Eh
Definitely should’ve gotten it done in three, maybe would have tightened the writing, would have made less time for Tala to be so unlikable. There was a lot of fluff the books could have done without for better story. There was a lot of repetition in what the characters would say.
Tala’s wolf is killed, thanks to her terrible decisions, and Kaillen’s wolf is mourning her death and Tala has no care for that, no consideration, gives zero time, just whines about herself and how it’s affecting her. She involves her ex, on ridiculous advice from her twin. Why did the author think having Tala listen to Tessa and play Carlos like she does was a good idea? All because Tala can’t give time for mourning, which increases Tala’s patheticness? She comes off as an inconsiderate, selfish, self-centered crap person. Shameful. And you don’t let a ex take you out to tell him not interested, you don’t let him pick you up to take you to dinner if your purpose is to tell him not interested. That’s a come to the house tell him and have him leave since you don’t want to tell him over the phone or through text “because he deserves better than that.” Really? After he failed to return calls, texts and voicemail messages and is how he broke up with you? How is it he deserves better? There still being problems come fourth book is ridiculous and overkill and makes the entire series less.
Kaillen has to do a lot of fighting his wolf in trying to get back to being with Tala as they were before. Tala, on the more positive side, does decide she’s fighting for Kaillen, says he’s her mate, that she’s going to fight to remind the wolf part of him that she’s his mate, he thought so before she had a wolf. Now why she has the thought to call him her “former” mate in a later chapter when they first arrive in the city of Sofia, I do not know. What is up with that being written, why would she think that after all that was said before? Then she falls again in going along with Barnabas, who takes full advantage on opportunity to “rile” Kaillen up to force his wolf to get the rest of the way back to recognition of Tala as his mate. Too far. And Tala goes along. Ratchet skank describes her here. It’s Kaillen who deserves better than Tala.
And why would she be trying to make a sex joke with the prince, the enemy? Allowing him to do the double kiss on the cheek when she just came from fighting him, purple is what he likes on a woman so should have demanded everything purple removed. She was too compliant. I get wanting to ensure the safety of your friends, and trying to stall, but she just got there that day! They’re absolutely should’ve been a lot more resistance. She was not meant to be all nice, sweet and compliant in a day, had even said how she’s need to show resistance mixed with a modicum of complicity. Seems author forgot that. I had to stop reading the ridiculousness. Skimming more and more at this point, moved to skipping entirely.
Switch places with her twin, hmmmm. And why is it not the first thought that the twin does NOT have the powers within that Tala has, that the prince can feel? No one thinks of this? No one? Mentioned by Tala after several times of considering switching places with her twin, like it’s nothing. Also very cliché use of twins, no originality with that. And we never get to know what it was that Tessa did while she was in the other room, pretending to be Tala.
There are so many wrong things, they really highlight this story should not have spanned four books. Tala’s character as initially written degrades as the story goes on, things that happen are drug out way too long. Other things that happen, like with Carlos and Barnabas, highlight how deteriorated Tala’s initially presented character traits fall to the horrible trend too many authors fall into, of turning a supposed to be strong, female character type into the cliché ridiculous acting, can’t stick to their convictions, go along with ridiculous ways of acting, demeaning to women, crapola. The one who killed Tala’s wolf, it’s mentioned once when she realizes who it was, and then there’s nothing else said about it when she was back in that realm where that person was? No plots thought up? Nothing regarding trying to get revenge for it?
Not sure how I feel about the ending. There was a return not sure about, felt too convenient to me. I would have rather it not occur.
Cameron finally gets it, and oh boy does he. Can say didn’t see that one until it was transpiring. Though where was Cameron’s mate? There’s no appearance at all, which didn’t make sense given Cameron was mated.