I first read The Assistant in 2010 or 2011 and quickly consumed all the Walser I could get my hands on. The Walk, Kleist in Thun, Helbling's Story, The Assistant, and The Robber are all works that are tattooed on my soul. All timers. Anyway, I became vaguely aware along the course of my reading that the translator was writing a biography. Finally having read it, the end result is good if also quite frustrating. I don't think I'm alone there, as Bernofsky also seems frustrated by the gaping lack of information (apparently) about her subject.
This is a great biography of Walser as an artist. The biography does an admirable, sobering, and I think necessary, job of excising most of the individualist romanticism associated Walser's life and shows it for what it was-- a pretty rough and merciless time, all things considered. Living that kind of Art Life, even back in the early 20th century coming from an even middle class background, chews you up and spits you out in several pieces. However, I disagree with the book's assertion that Walser's life "represents a rejection of and resistance to the pernicious commodification of contemporary life." Walser wanted to be acknowledged as a great writer, he had a massive ego and believed he was entitled (and I agree with him, he was!) to the fame, recognition, and money that came with it, even as he contradicted those feelings in his isolating and manic actions. Any rejection of the desire for these things came out of a place of suffering and self preservation, not some noble ethic. Those motivations are usually applied later like a balm, itself a form of self preservation.
So what the book does less effectively then is give a sense of Robert Walser, the man. I mean this guy was really, really weird-- but here, the weirdness is always kept at arm's length, his very often questionable/pretty bad behavior is as well. As a reader I felt removed from it, like I was being suddenly swept out of the room, or like Walser was being protected from the biography revealing too much. We just get quick flashes, the door opening, revealing its strange cutaway, and then shutting to be opened again at a later time. His strange behavior, even criticisms of his character, are often depicted through direct quotes, often from letters or interviews, which are more often than not going to be passing reminiscences, not very detailed. So it lacks analysis. Of course, most of this can most likely be chalked up to the fact that so little is actually known about the man. Specifics of his life are very sparse, so I don't blame Bernofsky-- but given these circumstances, instead of the countless rhetorical questions addresses to the reader, I wouldn't have minded some very educated speculation now and again. Not ideal for a biography perhaps, but then again neither are questions like "Was he hiding?" or "Did he even own an eraser?" or "What did he mean?" or "What happened to him in the German capital?" directed at the reader so why not do a little hypothesizing?