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What if Mr. Bennet died in a duel with Wickham after Lydia eloped, just as Mrs. Bennet feared? Would Elizabeth and Darcy still find their happily-ever-after if the Bennet women lost their reputation and their home? If you like Austenesque retellings, such as Death Comes to Pemberley and Unleashing Mr. Darcy, then Reputation, An Easy Thing to Lose will be your cup of tea.

Nearly four months ago, Elizabeth Bennet hotly rejected Fitzwilliam Darcy’s marriage proposal. Now she wonders if that was the biggest mistake of her life. Orphaned and living with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner in London, Elizabeth is determined to take a position as a governess or companion; Darcy could never renew his attentions to her after her family’s disgrace. Which is a shame because she just may be in love with him.

Fitzwilliam Darcy would do anything for Elizabeth. As soon as he learned of Lydia Bennet’s elopement, he rushed to London to try to put everything to rights. But his journey was fruitless: Mr. Bennet died of his wounds before Darcy could bring a doctor. Now, he must convince Elizabeth to forgive and marry him before she is beyond his reach forever.

When an illegitimate child makes Lydia’s shame complete, Elizabeth and Darcy are left to try to salvage what is left of their reputations and relationship. Follow our favourite Austen lovers through sacrifice, misunderstandings, disrespect, a secret marriage, and a whole lot of shenanigans from the marriage minded ladies of London.

260 pages, Paperback

Published February 1, 2022

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E.M. Storm-Smith

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E.M. Storm-Smith is a mother, wife, attorney, former engineer, and started writing purely for herself. A lifelong love of books drove her passion to create something that was all her own. Several years into the journey of writing stories about characters she loved, E.M. decided to take her passions to the world and see what happened. The result was Storm Haus Publishing.

When she’s not writing, E.M. is spending her time reading others’ books, traveling (2020 notwithstanding), wandering around Disney World with her son, and cooking things with chocolate as a primary ingredient.

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December 14, 2021
Sassy and smart...in depth review coming soon!

Update: December 13, 2021. Complete Review:

"Reputation, An Easy Thing To Lose;" Author: E.M. Storm-Smith; Publisher: Storm Haus Publishing, LLC; Advanced Reader Copy; (November, 2021)

Witty and well orchestrated with a dynamic plot and characters that flawlessly intermingle with each other to create the perfect novel.

As a great lover of "Pride And Prejudice" and all things "Jane Austin," I had set high standards prior to reading an Advanced Reader Copy (ARC) of "Reputation, An Easy Thing to Lose." Elizabeth Bennet, Fitzwilliam Darcy, Jane Bennet, the Bingleys, Mr.Collins; et al... they all came back to life in such a flawless way, I felt as though the author, E.M. Storm-Smith, was touched by the spirit of Jane Austen- so authentically written and true-to-life is her variation.

This book is delightfully "intense" in the sense that Ms. Storm-Haus created a whirling plot with a series of sub-plots that she brilliantly executed from the beginning to the end of the book. This is not a flimsy read for the webs she weaves are tangled and brimming with the wit and electricity that emanates from her engaging characters. The contents within are meaty and my full concentration immersed itself deeply into the way she breathed life into the characters and meticulously paid attention to details with each one. This was all perfectly tied in together through very witty dialogue conveyed by the characters, keeping me riveted page after page. Many things happened simultaneously and the author flawlessly kept the plot flowing without skipping a beat.

The characters really grew on me and my gosh, I must say- that Caroline Bingley got on my nerves with all her scheming and lofty attitude! This intense reaction that was extracted from me is proof positive that the author skillfully brought life to the characters. This is critical when an abundance of dialogue takes place within a book. There was no "dropping the ball" here.

In summation, this author has clearly done her research and invested a huge effort in executing her first book. This is something readers would appreciate, especially fans of Jane Austen. It is difficult to create a variation of a universally beloved novel that will appeal to loyal readers of the original book but Ms. Storm-Haus does a very fine job of taking the pertinent care and attention needed to pull off such a huge feat. It is a monumental undertaking, indeed.

Take a chance on this new writer. She is worth it. Thank you to Ms. Storm-Smith for this ARC of "Reputation, An Easy Thing To Lose." It was an honor to read and write a review. All opinions are my own.

​A beaming 5/5!
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December 22, 2021
Well, I hate to be the voice of dissent, but this book just didn’t work for me. I don’t think I could give this more than two stars, but since I skimmed much of the second half of the book, I will forego giving a rating, but I need to put my thoughts down for myself for the time down the road when I may not remember and might be tempted to pick it up again. I mean no disrespect to the author, I believe this is her first book and I appreciate the time, effort and courage it takes publish something you created.

