Dear, oh dear......a new author to me and I paid for this book as it sounded right up my street. The story WAS, as it turned out but she acknowledges three people by name taking care of editing and proofing and they need stringing up !! The presentation nearly had me throwing in the towel around 60% in, where I considered I had to stick it out as I'd come too far and again around 80%.....I was just so distracted and irritated by highlighting mistakes the whole way through, till it ruined the whole experience for me. I wanted to read Stalker by her as well but won't be now, I'm afraid......it was written before this one so therefore I'd imagine it to be in a poorer state than this one.
I did enjoy the story, though I despised our leading lady with a passion. All she does is DRINK and drink and drink.......pretty much each and every spare minute she gets she's slinging wine down her neck. Then wonders why she makes so many pisspoor decisions !!
There were moments of levity that made me giggle here and there which I liked. We did get told three or four times that Simon's house was ruined by his tarmacked drive, though.....
These mistakes, though.......commas for starters. Plonked into sentences where they're not needed or in place of fullstops where she should be starting new sentences. This happened a lot. Then dropped where they ARE warranted. Of all those women she acknowledged, at least one of them should have a clue how to utilise them properly ! Also, there are apostrophe issues, mostly where they're not getting used. Sentences like this, "I hated the quiet, from what had been a bustling home, life had withdrawn from it." Awful English, terrible use of punctuation altogether. Same goes for this passage, "Ryan was the more troublesome one, when he wasn't playing Xbox and ventured out with his friends, he'd come home stinking of weed, red-eyed and spaced out." This sentence either needs to lose 'but also' or 'too'...."....but also the introduction of a new girlfriend too." Then this sentence is self-explanatory, "Was he was leaving ?"
Many times questions were asked with no question marks used. She persistently wrote text and not texted, too. We had sloped not slopped, cut and dry not cut and dried, lent not leant (which made me gasp), heckles not hackles, a blaze not ablaze, omission not admission and peaking not peeking !!
As you can see, this is in a total mess.....it never ceases to amaze me that after doing the really hard job of writing a book that someone will not get it checked out properly before publishing. Though, in fairness, this author had three people to do that, who've managed to let her down. Thanks to this trio, I won't be reading another by her.