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In kingdoms at war, alliances are made to be broken in a thrilling novel of magic and dark conspiracies by the Wall Street Journal bestselling author of Warrior’s Ransom.

Ransom Barton and his wife, Claire de Murrow, have arrived in Legault to reclaim the title that was Claire’s birthright. Claire intends to rebuild a war-ravaged palace to its former glory and to teach Ransom about the magical history of their new home. But when Ransom is summoned to return to King Benedict, his loyalty to Claire is tested. Fealty prevails, however questionable the king’s motives.

The ambitious Benedict, who controls his late father’s dominion, must prove his might. The warriors of the East Kingdoms have disrupted the trade routes, weakening every kingdom in their path. Benedict’s plan is to fend off a coming war through strategic alliances. But it’s Ransom’s post to keep the king’s allies—as well as his poisonous enemies—in line, even as Benedict’s defense may be inviting further chaos.

As the king’s power grows and Ransom’s rise in the council is secured, a shadowy conspiracy threatens to destroy everything Ransom has worked to build. Now torn between allegiance to the woman he loves and duty to king and country, which will Ransom choose?

459 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 7, 2021

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Jeff Wheeler

126 books5,217 followers
Wall Street Journal bestselling author Jeff Wheeler took an early retirement from his career at Intel in 2014 to write full-time. He is a husband, father of five, and a devout member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints. Jeff lives in the Rocky Mountains.

Learn about Jeff’s many worlds at www.jeff-wheeler.com, or participate in one of his online writing classes through Writer’s Block (www.writersblock.biz).

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Profile Image for Bibi.
1,287 reviews133 followers
April 1, 2022
Ransom the hero started out well but later turned into this Gary sue who, for no logical reason, was "chosen" as the savior of a family of kings who were all fools.

I wish he'd allowed them to all die even at the risk of destroying their world. Now, that would have been a story that made sense. What an eejit.
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Profile Image for Diane Shearer.
1,181 reviews8 followers
September 23, 2021
I love Jeff Wheeler, but this one is disappointing. Too much intrigue, not enough action. The outcome is predictable from the outset for anyone who reads history. A character that I truly love goes off the rails which ruined the whole book for me. A character that I truly despise causes havoc completely unchecked. In the end, all the hard won successes of the previous book, which was excellent, are undone completely needlessly in the final paragraph. As I write this I’m so mad I’m calling it 2 1/2 stars. The next one had better be back up to par. Ransom Barton is a great character. He deserves better. And why, by the Fountain, has no one taught Ransom how to travel through the Fountains yet? Honestly, it’s maddening.
Profile Image for Tammie.
1,608 reviews174 followers
September 23, 2021
3.5 stars.

I was really looking forward to reading this book and I did enjoy it, but parts of it made me rather sad and unsure of things. I was really excited to see Ransom and Claire finally together. Unfortunately Ransom gets called away all too soon and Claire is left to deal with things in her kingdom alone. I liked Claire a lot in the other books, but there were times here that she felt a bit out of character, and it affected the way I felt about the book. She seemed a bit too whiny and unsupportive of the things Ransom had to do. Now that I've finished the whole book I do get what the author was trying to do here, and I won't spoil anything, but I still didn't care for her personality in this book. Poor Ransom never has it easy no matter what, and that's what makes the fact that he's still such an honorable man so admirable, although I do feel that Ransom is a bit too much of a Gary Stu at times.

One of the best things about this book is the fact that I didn't see a twist coming that the author threw in near the end. It almost made all the sad and unsure things worth it.

Thanks to NetGalley and 47North for providing me with an ARC of this book.

Review also posted at Writings of a Reader.
Profile Image for Jane.
1,216 reviews74 followers
September 14, 2021
4 stars

You can read all of my reviews at Nerd Girl Loves Books.

This is another great book in this fun YA Fantasy series that finds Ransom's loyalties tested at home and with his king. Newly married, the couple arrive in Legault to reclaim the title that was Claire's birth-right, but before the couple can make much progress on the dilapidated castle, Ransom is called away to serve King Benedict. Claire is upset and doesn't want him to go, but Ransom's duty is to answer his King's call.