Lydia is ruined, Mr Bennet and Wickham both die in a duel leaving Lydia with child and the Bennet women ejected from Longbourn and touched by scandal. Elizabeth is determined to take a position even though Mr. Gardiner forbids it. Darcy wants to propose to Elizabeth but is concerned for Georgiana due to the Bennet scandal, but when he confides in Georgie, she gives her blessing and Darcy goes to propose. Here is where my struggles began. Elizabeth the martyr is in the house so she rejects the opportunity to not only embrace happiness for herself and Darcy, but also the chance to save her family because her noble heart has to protect Miss Darcy and anyone else who might somehow be hurt through her family’s tarnished reputation. After E rejects many solutions that Darcy presents that would allow the two to be together, she finally agrees to a plan where they forge a marriage certificate for Lydia to restore her respectability and give legitimacy to her child and D&E will marry but keep it a secret from almost everyone pretend that Elizabeth is being hired by Darcy to be Miss Darcy’s social companion. This premise just didn’t sit well with me. If Lydia is now a widow instead of a fallen woman, it seems to me that being secretly married but lying to everyone about it and Elizabeth becoming a “high” servant, but a servant none the less, would create a much bigger scandal than their legitimate marriage would cause. It just seemed a bit ridiculous to me. I went along with it and hoped to be pleasantly surprised. A few pages later, I was surprised indeed when I read this conversation between Mr. Gardiner and Darcy concerning D&E’s quickly approaching wedding. This is straight from the book:

“While that is reassuring, in fact it is not quite my meaning.” Edward looked about the room as if something would come to his rescue. Screwing his courage to the sticking place, he finally looked up. “I was more concerned about your education in the procurement of an heir, specifically, how quickly that event can sometimes occur.”
Darcy’s blank stare was followed by a slow look of horror. “Are you implying that a child could result from our union before Georgiana’s debut?”


So, 28 year old Fitzwilliam Darcy, meet the birds and the bees! I’m sure this was supposed to be funny, but I could not find humor in this. I might could believe this if it referred to Mr. Collins, but this is not Darcy in any way. This was the first time I considered abandoning this book and had to put it down for a few days before I could continue. I don’t think I’ve ever read a passage that insulted Darcy’s intelligence as much as this did. Jane Austen’s own words describing Darcy’s intelligence in Pride and Prejudice is this:
In understanding, Darcy was the superior. Bingley was by no means deficient, but Darcy was clever.

Since this book was getting only four and five star reviews, once again I started reading thinking great things would come to compensate, but then I encountered another hurdle that I never quite recovered from and thus started skimming just to get to the end. This event occurred at the Gardiner residence. Aunt Gardiner and Jane were having a hard time coming to terms with Lizzy lowering herself to being a servant and want to help her find happiness in marriage and set up a dinner party where she can meet eligible men. A man, Mr. Tannerbaugh, met Elizabeth at the party and in interested in her. He calls on the Gardiners hoping to encounter E again and when this happens, he is very forceful in his attentions, even though this is only the second time he has ever been in her company. When she resists, he insults her and when she stands up for herself, Mr. Tannerbaugh slaps Lizzy across the face. Keep in mind that this Mr. Tannerbaugh has only met Lizzy briefly once before, he is a guest in the Gardiner home, yet he slaps Lizzy right in the Gardiner’s drawing room AND in the presence of her family. This just crossed a line of ridiculous with me and I couldn’t bounce back. And, after this, Mr. Tannerbaugh disappears and is not mentioned again. This is the point I started skimming.

It wasn’t the writing itself that I had issues with with this book, but the plot and the execution of the plot. As the book continued, this became one of those books where every person in London, in all of England really, seems to be obsessed with the Darcy’s. They are thought of and spoken of in every drawing room across the country because it seems no one has anything better to do than talk about the Darcys. Every female was obsessed with Darcy and women were pushing and shoving each other to get near him and plotting to become Mrs. Darcy and practically physically accosting each other to be the one to get his attention while treating Elizabeth like yesterday’s trash. I couldn’t understand why Darcy or anyone was surprised when people disrespected and mistreated E. She was a servant, how did he think she would be treated? Of course people suspected she was his mistress. Again, this assumption could not have come as a surprise. And since all the women were psychos that were obsessed with Darcy, naturally, a trap was set to ensnare him into wedlock.

I love JAFF because these characters Jane Austen created are near and dear to my heart and I love reading about them in different situations and I love falling in love with them in many different ways. This is why I read JAFF, but there are certain fundamental things that have to be in place for me to be able to be able to embrace JAFF and I just could never believe or accept a Darcy that would put Elizabeth in the situation she was in here where she was vulnerable to disrespect and mistreatment and to put himself in the situation where, as a man of honor, he can’t stop it or protect her. It was also inconsistent that D&E have to hide their marriage because of her tarnished reputation, yet her sisters seem to have no problem getting suitors when they are in the same situation. Bingley is openly courting Jane and Mary is openly admired and courted by an Earl (that’s another can of worms for me, but I won’t go there now) so obviously the Bennets are perfectly suitable. Why the need for the secrecy in D&E’s case. Oh yes, it was so Elizabeth can retain her title as a martyr. Anyways, while this book did not work for me, I am obviously in the minority and I’m glad that many others found more enjoyment in this book than I did.
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November 30, 2021
“Your reputation is in the hands of others. That’s what [...] reputation is. You can’t control that. The only thing you can control is your character.” –Dr. Wayne Dyer

Rating: Adult themes discussed and one conversation, in particular, that embarrassed the crap out of our Darcy. Just saying. Not appropriate for a younger reader. Angst Level: Well, let’s just say the misunderstandings and stress were a bit hard on the nerves. I nearly called for my salts until I realized Hill did not work for me. GRRR! I crashed and burned in the wee hours as I-could-not-put-it-down [ICNPID]. I had to know what happened next. Source: I first read an excerpt [11-24-21] from this new author on the AuAu website. I received an unedited ARC from the publisher and the thoughts and opinions are my own. I really enjoyed reading this new author.

SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***

“The evil that men do lives after them; The good is oft interred with their bones.” –William Shakespeare, Julius Caesar

The opening prologue gripped me by the throat and nearly broke my heart. Lydia [bless her heart] was such a child and had no idea what was happening around her. She tried to figure out where she went off track. Didn’t she do exactly as her mother requested? Hadn’t she followed her mother’s plan for securing a husband to the letter? Hadn’t she secured such a handsome husband? And, he looked so well in his red coat. She knew just how her life would be. She was in love with her Wickham and he loved her and they would marry… eventually. Her reality check came and came quickly with the banging at the door. Why was her father so upset? She was to be married… wasn’t she? Why was Wickham demanding money to marry her? Duel?!? What duel? She didn’t understand. What was happening?

For those who do not like Lydia stories… be advised, this is NOT a Lydia story. However, Lydia’s backstory was the catalyst for this one. Her decisions and consequences were what set this train wreck in motion. After that opening prologue, we only vaguely hear about her. This is the story about Darcy’s love for Elizabeth and the extreme measures he would willingly take to preserve her reputation and that of her family. He loved her and was thrilled to discover that she loved him. This also displayed the extreme measures that Elizabeth would willingly take for her family.

DAMAGE CONTROL: OMG! People were horrid. This was a story of survival in the wake of a catastrophe. Some authors might have chosen a different path. But that would be another story entirely. This author chose this path and I enjoyed reading this different arc in the love story of ODC. I might not agree with the plan D&E chose; however, it was a good plan. Goodness, the reader was emersed in the le bon ton and all their snobbery. Oh-My-Gosh, they were horrid. At every turn, poor Darcy was inundated with matchmaking mammas, and his aunt Matlock was the worst. She was relentless. In her estimation, he was single, needed a wife, an heir, and perhaps a spare. She had a niece with a fabulous dowry, good connections, and in need of a husband. What was wrong in trying to bring together these two people of wealth and consequence? She, being his nearest relation, self-appointed herself to remedy that situation. Oh, dear. That sounds just like… yeah, his other aunt, What’s-Her-Name.

What I liked: Oh, the servants that worked for the Darcy family. Man, that was some network that saved the bacon on more than one occasion. Uncle Gardiner was amazing. I just adored him. I love a good Uncle Gardiner. Then we have our Mr. Bingley who had more spine in this story than you usually read in a JAFF. I liked that about him. He was smart and hid his intellect under a bushel, so to speak. It served him well several times.

“It is better to be alone than in bad company.” –George Washington

Villains/villainesses: There were a lot of conniving people throughout this story. Even their family sometimes crossed the line with their attempts to help find a match worthy of D&E. They were all operating under wrong assumptions and were simply being themselves. However, Caroline Bingley was a different kettle of fish. She was more than I have read about her before. Her backstory was amazing and shocking. I actually enjoyed reading that. It answered a LOT of questions regarding her motivation. She was wicked, smart, and self-assured that she would get what she wanted one way or another. She tried the unthinkable and… no, I can’t say. That would be a spoiler. Whew, I need a nap. I’m too old to stay up late. I highly recommend this for something completely different. Start it early in the day.
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2,653 reviews198 followers
February 4, 2022
I received an ARC of this story from the author. This review is given voluntarily and reflects my own thoughts and opinions.

In thinking about this story and what I want to say in my review, I thought about that old cliché, "What a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive". Yes, even though Darcy is known to abhor deception of any sort in canon, in this story he joins with Elizabeth to deceive most of their family, friends and society...with good reason.

As we read in the author's blurb, Mr. Bennet has dueled with Wickham and killed him...HOWEVER, he also was shot and dies of an infection. On top of this, Lydia turns out to be pregnant and part of the story addresses how that situation is to be handled as it brings shame on the entire family. The Bennet women lose their home to Collins and Elizabeth feels that the guilt for that is on her shoulders, as she turned down Collins' proposal. She seeks employment.

Here the story gets an additional significant twist, and even though I have read other stories in which Elizabeth becomes a governess, (SPOILER:) this one has society accepting/believing that is her position in society now. However, in reality, she and Darcy are married. (It's complicated and you have to read it to understand the motives here.) So now living a double life adds tension and also reveals the true character of some with whom they associate. Yes, Caroline Bingley looms large in this story. Society mothers continue to throw their unwed daughters at Darcy. And many question why Elizabeth accompanies Georgiana...and, thus her brother, to dinners, balls and other outings, i.e., the theater. There are only a couple of people who know the truth and they are sworn to secrecy.

You have to remember that Elizabeth is also thought to be unwed. So there are those who plan and work to find a mate for her. Furthermore, when Darcy, Georgiana and Elizabeth stay in other houses/estates some assign Elizabeth a servant's bedroom. The fact that Elizabeth's wardrobe is of excellent styling and quality also comes under scrutiny. Finally, we have Elizabeth feeling nausea in the morning and certain favorite foods now repulsing her.

