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Archibald the Grim #1
The Douglas Bastard
A sequel to The Black Douglas Trilogy
The Black Douglas is dead. With their great knight no more, the throne of Scotland is up for grabs as enemies try to devour the kingdom.
An orphaned youth returning from exile, Archibald, the Black Douglas's bastard son, fights for a land being torn apart from within and without. If Archibald is to survive, he must learn to sleep with a claymore in his hand and one eye open because even his closest friend might betray him...
This is an adventure set in the bloody Second Scottish War of Independence when Scotland's very survival is in question.
The Black Douglas is dead. With their great knight no more, the throne of Scotland is up for grabs as enemies try to devour the kingdom.
An orphaned youth returning from exile, Archibald, the Black Douglas's bastard son, fights for a land being torn apart from within and without. If Archibald is to survive, he must learn to sleep with a claymore in his hand and one eye open because even his closest friend might betray him...
This is an adventure set in the bloody Second Scottish War of Independence when Scotland's very survival is in question.
194 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 26, 2022
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About the author
J.R. Tomlin
38 books215 followersJ. R. Tomlin is the author of nineteen historical novels.
She has close ties with Scotland since her father was a native Scot, and she spent substantial time in Edinburgh whilst growing up. Her historical novels are set for the most part in Scotland. Her love of that nation is traced from the stories of the Bruce and Sir James her grandmother read to her when she was small, to hillwalking through the Cairngorms where the granite hills have a gorgeous red glow under the setting sun. Later, her writing was influenced by the work of authors such as Alexander Dumas and Victor Hugo.
When JR isn't writing, she enjoys hiking, playing with her Westie, and killing monsters in computer games. In addition to spending time in Scotland, she has traveled in the US, Europe and the Pacific Rim. She now lives in Oregon.
She has close ties with Scotland since her father was a native Scot, and she spent substantial time in Edinburgh whilst growing up. Her historical novels are set for the most part in Scotland. Her love of that nation is traced from the stories of the Bruce and Sir James her grandmother read to her when she was small, to hillwalking through the Cairngorms where the granite hills have a gorgeous red glow under the setting sun. Later, her writing was influenced by the work of authors such as Alexander Dumas and Victor Hugo.
When JR isn't writing, she enjoys hiking, playing with her Westie, and killing monsters in computer games. In addition to spending time in Scotland, she has traveled in the US, Europe and the Pacific Rim. She now lives in Oregon.
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January 7, 2023
This book takes place between the years 1338 and 1346. It is the story of Archibald Douglas and deals with the Scottish War of Independence.
Archie is the Black Douglas' illegitimate son, which explains the title. His father was killed in battle, and when the book begins his mother has just died. Left an orphan at age nine, he's taken in as a page by his father's cousin, Sir William of Liddesdale.
I liked the MC. He was a scrappy little kid. He makes a slew of stupid mistakes, but all kids do. He wants to grow up to be a renowned knight like his father. For the first half of the book. he's relegated more or less to being an observer of the various players and events. And holy moly, there are a lot of characters. I had a lot of difficulty keeping track of all of them.
The book displays the author's evident research into this period. He used a lot of archaic vernacular and gave detailed descriptions of armor and weapons. My Kindle dictionary was working overtime while I read this book! I learned a slew of new words.
Although I love coming of age stories, this one suffered from significant pacing issues. Time creeps by at the speed of a glacier, until it abruptly doesn't. There will be a fight scene that moves like a bolt of lightening, and then it's back to tedious time increments again. To illustrate my point, by the halfway mark he's only twelve. Those three years slowly crept by! I found that I could easily set this book aside. I really like historical fiction, so it is the writing style, I suppose. When I read HF written by Bernard Cornwell or Douglas Jackson, it's the exact opposite problem: it's very difficult to stop reading.
I think this would work out well for readers that enjoy an authentic feel of a time period, and do not mind both an abundance of details and a slower pace.
I was provided this book from Netgalley and Albannach Publishing.
June 15, 2023
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Young Archibald, the Black Douglas's bastard son, returns from exile to a Scotland ravaged by war. The war-hardened Knight of Liddesdale will teach him what he must learn. And with danger on every side, he must learn to sleep with one eye open and a claymore in his hand because even their closest ally may betray them...