King Benedict decides to start a war in a far-off corner of the kingdom and leaves Ransom and his council to run the kingdom in his stead. Co-ruling with Ransom is the King's mother and a sly, greedy and exasperating man who served the King when he was young. When circumstances become dire in the kingdom, Ransom must answer the call and once again put himself in danger to serve the Kingdom.

In this book we find Claire and Ransom apart most of the time -which tests the young couple's commitment to each other, as well as their ability to trust that they truly know the other person. Their relationship is strained to its limit, and a strange feeling and confession add to stresses on the duo. The author does a good job exploring issues of trust, fear and commitment issues that almost every couple experiences once in awhile.

The author moves some storylines forward in this book, but adds bits of mystery here and there that will need to be explored in the next books. This book had more political intrigue than fighting in it, which is a nice change of pace.

I received a complimentary copy of this book from NetGalley and 47North. All opinions are my own.
Profile Image for Athena (OneReadingNurse).
971 reviews140 followers
December 9, 2021
I'm not even ok with how Wheeler keeps making these books better and better, and how Claire is one of my favorite fictional women ever. I wanted to see her in a bit of a war queen role too but she's finally getting her page time

James had me cracking up towards the end, I am glad he so far stayed loyal

It's also still a bit hard to tell how much time is passing, this book had to cover probably what three years at least?

Tenthor was another character I ended up liking. The whole political intrigue system is so well done in this series

Good balance between action and soft spots too. I don't recall seeing much family life in prior books and series by Wheeler and Ransom's dad pride was everything

I have the finale on netgalley but the description gives away how it ends, and I don't think I can handle it right now
Profile Image for Donna Bull.
525 reviews20 followers
August 19, 2021
Another fast paced and enjoyable entry in Ransom's journey. When we last saw Ransom he and Claire had just been married and he was now Duke of Glosstyr with war on the horizon with Occitannia. This book has events happening on fronts all over the region as the King has gone east to deal with issues there along with a loose, fragile alliance, and Ransom and Claire have returned to Legault to see what the state of affairs is there. Events move quite quickly as Ransom and Claire become parents, more artifacts of the Fountain are found which have a serious affect on Claire. Ransom is called to fight on various fronts while also being called to defend the Gradalis and assist Lady Constance. As with the other books in the series, it is an entertaining read and a great world to escape into. Looking forward to how Ransom and Claire's story wraps up in the next book!!
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1,115 reviews14 followers
January 13, 2022
So Much Action.

I’m amazed at how much action Jeff Wheeler can get into a book. The pages pull me into the action, and whenever I can finally come back up for air, I’m 150-200 pages closer to the end of the book. One more book in this series and I will have to look at another of his series to keep myself occupied.
Profile Image for Noah Graves.
28 reviews
July 7, 2022
7.5/10

It has been a lot of fun seeing Ransom’s power and leadership grow throughout the series. This entry shines more light on some of the most interesting aspects in the series in my opinion.

The first half was a little frustrating and confusing for me due to the plot drama, but it was completely cleared up in like 2 pages lol nice

I am excited for the last book and am hoping the plot pushes Ransom to make some decisions that go against his calling to be loyal
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444 reviews12 followers
October 12, 2025
Book #3 in the Kingfountain Series. 4.5 stars. The characters think and act logically! Sometimes that’s hard to come by. This is the best book in the series, so far (one book to go). Fast paced ~ loved it.
Profile Image for Richard Myers.
509 reviews11 followers
March 28, 2022
Great book

More war between the kingdoms and the regular people in the towns and farms suffer. Ransom is forced to try to be in too many places at once.
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2,175 reviews220 followers
March 3, 2024
This series improves with each book.
21 reviews
September 18, 2021
This was a little bit of a disappointment to me after Knights Ransom and Warriors Ransom. I found myself irritated with just about every character for most of the book, particularly Constance and Claire. It seemed like every other paragraph a courrier would come running in with more bad news or yet another letter. I almost gave up on this book several times, but did end finishing it. This series is just not as good as the Kingfountain series and perhaps I am just growing weary of war.
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Author 2 books22 followers
September 29, 2021
I liked it a lot. Looking forward to how everything resolves in the next book!
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3,404 reviews52 followers
June 23, 2021
4.5 stars

Thank you to NetGalley for the opportunity to read this ARC. The opinions in this review are mine and mine alone.

