAFF back then. Tsk, tsk. I will go back to my corner now. 😉
I love this book.
Audiobook - March 27-31, 2025
Linda Wells finally comes to audio! I hope this will be only the first of all of them. Katherine Anderson is very good as narrator. One thing I noted, though, is that, sometimes, she forgets to change voices during dialogue so that until the dialogue indicates a change in character, I think the last person is still talking. Maybe it’s just me. Otherwise great!
Reviewed in Canada on April 17, 2019
This story presents a variation that has Georgiana actually face ruin and the subsequent consequences, even though she is rescued by Darcy and Fitzwilliam before Wickham actually takes away her virtue. The love story of ODC is always there throughout. The storyline also presents a different perspective in that Darcy’s parents were unkind towards him as a boy and how that effected him as a man. Lots of mature content. I was disappointed in having ODC experience very intimate moments before marriage. They don’t actually consummate, but it’s mighty close. This isn’t a true depiction of them in my opinion. After the wedding is fine, and I don’t mind reading about it, but please don’t make them a modern couple. To me, it makes them no better than the Lydia and Wickham we read in so many variations. In this book, Darcy did not behave in a gentlemanly manner before marriage, and Lizzy was wrong to allow it. I hate when writers remove their morality completely. Again, I don’t mind reading about their intimacy, as long as they’ve taken their vows.
January 23, 2021 Update
My, my! Wasn't I the self-righteous, judgmental Austen wannabe purist in April 2019! I was so new to JAFF back then. Tsk, tsk. I will go back to my corner now. 😉
I love this book.
Audiobook - March 27-31, 2025
Linda Wells finally comes to audio! I hope this will be only the first of all of them. Katherine Anderson is very good as narrator. One thing I noted, though, is that, sometimes, she forgets to change voices during dialogue so that until the dialogue indicates a change in character, I think the last person is still talking. Maybe it’s just me. Otherwise great!
April 8, 2017
The first half is really good, the story was interesting and makes us think how Mr. Darcy would act if Georgiana was ruined. But, past the half, the main plot seemed do be about Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth being oh, so in love and fighting to keep their hands off of each other. I am ok with mature content, but they were kinda annoying.
Anyway, I enjoyed the book. But, since I liked the beginning so much, I thought I would like it more.
Anyway, I enjoyed the book. But, since I liked the beginning so much, I thought I would like it more.
August 12, 2016
I decided to re-read this book and I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote my original review of "I adored this book. This is what I want in a Pride and Prejudice variation. Loved it. There are the right amount of hurtles between Elizabeth & Fitzwilliam but you know love will conquer all."
I blame it on my limited exposure to P & P variations. This is a book of melodrama and sex. A very long book - 510 pages. As I re-read it I would glance at my meter on the Kindle and think 'Really?? Can this not just end'
Now if you like your Pride and Prejudice what ifs with a heaping helping of Penthouse letters then this is the book for you. If not read on
This what if starts with Darcy missing Georgiana at Ramsgate and having to her track down. He and Col. Fitzwilliam discover her in Meryton. Here they interact with Elizabeth Bennet who gives Miss Darcy a handkerchief. Darcy is determined to return the item.
This books includes the tropes: Lizzy in danger, Lizzy sprains her ankle, Crazy Caroline, Violent Wickham
I blame it on my limited exposure to P & P variations. This is a book of melodrama and sex. A very long book - 510 pages. As I re-read it I would glance at my meter on the Kindle and think 'Really?? Can this not just end'
Now if you like your Pride and Prejudice what ifs with a heaping helping of Penthouse letters then this is the book for you. If not read on
This what if starts with Darcy missing Georgiana at Ramsgate and having to her track down. He and Col. Fitzwilliam discover her in Meryton. Here they interact with Elizabeth Bennet who gives Miss Darcy a handkerchief. Darcy is determined to return the item.
This books includes the tropes: Lizzy in danger, Lizzy sprains her ankle, Crazy Caroline, Violent Wickham
March 9, 2019
A different Darcy and Lizzy
Another great book by the author. This Lizzy is not quite so quick to jump to erroneous conclusions.
Darcy is a very damaged Darcy. He is a victim of child abuse and worse, a victim of isolation. His parents hated each other and neither came from a background of warmth or love towards children. Consequently he has grown up desperate for love and is clingy.
Luckily they find each other pretty quickly in the story and spend the rest of it dealing with a ruined Georgiana and what that ruination means to their reputation as a family.
Very well written story where the struggle for long term happiness is a great read.
I recommend this book highly.
Another great book by the author. This Lizzy is not quite so quick to jump to erroneous conclusions.
Darcy is a very damaged Darcy. He is a victim of child abuse and worse, a victim of isolation. His parents hated each other and neither came from a background of warmth or love towards children. Consequently he has grown up desperate for love and is clingy.
Luckily they find each other pretty quickly in the story and spend the rest of it dealing with a ruined Georgiana and what that ruination means to their reputation as a family.
Very well written story where the struggle for long term happiness is a great read.
I recommend this book highly.
October 5, 2020
Love this one. Linda Wells, please keep on writing!
Reread: I had to read this one again just to reset my E & D love each other and were meant to be button after reading a less-than JAFF book that left me sad. I made the right decision. Love this book.
Reread: I could read this book every day.
Reread: Still a fave!
Reread: I had to read this one again just to reset my E & D love each other and were meant to be button after reading a less-than JAFF book that left me sad. I made the right decision. Love this book.
Reread: I could read this book every day.
Reread: Still a fave!
April 13, 2011
Confession. For the last couple of weeks I have been on a Pride and Prejudice sequel kick that I cannot seem to get out of. I have become obsessed (more than usual) with Pride and Prejudice sequels and it is Linda Wells fault. I have been reading all of her Pride and Prejudice sequels and enjoyed them all. I’ve even re-read them. I can’t seem to stop myself. It is an addiction people. Even when I go on to read something else by more talented authors I just can’t get away from Darcy and Elizabeth and Ms. Wells stories. SEND HELP IMMEDIATELY. SERIOUSLY. I CANNOT STOP.
In FATE AND CONSEQUENCES it starts out with Mr. Darcy arriving to Ramsgate to discover that Georgiana has eloped with Mr. Wickham. He sends off a quick note to Colonel Fitzwilliam and harries off to try to catch up with Georgiana and Wickham before it’s too late. He and Colonel Fitzwilliam meet up with Georgiana, Mrs. Younge, and Wickham at an inn at Meryton. The elopement is ended and Georgiana is devastated that she has been so thoroughly taken in by Wickham. While standing at the window of the Inn, Darcy spies Elizabeth and her sisters. When a clothing mishap with Elizabeth’s bonnet happens he becomes captivated by her. That feeling intensifies when Elizabeth gives Georgiana her handkerchief and imparts some very kind words at Georgiana greatest time of need.