REVIEW
An enjoyable foray, into what for me is a new era to explore. The author has created a tale that gets the reader's blood pumping with wide-eyed anticipation. Archibald (Archie) goes through the wringer as he deals with his status among the Scottish nobility. What transpires is an engaging coming of age story; one that portrays the hardships, the development of a boy into a warrior, and the qualities of loyalty and trust. I found this to be an excellent beginning to what promises to be an exciting trilogy. So, my peeps and fellow readers of good historical-fiction, prepare to be transported to the sights and sounds of Scotland's struggle for independence. 4⭐⭐⭐⭐
Young Archibald, the Black Douglas's bastard son, returns from exile to a Scotland ravaged by war. The war-hardened Knight of Liddesdale will teach him what he must learn. And with danger on every side, he must learn to sleep with one eye open and a claymore in his hand because even their closest ally may betray them...
REVIEW
An enjoyable foray, into what for me is a new era to explore. The author has created a tale that gets the reader's blood pumping with wide-eyed anticipation. Archibald (Archie) goes through the wringer as he deals with his status among the Scottish nobility. What transpires is an engaging coming of age story; one that portrays the hardships, the development of a boy into a warrior, and the qualities of loyalty and trust. I found this to be an excellent beginning to what promises to be an exciting trilogy. So, my peeps and fellow readers of good historical-fiction, prepare to be transported to the sights and sounds of Scotland's struggle for independence. 4⭐⭐⭐⭐
June 21, 2023
In this first book of Archibald the Grim series, we see a youth who is far from grim. He’s on his way up through the ranks, and because of his illegitimacy, he has much to prove. A young scion of the Douglas clan, Archie was taken as a page by Sir William of Liddesdale and travels from France where he had resided with the young King David in exile:
“Och, you are like your father.” Sir William’s mouth twitched in what might have been a smile. “God kens that you look like him. I think you will be his very image when you’re grown.”
“My mum always said so.” My chest swelled with pride. “I will be a great knight like he was. I am learning as fast as I can with the sword, and I’m as good as the squires on a horse.”
“Braw feats indeed.”
My heart was thudding like a running horse, and the words gushed out before I could stop them. “Will you take me back with you when you return? No one thinks me of any account here, so they will not care. And I will work hard. Let me be your page.”
And so he began his Scottish education, and learned his skills through warfare from the very beginning. Although he was warned to stay in the background, Archie always jumped in where fighting was the thickest, much to the annoyance of Sir William, for the lad was not good at obeying his commands. Still, he was not overly punished, either, and became a squire in short order. Alas, Sir William proved to be a problematic and imprudent subject to King David, much to Archie’s chagrin, though he continued to serve the wayward knight until he became a knight himself. I would have liked to have seen more conflict of interest in Archie’s mind, but the focus of the book was rather on battle and the Scots did not fare well. Archie’s education was grim, indeed.
“Och, you are like your father.” Sir William’s mouth twitched in what might have been a smile. “God kens that you look like him. I think you will be his very image when you’re grown.”
“My mum always said so.” My chest swelled with pride. “I will be a great knight like he was. I am learning as fast as I can with the sword, and I’m as good as the squires on a horse.”
“Braw feats indeed.”
My heart was thudding like a running horse, and the words gushed out before I could stop them. “Will you take me back with you when you return? No one thinks me of any account here, so they will not care. And I will work hard. Let me be your page.”
And so he began his Scottish education, and learned his skills through warfare from the very beginning. Although he was warned to stay in the background, Archie always jumped in where fighting was the thickest, much to the annoyance of Sir William, for the lad was not good at obeying his commands. Still, he was not overly punished, either, and became a squire in short order. Alas, Sir William proved to be a problematic and imprudent subject to King David, much to Archie’s chagrin, though he continued to serve the wayward knight until he became a knight himself. I would have liked to have seen more conflict of interest in Archie’s mind, but the focus of the book was rather on battle and the Scots did not fare well. Archie’s education was grim, indeed.
May 19, 2022
What a marvelously authentic, fun book this is! Meticulously researched and accurate right down to the Scottish brogue, the Douglas Bastard transported me to 14th century Scotland, permitting me to see things through the eyes of Archie, illegitimate and parentless, adopted by his brother's cousin and promoted to page, squire, and eventually knight, battling for Scottish freedom from the oppressive English. I found that I didn't want the story to end, and gratefully there is reportedly a sequel in the works.
