I received a free copy of this book from the publisher (Del Rey). This review is unbiased and honest.
2.5 ⭐
Trigger warning: misogyny, sexism, rape, violence, racism
Content warning: white feminism
DNF at 65%
URGH! This is such a hit and miss it hurts. It could have been an amazing epic fantasy about women overcoming sexism and misogyny and fightin for equality. Instead it became a chain of how many times the author could include sex in those women's lives.
Because that's what this book is all about: sex. It starts with how easily men can coerce women into having sex with or marrying them, and it probably ends with... well just the same, since the only effects of that spell are that women cannot procreate unless they really want to and that they produce a new element when they are raped. That's it, really. Or at least that's the jist of the half I read. If anything more interesting happens afterwards, I am unaware.
The main problematic point (apart from the constant need to include non-graphic sexual content at every turn) of this novel is that it has white feminism written all over it. Let me get this clear: if, in 2019, your feminism does not include diversity of any kind (queer, disabled, body positive, different ethnicities, etc.) it is NOT feminism! It's serving your white, cisstraight interest with no regard to those who have it worse than you. Unfortunately, that's the kind of fake feminism this book falls under.
Oh, there is some diversity. Of course, that diversity is accompanied by racism, even from the characters we are supposed to like, as readers, in the form of microaggressions. It is said by Delnamal and thought more than once by Alysoon that people from Nandel are too pale, that it's not normal. I don't know if the author tried to weave some sort of white racism into her story, as a way to be "woke"...
Mostly, her effort lies in a sexual revolution for the women. Nowhere in the first half I read does this spell make them fight against their assumed destiny of "baby factory" or the political alliances they are forced into. It's all about how they can sleep with whomever they want without consequences. And that only applies to noble women, apprently. There isn't a single peasant among the main characters.
Nor is there any queer character for that matter. Because apparently queerness isn't important in feminism........ or at least in that author's feminism. She made an entire institution filled with "unwanted" women who have to sell themselves for sex to the highest bidder, yet none of them ever thought of, you know, trying it with each other?! Hundreds of women alone together most of the time and none of them has sexual desire for her peers? PUH-LEASE!
(That of course, is not including the abigails who could be asexual.... there could have been a whole arc about them dealing with the constant threat of rape)
And among all those women who have to prostitute themselves, who for the most part are raped on numerous occasions, none of them ever seem to deal with PTSD......... I guess the author didn't want to trouble herself with research on the topic.
It's a huge hit and miss, and it's the only thing it is. If you want a fantasy only about women's sexual revolution, go for it. If you want a truily feminist epic fantasy, look somewhere else.