Of course, word gets out about the elopement and the Darcys’ are outcasts in society. Mr. Darcy is getting pressured on all sides to either marry off Georgiana or to send her away in disgrace, which he refuses to do. Lady Catherine also insists that he marry her daughter Anne. This incident and how all his so-called friends (with the exception of Charles Bingley) have treated him has soured Darcy on society and their expectations of him.
Georgiana comes to Darcy with Elizabeth’s handkerchief asking if he got her name so that she can return the handkerchief to Elizabeth. She sends it back and Darcy writes a few lines to the note as well thanking her for the kindness. That sparks off a correspondence between Elizabeth and Georgiana as well as a clansdine one between Darcy and Elizabeth. Shy, reticent Darcy is able to express himself better in writing than in person and after a lengthy correspondence Darcy and Elizabeth fall in love.
When Darcy arrives in Meryton to visit Charles at the estate he’s leased he begins an official courtship with Elizabeth, but it’s not smooth sailing. Elizabeth has another suitor (and it isn’t Mr. Collins), as well as having to deal with the vindictiveness of Caroline Bingley and George Wickham.
Okay. I loved this book. Of course, if you are a Jane Austen purist you will be horrified, but since I am not, I loved it. While the characters aren’t Darcy and Elizabeth per say, there was enough of their core personalities that made me believe that this is totally plausible (even with the amped up sex appeal, because really who doesn’t want to see Darcy and Elizabeth get their groove on). While the core internal conflict of the novel is missing (Darcy’s Pride and Elizabeth’s Prejudice), I still found it interesting. And yes the writing isn’t the typical publishing standard but few Pride and Prejudice sequels are (and if I may be blunt enough to say it’s on the same par and sometimes better than some e-books that I’ve read from reputable publishers).
If you love Pride and Prejudice or even if you love the television adaptions (except that Keira Knightly crap, if that’s your favorite movie adaptation, UGGH.) I think you’ll love FATE AND CONSEQUENCES.
EDITED TO ADD: I really should stop typing these reviews on the fly. Forgot to mention that this book is worth the purchase price for the FREAKING AWESOME confrontation between Mrs. Bennet and Lady Catherine. I LMAO.
In FATE AND CONSEQUENCES it starts out with Mr. Darcy arriving to Ramsgate to discover that Georgiana has eloped with Mr. Wickham. He sends off a quick note to Colonel Fitzwilliam and harries off to try to catch up with Georgiana and Wickham before it’s too late. He and Colonel Fitzwilliam meet up with Georgiana, Mrs. Younge, and Wickham at an inn at Meryton. The elopement is ended and Georgiana is devastated that she has been so thoroughly taken in by Wickham. While standing at the window of the Inn, Darcy spies Elizabeth and her sisters. When a clothing mishap with Elizabeth’s bonnet happens he becomes captivated by her. That feeling intensifies when Elizabeth gives Georgiana her handkerchief and imparts some very kind words at Georgiana greatest time of need.
Of course, word gets out about the elopement and the Darcys’ are outcasts in society. Mr. Darcy is getting pressured on all sides to either marry off Georgiana or to send her away in disgrace, which he refuses to do. Lady Catherine also insists that he marry her daughter Anne. This incident and how all his so-called friends (with the exception of Charles Bingley) have treated him has soured Darcy on society and their expectations of him.
Georgiana comes to Darcy with Elizabeth’s handkerchief asking if he got her name so that she can return the handkerchief to Elizabeth. She sends it back and Darcy writes a few lines to the note as well thanking her for the kindness. That sparks off a correspondence between Elizabeth and Georgiana as well as a clansdine one between Darcy and Elizabeth. Shy, reticent Darcy is able to express himself better in writing than in person and after a lengthy correspondence Darcy and Elizabeth fall in love.
When Darcy arrives in Meryton to visit Charles at the estate he’s leased he begins an official courtship with Elizabeth, but it’s not smooth sailing. Elizabeth has another suitor (and it isn’t Mr. Collins), as well as having to deal with the vindictiveness of Caroline Bingley and George Wickham.
Okay. I loved this book. Of course, if you are a Jane Austen purist you will be horrified, but since I am not, I loved it. While the characters aren’t Darcy and Elizabeth per say, there was enough of their core personalities that made me believe that this is totally plausible (even with the amped up sex appeal, because really who doesn’t want to see Darcy and Elizabeth get their groove on). While the core internal conflict of the novel is missing (Darcy’s Pride and Elizabeth’s Prejudice), I still found it interesting. And yes the writing isn’t the typical publishing standard but few Pride and Prejudice sequels are (and if I may be blunt enough to say it’s on the same par and sometimes better than some e-books that I’ve read from reputable publishers).
If you love Pride and Prejudice or even if you love the television adaptions (except that Keira Knightly crap, if that’s your favorite movie adaptation, UGGH.) I think you’ll love FATE AND CONSEQUENCES.
EDITED TO ADD: I really should stop typing these reviews on the fly. Forgot to mention that this book is worth the purchase price for the FREAKING AWESOME confrontation between Mrs. Bennet and Lady Catherine. I LMAO.
September 16, 2016
I love Linda Wells' books! She brings our beloved characters together in unique ways, this time in a meeting in Meryton when Darcy and the Colonel catch up with Wickham and Georgiana. Elizabeth gives Georgiana her handkerchief in a show of compassion without knowing the cause of her turmoil, and in the process touches the hearts of both Darcys.
The author presents quite a few new facets in this story. First, since they were seen leaving Ramsgate, news of Georgiana's ruin reaches the ton. Also, Darcy had a very rough, emotionally abusive childhood, brought on by his parents' extremely unhappy marriage and repeated infidelities. Prior to the gossip, he is a cold and haughty man, but instead of falling further, meeting Elizabeth, and subsequently getting to know her through letters hidden behind the correspondence of the ladies, he instead quickly sheds all thoughts of allowing society and duty to influence him any more, and succumbs to his quickly growing feelings for Elizabeth. Their path is far from smooth thanks to the interference of others, but it is still powerful and beautiful to watch. And Wells creates some of the most passionate, protective and possessive Darcys ever written. Perfectly matched with equally passionate and strong Elizabeths.
The author presents quite a few new facets in this story. First, since they were seen leaving Ramsgate, news of Georgiana's ruin reaches the ton. Also, Darcy had a very rough, emotionally abusive childhood, brought on by his parents' extremely unhappy marriage and repeated infidelities. Prior to the gossip, he is a cold and haughty man, but instead of falling further, meeting Elizabeth, and subsequently getting to know her through letters hidden behind the correspondence of the ladies, he instead quickly sheds all thoughts of allowing society and duty to influence him any more, and succumbs to his quickly growing feelings for Elizabeth. Their path is far from smooth thanks to the interference of others, but it is still powerful and beautiful to watch. And Wells creates some of the most passionate, protective and possessive Darcys ever written. Perfectly matched with equally passionate and strong Elizabeths.
