Deck the Santa is a cosy mystery novella by Sue Hollowell. It features the characters Chloe and her mother, Mabel. They have gone to a winter wonderland, in the hopes of spending time with their loved ones, for a family reunion. However, things take a dark turn when a local Santa impersonator is found dead. There are fifteen chapters.
In the Amazon book description, it says, “This mini-series is best read after the Treehouse Hotel Cozy Mystery series.” I didn’t realise that until after I had already started reading this. I read the first book in that series; I didn’t like it. But, after finding out that this book is a spin-off of that series, I still decided to give this book a chance. I figured that it might be better…?
In my opinion, I don’t really like either of the main characters. Mabel (the mother) and Chloe both have really negative personality traits, and multiple times say or think really rude things about other people. For example, when they are at the café owned by Jules, about a quarter of the way into the book, there are points where both Mabel and Chloe have rude things to say or think about others. For example, they are welcomed to the café by Jules, and Mabel claims that it was a “rude welcome”. But I saw no way for it to be a “rude welcome”; Jules welcomed them to the café personally, and greeted them very nicely… Which is a pretty good thing to do, considering the man she was thinking about marrying had just been found dead, murdered. And when Jules is then questioned, by the pair, about the guy’s death, Chloe is suspicious of her. She thinks, “What wasn’t she saying?” Well, I’m sure there’s a lot Jules is not saying, and for good reason; considering the pair literally just met her. She probably doesn’t want to talk to people she’s just met about such a personal relationship. And the rude remarks they think and say about Athena, as well. The woman was clearly just trying to do her job and keep on schedule, yet both the mom and Chloe have rude remarks about her. The first thing Chloe thinks about her is that she must be in a relationship with the actor guy, with zero reason to think that. It was just creepy of her to think it; considering two people standing together in a café doesn’t automatically mean the two are in a relationship. The way the pair of main characters behave throughout the book is just awkward, and both of them are really unlikeable for me. To the point where it gives me second-hand embarrassment. To be blunt, the dog was just an annoyance. Max, the dog, seemed like such a bother. The irony is that the author kept noting about what a well-behaved dog he was, yet the actual behaviour of the dog suggested otherwise; he kept running away from the owner, multiple times would annoy people (even poking his head into the pockets of one woman). I just didn’t like the dog, or the weird thing with the gnomes... I felt the story would be a heck of a lot better if the author had focused on the actual mystery. It would have been nice if the author had presented us with more details about the death, suspects, evidence, etc rather than wasting time on this dog. So much of it was awkward and irrelevant, in my opinion.
The mystery, and aspects surrounding it, are pretty weird. So basically, Santa (Lloyd) is found attacked in the Nutcracker Museum. Mabel and Chloe are privy to all sorts of gossip as they take little trips in the local areas. While I know the author is intending the information they hear to be “useful” in some way, it just feels like ordinary gossip, without any relevance. I know the author is probably doing it to increase the suspect pool, offer foreshadowing to who the murderer might be, or why it was done… But, at the same time, the gossip the pair overhear offers me little actual interest in the investigation. For example, one of the primary suspects is the new Santa, who turned out to have been playing Santa there for a decade, before he was replaced. But… So what? Why is this meant to make him a suspect? A boss decides to not rehire some guy that had been working there; that’s not really suspect material. Especially because the logic Chloe thinks is that the guy is supposedly so mad that he wouldn’t be Santa for this year, that he would theoretically decide to murder someone…? What? That doesn’t make sense, because it would put him at far more risk of being imprisoned, rather than getting his old job back; meaning that he would get to spend even less time being Santa. The same for her suspicions of a hypothetical angry parent she thinks might have murdered the guy. Would some angry parent really risk prison time just because some mall Santa told a hypothetical child that they weren’t getting the present they wanted for Christmas? I doubt it. The logic the author provides behind a lot of these suspects just doesn’t make sense. Reading Chloe’s thoughts on the matter is just awkward, mainly because she makes really weird speculations about things; things that don’t make sense. And the audience gets almost no information in terms of real evidence. To be blunt, the book is mainly about this holiday experience for the mom and Chloe, and very little about the actual murder.
Apart from that stuff, I feel like the story was very messy. While I understand that the author was trying to lead us through this Christmas village area, there were way too many plot lines that were brought up and never finished in the novella. Things about the actor, or even mentioning all the stuff about the family reunion; there was just way too much that felt completely irrelevant to the mystery at hand. Like the whole thing about meeting the actor could have just been completely left out of the book; it didn’t really have any bearing on the mystery. Especially with all the rude remarks they were making about the assistant; it felt like there was zero point to it. I assume these aspects might get dealt with during the next books in the series, but I just don’t think it feels like something I would want to read. I don’t think I’ll be reading more of the series.
Overall, I did not enjoy the book. The main characters were very unlikeable, in my opinion; things they would say or think about others made them seem like really nasty people. And the way they were talking to people, trying to gossip about the murder, it felt useless because they got zero real information about the case. The case itself had zero evidence that we got to find out about, aside from stray gossip from the townsfolk. The gossip itself wasn’t even relevant in solving the case. The general story was very messy, with a lot of story elements being introduced and then not properly utilised by the end of the piece. I did not like it. At the current point in time, I have no intention of reading further books in the series.