I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
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January 20, 2022
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars

There's a lot to like with this unusual Pride and Prejudice variation. It picks up the story most of the way through the original book: Darcy and Elizabeth have met again at Pemberley with a promising future together... only to be wrenched apart by the news that Lydia and Wickham have eloped. No misunderstandings here - only major obstacles to be overcome.

As this book begins, Mr. Bennet finds the wayward couple in London before Darcy. When Wickham refuses to marry Lydia, the duel between the two men results in both of them dead. In Wickham's case, it's no great loss, but Mrs. Bennet's worst fears have come true with the Bennet family facing utter ruin. But it's not only that they lose Longbourn to Mr. Collins, who is quick to evict his disgraced relations; Lydia is pregnant!

Darcy to the rescue! He is determined to marry Elizabeth, regardless of the consequences. She refuses at first, not wanting the scandal to adversely affect Georgiana's marital prospects.

With Mr. Gardiner's help, the couple works out a multi-pronged plan: a forged wedding certificate attests that Lydia is Mrs. Wickham, now widowed. She goes to live with Darcy's great-aunt, who is sympathetic to her situation. Meanwhile, everyone is told Elizabeth now works for the Darcys as Georgiana's paid companion. (Fortuitously, Mrs. Annesley is leaving their employ anyway.) In actuality, Elizabeth will secretly be Mrs. Darcy. Darcy's investments in Mr. Gardiner's business is the explanation for his interest in helping the Bennets; the Bingleys, Collinses and Lady Catherine are strongly urged to speak only positively about the family instead of fanning gossip so Darcy won't lose money on his investment.

It's a complicated plan, but the subterfuge works only too well. The book's focus soon becomes the problems Elizabeth and Darcy encounter as their well-meaning relations shove unwanted marital prospects into their respective paths, not knowing the two are already married to each other.

The plot is entertaining, and the author's writing is generally good. Unfortunately, the opening chapters are filled with cumbersome exposition details that the reader must slog through before we reach the meat of the story. Then the plan is devised and subsequently explained multiple times as more people are brought in on the secrets. There's a bit of unneeded repetition throughout and more "telling" (when thoughts or motivations have already been "shown") than necessary. The first rule of good storytelling? Show, don't tell!

The author also wanders off on irrelevant side stories (the full background of Elizabeth's maid, for example) that slow down the pace.

You do have to buy into the idea that Mr. Darcy (who famously said, "...disguise of every sort is my abhorrence") actually comes up with this idea and follows through on it. He IS madly in love with Elizabeth and this is the only way they can think of to be together, which I guess makes it less OOC.

Overall, this is a pleasant read despite some issues with the flow of the storytelling.

I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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February 10, 2022
It is my book :) Thanks for considering reading, please let me know what you think, whether you liked it or not.
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February 4, 2022
I received an ARC of this story from the author. This review is given voluntarily and reflects my own thoughts and opinions.

In thinking about this story and what I want to say in my review, I thought about that old cliché, "What a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive". Yes, even though Darcy is known to abhor deception of any sort in canon, in this story he joins with Elizabeth to deceive most of their family, friends and society...with good reason.

As we read in the author's blurb, Mr. Bennet has dueled with Wickham and killed him...HOWEVER, he also was shot and dies of an infection. On top of this, Lydia turns out to be pregnant and part of the story addresses how that situation is to be handled as it brings shame on the entire family. The Bennet women lose their home to Collins and Elizabeth feels that the guilt for that is on her shoulders, as she turned down Collins' proposal. She seeks employment.

Here the story gets an additional significant twist, and even though I have read other stories in which Elizabeth becomes a governess, (SPOILER:) this one has society accepting/believing that is her position in society now. However, in reality, she and Darcy are married. (It's complicated and you have to read it to understand the motives here.) So now living a double life adds tension and also reveals the true character of some with whom they associate. Yes, Caroline Bingley loams large in this story. Society mothers continue to throw their unwed daughters at Darcy. And many question why Elizabeth accompanies Georgiana...and, thus her brother, to dinners, balls and other outings, i.e., the theater. There are only a couple of people who know the truth and they are sworn to secrecy.

You have to remember that Elizabeth is also thought to be unwed. So there are those who plan and work to find a mate for her. Furthermore, when Darcy, Georgiana and Elizabeth stay in other houses/estates some assign Elizabeth a servant's bedroom. The fact that Elizabeth's wardrobe is of excellent styling and quality also comes under scrutiny. Finally, we have Elizabeth feeling nausea in the morning and certain favorite foods now repulsing her.

I enjoyed this story and recommend it.
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January 27, 2022
Review also posted on my blog
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...


Fitzwilliam Darcy is ardently in love with Elizabeth Bennet. Unfortunately, due to pride and misunderstandings, Elizabeth rejects his proposal in a most vehement manner.

She comes to realise that he is the best of men and she loves him. When they meet again at his estate, Pemberley, their future felicity seems in reach.

Devastating news rips them apart.
Youngest sister Lydia Bennet has eloped with George Wickham.

Mr Bennet searches for them in the slums of London.
When he finds them, Wickham refuses to marry Lydia without a large dowry. Money that Bennet does not have. Mr Bennet challenges Wickham to a duel.
Wickham is killed, but he shot Mr Bennet who later dies of infection.