The setting is 1329. Robert the Bruce, King of Scotland and hero of the battle of Bannockburn, has recently died, replaced by his son, David II. After the Scottish loss at the battle of Halidon Hill in 1333, 9 year old King David, overseen by regents, is forced into exile in France where he meets and becomes friends with Archie, the "Douglas Bastard," whose mother has died of the flux. Elsewhere, Edward III, newly crowned king of England, has decided to assert his authority in France - his feeling is that the king of France has died leaving no heir except Edward's mother, the princess of France who wed Edward's father, Edward II. This assertion to the kingship of France starts the 100 Years War in 1337, and, recognizing that he may encounter trouble with Scotland while fighting France, Edward attempts to preempt fighting by placing sympathetic Edward Balliol on the throne in Scotland, a move the Scots refuse to accept. Meanwhile, Archie is adopted by his father's cousin, Sir William of Liddesdale, and begins to learn French and Latin, as well as the use of weapons.
Returning home to Scotland, Archie joins Sir William in besieging and overcoming castles at Perth and Edinburgh. All of the historic elements in favor of and against Scotland are present in this book- the zeal against the English works well in the fighting, but the Scottish must overcome constant infighting among the clans. Two Scots who should probably be working together, William and Ramsay, end up as rivals for the position of sheriff, to the point where William treacherously kills Ramsay and ends up in disfavor with King David. Many years later, at Agincourt in France, English King Henry V will famously gain victory over enormous odds through the skilled use of the longbow. In the final battle in this book, the English use of the longbow proves decisive in the defeat and capture of King David at Neville's Cross. And what becomes of our hero Archie? He finds himself surviving this battle by awakening having been buried under the pile of dead bodies on the battlefield.
Reportedly, nearly all of the characters in this book are authentic, including the enthusiastic Archie.
The book even attaches a glossary so the reader can spend a little less time researching the meanings of terms such as "ambuscade" and "Marischal." Millie Thom has crafted a terrific series of books chronicling the career of English legend Alfred the Great, and in my humble opinion, this book belongs right alongside those in stature. Strongly recommended.
The setting is 1329. Robert the Bruce, King of Scotland and hero of the battle of Bannockburn, has recently died, replaced by his son, David II. After the Scottish loss at the battle of Halidon Hill in 1333, 9 year old King David, overseen by regents, is forced into exile in France where he meets and becomes friends with Archie, the "Douglas Bastard," whose mother has died of the flux. Elsewhere, Edward III, newly crowned king of England, has decided to assert his authority in France - his feeling is that the king of France has died leaving no heir except Edward's mother, the princess of France who wed Edward's father, Edward II. This assertion to the kingship of France starts the 100 Years War in 1337, and, recognizing that he may encounter trouble with Scotland while fighting France, Edward attempts to preempt fighting by placing sympathetic Edward Balliol on the throne in Scotland, a move the Scots refuse to accept. Meanwhile, Archie is adopted by his father's cousin, Sir William of Liddesdale, and begins to learn French and Latin, as well as the use of weapons.
Returning home to Scotland, Archie joins Sir William in besieging and overcoming castles at Perth and Edinburgh. All of the historic elements in favor of and against Scotland are present in this book- the zeal against the English works well in the fighting, but the Scottish must overcome constant infighting among the clans. Two Scots who should probably be working together, William and Ramsay, end up as rivals for the position of sheriff, to the point where William treacherously kills Ramsay and ends up in disfavor with King David. Many years later, at Agincourt in France, English King Henry V will famously gain victory over enormous odds through the skilled use of the longbow. In the final battle in this book, the English use of the longbow proves decisive in the defeat and capture of King David at Neville's Cross. And what becomes of our hero Archie? He finds himself surviving this battle by awakening having been buried under the pile of dead bodies on the battlefield.
Reportedly, nearly all of the characters in this book are authentic, including the enthusiastic Archie.
The book even attaches a glossary so the reader can spend a little less time researching the meanings of terms such as "ambuscade" and "Marischal." Millie Thom has crafted a terrific series of books chronicling the career of English legend Alfred the Great, and in my humble opinion, this book belongs right alongside those in stature. Strongly recommended.
July 4, 2022
After the death of his mother, Archie the son of the famous Black Douglas goes into the care of his father’s cousin, Sir William. His dream is to fight the English and become a knight just as great as his father was. As a page, and later a squire to Sir William, Archie is witness to many battles against the English as well as the politics between King David and his loyals. He is eventually knighted by the King and fights his first few battles as a knight. The second ends in tragedy as the Scots are massacred en masse and the King is captured.
Weary in body and mind, Archie makes his way back to a weakened Scotland with his good friend, Will. What is next for Archie and Scotland?
The Black Douglas was a great read, with graphic descriptions to draw a reader into the story and keep them there. Other than a few grammatical errors, I would say that there were too many characters, and it became difficult to keep track of who was who in the story.
I’d recommend this for readers interested in historical fiction. This is however not a fast-paced book (in terms of storyline progression), so if that’s what you prefer, I wouldn’t recommend this.
