I received a free copy of this title to read and review for Wicked Reads
4 Stars.
Better Be Sure is the first installment in the Harrison Campus series, coauthored by Andy Gallo and Anyta Sunday. Andy Gallo is a new-to-me author, whereas I have read most of Sunday's backlist.
I have to admit, I struggled with the writing style at the start. As the story progressed, either the writing became smoother, less choppy bits jarring me from the story, or I got used to it.
Jackson is an orphan, taken in by a friend of the family, whose son was also his best friend, now brother in two ways- family and brothers in a frat as well- a frat their best friend fathers attended during their glory days.
There's a nasty snake in the frat, always making bets, but Jackson is too competitive to back down from a good challenge. He makes a bet that he might not be able to win, which could cause him to lose his spot in the house, which would ruin the lifelong dream of attending their fathers' frat house together.
A meet-cute with Ed brings on all sorts of possibilities, as well as a shoe-in for winning that bet. But Ed is in the closet, refusing to go anywhere near the campus. Their connection builds over time, a speedy slow-burn (that sounds odd, speedy yet slow, but Sunday is known for slow-burn, & there was lusty scenes earlier than her usual style)
I truly enjoyed Jack and Ed together, their dance so to speak. Their banter was witty yet filled with tension. The emotions were realistic and brought all the feels. Where I struggled, I never truly got to know Ed, not really. Not deep enough to root for them. Normally I don't have a POV preference, but I do believe a little time spent in Ed's head would have helped connect with the characters, their romance, their journey, and the story.
Highly recommend to fans of the authors, and I'm looking forward to the next in the series.