As I have said many times, I am a HUGE fan of Jeff Wheeler and especially of all of the books that are in the Kingfountain World. This is the 3rd book in this series - which is set in the VERY distant past. We are finally able to see how we got to the future time of Owen Kiskadden that began the tales of this world. This series has been extremely compelling. I fell in love with Ransom almost immediately as it becomes apparent that Ransom is a man of honor, even if maintaining his honor is not always in his best interest.

First of all, I want to say that I enjoyed this book. While saying that, I also want to say that this book had moments of it that made me uneasy. Why? Well, that is the question, isn't it? Part of the reasons, I think, are focused around Claire's situation and what is occurring between the two in their new marriage. For those who are caught up to this point, Mr. Wheeler has not given Ransom an easy path in life. In fact, this poor honorable man has had disaster after disaster affect his life. Yet in all of that, he has maintained his loyalty - even when his reputation has suffered. And to be honest, it hurts my heart that he is such a pawn in all of this. But - this is a perfect example of the excellence of Mr. Wheeler's writing. He has created such an amazing and compelling character that the reader can fall in love with, root for and cry with. That, in my opinion, is the mark of an excellent author.

Back to the uneasiness. For some reason, I did not read this straight through. That is very unusual for me. I actually read this in spurts over the course of several days. I'm not sure why - other than the fact that I had a feeling that things might possibly get bad for Ransom and maybe I just was hesitant to make it real. I honestly am not sure. Without going into spoilers, it makes things difficult, but I was afraid that there wasn't going to be a pathway that Ransom could take that wouldn't ensnare him. What an excellent story . This was proven to me over and over as I finished this book.

This book is a bit of a segway from one situation to another. And a transition as well. Even with all of the pressure on Ransom from all sides, he was true to his beliefs and somehow made it through the minefield. (this is not a spoiler as the summary kind of eludes to this). There is so much happening in this book. The kingdom is balanced on the edge of a knife. There is subterfuge within subterfuge, betrayal within betrayal and all is never what it seems. Amazing...right?

The ending of this book is basically a cliffhanger. It is going to change EVERYTHING. I guess that means that I will now be one of the many, many readers waiting not very patiently to find out how Ransom is going to deal with the clusterf**k that is going to follow the ending of this book.
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3,284 reviews279 followers
September 13, 2021
4.5/5.0

Another fine installment in one of the most lush, creative and addicting fantasy series today! Ransom is quickly becoming my all-time favorite hero. He embodies all that is honorable, loyal and good while still portraying a flawed and sometimes conflicted man. In this story, we get a very up-close and personal look at the hardships, heartaches and challenges loved ones face when duty to one's king must come foremost while duty to one's heart can't be denied. Although set in a fantasy world with magic, the strong historical undertones that Ms. Wheeler so deftly imbues into the story allows readers to really feel the pain and insecurities of separations that so many in history endured that could drag on for months and even years at the command of a king. In this, the story is poignant as well as action-filled.

It did feel a bit heavy on the telling rather than showing side at times, leaving the rich depth one usually experiences a bit absent. But that is a small glitch compared to the immense satisfaction the overall story gifts. So much so that waiting for the final book will be torture indeed!
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476 reviews11 followers
September 13, 2021
Okay I can’t breathe after that ending and I’m freaking out - where’s the next book - I need it nowww…Ahhhh! I would have rated this higher than 5 stars if I could have!