The Bennet family are evicted from their entailed estate and face possible ruin. This becomes almost certain when Lydia is found to be with child.

Elizabeth moves to London to live with her aunt and uncle. Darcy comes to her and proposes again.
Elizabeth is heartbroken to have to refuse again. She won’t expose Darcy’s sister, Georgiana to the scandal.

Elizabeth and Darcy develop a plan. Marry in secret and not reveal it until Georgiana is married. Elizabeth is to pose as chaperone and companion to Georgiana.

As one can imagine this leads to some tricky situations. Darcy gets furious when members of society treat Elizabeth as a servant.
The couples ease and closeness lead to accusations that she is his mistress.
Both suffer the matchmaking efforts of well meaning relatives.

Things seem to be coming right, with all of the sisters having suitors.
The last obstacle is a house party at Pemberley.
However, this is fraught with ladies of the ton jockeying for position as Mrs Darcy. How far will they go, to achieve this goal?
The denouement is very satisfying.

Really enjoyable story.

I received a free copy of this book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review. All views expressed are my own.
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124 reviews4 followers
June 20, 2022
Exceptional

Such a good book that I couldn't put it down! This story is wonderfully entertaining, brilliantly written and unique in its plot. From the beginning the author grabs the reader's attention and keeps it locked in until the final page. I look forward to the next book in this series.



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February 4, 2022
If I take care of my character, my reputation will take care of itself. — D.L. Moody

Using Wickham’s momentum against him, Mr. Bennet threw the wastrel into the wall, headfirst, then delivered a strong blow to his nose.
“You are as worthless a fighter as you are a gentleman. I shall either see you married before ten a.m., or dead at first light. Which shall it be?”
Wickham spat out the blood from his broken nose onto the floor, splashing Mr. Bennet’s breeches. “I believe, sir, that I have a better chance of making her an orphan than a husband. I have my pistol here, the finest available to officers in his majesty’s army.”
“So be it. I shall see you at Chalk Farm Tavern at dawn.”

This is the exciting beginning to a story of the Bennet sisters living with the ruination of their youngest, silliest sister. Mr. Bennet did meet George Wickham at dawn and killed him. Wickham’s shot went wild and struck Mr. Bennet in the leg where infection set in leading to Bennet’s death. The story picks up with Jane and Elizabeth living in London with the Gardiners. Mrs. Bennet and the other sisters are in Meryton. Lydia is confirmed to be with child.

With enough courage, you can do without a reputation. — Margaret Mitchell

Elizabeth is determined to become a governess or companion to remove the burden from the Gardiners. Her uncle has been receiving regular visits from Fitzwilliam Darcy and believes something better is awaiting his niece. When Darcy and Elizabeth meet, they become engaged. With Uncle Gardiner’s blessing, they marry quickly. In order to avoid gossip, a ruse will be set up. Elizabeth will pose as Georgiana’s companion and live at Pemberley with both Darcys. Care will be taken to avoid early pregnancy. Darcy will be able to aid the Bennets financially and also provide a safe cover story and refuge for Lydia’s confinement. After Lydia’s baby is born, the truth of the Darcys' marriage will be announced.

This then is the story: the Darcys must live undercover with only servants and a very few others knowing their situation.

People are almost always better than their neighbors think they are. — George Eliot

Problems arise when friends and relations enter the picture. Darcy insists Elizabeth be treated with respect at Pemberley but that respect disappears when they visit the Matlocks.

More of the Bingley family’s backstory is told. The lovely Caroline is more shrewish and manipulative than usual and we know who she resembles.

Even Elizabeth’s sister, Jane, and her Aunt Gardiner cause issues with their attempts to help Elizabeth regain genteel status.

This is a story that had been available online. It was among the stories stolen and published by plagiarists in a recent outbreak. Now the true author is venturing into the world of publishing. I welcome her and look forward to reading more of her work.

The author gave me an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.

What's the use of having a reputation if you can't ruin it every now and then? — Simone Elkeles
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1,414 reviews
February 10, 2022
Farce or Tragedy?

Mr. Bennet is dead and the Bennets don’t have much money. But not a problem. Darcy wants to marry Lizzy but being a putz, she refuses so she won’t hurt the Darcy name since she is in mourning and she doesn’t want to hurt Georgiana’s chances of making a good match. To compromise they secretly marry and won’t tell anyone until mourning is over and Georgiana is situated. She will pretend to be Georgiana companion.

The rest of the book is the Darcys trying to not get caught in their shenanigans.

There are a number of scenes where they try to keep their secrets and I think it was suppose to be a tragedy but I thought most of it was just unintentionally funny.

There are lots disappointed family members and members of the ton. Lot of people angry like a child, lots of narrow escapes.