May 28, 2021
Linda Wells is always steady in her dialogue, I admire that she never shies away from writing lengthy scenes between ODC, that develop the relationship instead of summarizing it.
Far too many JAFF authors try to supplement their inability to write witty, soulful, dialogue that rings true and on character.Ms. Wells rises to the challenge, and does so with masterful skill. Sure, her novels can run on long for JAFF,
and perhaps do not have much substantive drama or conflict, but you will be engaged regardless. If you are looking for a low stress read that won't make you cringe from bad writing, as so many JAFF’s oft elicit, you can't do better than a Wells JAFF! My compliments to the Ms. Wells!
Synopsis:
Lizzy offers her handkerchief to a distressed Georgiana fresh from being saved by her guardians, Darcy and Fitzwilliam. Darcy having observed Lizzy earlier from his room in Meryton, has a love at first sight seeing her lively and reprimanding a donkey who stole her bonnet. It was an inspired way for Ms Wells to circumvent Darcy’s first slight and instead have him witness to all that makes Lizzy so darn beguiling.
Darcy waves propriety and gets Lizzy’s name and address with the the intention of returning the handkerchief, but sneaks in a subtle billet doux. Thus a correspondence of friendship between Lizzy and Georgiana and one of romance between Lizzy and Darcy begins. It's akin to the regency equivalent of online dating between these two!
When Darcy sees Lizzy for the first time since they began their correspondence, Darcy is so shy, flustered and utterly dorky just like you would picture him! It was adorable!
Linda Wells is a master at dialogue and juggling multiple characters, she is a goddess and I adore her.
Lizzy is witty, charming, beguiling, and lively;
Albeit Lizzy is written a tad Mary Sue-ish by Ms Wells, but I really cant be brought to mind in a guilty pleasure read;
Darcy overcomes his pride, fairly quickly though with a private struggle Lizzy doesn't have to endure. and becomes steady, romantic and capable. Your pulse will quicken:
Darcy and Lizzy have a beautiful courtship, and Darcy has a competitor in John Lucas! He is obstinate!
What I enjoyed:
❤ Gilbert Hurst was the man! He exerted himself intervening to stop Caroline and Louisa’s compromise plots, lingered outside rooms to foil their schemes, just a class act!
For some reason Mr Hurst is one of my favorite Austen characters, I am not 100% sure why, but I guess he is just such a mood; he gives 0 F's and does what he wants, when he wants. He is everything I aspire to be.
❤ I always enjoy JAFF’s where Darcy and Hurst become friends, they have this Bro-mistry.
❤ The father son relationship/ friendship of Mr. Bennet and Darcy.
❤ The author employed witty and charming descriptors.
❤ Climax is one of the best I've read (in JAFF)
❤ Colonel Fitzs monologue to Wicky gave me chills! Such character development. Linda Wells understands Austen. Don't cross the Colonel!
Richard to Wickham, pretty much;
❤ Bingley’s gradual growth and backbone! Hold a bar mitzvah, he's become a man!
❤ Story bleeds into Darcy and Lizzy marriage and is done well indeed!
What Displeased Me:
✗ The slightest breeze moves Lizzy to tears.
✗ Darcy lays on the romance and sweet nothings a bit too thick, would be nice to have a more realistic Darcy
Conclusion:
I am partial to all of Linda Wells works, with the one exception of Imperative: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice, Volume 2, she has a way.. if I liked her less I could speak on it more. I recommend her other works, my favorite ,Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions: A Tale Of Pride And Prejudice (which is 5 stars to me) and Chance Encounters (4 stars).
P.S. Darcy gives Lizzy riding lessons, clearly as pretense to give the chaperones the old slip, and lets just say my thoughts and prayers to poor Buttercup, that pony has seen some stuff!
Far too many JAFF authors try to supplement their inability to write witty, soulful, dialogue that rings true and on character.Ms. Wells rises to the challenge, and does so with masterful skill. Sure, her novels can run on long for JAFF,
and perhaps do not have much substantive drama or conflict, but you will be engaged regardless. If you are looking for a low stress read that won't make you cringe from bad writing, as so many JAFF’s oft elicit, you can't do better than a Wells JAFF! My compliments to the Ms. Wells!
Synopsis:
Lizzy offers her handkerchief to a distressed Georgiana fresh from being saved by her guardians, Darcy and Fitzwilliam. Darcy having observed Lizzy earlier from his room in Meryton, has a love at first sight seeing her lively and reprimanding a donkey who stole her bonnet. It was an inspired way for Ms Wells to circumvent Darcy’s first slight and instead have him witness to all that makes Lizzy so darn beguiling.
Darcy waves propriety and gets Lizzy’s name and address with the the intention of returning the handkerchief, but sneaks in a subtle billet doux. Thus a correspondence of friendship between Lizzy and Georgiana and one of romance between Lizzy and Darcy begins. It's akin to the regency equivalent of online dating between these two!
When Darcy sees Lizzy for the first time since they began their correspondence, Darcy is so shy, flustered and utterly dorky just like you would picture him! It was adorable!
Linda Wells is a master at dialogue and juggling multiple characters, she is a goddess and I adore her.
Lizzy is witty, charming, beguiling, and lively;
“ Beside her is his unmarried sister, Caroline Bingley. She is the reason for our delay tonight.”
“Oh, and I assume that they were trying to repair the damage to their appearance and were unsuccessful?”
Darcy held in his amusement, and returned from his fantasy. “I do not see why you fear taking on the ton, Elizabeth, you have just proven that the spirit of cattiness lives in every woman.”
Albeit Lizzy is written a tad Mary Sue-ish by Ms Wells, but I really cant be brought to mind in a guilty pleasure read;
Darcy overcomes his pride, fairly quickly though with a private struggle Lizzy doesn't have to endure. and becomes steady, romantic and capable. Your pulse will quicken:
“Retrieving my gloves.” His hand instantly dropped and trapped hers in the pocket.
“No.”
Elizabeth looked at him with disbelief. “William, I can not walk into Longbourn without my gloves!” He smiled slightly, but his eyes were twinkling, and he shook his head slowly. “Fitzwilliam Darcy!”
“No. I want a keepsake of this moment. I will buy you a dozen more, but I want this pair. They are the last things that touched your hand before you gave it to me.”
Darcy and Lizzy have a beautiful courtship, and Darcy has a competitor in John Lucas! He is obstinate!
