**I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
I want to start with the disclaimer that I am extremely picky with romance novels and rom coms. I love Jenny B Jones, so I was thrilled when the opportunity arose to advance read her novel. I’m disappointed to report I was not impressed with Sweet Right Here.
First of all, I was able to predict the entire plot from page 7. I actually stopped reading at that point to write out a prediction that turned out to be 95% correct. So engaging with the story was difficult for me because there was no suspense or anticipation. Secondly, the majority of this book consists of descriptions of Hattie’s romantic feelings and descriptions of kissing. This was too much for my taste, and I also disliked that the majority of the romance was built on these electric moments and buzzing feelings, while very little attention was given to the character of the two people. Thirdly, contrary to popular opinion, I did not like Miller. Lastly, this is one of those stories where had the two of them been upfront with each other about their feelings in the beginning, there would be no story, and this annoyed me a little bit. Hattie starts feeling things for Miller as soon as she meets him, and he starts acting affectionate right away, but they don’t admit they like each other until roughly 70% of the way through the book.
Why I didn’t like Miller, the “dreamboat” character of the story: first of all, he touches Hattie way too much for a boy who has not made his intentions clear, and even more so for a boy who has another girl, which Miller does for the first portion of the book. He is constantly sitting close to Hattie, touching her arm, stroking her hair, etc. Hattie responds to this by constantly asking herself if this could mean he likes her, which I found annoying because I don’t think it could have been more obvious, yet Hattie remains in a state of complete oblivion. (He built her a porch swing after she mentioned wanting one. Guys typically don’t do that sort of thing for a girl they don’t care for.)
Furthermore, when he is touching her, Hattie informs us thoroughly of the amount of lust she feels for him in those moments—from the very first time it happens. She then proceeds to be convinced she does not like Miller. I found this much blind contradiction to be a little unrealistic.
And Miller, in my opinion, was not exactly the best fictional guy I’ve read about. Besides the constant touching, he kisses her as part of an “act” to “make her ex jealous” (which, why are you letting him kiss you if you think you don’t like him nor want to date him, Hattie?! Miller, do you have any thought for how this will make Hattie feel?!); when Hattie comes to him on a date that is going bad, he makes fun of her instead of helping her*; he sends Hattie ALONE inside a trailer with her bio-dad who he knows is a sketch character; and he says things like, “You’re going to think about that kiss, just like I thought about the night of the wedding. It’s going to keep you company in your waking hours and occupy you when you should be asleep. You’ll remember my arms around you, my body against yours. The way I kissed you until you forgot all others”. How egotistical IS this man?
There is so little talked about Miller’s character while pages are given to how his touch electrifies Hattie. Of course romantic feelings are great, but they can’t define nor hold together a relationship on their own. Hattie loses all reason when Miller touches her. How that is any better than any other boys she’d gotten involved with? Miller could have been a creep, and she would have let him touch her and kiss her just because he made her feel good. I don’t think the word love was ever mentioned in relation to Hattie to Miller, yet she admits she lusts for him multiple times. How could this ever realistically create a healthy relationship? Yet in these pages, it does, suggesting that to love someone is to lust for them.
Stepping aside from all the romance, I didn’t understand Miller’s aversion to Hattie’s therapy methods (which were incredibly reasonable and psychologically accurate from what I could tell). It felt so forced and unnatural; anyone with common sense would be all for the things Hattie suggested and it made no sense to me that he hated it. It honestly felt more like the author trying to create tension and less like something the character would actually do. I didn’t engage well with Hattie’s struggle with her bio-dad either, though I did really like the discussion on how her stepdad, who adopted her, was her real father at the end of the day.
At the end of the day, I’m realizing I may not have been the target audience for this book after all, because of how picky I am with my rom coms. I do want to add that my issues put aside, this book did still demonstrate good use of language and contained some hilarious dialogue. I do not think Jones' skill in writing declined in this book; I just did not agree with the content. 2.5 stars.
**Miller does eventually come over and help her out, and I do have to give Miller kudos for the story he made up. I mean, if you have to rescue a friend from a bad date, how ELSE would you except to claim they had your triplets?!