The big reveal is excellent then a little too short epilogue wraps everything up. Brought many smiles to me and the wife. 👍🏻
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November 28, 2021
Just read an ARC copy of this story and loved it.
Mr Bennet challenges Wickham to a duel, having found him with Lydia. Mr Bennet kills Wickham, but is wounded in the process, but he sadly dies from an infection. (No real spoiler as this happens early in the book).
Elizabeth realises her family is in dire straights, so what can she do to save her family from ruin.
The solution is both ingenious and surprising, what else would we expect.
She is ably assisted by Mr Gardiner and Mr Darcy, who would do anything for our dear girl.
A thoroughly entertaining and enjoyable read, which ultimately leads to a HEA for Elizabeth and her extended family.
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December 12, 2021
As there will be other's that will give elaborate reviews I will just say that I love this variation of pride and prejudice, full stop.
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Author 34 books55 followers
July 20, 2022
I’ve had this book on my TBR list for months, ugh, but I finally got to read it! It did not disappoint. Excellent descriptions and setting, fun complications, and of course, a lot of great characters to love! (Or to hate, as the case may be…looking at you, Caroline.) This book is a little less angsty than others (as E&D get together rather quickly), and generally I like a lot of angst, but I enjoyed them working together so much, it wasn’t needed.
A very fun addition to the Austen variation world!
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January 1, 2022
3-3.5 stars. This is a very interesting premise for a P&P variation. What would happen if Mr. Bennet found Lydia and Wickham first, and challenged Wickham to a duel? Mrs Bennet’s worst nightmare comes true. When Lydia is found to be with child, how will Darcy react to save the Bennet family’s reputation and win Elizabeth’s hand? An elaborate plan ensues and a secret marriage takes place with the help of Mr. Gardiner and Georgiana.

To me, the early part of this story involves too much explanation to get everyone on the same page. The plan is hatched by Darcy, Mr Gardiner and Elizabeth. Darcy must involve Bingley because he’s still in love with Jane. Bingley has to get his sisters to explain the lie of Lydia’s marriage to anyone of the Ton who will listen. Then Darcy must make Mr Collins get behind the plan, implying his reputation is at stake as well.

Caroline Bingley is at her worst in this story. Even though the other titled ladies who are after Darcy keep putting her down for being from trade, she insists she will be victorious and sets her trap.

Lady Catherine is still delusional about Darcy marrying Anne. She treats Elizabeth with disdain but is oddly nice to Georgiana, which seems out of character. She does give Caroline a good scolding but Elizabeth’s snappy retort now spoken by Caroline is clever but disturbing.

Ultimately there is a happy ending with marriage for the other Bennet girls, with the exception of Kitty. Kitty is strangely missing from the book. I think she was mentioned at one point by Lydia, but she apparently stayed in Meryton with her mother even though Jane and Mary are in London with the Gardiners. She doesn’t even go to Pemberley for the house party with Jane and Mary. Another surprise at the ending is Lydia remarrying. That came out of left field without even a letter to introduce the topic to the Darcys. She shows up and is part of the triple wedding at the end. I read an eARC of this book provided by the author, so maybe some of this was addressed afterwards. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

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1,206 reviews58 followers
December 26, 2021
While reading this story, I got a lot of enjoyment out of the story. It seemed to me fairly fast paced, though not too high drama. It is different that we open with the elopement and multiple deaths and Lydia is with child. This sets the stage for utter ruination for the Bennets.

Bingley is refreshing in this version. He has a canniness hidden behind his amiability. He knows exactly who and what Caroline is and takes steps to circumvent her however he can.

Lydia is assisted in rebuilding her reputation, with Darcy's help (surprisingly the man can lie well).

Lady Sefton is awesome and has the best scene in the book!!

I am on the shelf regarding the Lady C/Caroline scene in which Caroline takes Elizabeth's place from canon when Lady C berates her for thinking she will marry Darcy.

Everything finally is revealed at the Pemberley house party and all the lies are eventually forgiven, or by the family, but not by others.

Thinking about it afterward I wasn't so sure about the premise. (Without which there wouldn't be a story), but really? Getting married, hiding it, Elizabeth was still the ridicule of society, then when everything is revealed its - alls well that ends well and forgiven. But they are married, spend time together yet, can't be intimate or there might be an oops.

An enjoyable read once through, not sure if I would reread it.
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1,004 reviews7 followers
February 6, 2022
I received an ARC of this in exchange for an honest review.

This is a variation on the Pride and Prejudice tale, based on what happens to the Bennett sisters (particularly Elizabeth) if Mr Bennett died after a duel with Mr Wickham.
It follows the scheming and plotting that occurs in order to let true love prevail in a society while reputation is everything and easily tarred.

As a big Pride and Prejudice fan, and a fan of other retellings of it, I really enjoyed this story. I loved how close the language and setting was to the original and really felt immersed in it.

I also liked seeing the thoughts of many of the background characters, including friends and relations, and felt it really added to all the secrecy and intrigue!

My only small issue with it was that I lost track of some of the background characters, as lots were often introduced at once, and I often forgot how was related to who and who had which grudge! 😅 I also didn't understand some of the reasoning behind the secrecy and plotting, but I guess that was the done thing in those times.

Overall I really enjoyed this and will likely be rereading it at some point!
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861 reviews28 followers
January 15, 2022
I’ll be honest. I’ve never read a Jane Austen novel. I’ve tried many times to watch Emma and I just couldn’t get through the first 10 minutes. To many words and blah blah blah and not entertaining to say the least.

So when I was given the opportunity to read this arc I said sure. What’s the worst that can happen?

So with that being said, I went into this read totally blind. I had no idea who any of these people were. Who died? Who eloped ? Why does everyone want to marry this Darcy person ?? Why should I even care about any of them???

