The Girl With The Gun, Sydney Rye Book #8
by Emily Kimelman
I'm not going to review Kimelman's writing, but I will critique the story line. I've reviewed her style of writing often. It's good. There's action galore. There are strong and consistent characters. The editing and proofing are excellent. That leaves the story.
In this episode, Sydney as agreed to give herself up to Declan Doyle, now of Homeland Security, although she has not yet shared that decision with the others at Joyful Justice. Bobby Maxim is just coming on Board with Joyful Justice and they are taking on the first of their large scale missions with the new influx of cash, equipment and intel he provides. Once Sydney discloses her decision to give herself up to Homeland, the group begrudgingly agrees that Homeland probably wants more of Sydney than to put her in prison. And in fact, it does turn out that Homeland wants to use her talents in a very specific way: the war against Daesh. Once in place, Sydney meets the leader of a Kurdish army of women who are fighting Daesh. When the Homeland officer who placed Sydney in the field comes to meet with them, the entire group is wiped out by a Russian drone attack, with only Sydney and the Kurdish leader surviving. From there the action all takes place in a joint mission with Homeland to rescue one of the female Kurdish fighters and to attract more Middle Eastern women to the cause. Of course, Homeland plans to conveniently rid themselves of Sydney, who they know they can't control, during this effort.
SPOILER ALERT:
This novel ends with a cliffhanger -- which most of you who have read other of my reviews know I hate. You've heard of David Letterman's "Stupid Human Tricks"? Well, to me, the cliffhanger ending in a series is a Stupid Author Trick. Of course, like so many others, the cliffhanger part, which is that Sydney might be dying of her injuries, is sort of moot when the next book in the series is either already announced or out. And, of course, when comments on said upcoming/new book list that Sydney is in the story near the end. SMH So why do authors think they have to do that? I simply do not understand. It would have been simple enough to leave her injured but obviously surviving. And then to begin the next book with the idea that she has disappeared and that her mother, the Jesus freak who thinks Sydney will follow her gay son to hell, is turning over a new vigilante leaf and searching for her. Sheesh. So, yes, that lost the rating a star -- and I seriously considered taking off two. I mean, really, it pissed me off so much I couldn't write this review for two days after finishing the book.
In any event, it's a good read if you don't mind cliffhangers.