This part of the series was a bit different than the others with the relationship/marriage between Ransom and Claire being more heavily focused on, but it was still quite a rollercoaster ride much like real life can be at times. There were all sorts of twists and turns and a few surprises that kept me turning pages and listening late into the night. This was full of so much good stuff and I can’t wait to read the next book and find out how it ends although that will be a bit sad too.

Also, I have to say, Kate Rudd is an awesome narrator and does amazing with the audio of this book as well as any books she’s narrated. She’s one of my favorite narrators and does a great job bringing Jeff Wheeler’s characters and so much of the story and the world to life.

If you haven’t read Jeff Wheeler, you’re missing out and need to get on that and check it out. Also if you’re an audiophile, you need to listen to Kate Rudd narrate his stories as well!
Profile Image for Shari Stevers.
19 reviews
February 2, 2022
Ladies Ransom

I have read all three of The First Argentines. They all cost me many a sleepless night as once I began to read, I could not put them down. I confess that I read while preparing meals, took them into every room in the house, and propped my Kindle Fire on the table while eating! I also took them into my bed where I read until the wee hours and did not stop until my Kindle ran out of battery power. Then I made trip to electronics and purchased a high speed charger and an extra long cord. After that, I was able to read until I finally ran out of juice. One night I read until 6:30 am having spent an entire day and night totally absorb we by very real and believable characters! The intense scenes held me captive. I have always boasted that once I read a book no matter how long ago I could almost repeat verbatim what I had read. I rarely read a book more than one time but this series will definitely be read again and again! When you read this book, I know that you too will find it compelling and unable to put down! Of all of Jeff Wheelers books, I love this series most of all!
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213 reviews10 followers
May 25, 2022
As Ransom now serves for another king whom he had to go and negotiate and hefty ransom for. He continues to do whatever he can to protect the people and the dynasty and at times has been shown little respect and little time to rest. Will have to admit that Jeff Wheeler knows how to keep a reader interesting in his books with intrigue and Suspense to keep things interesting. I loved that he finally brought out Claire more and hope he continues
Profile Image for Ray Curto.
138 reviews3 followers
July 9, 2021
I was given a free copy of Lady’s Ransom by Jeff Wheeler (author), 47North (publisher) and Net Galley in exchange for an honest review. Lady’s Ransom is the third in the First Argetines series and will be published on September 7, 2021. Knight’s Ransom is the first in the series and was published on January 26, 2021, Warrior’s Ransom, the second in the series, was published May 18, 2021, and Fate’s Ransom, the fourth and final book in the seriers, will be published on January 4, 2021.

I did not read Knight’s Ransom, but I did read Warrior’s Ransom.

This review will not contain any spoilers.

I would characterize Lady’s Ransom as high fantasy featuring knights, kings, court intrigue, family drama, and magic against a backdrop of war and possibly a coup. I characterized Warrior’s Ransom very similarly, not surprising since they are part of the of the same series.

The setting of the story in what appears to be medieval European kingdoms at war with noble families choosing sides.

The magic system is limited to the main character and a couple of the antagonists, and it seems the ability to use magic is innate.

Lady’s Ransom has one main character (same as in Warrior’s Ransom) who is knight and is virtuous, kind, loyal, honest, reliable, and nearly infallible. The added layer to the character of the main character is his wife is a featured a bit more in this story than in Warrior’s Ransom. Mr. Wheeler sprinkles this story with a dash of family drama and hints at something a bit more sinister that impacts their household. The main character is three-dimensional and very engaging. Mr. Wheeler does a commendable job in fleshing out several of the side characters that interact with the main character. Each of these characters exhibit a different attribute or trait that the main character possesses but still and unique. More importantly, each of these side characters has his or her own character arc and add something to overall story.

As I did with Warrior’s Ransom, I thought the antagonists are flat and one-dimensional in Lady’s Ransom. I would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler wrote some of this story from their perspectives to get a better idea as to their motivations and reasons for doing what they are doing.

The pacing of the story is at a steady clip from start to finish without any dead spots.