What I enjoyed:
❤ Gilbert Hurst was the man! He exerted himself intervening to stop Caroline and Louisa’s compromise plots, lingered outside rooms to foil their schemes, just a class act!
For some reason Mr Hurst is one of my favorite Austen characters, I am not 100% sure why, but I guess he is just such a mood; he gives 0 F's and does what he wants, when he wants. He is everything I aspire to be.
❤ I always enjoy JAFF’s where Darcy and Hurst become friends, they have this Bro-mistry.
❤ The father son relationship/ friendship of Mr. Bennet and Darcy.
❤ The author employed witty and charming descriptors.
❤ Climax is one of the best I've read (in JAFF)
❤ Colonel Fitzs monologue to Wicky gave me chills! Such character development. Linda Wells understands Austen. Don't cross the Colonel!
Richard to Wickham, pretty much;
❤ Bingley’s gradual growth and backbone! Hold a bar mitzvah, he's become a man!
❤ Story bleeds into Darcy and Lizzy marriage and is done well indeed!
What Displeased Me:
✗ The slightest breeze moves Lizzy to tears.
✗ Darcy lays on the romance and sweet nothings a bit too thick, would be nice to have a more realistic Darcy
Conclusion:
I am partial to all of Linda Wells works, with the one exception of Imperative: A Tale of Pride and Prejudice, Volume 2, she has a way.. if I liked her less I could speak on it more. I recommend her other works, my favorite ,Memory: Volume 1, Lasting Impressions: A Tale Of Pride And Prejudice (which is 5 stars to me) and Chance Encounters (4 stars).
P.S. Darcy gives Lizzy riding lessons, clearly as pretense to give the chaperones the old slip, and lets just say my thoughts and prayers to poor Buttercup, that pony has seen some stuff!
June 23, 2019
This was a re-read for me. It’s one of my favorites.
The author does a great job with telling us a long, involved story that isn't boring. None of the sharp and witty repartee between D & E - but that is primarily because the set up of the story is different. Darcy doesn't need teasing because he is always like a little cocker spaniel - wanting nothing but tenderness and intimacy. The craving to be loved is palpable. If you don't like Darcy to be vulnerable, this isn't your Darcy. I enjoyed how romantic and sweet and sexy their interactions were. Too much sex for those that don't appreciate it, and plenty of it throughout the story for those that do.
I did feel that the book should have ended shortly after the marriage of D & E and left Georgiana's story, the first Season as a married couple and the Bennet family reunion for a second volume. I wouldn't let that stop me from reading the book, however. It held my attention for several days -- a rarity in the genre for me.
The author does a great job with telling us a long, involved story that isn't boring. None of the sharp and witty repartee between D & E - but that is primarily because the set up of the story is different. Darcy doesn't need teasing because he is always like a little cocker spaniel - wanting nothing but tenderness and intimacy. The craving to be loved is palpable. If you don't like Darcy to be vulnerable, this isn't your Darcy. I enjoyed how romantic and sweet and sexy their interactions were. Too much sex for those that don't appreciate it, and plenty of it throughout the story for those that do.
I did feel that the book should have ended shortly after the marriage of D & E and left Georgiana's story, the first Season as a married couple and the Bennet family reunion for a second volume. I wouldn't let that stop me from reading the book, however. It held my attention for several days -- a rarity in the genre for me.
April 29, 2021
I have always wanted to say that so bear with me
At 504 pages this is not one of the authors longer works.
Linda Wells is probably (most definitely) not one of the most skilled JAFF writers out there. Her writing can be in parts a bit clumsy and overwrought, the story lines would not suffer if the length was cropped by about a third, she re-designs the character traits however the f*ck the wants to the point that sometimes only a name remains of the OC. Her Elizabeth is almost always
Yet she is one of my favorites and I tend to go back to her books.
JAFF is not always about the elaborate prose, the tight plotting or precise development. It is, in essentials, mostly about the huge love for the source material. Quite frankly, it's like kids calling their dolls their favorite characters and acting out the stories of their own making with them. And Wells excel at this. There is certain almost naive earnestness to her stories and she clearly lover her dolls so much she can't stop playing with them. Hence the length.
In this particular work, D. first sees (and pretty much immediately falls for) E. while she is giving out to a donkey who has stolen her bonnet.
It happens in Meryton and Darcy & colonel Fitzwilliam have just caught up to eloping Wickham & Georgiana. Later on, Elizabeth sees Georgiana weeping and offers her a handkerchief. Darcy ceases to that opportunity to get her address for returning her possession.
Unfortunately, unlike in the original material, Georgiana's elopement attempt does not remain secret and since she actually traveled with Wickham, her reputation is in total tatters and she is effectively ruined. This has of course a blow-back effect for Darcy as well, plus all the relatives coming up with unhelpful solutions including marriages to cousins, increasing G.-s dowry, sending G. away etc.
Despite all that the two Darcys stick together, find solace in each other and eventually start a correspondence with Elizabeth who is happily tucked away in quiet Longbourn. Initially Darcy only slips in a note from himself with G.-s letter but eventually it develops into a very personal private exchange of letters despite them both being aware what a breach of propriety it is.
So by the time the meet again, they are already deeply in love and Darcy proposes, and is accepted, on the spot.
This is like about 25% in.
There are more delights to come.
There is long-suffering Mr Bennet having to repeat his lecture about curtailing their affectionate displays over and over again.
There is a cat fight between Lady Catherine & Mrs. Bennet.
There is Wickham who is super evil because WHAT DO YOU MEAN BECAUSE, HE'S EVIL BECAUSE EVIL AND THAT'S ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW.
There is John Lucas who's is chasing Lizzy and is even more annoying about that than Mr Collins ever was.
There's also Mr Collins who does get a chance to demonstrate his idiocy, never you worry.
There is a compromise attempt by delightfully cranky Caroline.
There are puppy Bingley's growing pains.
There is funny and sardonic Mr. Hurst.
There is super dramatic, lusty and love lorn Darcy.
And there is Elizabeth who is
This author COMMITS to the drama but instead of it being irritating, it is endearing and immensely fun.
Go and feast, my dear friends!
At 504 pages this is not one of the authors longer works.
Linda Wells is probably (most definitely) not one of the most skilled JAFF writers out there. Her writing can be in parts a bit clumsy and overwrought, the story lines would not suffer if the length was cropped by about a third, she re-designs the character traits however the f*ck the wants to the point that sometimes only a name remains of the OC. Her Elizabeth is almost always
Yet she is one of my favorites and I tend to go back to her books.
JAFF is not always about the elaborate prose, the tight plotting or precise development. It is, in essentials, mostly about the huge love for the source material. Quite frankly, it's like kids calling their dolls their favorite characters and acting out the stories of their own making with them. And Wells excel at this. There is certain almost naive earnestness to her stories and she clearly lover her dolls so much she can't stop playing with them. Hence the length.