Weary in body and mind, Archie makes his way back to a weakened Scotland with his good friend, Will. What is next for Archie and Scotland?
The Black Douglas was a great read, with graphic descriptions to draw a reader into the story and keep them there. Other than a few grammatical errors, I would say that there were too many characters, and it became difficult to keep track of who was who in the story.
I’d recommend this for readers interested in historical fiction. This is however not a fast-paced book (in terms of storyline progression), so if that’s what you prefer, I wouldn’t recommend this.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 11, 2023
There's good news and bad news. The good? The writing is smooth, the author paints pictures efficiently without long descriptive passages, the characters are well-drawn, the plot is both active and within the bounds of real history and there are enough surprises to keep the reader interested and turning pages.
The bad news? I admit to a personal bias, but I miss the days when a book was complete. This is book 1, and is written to leave issues unresolved, plot questions unanswered, and in no way does it come to anything resembling a conclusion.
Now for some folks, they will be the target audience and will hustle away to buy the next book. I tend to make a note to myself about the author as someone to avoid in the future. This is a common technique these days to boost sales. I understand it - and I really hate it. So - lights and shadows, you have been warned.
The bad news? I admit to a personal bias, but I miss the days when a book was complete. This is book 1, and is written to leave issues unresolved, plot questions unanswered, and in no way does it come to anything resembling a conclusion.
Now for some folks, they will be the target audience and will hustle away to buy the next book. I tend to make a note to myself about the author as someone to avoid in the future. This is a common technique these days to boost sales. I understand it - and I really hate it. So - lights and shadows, you have been warned.
July 3, 2023
The Douglas Bastard is the first in this trilogy about Archibald Douglas, also called Archibald the Grim, bastard son of Sir James Douglas, the fighting companion and loyal friend of King Robert the Bruce.
I've been fascinated by the gripping story of The Black Douglases for decades. A fascinating family that grew in power: bravery in battle, political intrigues, murder plots...
The novel starts in France, at Chateau Gaillard, where David, the Scots King in exile, and his court stay during his years away from Scotland. In his entourage is a young man of illegitimate birth, who has just lost his mother. With Sir James Douglas dead fighting the Moors in Spain, he has become an orphan at not even 10 years of age.
The young David regards Archie as a friend, so he lets him train with the other young boys at court, something Archie relishes. Not for him letters and learning...
When Sir William of Liddesdale arrives, Archie sees his chance at escape and convinces the knight to take him on as squire. To his delight, Sir William agrees, and Archie soon follows him to Scotland, where his training continues. But it doesn't take long until the wilful boy causes trouble, and more than once, Sir William has to show Archie his limits...
In Archie, the author has created a wonderful character of his time. Brave, cocky, a fast learner, always listening in the background to political shenanigans and plots, Archie grows up in a harsh, dangerous environment. Often, he joins Sir William on forays to relieve castles of their English garrisons, and on attacks into the north of England where he tends to cause trouble for his lord.
All the while, Archie learns about the political machinations, the petty jealousies of the Scots lords, and their own ambitions. He's intelligent, and fast to react to situations. And, in my mind, he's very clearly the man Archibald the Grim was in real life. Bold, assertive, somewhat rash.
This first novel is about Archie's teenage years, his growing up at Hermitage castle, finding his feet amongst all the legitimate nobles. He has the confidence to confront anyone who disses his status, claiming (rightly) his descent from one of the great heroes of the first Scottish Wars of Independence.
The narrative can be confusing at times, as we have many repeated first names. They weren't too fussy in those days, so we find several Williams, for example. And the complex nature of Scottish noble families means that many share the same surname. But this doesn't distract too much from Archie's adventures.
The novel gives us a real sense of the medieval setting. The historical research of the era is impeccable, and the author added a note when the story deviates from history. And I must revisit my old copy of The Black Douglases by Michael Brown, a non-fiction history book the author recommends, too.
I really like Archie, and I can't wait to see where the author takes him in Trust and Treason, the next novel in the trilogy.
The Douglas Bastard is a fast-paced, adventurous ride across medieval Scotland, showing her continuing fight for independence from an overbearing neighbour, the determined English King Edward III.
A highly recommended read for readers of authentic historical fiction, and for all those (like me) who love to read about the Scottish fight for freedom.
Note: I received a free ebook copy in exchange for an honest review. All views expressed are my own.
I've been fascinated by the gripping story of The Black Douglases for decades. A fascinating family that grew in power: bravery in battle, political intrigues, murder plots...