In this story, I thought there was more telling than showing. It came in sharp relief when the main character’s wife is featured in letters in the beginning of each chapter as Mr. Wheeler featured these letters in Warrior’s Ransom. I think if this character’s arc was featured in scenes, instead of letters, the story would have additional layers and would have had more of an emotional impact. I found I was really intrigued by what was happening with the main character’s wife while he was away dealing with the king’s business. I really would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler expanded and embellished this minor plot point because it and would have featured more of the main character’s wife who I really found to be very interesting and engaging. (Reader’s Note: If Mr. Wheeler decided to write a novel featuring or a series featuring the wife as the main character, I would read it.)

As I felt as I read Warrior’s Ransom, Mr. Wheeler presents several interesting plot and character bits that I would have wanted to be fleshed out and expanded to make this story more complex and emotionally satisfying. I think Mr. Wheeler could have reduced the main character’s story arc a bit and used the page space to focus on the court intrigue and what happened with the main character’s wife while the main character was away doing the king’s business.

The quibbles I had with Warrior’s Ransom continue in Lady’s Ransom. Even with the larger quibbles, I still would be interested in reading the next novel in the series because the main character is engaging and interesting.

I would recommend Lady’s Ransom to readers who like fantasy stories featuring knights, warring within royal families, some political intrigue, and told in a straight-forward manner.

I rate Lady’s Ransom 3.5 stars.

I would like to thank Jeff Wheeler, 47North, and Netgalley for the free ARC.
Profile Image for Ray Curto.
138 reviews3 followers
December 23, 2021
I was given a free copy of Lady’s Ransom by Jeff Wheeler (author), 47North (publisher) and Net Galley in exchange for an honest review. Lady’s Ransom is the third in the First Argetines series and will be published on September 7, 2021. Knight’s Ransom is the first in the series and was published on January 26, 2021, Warrior’s Ransom, the second in the series, was published May 18, 2021, and Fate’s Ransom, the fourth and final book in the series, will be published on January 4, 2021.

I did not read Knight’s Ransom, but I did read Warrior’s Ransom.

This review will not contain any spoilers.

I would characterize Lady’s Ransom as high fantasy featuring knights, kings, court intrigue, family drama, and magic against a backdrop of war and possibly a coup. I characterized Warrior’s Ransom very similarly, not surprising since they are part of the of the same series.

The setting of the story in what appears to be medieval European kingdoms at war with noble families choosing sides.

The magic system is limited to the main character and a couple of the antagonists, and it seems the ability to use magic is innate.

Lady’s Ransom has one main character (same as in Warrior’s Ransom) who is knight and is virtuous, kind, loyal, honest, reliable, and nearly infallible. The added layer to the character of the main character is his wife is a featured a bit more in this story than in Warrior’s Ransom. Mr. Wheeler sprinkles this story with a dash of family drama and hints at something a bit more sinister that impacts their household. The main character is three-dimensional and very engaging. Mr. Wheeler does a commendable job in fleshing out several of the side characters that interact with the main character. Each of these characters exhibit a different attribute or trait that the main character possesses but still and unique. More importantly, each of these side characters has his or her own character arc and add something to overall story.

As I did with Warrior’s Ransom, I thought the antagonists are flat and one-dimensional in Lady’s Ransom. I would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler wrote some of this story from their perspectives to get a better idea as to their motivations and reasons for doing what they are doing.

The pacing of the story is at a steady clip from start to finish without any dead spots.

In this story, I thought there was more telling than showing. It came in sharp relief when the main character’s wife is featured in letters in the beginning of each chapter as Mr. Wheeler featured these letters in Warrior’s Ransom. I think if this character’s arc was featured in scenes, instead of letters, the story would have additional layers and would have had more of an emotional impact. I found I was really intrigued by what was happening with the main character’s wife while he was away dealing with the king’s business. I really would have preferred if Mr. Wheeler expanded and embellished this minor plot point because it and would have featured more of the main character’s wife who I really found to be very interesting and engaging. (Reader’s Note: If Mr. Wheeler decided to write a novel featuring or a series featuring the wife as the main character, I would read it.)