In this particular work, D. first sees (and pretty much immediately falls for) E. while she is giving out to a donkey who has stolen her bonnet.
It happens in Meryton and Darcy & colonel Fitzwilliam have just caught up to eloping Wickham & Georgiana. Later on, Elizabeth sees Georgiana weeping and offers her a handkerchief. Darcy ceases to that opportunity to get her address for returning her possession.
Unfortunately, unlike in the original material, Georgiana's elopement attempt does not remain secret and since she actually traveled with Wickham, her reputation is in total tatters and she is effectively ruined. This has of course a blow-back effect for Darcy as well, plus all the relatives coming up with unhelpful solutions including marriages to cousins, increasing G.-s dowry, sending G. away etc.
Despite all that the two Darcys stick together, find solace in each other and eventually start a correspondence with Elizabeth who is happily tucked away in quiet Longbourn. Initially Darcy only slips in a note from himself with G.-s letter but eventually it develops into a very personal private exchange of letters despite them both being aware what a breach of propriety it is.
So by the time the meet again, they are already deeply in love and Darcy proposes, and is accepted, on the spot.
This is like about 25% in.
There are more delights to come.
There is long-suffering Mr Bennet having to repeat his lecture about curtailing their affectionate displays over and over again.
There is a cat fight between Lady Catherine & Mrs. Bennet.
There is Wickham who is super evil because WHAT DO YOU MEAN BECAUSE, HE'S EVIL BECAUSE EVIL AND THAT'S ALL YOU NEED TO KNOW.
There is John Lucas who's is chasing Lizzy and is even more annoying about that than Mr Collins ever was.
There's also Mr Collins who does get a chance to demonstrate his idiocy, never you worry.
There is a compromise attempt by delightfully cranky Caroline.
There are puppy Bingley's growing pains.
There is funny and sardonic Mr. Hurst.
There is super dramatic, lusty and love lorn Darcy.
And there is Elizabeth who is
This author COMMITS to the drama but instead of it being irritating, it is endearing and immensely fun.
Go and feast, my dear friends!
January 3, 2012
I enjoyed this twist of Pride and Prejudice except one thing that ruined the book for me but I will save that for later in my review. It was so interesting to read a novel where Darcy could not have come to Lizzys hometown in pride as the Darcy name was ssandalized. In this version, Darcy does not find Georgiana in time to save her reputation and suddenly Darcy is the one not good enough for Lizzy instead of being the other way around. Darcy meets Lizzy the day he and the Coronel are taking Georgiana home after the discovery. Lizzy sees a stranger, a young girl crying and offers her a handkerchief. So starts the correspondance Lizzy has with Georgiana and which Darcy adds a few lines. Before you know it Lizzy and Darcy are sending letters to each other (most improper for that time period) and they fall in love even before Darcy comes to Netherfield with Bingley. To complicate things Lizzy has a stocker as I call him since he can't get the hint from Lizzy that she's not interested and is not intimindated of Darcy even when it is public knowledge that they are courting. This adds an intersting perspective. Though Lizzy and Darcy are out of character according to Jane Austen, this is an interesting perspective. The only thing that ruined the novel in my eyes is that Lizzy and Darcy could not maintain self-control of their feelings for each other and consumating their relationship before they were married. So very out of place for their characters and the lack of their self control ruined it for me. Knowing Darcys intense love and admiration of Elizabeth in Pride and Prejudice and seeing how prime and proper he always was especially when it came to respecting woman there is no way Darcy's true character would have allowed this to happen. If that had never occured, I would have favored this novel as a good variation of Pride and Prejudice. I loved how Lizzys father gave Darcy a hard time and the letters were always entertaining.
June 28, 2019
Though featuring a melodramatic Darcy (who we are nevertheless expected to believe was raised to show no emotion, ever) and badly in need of an editor familiar with proper comma placement and the difference between possessives and plurals, this uneven work does deliver moments of sheer delight, particularly Mary Bennet's romance and a fantastic scene in which Mrs. Bennet goes toe-to-toe with Lady Catherine de Bourgh.
May 29, 2017
Embarrassingly awful. In general, I love Jane Austen spin-offs, but there were pages and pages of just words. I stuck with it longer than I should have because of its 4.something rating, assuming something worthwhile might happen. It didn't.
September 24, 2018
A Lovely Read
This is a tale of a romance that starts and ends with a donkey. There is humour, much romance and much angst in this story. It is a compelling read that I did not wish to put down.
This is a tale of a romance that starts and ends with a donkey. There is humour, much romance and much angst in this story. It is a compelling read that I did not wish to put down.
May 19, 2014
Okay, this is definitely an interesting variation. There are many things I really liked, and many things I was kind of like...eh stop. This is one of my longest reviews...not sure how that happened. But anyway - this contains not much for spoilers, don't worry - but in explaining my opinions on some events might be somewhat telling. Fair warning.
Let's start with the bad first:
1. This variation changed a lot more than one or two things. I began reading this thinking that the only real difference was Darcy came in humbled, because of Georgiana being openly ruined. Instead, she also adds Lucas as a possible suitor for Elizabeth, Elizabeth and Charlotte having a falling out, and more. Some of the changes I like, some not so much.
2. It was a little long. I would have been okay with it being as long as it was, if she developed the sub stories more. There are a few extra couplings in this, and I think that these could have been developed more. They were cute, but then just reverted back to Darcy and Elizabeth, which is nice, but their story seemed to stagnate or I guess hit a plateau, so I wanted to hear about others more.
3. Also, I really did not like Georgiana in this story. I realize she's only 15, but she was acting even younger than that. In the original story, I see her as a girl who made a mistake and is healing, and is shy, but she doesn't burst into tears constantly, and run out of the room to hide. It kind of felt like she was only 8 years old instead.
4. I really don't care for Jane as much in this one. She was prude, and her and Bingley do not seem to love each other as much as they did in Austen's book.
5. Last problem...there are so many spelling and grammar errors. I can't stand that when I'm reading a published book. I can understand one or two slip ups...we are all human, but this was more than that. Also about three times she used the phrase "I could care less"...which is just wrong. If he could care less, that means he cares some. It's "I couldn't care less", meaning you have bottomed out on caring. Just a pet peeve of mine. Plus, and perhaps the worst, Aunt Ellen at one point is referred to as Aunt Elaine. I just burst out laughing. What? It's pretty sad no editor noticed the random name change.
BUT despite these problems, there was a lot of good in the story.
1. I loved the Darcy/Elizabeth relationship. I loved how passionate Wells made him, and how supportive he is to her, and how much he needed her. I just finished reading Rainy Days, and my biggest complaint in that book is that they were constantly bickering and arguing. Not in this book. They were truly loyal and supportive. They had maybe two misunderstandings. That was it. When he sees her, and walks right up to her and kisses her for the first time, before saying anything else, it melted my heart. Well done.