The novel starts in France, at Chateau Gaillard, where David, the Scots King in exile, and his court stay during his years away from Scotland. In his entourage is a young man of illegitimate birth, who has just lost his mother. With Sir James Douglas dead fighting the Moors in Spain, he has become an orphan at not even 10 years of age.
The young David regards Archie as a friend, so he lets him train with the other young boys at court, something Archie relishes. Not for him letters and learning...
When Sir William of Liddesdale arrives, Archie sees his chance at escape and convinces the knight to take him on as squire. To his delight, Sir William agrees, and Archie soon follows him to Scotland, where his training continues. But it doesn't take long until the wilful boy causes trouble, and more than once, Sir William has to show Archie his limits...
In Archie, the author has created a wonderful character of his time. Brave, cocky, a fast learner, always listening in the background to political shenanigans and plots, Archie grows up in a harsh, dangerous environment. Often, he joins Sir William on forays to relieve castles of their English garrisons, and on attacks into the north of England where he tends to cause trouble for his lord.
All the while, Archie learns about the political machinations, the petty jealousies of the Scots lords, and their own ambitions. He's intelligent, and fast to react to situations. And, in my mind, he's very clearly the man Archibald the Grim was in real life. Bold, assertive, somewhat rash.
This first novel is about Archie's teenage years, his growing up at Hermitage castle, finding his feet amongst all the legitimate nobles. He has the confidence to confront anyone who disses his status, claiming (rightly) his descent from one of the great heroes of the first Scottish Wars of Independence.
The narrative can be confusing at times, as we have many repeated first names. They weren't too fussy in those days, so we find several Williams, for example. And the complex nature of Scottish noble families means that many share the same surname. But this doesn't distract too much from Archie's adventures.
The novel gives us a real sense of the medieval setting. The historical research of the era is impeccable, and the author added a note when the story deviates from history. And I must revisit my old copy of The Black Douglases by Michael Brown, a non-fiction history book the author recommends, too.
I really like Archie, and I can't wait to see where the author takes him in Trust and Treason, the next novel in the trilogy.
The Douglas Bastard is a fast-paced, adventurous ride across medieval Scotland, showing her continuing fight for independence from an overbearing neighbour, the determined English King Edward III.
A highly recommended read for readers of authentic historical fiction, and for all those (like me) who love to read about the Scottish fight for freedom.
Note: I received a free ebook copy in exchange for an honest review. All views expressed are my own.
August 27, 2024
The Douglas Bastard by J.R. Tomlin is book one in her series, “Archibald the Grim,” which is a spinoff series of “The Douglas Trilogy.’
J.R. Tomlin has quickly become one of my favorite historical authors. This book takes you back to Medieval Scotland during the 14th century Wars of Scottish Independence. King Robert the Bruce and the Black Douglas are dead — and Scots once more must fight for their freedom.
Young Archibald, the Black Douglas's bastard son, returns from exile to a Scotland ravaged by war. With treachery and danger on every side, he must learn to sleep with a claymore in his hand and one eye open because even his closest friend might betray him...
If there was a way to travel back in time I know I would choose to go to Medieval Scotland - it just fascinates me. This story is full of political treachery, everyday hardships, battles, continuing fights for freedom, ambitious men, and death … but it is also full of lessons, Archibald (Archie) goes through the wringer as he deals with his status among the Scottish nobility. What transpires is an engaging coming of age story; one that portrays the hardships, the development of a boy into a warrior, and the qualities of loyalty and trust.
I always enjoy medieval tales and even more when the author includes historical accuracy. Tomlin does history justice without allowing the story to become a dry text book.
If you enjoy stories written by Bernard Cornell, Donoven Cook, Oliver Clements, Philipa Gregory, or Peter Gibbons - I think you will enjoy this book!
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J.R. Tomlin has quickly become one of my favorite historical authors. This book takes you back to Medieval Scotland during the 14th century Wars of Scottish Independence. King Robert the Bruce and the Black Douglas are dead — and Scots once more must fight for their freedom.
Young Archibald, the Black Douglas's bastard son, returns from exile to a Scotland ravaged by war. With treachery and danger on every side, he must learn to sleep with a claymore in his hand and one eye open because even his closest friend might betray him...
If there was a way to travel back in time I know I would choose to go to Medieval Scotland - it just fascinates me. This story is full of political treachery, everyday hardships, battles, continuing fights for freedom, ambitious men, and death … but it is also full of lessons, Archibald (Archie) goes through the wringer as he deals with his status among the Scottish nobility. What transpires is an engaging coming of age story; one that portrays the hardships, the development of a boy into a warrior, and the qualities of loyalty and trust.