As I felt as I read Warrior’s Ransom, Mr. Wheeler presents several interesting plot and character bits that I would have wanted to be fleshed out and expanded to make this story more complex and emotionally satisfying. I think Mr. Wheeler could have reduced the main character’s story arc a bit and used the page space to focus on the court intrigue and what happened with the main character’s wife while the main character was away doing the king’s business.

The quibbles I had with Warrior’s Ransom became larger quibbles in Lady’s Ransom. Even with the larger quibbles, I still would be interested in reading the next novel in the series because the main character is engaging and interesting.

I would recommend Lady’s Ransom to readers who like fantasy stories featuring knights, warring within royal families, some political intrigue, and told in a straight-forward manner.

I rate Lady’s Ransom 3.5 stars.

I would like to thank Jeff Wheeler, 47North, and Netgalley for the free ARC.

Profile Image for Ahmad Faris.
75 reviews
September 3, 2022
The Argentine series is an interesting series that has a realistic depiction of medieval intrigues and politics, with a tinge of mysticism. In some ways it is comparable to the Songs of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones) series, but in others, they differ a lot.

The similarities are that both series have a realistic background of medieval alternate Europe, with feudal kingdoms conflicting with one another and the characters being thrown around as chess pieces. There’s also quite a lot of warfare, with siege and lancing and all the things knights do to one another.

The differences are more pronounced where in this series, the story follows the story of one character only. Although occasional views from other characters are offered, the story focused mainly on one character, the knight called Ransom. The character development is paced quite well enough that the emotions and challenges really brought the reader along. However these come at a compromise, where other characters seemed to be underdeveloped. For example one of the bad guys, somehow changed his ways and became more matured after a few years. It was never explained how or why he changed, and I guess that does happen in real life, but the story feels a bit incomplete somehow. On another end, if the story is divulged like the Songs of Ice and Fire, this series might end up a bit too long.

Another stark different in this series is the character has such a strong sense of justice and hold his virtues very dearly, something that is rarely found in the Songs of Ice and Fire. Still, the story manage to blend it well because it does show moments where Ransom has some doubts or has fleeting evil ‘thoughts’. It still leaves you feeling a bit frustrated though when the villains or circumstances threw our hero around. The writer however clearly wants the sweet taste of virtue to be more pronounced when the happy endings are presented at the end. Whether you would find it cynical or inspiring, is another point. I do feel both of them as I read.

Overall I think the book is a worthwhile read, as the story is laid well and well researched, with the battles being based/inspired on real ones and the routines and life in the dark ages very well thought out. The language is slightly hard without detracting the reading speed. The book is also mostly ‘clean’, without any sexual scenes. The goody-good tone might feel a bit off to some but otherwise still a recommended read.

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Author 29 books510 followers
September 27, 2021
I found the first 1/4 to 1/3 of this book to be slow, probably because our main characters were happy and mostly conflict-free. Ransom and Claire are married, and in love with each other. Claire falls pregnant. There's some far-off political intrigue that calls Ransom away, and Claire has strange and unfounded insecurities that he will be unfaithful to her, but that's not conflict yet.

The political machinations that fill in the majority of Wheeler's plots quickly swept me up once Ransom was away from Claire and off serving his king, though as usual, I don't feel I have a good grasp on the relationships between the various kingdoms and the structures of their hierarchies. Claire was in a tower with the Queen Dowager when her husband was still alive, but she's also a queen in her own right? I know that was hinted at before but I didn't understand it. Somehow Ransom is in service to both the Queen Dowager Emiloh and also to her son, King Benedict, as he had previously served the Elder King (the one who had locked her in the tower in the first place). Her other son Jon-Landon is a usurper to his brother. I've never watched Game of Thrones (nor do I want to, as I understand it's basically nonstop sex and violence) but I imagine Wheeler's worlds are essentially a clean version of that.