2. The Hursts were random characters that Wells decided to improve. Although, I really don't understand why she decided to make this random change, I loved it. I like that Mr. Hurst actually had some sense, and was actually entertaining. He is only a one dimensional character, that she gave some life to. I like how Louisa was not as horrible as Caroline, and is redeemed in the end.
3. She also randomly decided to change Mary's character. I like the new Mary more.
4. And most important of all, I really liked the overall story. I think that she did a great job thinking what if Georgiana was ruined? I think the first half of the book especially was just great for me. I think that it played out well, and really fun to read.
I will definitely read this one again. I definitely recommend, but just be aware that if you love P&P sequels/variations, there are definitely some problems with this one. But as always - if you don't like variations, don't read it. It's different. It wasn't written by Austen. Why are you even thinking about reading this? Lol
But good job Wells!
Let's start with the bad first:
1. This variation changed a lot more than one or two things. I began reading this thinking that the only real difference was Darcy came in humbled, because of Georgiana being openly ruined. Instead, she also adds Lucas as a possible suitor for Elizabeth, Elizabeth and Charlotte having a falling out, and more. Some of the changes I like, some not so much.
2. It was a little long. I would have been okay with it being as long as it was, if she developed the sub stories more. There are a few extra couplings in this, and I think that these could have been developed more. They were cute, but then just reverted back to Darcy and Elizabeth, which is nice, but their story seemed to stagnate or I guess hit a plateau, so I wanted to hear about others more.
3. Also, I really did not like Georgiana in this story. I realize she's only 15, but she was acting even younger than that. In the original story, I see her as a girl who made a mistake and is healing, and is shy, but she doesn't burst into tears constantly, and run out of the room to hide. It kind of felt like she was only 8 years old instead.
4. I really don't care for Jane as much in this one. She was prude, and her and Bingley do not seem to love each other as much as they did in Austen's book.
5. Last problem...there are so many spelling and grammar errors. I can't stand that when I'm reading a published book. I can understand one or two slip ups...we are all human, but this was more than that. Also about three times she used the phrase "I could care less"...which is just wrong. If he could care less, that means he cares some. It's "I couldn't care less", meaning you have bottomed out on caring. Just a pet peeve of mine. Plus, and perhaps the worst, Aunt Ellen at one point is referred to as Aunt Elaine. I just burst out laughing. What? It's pretty sad no editor noticed the random name change.
BUT despite these problems, there was a lot of good in the story.
1. I loved the Darcy/Elizabeth relationship. I loved how passionate Wells made him, and how supportive he is to her, and how much he needed her. I just finished reading Rainy Days, and my biggest complaint in that book is that they were constantly bickering and arguing. Not in this book. They were truly loyal and supportive. They had maybe two misunderstandings. That was it. When he sees her, and walks right up to her and kisses her for the first time, before saying anything else, it melted my heart. Well done.
2. The Hursts were random characters that Wells decided to improve. Although, I really don't understand why she decided to make this random change, I loved it. I like that Mr. Hurst actually had some sense, and was actually entertaining. He is only a one dimensional character, that she gave some life to. I like how Louisa was not as horrible as Caroline, and is redeemed in the end.
3. She also randomly decided to change Mary's character. I like the new Mary more.
4. And most important of all, I really liked the overall story. I think that she did a great job thinking what if Georgiana was ruined? I think the first half of the book especially was just great for me. I think that it played out well, and really fun to read.
I will definitely read this one again. I definitely recommend, but just be aware that if you love P&P sequels/variations, there are definitely some problems with this one. But as always - if you don't like variations, don't read it. It's different. It wasn't written by Austen. Why are you even thinking about reading this? Lol
But good job Wells!
May 26, 2025
I liked the book well enough, but I found it was way too long.
It could have been edited better.
I was worried due to its length, that it would be filled with angst. But I didn't think that was the case.
There is a lot of spice, which could also have been cut down in my opinion.
Warning there is a scene with violence and unwanted caressing
I listened to the audio version, the narrator did a good job
It could have been edited better.
I was worried due to its length, that it would be filled with angst. But I didn't think that was the case.
There is a lot of spice, which could also have been cut down in my opinion.
Warning there is a scene with violence and unwanted caressing
I listened to the audio version, the narrator did a good job
March 16, 2018
This book read similar to Wells other books she has written on our couple. In this one Fitzwilliam is desperate to save his sister from Wickham. Part victory is his in saving his sister before completely ruined but she does not get away without witness and unfortunately young Georgiana is the subject of many rumors throughout the ton. During the tragedy Georgiana finds a friend in Elizabeth and carries over to Darcy. He immediately finds himself under her spell, but this is not the proud, fastidious Darcy we all know.
Some may not like the change to his personality, but I enjoyed him very much. He was raised by no adoring mother in love with his father. Anne Darcy was completely made over and it trickled down onto his father and greatly effected our William. He rises above all this to save his sister. It is so sweet to see how he throws away what society would think and for the love of a sister strove to protect and keep her close. That was one of my favorite impacts this book held on me. The other was how the author once again pulls you into her Darcy and Elizabeth relationship.
This one added a nice spin on things due to another suitor. John Lucas is determined to turn Lizzy's head even if it means he must compromise her. It is one villain after another as Wickham, Lucas and family, Caroline and an aunt who won't let things go. Don't worry while your on your seats edge Darcy's devotion to those he loves is something to behold. Richard has some spot light shed on him as he courts an unsuspected love interest. I enjoyed that twist but would have enjoyed some more time spent between them. I also enjoyed Lizzy's mother in this one. This is a Mrs. Bennet that inspires Darcy to call her mother. I loved it! I also like the side story of Mr. Bennet and his disowned sister. Her likeness to a lively, expressive eyed woman was also interesting.
The book for the length went fast and made me want to keep reaching for it. Its about a man never thinking to marry after living through his parents miserable marriage. Falling in love through kindness and love letters which I always enjoy. I admired Darcy refusing to cast Georgiana off and how protective he was over not only her but also anyone else he loved. Some may not like the change to the characters and the explicit love scenes but if you are willing to not let that stop you it really is a delightful read. Enjoy!
Some may not like the change to his personality, but I enjoyed him very much. He was raised by no adoring mother in love with his father. Anne Darcy was completely made over and it trickled down onto his father and greatly effected our William. He rises above all this to save his sister. It is so sweet to see how he throws away what society would think and for the love of a sister strove to protect and keep her close. That was one of my favorite impacts this book held on me. The other was how the author once again pulls you into her Darcy and Elizabeth relationship.