I always enjoy medieval tales and even more when the author includes historical accuracy. Tomlin does history justice without allowing the story to become a dry text book.
If you enjoy stories written by Bernard Cornell, Donoven Cook, Oliver Clements, Philipa Gregory, or Peter Gibbons - I think you will enjoy this book!
📚Disclosure: I received a review copy of this #book from the author/publisher via #Netgalley. All thoughts, opinions, comments, and interpretations of the story are my own and bias free. I did not receive any money in exchange for this review. Thank you to the publisher/author for allowing me the opportunity to review. 🦄
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June 19, 2023
The Douglas Bastard by J. R. Tomlin is the first book in the series about Archibald Douglas, the bastard son of James Douglas, during the reign of King David II in 14th Century Scotland. It is a coming-of-age story about Archibald, orphaned as a nine-year-old boy and exiled to France with the young king. Archibald is placed under the care of Sir William Douglas, with whom he returns to Scotland to take back castles and lands from the English, setting the stage for King David's return. Archibald rises in rank from squire to knight and ultimately fights in the disastrous Battle of Neville's Cross, where the king is wounded and captured.
Author Tomlin has created an intriguing tale told from the first-person perspective of Archibald as he matures from an idealistic boy to a battle-hardened young man who becomes disheartened by the political machinations of noblemen pledged to fight for the king. Though conditioned to obey his superiors, Archibald sometimes disregards commands and openly questions Sir Williams' brutal act of capturing and murdering a rival, whom the king had appointed as constable of Roxburgh and Sheriff of Teviotdale.
Vibrant descriptions of historical events ring true, such as a tournament hosted by the English during a temporary truce. The final chapters vividly describe the gut-wrenching horror of battle at Neville's Cross. Archibald fiercely fights to protect his king, but he soon recognizes the hopeless situation when disloyal commanders and their men retreat and abandon them.
For those unfamiliar with the history of Scotland, it may be difficult to grasp how some of the characters are related to each other. The dialogue uses the Scottish dialect, but a glossary that defines the distinct terms is helpful.
Those who enjoy reading medieval Scottish fiction should find The Douglas Bastard to be an intriguing start to the epic saga of the historical figure known as Archibald the Grim.
Author Tomlin has created an intriguing tale told from the first-person perspective of Archibald as he matures from an idealistic boy to a battle-hardened young man who becomes disheartened by the political machinations of noblemen pledged to fight for the king. Though conditioned to obey his superiors, Archibald sometimes disregards commands and openly questions Sir Williams' brutal act of capturing and murdering a rival, whom the king had appointed as constable of Roxburgh and Sheriff of Teviotdale.
Vibrant descriptions of historical events ring true, such as a tournament hosted by the English during a temporary truce. The final chapters vividly describe the gut-wrenching horror of battle at Neville's Cross. Archibald fiercely fights to protect his king, but he soon recognizes the hopeless situation when disloyal commanders and their men retreat and abandon them.
For those unfamiliar with the history of Scotland, it may be difficult to grasp how some of the characters are related to each other. The dialogue uses the Scottish dialect, but a glossary that defines the distinct terms is helpful.
Those who enjoy reading medieval Scottish fiction should find The Douglas Bastard to be an intriguing start to the epic saga of the historical figure known as Archibald the Grim.
January 7, 2023
I did not enjoy this book. The subject matter was of interest to me but I would have enjoyed it more had it been written as a historical documentation since this attempt at a historical novel was totally lacking in imagery, descriptions, character insight or emotion. Characters were tossed into the writing with little or no background provided, and many of them added nothing to the story. So what if they were real people? If they do not add anything to the story other than to prove the author knows they existed, then why burden the reader? The way they were represented did nothing to enhance the story being told. If they are worth mentioning, they are worth describing; they are worth at least a minor back story.
Also, the story did not flow well; scenes and even dialogue felt like the author didn’t know what to write next or how to transition to the next scene, so, they wrote nothing. I was frustrated that something that had the potential to be of great interest to me was so poorly written. I want to learn more about some of the characters in this book but I will be researching different authors. I would not be able to endure another book by this author.
Also, the story did not flow well; scenes and even dialogue felt like the author didn’t know what to write next or how to transition to the next scene, so, they wrote nothing. I was frustrated that something that had the potential to be of great interest to me was so poorly written. I want to learn more about some of the characters in this book but I will be researching different authors. I would not be able to endure another book by this author.