The most interesting part of the story, for me, was when Claire encountered magical objects that controlled her mind and heart, and she changed into someone else. She refused to give them up even though Ransom felt they were forbidden by the Fountain, because she came from a different country and had different religious beliefs -- she didn't believe in the Fountain. Meanwhile, the widow whom the Elder King had wanted Ransom to marry instead, the Duchess of Brythonica, Constance, made the comment that she felt her fate and Ransom's were somehow intwined--and Claire had the same feeling about them too, which drove some of her jealousy. I imagine this is a setup for a later book in the series because it was never explained. Ransom discovered the Wizr set which governs the fate of nations, and managed to steal it in the nick of time with the help of the Fountain. The magic and the relationships, set in the backdrop of political intrigue, always keeps me hooked on Wheelers' series.
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83 reviews4 followers
August 21, 2021
Lady's Ransom is a great installment in the First Argentine's series. The books fall under a historical fantasy type genre. The Kingfountian World is mirrored after a medieval England with castles, knights, and kings. There is a magic system to this world but it is limited to a few chosen people. The magic system is "faith based" and grants powers to those who honor the fountain. There are characters who are "fountain blessed" that do acts of evil and are a corruption of the "magic" and faith. The really interesting thing about Jeff Wheeler books is that all of his worlds are subtly connected. There are hints of the medium and Muirwood in this installment of the series! I was very happy to see another connection to his other works. He is AMAZING at this.

Our main character, Ransom, is such a noble and honorable man. He always does the right thing even if it brings him trouble in his personal life with Claire. Claire was not my favorite character in this book and I was very unhappy with her at times!

Without giving spoilers, I'll say that this is another great work by Jeff Wheeler! I love the tie ins to his other series and worlds. I love how everything to do with magic is connected to a "faith" based system and the wielders of the natural magic adhere to some code of morality. I like that the protagonists are usually a corruption of the faith and wield a dark/cursed type power. I like that this Argentines series is giving us a backstory for his previously published Kingfountain books! Jeff Wheeler is an amazing author and I love and read anything he publishes.
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4 reviews1 follower
September 7, 2021
I thoroughly enjoy the storyline of Ransom and Claire. The Kingfountain series is my all-time favorite Wheeler series, so learning the back story for much of that is enjoyable as well. As usual for Jeff, this is a story I can get into, and I can wholeheartedly give it to my daughter to read, knowing that it is a clean and appropriate story for most any age.

The poisoner portion of these books is right up my alley. I have always enjoyed following the "crazies" from the PIsan School, and this book dances around that part of the Kingfountain stories as well. Maybe it is because I have a secret obsession with being a skilled and fountain-blessed assassin... :) At any rate, I really like the twist that this arc provides.

Contrary to some of reviews of other books in this series, I like the journal entries from Claire. I read where someone felt these provided nothing to the story, but I highly disagree! I think they bring a personal side to the story and provide insights into Claire's life and personality. Not to mention, they are often funny and remind me of my fiery, red-headed sister-in-law. Seeing Claire's flaws and strengths fleshed out makes the story more "believable." Jeff's characters are not the larger-than-life superheroes seen in so many fantasy novels, but they are flawed and very human characters that are easier to which to relate.

Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. It was another book I just could not put down, as with most every Wheeler novel. I would highly recommend this book for children and adults alike.
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553 reviews
June 26, 2021
I’ve really enjoyed this series so I was excited to return to this world and catch up with Ransom. I would warn you I was very bored and seriously worried about finishing this book at first. Generally one of the things I like best about this author is his pacing which always keeps the story moving forward and easily keeps me rapt. I’ve found he’s always improving as a writer. Unfortunately I was very put off by his writing of Ransom and his wife as overly eager and overly affectionate newlyweds. The writing felt very juvenile and off. It made me want one of them locked back up in a tower so I could actually care about them again! I kept putting the book down and had no interest in reading it which is a huge change as I normally I can’t book the books by this author down. I’m glad I didn’t give up though as once you get passed that awful honeymoon part the story picks up and doesn’t slow down. If you have enjoyed this series than its worth getting through the early chapters. There are more glimpses of things that were explained in a lot more detail in his other books so if you want more answers and understanding you should check out his earlier series. Ransom is a great character and I’ve enjoyed all of his trials and burdens as he fulfills his duties. I will be sorry to see his story find to an end with the next book in the series but I am very eager to read it! I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
4 reviews1 follower
August 25, 2021
I was given an ARC by author:Jeff Wheeler to give an honest review.