I loved it all! The drama. The backstabbing. The snide comments. The “ton”. Bring it on !!!
It’s Bridgerton minus the steam. And that’s ok. The steam is not even missed in this fast moving story.

Tried and true Jane Austen fans may be shocked but I for one was totally invested in this retelling.
Thank you so much for this very entertaining read. Now if you could just do something with that Emma story …..

Thank you to Storm Haus Publishing for providing me with an arc of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
387 reviews2 followers
February 3, 2022
Story started after the result of the duel. Elizabeth is living witht the Gardiners and Mr Darcy pursued her.

I thought it was ingenious the plan they concocted so Elizabeth can help Ms Darcy navigate her coming out as well as be with them. Love that this story showed character redemption as well as cohesiveness between some of the Bennet girls. Also loved the play of words, divulging and concealing at the same time. This is a very looooong P & P variation but it is filled with humor/wit, and necessary scenes that made it so enjoyable to read.

I highly recommend reading this story of ODC.

I was given an ARC and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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969 reviews4 followers
January 1, 2025
Loved it! I wish someone would write a book with this Mr B in it. It was terrific.

Reread: Still love it. Super fun. The plot made no sense but I loved it.

Reread: Again, still love it. Super fun.
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596 reviews16 followers
January 19, 2022
This spin on the classic was so entertaining to read & it was fascinating to explore a different path that Elizabeth & her family would travel. The author set out to prove to her readers why Mr. Darcy and Miss Bennett are and will always be endgame.

I felt it did the original justice filled with Lydia’s childish ways, Lizzy’s stubbornness but love for her sisters, and Mr. Darcy’s willingness to do anything and everything in his power to make Elizabeth happy.

This book allows more character development and growth of smaller characters while also allowing redemption for others. It was so fun to read a scene similar to the climatic moment of Lady Catherine interrogating Elizabeth about her intentions, but with Caroline Bingley! Karma comes to the more conniving/manipulative characters and I am here for it. I enjoyed reading more about Darcy and Elizabeth’s love story as well as the relationship Lizzy forms with Georgina.

I loved reading this book and sincerely hope that E.M. Storm-Smith brings us more in the future.
496 reviews2 followers
January 13, 2022
What's in a name? This is a story with a very complicated web of deception designed to hide a multitude of social and family problems, especially Lydia's elopement with Wickham, his death in a duel with Mr. Bennet, and the resulting disgrace for ALL the Bennet sisters, including Elizabeth. In the Regency era, one's name and reputation are everything and ruin can spread out to cover an entire extended family and in-laws, etc.! Interesting plot points regarding some strategies used to cover up out-of-wedlock births, the legality of under-age weddings without parental permission, and other Regency tidbits. Fun dialogue from a delusional Caroline Bingley and other manipulative, husband-hunting females. I received an ARC of this book with only the expectation of an honest review.
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2,507 reviews15 followers
November 29, 2021
It was an interesting premise and twist for a variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice. The author did a good job making you emotional and invested in their story and what happened as they struggled to find a happily ever after. I did receive an ARC for free but I enjoyed the book so much I will be buying a copy as well. A good first effort, I enjoyed it and I hope they keep writing more in the future.
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12 reviews
January 16, 2022
A delightful read. E.M. Storm-Smith does a wonderful job painting pictures of the scenes and giving great color on the characters' backstories. The writing was witty and there were multiple times I literally laughed out loud. My biggest complaint is that I kept reading past my bedtime because I didn't want to put it down.
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1,289 reviews77 followers
March 28, 2022
Very Good Page Turner
My rating 4.5* rounded up
From the opening pages of the prologue revealing the events surrounding Lydia’s elopement with Wickham and its immediate dire and tragic consequences, it was pretty hard to put this attention-grabbing book down. My mistake was starting it late in the day. I finally had to stop reading for some sleep!

The Bennets are now ruined but, Darcy, with the aid of Mr. Gardiner, is determined to save their reputations. He still wants to marry Elizabeth, but she doesn’t want his or Georgiana’s reputation ruined by association. She is finally convinced to marry Darcy in secret, while at the same time becoming Georgiana’s social companion until her come out and future is determined. Arrangements must also be made to salvage Lydia’s reputation.

The remaining story unfolds around the Darcy’s attempt to keep their marriage secret as they navigate through Georgiana’s first season. Darcy must also avoid the efforts of his determined aunts to marry him off to their respective nieces, as well as the desperate, unmarried ladies of the ton all vying to become the next Mistress of Pemberley—Caroline Bingley being one of the most tenacious. Even the uninformed Mrs. Gardiner’s and Jane’s efforts to match Elizabeth with potential suitors horribly backfires.

Every event and circumstance leading up to the eventual revelation of the truth, kept me quite immersed and captivated by the story. You have to admire Elizabeth’s backbone in maintaining her self-respect as she is treated as a servant by those unaware of her secret. Darcy’s disgust of her treatment by those nasty ladies and relations of the ton tests his patience and temper at every turn. I loved the character portrayals in this story — the good ones loyal, clever and devoted and, the not-so-good ones written well in making a tale very satisfying and entertaining. Bingley is depicted as a stronger man which I always appreciate. I was left wondering about poor Kitty though, who is the only sister who receives but a mere mention near the beginning of the story. The others all get a happy ending. Poor Kitty.