July 5, 2023
Scotland: 1330’s-1340’s. The book incorporates real people like Simon Fraser, King David (son of Robert the Bruce), the Earl of Ross, William Douglas, and Archibald Douglas, the titular character. Since we just got back from Scotland, it was nice to have visuals in my mind as battles were described at Edinburgh and Stirling. The knights went to Dunnottar Castle and Durham, all places we saw. I’m always amazed people survived horrific war injuries in a time before sanitation, antibiotics, anesthesia, and blood transfusions, but they did. We weren’t that far from Hermitage Castle, where William Douglas imprisoned and starved to death Sir Alexander Ramsay of Dalhousie out of shear jealously. The incident was described in the novel. The book ends when Archibald was a young man, but he lived to old age, so there's a sequel.
June 8, 2022
This is a marvelous book! I love historical fiction it’s my third favorite genre. Books centered on the United Kingdom are particularly attractive to me because much of my heritage comes from there.
The author has taken a minor figure and walked with him through the major events he would have faced and been involved in. She did a great job!
I love how she wove so many minor details of daily life into the story. I felt I was right there with Archibald. His struggles with being the bastard son of a noble included repeated bullying by his peers. He held his own with even odds.
The fights, jousts and war scenes were brutal like daily life for most people. The dialogue came across quite real.
This is a great read and I award 4.9 stars.
The author has taken a minor figure and walked with him through the major events he would have faced and been involved in. She did a great job!
I love how she wove so many minor details of daily life into the story. I felt I was right there with Archibald. His struggles with being the bastard son of a noble included repeated bullying by his peers. He held his own with even odds.
The fights, jousts and war scenes were brutal like daily life for most people. The dialogue came across quite real.
This is a great read and I award 4.9 stars.
January 25, 2024
THE DOUGLAS BASTARD by J.R. Tomlin -- First in a series of three novels that take place during the 14th century Scottish War of Independence. Archibald Douglas ("Archie") is the young illegitimate son of the Black Douglas. Upon the death of his mother and father, his father's cousin, Sir William of Liddesdale, a knight in service to the young Scottish King David, takes Archie on as a page in training. Through his years of training and practice, as well as practical experience serving his uncle, Archie grows up in the ways of warfare and knighthood, eventually himself becoming a knight. The author goes to lengths in describing Archie's growing up and the graphic nature of warfare of the time. Lots of Scottish history, places, battles, and people.
September 16, 2025
History in Action
The author’s research for this book was formidable and it shows in the accuracy and detail of the battles and political intrigues. Unfortunately, it works to the detriment of a novel. By being so scrupulously accurate, Tomlin sacrifices character development and the pacing that make a novel flow. The people don’t come alive and the action is very much like soldiers describe warfare even now. Interminable periods of boredom followed by moments of pandemonium. Based on the way the Scots nobles behave in this book and in later dealings with each other and the English, it’s no wonder they ultimately lost their country. I haven’t decided whether I’ll read the rest of the series.
The author’s research for this book was formidable and it shows in the accuracy and detail of the battles and political intrigues. Unfortunately, it works to the detriment of a novel. By being so scrupulously accurate, Tomlin sacrifices character development and the pacing that make a novel flow. The people don’t come alive and the action is very much like soldiers describe warfare even now. Interminable periods of boredom followed by moments of pandemonium. Based on the way the Scots nobles behave in this book and in later dealings with each other and the English, it’s no wonder they ultimately lost their country. I haven’t decided whether I’ll read the rest of the series.
June 17, 2023
An excellent story about an illegitimate boy fathered by a nobleman. Set in Scotland and with great use of the vernacular I really enjoyed the book. Some have mentioned the slow pace of the story and I can agree to some extent but this felt like a tome type book and was accordingly wordy. This is my first read by Tomlin and found the author to be highly articulate in the writing and the research was excellent. The characters are well drawn and I liked the main character while those around him were memorable after the book was finished. My thanks to Netgalley and the publishers for an advance copy of The Douglas Bastard, well done.
June 12, 2022
Fascinating story about Archibald Douglas, the bastard son of Sir James Douglas who had been a supporter of Robert the Bruce. Somehow this intrepid warrior managed to inherit the title of Earl of Douglas, despite his illegitimacy. The author's imagining of how this might have happened is certainly plausible. The vivid battle scenes make the reader feel as though they are part of the fighting.
This fast-paced novel tells an engrossing story about a brutal time in Scottish history. Highly recommended.
This fast-paced novel tells an engrossing story about a brutal time in Scottish history. Highly recommended.