This book is the next in the First Argentines series. You can read the books out of order, Wheeler’s weaves in the back story with finesse. However, reading this book after Knight’s Ransom and Warrior’s Ransom makes this current book more enjoyable.

The story is extremely enjoyable, as one has come to expect of Jeff Wheeler. This definitely is a fast read.

The world building is superlative. The story traces the trajectory of Ransom’s career in the absence of the king. Since Ransom’s fountain magic is enhanced because of his loyalty, this is a tricky situation. All characters have come into their own. The dynamics between him and Claire takes on a new dimension as their relationship enters a new phase. As usual, all fight scenes are very well detailed, realistic and extremely well done.
However this book is unusual in that sometimes the language is not as tight as for the previous Wheeler books. I glossed over a few parts of the book. Another aspect that I missed was the further development of Claire’s character. This book did have more about Claire, and while there were some chapters from her POV, much of the insight into her characters were still from excerpts of her diary. That said, I still am excited about this series and await the next installment. Also I cant wait for the release of the audio book and Kate Rudd’s narration which I definitely am going to buy!
128 reviews
September 23, 2023
I really love these books. It’s so wonderful how Jeff Wheeler has woven together English legends and history, and fantasy.

In the series set later, he has loosely referenced Arthurian legends. In this series, he has taken pages out of English history. He writes a fanciful account of “Ransom” who’s given name is Marshall, whose life is patterned after the great English knight and Earl, William Marshall 1146-1219. He served 5 English kings, Henry ll, and his sons Henry (died in battle against his father), Richard l The Lionhearted (he was a much loved king, but went in a foolish crusade and was captured and held for ransom in his return, died as a result of an arrow which hit him from impossibly far away-he and his knights were said to be laughing the archer), the odious King John (who was made to sign the Magna Carta by his nobles who were in revolt against his bad self- and Marshall also served Henry lll, John’s son. Eleanor of Aquitaine was wife of King Henry ll, and was at odds with him over how he treated their sons. He imprisoned her for years.
There are many more parallels.
There are some great books written about the Earl if you are interested.
This series is beautifully written and the characters are well drawn. I’ll miss it when I finish the next book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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97 reviews2 followers
August 5, 2021
This was an excellent installment to the the First Argentine Series. Ransom is such a strong lead character who is morally bound to his duty to his kingdom, his wife and family, and the beliefs that drive him. Ransom has faced many trials throughout this series but his relationship with Claire is tested in this book. We are woven into the strain on their relationship that many couples would face in the circumstances of war. The character development and the suspense of impeding conflicts had me flipping through pages as quickly as possible. My only minor critique is that I feel Ransom was being pulled to all ends of the world in this book (vs the main plot staying near or further developing all of the characters we want to hear about). I truly care about all of the characters in this series. I cry, I laugh, I sympathize.. I just connect with all of them in general.

Small revelations in this book have led me to believe there may be some character connections within the original kingfountain series? I hope this will be further developed in the next book. Regardless can’t wait to read it!!!
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660 reviews42 followers
July 25, 2021
ARC from NetGalley

4.5 stars

Another excellent entry in the series. Poor Ransom barely gets to sit down to eat before he's got someone telling him there's another proverbial dinner party he needs to attend. He does get some modicum of happiness, which I'm glad for. I'm also glad James pulled his head out of his ass, but my eyes are narrowed in the direction of the next book. I cannot trust the man, though I do love a good redemption. Speaking of redemption, the ending was slightly dismaying. I really hope it isn't true. Lord, don't saddle us with For this reason, I kind of dread the next book, and I sort of don't want to read it. This character, I do not want redeemed. The only way I will be happy is if he is killed off in some humiliating way like the little bitch deserves.
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