It is my understanding this is a debut novel. While glimpses of the story are not quite believable and a bit convenient, I always enjoy something different and this book delivers. There is what some may call angst in this telling, but the reader being aware of the secret throughout, mitigated it for me. I highly recommend this riveting novel and definitely look forward to reading more from this author. Really fine first effort, and I plan to purchase the published version for my Kindle library.

My main critique is an abundance of proofreading errors, which I trust will be corrected before publication. As such, in this unpublished version, my rating reflects a review of the story only.

I received an ARC of this book and am freely providing an honest review.

Note: February 3, 2022.
The above review is for the ARC version of the book, read in November, 2021. I’m sad to see the published version still contains numerous proofreading misses. Some were corrected but not all. Disappointing. However, It’s still a good debut story, and I did purchase it for my Kindle library. A good editor is strongly recommended for future publications.
357 reviews8 followers
July 2, 2024
I really liked this story

I’m so glad I finally picked this book up and read it. I found myself having to suspend my disbelief in the beginning with the major plot point—that of a secret marriage between Darcy and Elizabeth. I didn’t see how it could possibly work. Well the author did make it work, and it was a lot of WORK!!

There was lots of cleverness here, lots of love, lots of constant waiting for the big shoe to drop. But instead of the secret coming out everyone was just blindly seeing the hints through their own colored lenses, which differed with each person. I feared instead of the scandal they were attempting to hush up an even greater scandal was going to blow up the ton. Which actually happened, just not the one I was expecting. That’s just part of the tension of the story arc. It made for some angst and some fun.

I would definitely read this again. Please know going in that this needed a couple more passes under an editor’s eye or more beta readers. But I really liked it a lot and recommend it to JAFF readers.
131 reviews
November 30, 2021
"Reputation, an Easy Thing to Lose" is a fine new entry into the world of Pride and Prejudice variations. When Elizabeth Bennett and her family are faced with tragedy and dishonor and their situation looks bleak, they discover a very few friends who will stand by them. The first few chapters describing the situation moved a bit slowly, but things picked up when various schemes started brewing. Expertly created tension made me wonder which schemes—those of Darcy and Elizabeth or those of the people ranged against them--would succeed. Additions of non-canon friends of ODC and new enemies were well conceived. Thank goodness for true friends of Lizzy and Darcy to counterbalance all those arrayed against the couple.
One of my favorite characters was non-human…Darcy’s beautiful black horse Incitatus, who served as a catalyst in one of the best scenes.
Caroline Bingley was nauseatingly horrible, and although it took until the culmination of the book to discover her ultimate end, she received some excellent set-downs along the way. One of the best was by a new character, sought-after dressmaker MMe Devy. To give Caroline her due, she gave Lady Catherine a great set-down in a delightful twist of Jane Austen’s original scene between Elizabeth and Darcy’s horrible aunt. The author wrote a very credible backstory for the Bingleys, which added much to the tale.
I was carried along by the writing and pacing of this story. There were a few editing errors in the first couple of chapters. I received an electronic ARC of this book from the author. This is my unbiased review.
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66 reviews7 followers
February 11, 2022
Y’all…this book has EVERYTHING. Scandal? Scheming? Secrets? Salacious gossip? All there. It’s like if the Netflix version of Bridgerton, the original Pride and Prejudice, and the Luxe series were all mixed together. I loved this book, even though I kept having to put it down to process the drama.

Without spoiling anything, Elizabeth and Darcy, with the help of Georgiana and Uncle Edward, come up with what may be the most convoluted plan ever made to try and keep everyone happy with their reputations intact. I like that I couldn’t quite put my finger on what would go wrong next or how it would be fixed, which made the plot move pretty quickly. Caroline Bingley continues to be insufferable, but her histrionics and hijinks were eye-rollingly entertaining. I loved the takes on all of the characters and the reminder of how thankful I am to not be beholden to the social rules and ruthless gossip of the ton.

This was a lovely reimagining of and tribute to Jane Austen’s work. Highly recommend!

Thank you to Stormhaus Publishing for this ARC!
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1,019 reviews11 followers
December 3, 2021
Wow! Just finished this fantastic new Pride and Prejudice variation, and I love it! This was my first time reading this author and I think she has just moved in among my favorites!

In this story, Mr Bennet has died following a duel with Wickham. Darcy arrived to late to prevent what transpired, so now he is determine to help Elizabeth and her sisters. They both have determined that they love each other, and Darcy convinces Elizabeth to marry him. Elizabeth agrees, but is does not want it to hurt Georgiana in any way, so they decide to keep the marriage a secret.

And this is where the mayhem begins!

Loved it!
690 reviews5 followers
December 6, 2021
Oh my, Wichkam dies, Mr Bennet dies, and Lydia. Poor thing.
And the sisters….
Lizzy, is smarter, but actually Lydia is too. Love the dress maker, and Georgiana is a jewel. How long can a secret last? Will Lydia come out ok? What about the whole family? LOL on how Jane and Mrs. Gardener keep trying to match Lizzy up.
Caroline is Caroline, but no worries, she gets her comeuppance.
Yes, you will want this book.
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