This one added a nice spin on things due to another suitor. John Lucas is determined to turn Lizzy's head even if it means he must compromise her. It is one villain after another as Wickham, Lucas and family, Caroline and an aunt who won't let things go. Don't worry while your on your seats edge Darcy's devotion to those he loves is something to behold. Richard has some spot light shed on him as he courts an unsuspected love interest. I enjoyed that twist but would have enjoyed some more time spent between them. I also enjoyed Lizzy's mother in this one. This is a Mrs. Bennet that inspires Darcy to call her mother. I loved it! I also like the side story of Mr. Bennet and his disowned sister. Her likeness to a lively, expressive eyed woman was also interesting.
The book for the length went fast and made me want to keep reaching for it. Its about a man never thinking to marry after living through his parents miserable marriage. Falling in love through kindness and love letters which I always enjoy. I admired Darcy refusing to cast Georgiana off and how protective he was over not only her but also anyone else he loved. Some may not like the change to the characters and the explicit love scenes but if you are willing to not let that stop you it really is a delightful read. Enjoy!
April 10, 2025
Gossip, scandal, and secret letters
In this P&P variation, Georgiana leaves Ramsgate with Wickham and Mrs Younge. Darcy and Col Fitzwilliam give chase and find them in the small market town of Meryton. Georgiana is devastated realizing her folly. Later, her brother looks out the window and is caught by a silly site of a young lady (Elizabeth) and a donkey playing tug-a-war with her bonnet. This scene brings a smile to his lips. As they are leaving the town, Georgiana is crying so much that she is in need of a dry handkerchief and Elizabeth provides her one. Darcy is able to get her name & direction so it can be returned. This Darcy has not had a happy childhood or that of loving parents. This story explores his & Georgiana's downfall in society along with the realization of who their true friends and family are. With the help of trusted staff, letters soon begin flowing between Georgiana and Elizabeth with Darcy adding his own. Through this exchange of letters all three of these characters grow and develop strong friendships (Darcy realizes that he has fallen in love with Elizabeth via these heartfelt honest letters). There are some anxiety (between missing letters & unwanted suitors) for Darcy & Elizabeth that thankfully was able to be resolved before too much time but both grew from this experience. Darcy realizes that he does not want to be part of the society who love gossip and are so willing to tear down people. There is some hidden family history that Darcy, Elizabeth & Georgiana have to deal with. You will love the confrontation between Mrs Bennet and Lady Catherine!
I have the paperback & was so excited that Linda Wells brought this to the audiobook audience. We all look forward to more of her stories in this format!
In this P&P variation, Georgiana leaves Ramsgate with Wickham and Mrs Younge. Darcy and Col Fitzwilliam give chase and find them in the small market town of Meryton. Georgiana is devastated realizing her folly. Later, her brother looks out the window and is caught by a silly site of a young lady (Elizabeth) and a donkey playing tug-a-war with her bonnet. This scene brings a smile to his lips. As they are leaving the town, Georgiana is crying so much that she is in need of a dry handkerchief and Elizabeth provides her one. Darcy is able to get her name & direction so it can be returned. This Darcy has not had a happy childhood or that of loving parents. This story explores his & Georgiana's downfall in society along with the realization of who their true friends and family are. With the help of trusted staff, letters soon begin flowing between Georgiana and Elizabeth with Darcy adding his own. Through this exchange of letters all three of these characters grow and develop strong friendships (Darcy realizes that he has fallen in love with Elizabeth via these heartfelt honest letters). There are some anxiety (between missing letters & unwanted suitors) for Darcy & Elizabeth that thankfully was able to be resolved before too much time but both grew from this experience. Darcy realizes that he does not want to be part of the society who love gossip and are so willing to tear down people. There is some hidden family history that Darcy, Elizabeth & Georgiana have to deal with. You will love the confrontation between Mrs Bennet and Lady Catherine!
I have the paperback & was so excited that Linda Wells brought this to the audiobook audience. We all look forward to more of her stories in this format!
August 2, 2012
I enjoyed this P&P adaptation and might have given it 4 stars if it hadn't been too racy for my taste along with a few other things. One complaint I have is that Darcy is made out to be a bit too weak and fragile. MY Mr. Darcy doesn't have an insecure bone in his body! On a positive note, this book explains the realities of what happened to a woman who was "ruined" back in the eighteenth and nineteenth century. This positive attribute of the book however, is in direct contrast with Darcy's treatment of Elizabeth. In this adaptation he has an extreme concern for his sister's ruin, and a supposedly complete devotion to Elizabeth. I don't think he would have come even close to the way he behaved in this novel regarding his inappropriate show of "affection" for Elizabeth and total lack of restraint knowing full well the ruin that would fall upon Elizabeth and all of her family if she were caught in a compromising position. It was well written but a bit disappointing.
March 7, 2023
In this Pride and Prejudice variation Georgiana Darcy elopes with Wickham with the result that she is ruined, and with consequences to the Darcy name as it becomes known among the ton. She is intercepted at Meryton by the Colonel and Darcy, where Elizabeth than aids Georgiana which is the start of their correspondence. This soon leads to an exchange of letters between Elizabeth and Darcy. It is a much humbled Darcy that gets to know Elizabeth. A Darcy that has been lonely all his life. The Bingleys and Darcys eventually arrive at Netherfield.
There is some mature content before marriage and after. For me there was actually too much of their interactions and would have been a better story without.
A re-read and it had been a very long while since I first read it.
There is some mature content before marriage and after. For me there was actually too much of their interactions and would have been a better story without.
A re-read and it had been a very long while since I first read it.
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July 7, 2019Anyone who uses double exclamation points in a novel should stick to writing emails!! Would you believe that the author also used double question marks?? That is to say nothing about of course dear reader the hundreds of missing commas. A competent proofreader would have made a big difference in this one.
The author was also quite heavy-handed in characterization and frequently tone-deaf with respect to the history, both in terms of using anachronistic language and in terms of the poor grasp of culture. The book is just not remotely subtle, about anything.
Points are to be awarded here for the interesting premise and the fact that I really wanted it to be better--it was so close to compelling sometimes. DNF'd at 10%.
The author was also quite heavy-handed in characterization and frequently tone-deaf with respect to the history, both in terms of using anachronistic language and in terms of the poor grasp of culture. The book is just not remotely subtle, about anything.
Points are to be awarded here for the interesting premise and the fact that I really wanted it to be better--it was so close to compelling sometimes. DNF'd at 10%.
July 27, 2016
I liked the whole letter exchange what-if aspect but the relationship was way, way quick to establish itself and, once set, the conclusion was way, way too far down the road. Was it a fun read? For awhile... but then I just wanted it to end.
February 14, 2018
This like the 40th time I've read this book and I still love it.
