Savannah is brought to her knees when she is informed at school that her mother and father were involved in a hit and run that left her mother severely injured and her father dead. When she arrives at the hospital there is a strange man by her mother Holly’s bed, and he comes with an even stranger offer. This man, Evan, is a lawyer and fixer for a wealthy and powerful man, one who has a vested interest in making sure the driver is never found or charged. Already struggling for money before the family’s breadwinner was killed, an offer of fully paid medical bills, a beautiful new home, and never having to worry about money troubles again is enough to cause the stressed and traumatized pair to make a deal with the devil.
Three months later, Holly and Savannah have barely moved into their new home before the neighbors start to have suspicions something isn't right. Will the house of cards tumble nearly as soon as it's begun to be built, and are the neighbors the only thing they have to worry about?
I think this was a decent debut. There’s promise here and I really enjoyed the exploration of justice as a moral concept as well as inequities in the legal and justice system.
This novel follows a really interesting format. Time jumps and multiple POVs seem to be all the rage with thrillers lately, and this does both, but in a somewhat unique way. We follow six characters, and each gets a chapter 3 months ago when the accident happened as well as one in the present before we jump to another character. The problem with this is that often as soon as the action ramped up, we were in another character’s head and another timeline. All of the momentum was lost. On the other hand, my favorite parts of the book were the chapters that exacerbated this problem the most.
You see, I enjoyed the chapters about the neighbors much more than anyone else’s. And really, those chapters were mostly unnecessary to the plot. Andy was sympathetic off the bat, and you can feel the author’s love of writing in his chapters where he is speaking about his craft. I also warmed up to his wife Libby much more than I expected. I would absolutely read a book about their marriage sans the rest of the crazy plot. In fact, I think perhaps the author may have better luck in another genre, because most of my issues with this book were related to the thriller portion.
I found the plot progression and twists to be really predictable, the ending to be trite and cliché, and the author was far too heavy-handed with obvious foreshadowing (think multiple instances of “If only I knew things were about to get much worse”). Luckily, all of those issues are things that can easily be improved over time or would likely cease to be issues at all if she chooses to write in another genre.
As an avid mystery, thriller, and suspense reader, I’m used to giving content warnings for dark and violent things. Imagine my surprise to be calling out an abundance of references to God and religion. I just… was not expecting the amount of prayer, talk of writing flowing through someone as if by a divine creator, etc. Not my thing, but while distracting, it wasn’t enough to make me put the book down. But it did feel a little like a sneaky religious parable or something to me.