October 18, 2022
This novel was absolutely enthralling from beginning to end. The historical setting was well depicted and really reflected the era, and the characters were richly drawn. There are some harrowing scenes in this book, but I guess that is to be expected. There are also lots of intrigue at court and a few romance stories to boot.
I thought this book was really wonderful and I will certainly be looking to reading the rest of the series.
*I received a copy of this book from NetGalley for review consideration.
I thought this book was really wonderful and I will certainly be looking to reading the rest of the series.
*I received a copy of this book from NetGalley for review consideration.
August 24, 2024
No retirement plans
Book does not help me at all to understand why anyone wants to be royalty. Wanting to be a knight is another profession that has just the same short life span. Good thing they are 'time outs' to write updates to their lineage lines. Author weaves Scottish history 's intrigue to follow two main characters quest good their dream professions. Nice touch to include little Scottish words to get reader attention.
Book does not help me at all to understand why anyone wants to be royalty. Wanting to be a knight is another profession that has just the same short life span. Good thing they are 'time outs' to write updates to their lineage lines. Author weaves Scottish history 's intrigue to follow two main characters quest good their dream professions. Nice touch to include little Scottish words to get reader attention.
August 14, 2023
worth reading
This series is an excellent recounting of the Scots’ battle for freedom. Courage and cowardice, loyalty and treachery show themselves in the books. Tomlin seems to have done exceptional research in putting together very good fiction. This is one of the better edited ones also.
This series is an excellent recounting of the Scots’ battle for freedom. Courage and cowardice, loyalty and treachery show themselves in the books. Tomlin seems to have done exceptional research in putting together very good fiction. This is one of the better edited ones also.
May 18, 2022
Archie Wins His Spurs
Excellent account of 14th Century life in Scotland, in a noble household. Archie, as an illegitimate son, nevertheless had good fortune and good mentoring, to achieve his dream of knighthood.
Excellent account of 14th Century life in Scotland, in a noble household. Archie, as an illegitimate son, nevertheless had good fortune and good mentoring, to achieve his dream of knighthood.
June 7, 2022
Not bad for a Douglas book
The book seemed rushed, but the characters and the plot were good. I enjoyed the overall story, but some of the language was hard to follow. Overall worth the read.
The book seemed rushed, but the characters and the plot were good. I enjoyed the overall story, but some of the language was hard to follow. Overall worth the read.
June 7, 2022
A sad tome
What a blunder! Scoundrels that abandon their king on the battlefield. Is that the manner of a Scots man? A noble of the land? Yet there are those that stood firm and fought to defend their king to the end. A sad tome indeed
What a blunder! Scoundrels that abandon their king on the battlefield. Is that the manner of a Scots man? A noble of the land? Yet there are those that stood firm and fought to defend their king to the end. A sad tome indeed
October 25, 2022
What a historical journey to the 14th century! Authentic right down to the Scottish brogue. Was like having my Grandmother Sinclair alive again! I didn't read the previous books but it didn't stop me from enjoying this. Thank you Netgalley, the author and publisher! 3.5 stars
July 9, 2023
Scottish Freedom Fighters
Written with Gallic terms, names and period customs, this novel is worth readying for it’s period accuracy. I loved reading about the customs, military tactics, and social dynamics.
Written with Gallic terms, names and period customs, this novel is worth readying for it’s period accuracy. I loved reading about the customs, military tactics, and social dynamics.
February 10, 2024
Excellent read!
I have become a fan of this series of books. The author weaves the historical with writing that draws you in and makes you feel that you are witnessing a historical event. The battles are exciting and you become one with the action! Well done!
I have become a fan of this series of books. The author weaves the historical with writing that draws you in and makes you feel that you are witnessing a historical event. The battles are exciting and you become one with the action! Well done!
October 6, 2024
BAH! I do not like novels that are inconclusive! Where you have to read the next in the series and the next and the next to learn what happens. If a series is good, I should want to continue, not have to.
June 17, 2025
This is a tale of bravery, honor, and loyalty. Read the story of Archie, an orphan from Scotland, who becomes a paige for his cousin Sir William, and rises to be a gallant knight who fights for King David and earns heirship to the Douglas household.
October 31, 2022
An exciting and fast paced novel that makes me want to read more of Tomlin's books.
March 18, 2023
I’m sorry it took me so long to read this book! This is the opening story in the life of a powerful Scottish nobleman who started life as a bastard without an inheritance during the 100 Years War.
July 5, 2023
I love historical fiction. Battles between the English and he Scots told from Archie's point of view. Archie is the bastard son of the deceased Scottish leader. An enjoyable read.
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