August 25, 2025
This is my favorite read of 2025 so far.
I'm new to P&P variations and surprise with the amazing quality of the stories.
This one is my favourite so far.
In this we don't start with any animosity between Darcy an Lizzy. The whole situation with Giorgiana really humbles Darcy and he approaches Elizabeth very differently from the start. Darcy is super passionate and absolutely devoted to Elizabeth from the beginning. Elizabeth is a loving and formidable woman, admired by almost everyone in this book. But still can put people in their place when needed.
One of the things that I most appreciate is how the conflict are solved between Darcy and Elizabeth. They don't allow miscomunication to disrupt their relationship and choose to be honest and upfront with each other all the time. It's refreashing to read something that don't use this device to separate the couple longer then they should. Even though there are many (MANY!) things/people trying to separate them, they always overcame everything almost easily with how much open they are to each other.
The last 30% were less exciting but I still loved to see their home life, their continued devotion towards each other and their decisions regarding their daily life at home and in society.
The mature content is well placed, passionate, without being too descriptive.
Special mentions (may contein spoilers):
1. Their second meet.
2. DARCY.
3. How brave Lizzy is.
4. The scene with Wickham, Lizzy and Giorgiana in the woods. It was HARD to read. (Was up until 3am reading that chapter).
5. Mr. and Mrs. Bennet backstory. (You end up LIKING Mrs. Bennet, wich I thought it was impossible.)
6. How they solve any issues before it becomes a huge thing.
What i didn't appreciate much:
1. Jane and Bingley.
2. The subtle mentions that everyone was atracted/envy/coveting Darcy/Lizzie even after they were married (even amongst family and close friends).
I'm new to P&P variations and surprise with the amazing quality of the stories.
This one is my favourite so far.
In this we don't start with any animosity between Darcy an Lizzy. The whole situation with Giorgiana really humbles Darcy and he approaches Elizabeth very differently from the start. Darcy is super passionate and absolutely devoted to Elizabeth from the beginning. Elizabeth is a loving and formidable woman, admired by almost everyone in this book. But still can put people in their place when needed.
One of the things that I most appreciate is how the conflict are solved between Darcy and Elizabeth. They don't allow miscomunication to disrupt their relationship and choose to be honest and upfront with each other all the time. It's refreashing to read something that don't use this device to separate the couple longer then they should. Even though there are many (MANY!) things/people trying to separate them, they always overcame everything almost easily with how much open they are to each other.
The last 30% were less exciting but I still loved to see their home life, their continued devotion towards each other and their decisions regarding their daily life at home and in society.
The mature content is well placed, passionate, without being too descriptive.
Special mentions (may contein spoilers):
1. Their second meet.
2. DARCY.
3. How brave Lizzy is.
4. The scene with Wickham, Lizzy and Giorgiana in the woods. It was HARD to read. (Was up until 3am reading that chapter).
5. Mr. and Mrs. Bennet backstory. (You end up LIKING Mrs. Bennet, wich I thought it was impossible.)
6. How they solve any issues before it becomes a huge thing.
What i didn't appreciate much:
1. Jane and Bingley.
2. The subtle mentions that everyone was atracted/envy/coveting Darcy/Lizzie even after they were married (even amongst family and close friends).
May 25, 2025
I didn't like this variation for several reasons. This insecure and needy Darcy lost all his charm. His obsession with Elizabeth is not appealing. Too many I love yous ! I started to 🙄 every time I read one. I also don't like contrived angst. Why would anyone give John Lucas the time of day? He is so annoying but keeps coming back. He would have been dealt with much sooner in real life. Charlotte is very unpleasant: I can only hope she gets saddled with a truly despicable Collins since I stopped reading at 70%. I didn't like Mr Bennet either. He chose a very poor time to assert his authority. More contrived angst. Elizabeth is so perfect that every male is attracted to her. Boring. This is not a good way to make her interesting. There are too many bedroom scenes. One should be enough. The repetition of these scenes makes me feel cheap as a reader. Well, you can always skip them, which I did. I was disappointed because I enjoyed the first chapters.
May 7, 2023
This is a definitely a must read. What an amazing and truly well thought out and written story. This is an emotional roller coaster ride from beginning to end.
The anguish felt within the Darcy home is heavy for awhile, but then lightens. I was shocked and amazed at Sarah Douglas. I loved how Darcy started out stoic, but turned into a loving, outgoing (for Elizabeth), and over board romantic (for Elizabeth). I hated how the town acted, but that is how it was or still is in a few places. I understand how Darcy’s parents behaved m, but not going to say I liked that. Wickham is awful as is John Lucas for awhile. Loved Colonel Fitzwilliam and who he ends with.
This story is well written. Easily to read and follow. I couldn’t stop once I started. Fall in love with a “different” Elizabeth and Darcy. Some sensual scenes but highly recommended to read.
The anguish felt within the Darcy home is heavy for awhile, but then lightens. I was shocked and amazed at Sarah Douglas. I loved how Darcy started out stoic, but turned into a loving, outgoing (for Elizabeth), and over board romantic (for Elizabeth). I hated how the town acted, but that is how it was or still is in a few places. I understand how Darcy’s parents behaved m, but not going to say I liked that. Wickham is awful as is John Lucas for awhile. Loved Colonel Fitzwilliam and who he ends with.
This story is well written. Easily to read and follow. I couldn’t stop once I started. Fall in love with a “different” Elizabeth and Darcy. Some sensual scenes but highly recommended to read.
July 16, 2023
Fate and Consequences
Another great story by Linda Wells. The book calls it fate, but Elizabeth was at the right place at the right time to offer a handkerchief to distressed Georgiana Darcy. Saved by her brother, Fitzwilliam Darcy, and cousin, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, the saved, but ruined young girl is going to find out just how harsh the first circles of the London elite are to not only her, but to her brother. Her mistake costs the brother and sister much, but opens a whole new world for them both which offers them the love they’ve never had and always wanted. That handkerchief is the salvation for both Darcys, and brings Elizabeth the love she’s always dreamed of. Trials thrown in their path are dealt with, some easier than others, but their love carries them through to lasting happiness.
Another great story by Linda Wells. The book calls it fate, but Elizabeth was at the right place at the right time to offer a handkerchief to distressed Georgiana Darcy. Saved by her brother, Fitzwilliam Darcy, and cousin, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, the saved, but ruined young girl is going to find out just how harsh the first circles of the London elite are to not only her, but to her brother. Her mistake costs the brother and sister much, but opens a whole new world for them both which offers them the love they’ve never had and always wanted. That handkerchief is the salvation for both Darcys, and brings Elizabeth the love she’s always dreamed of. Trials thrown in their path are dealt with, some easier than others, but their love carries them through to lasting happiness.
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