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248 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 8, 2020
But I didn't like Amy and Victor's story much. I like the broody hero - and Victor was one big brooder. Amy, on the other hand, was just too perky. So much so that it felt forced. Those constant "oohs" when she got excited about something new got tired. Fine, she wanted to make friends with everyone, but also for everyone to like her. She was a people pleaser and yet . I just couldn't see Victor falling for that.
Coming from a small town, Amy is unworldly and often childlike in action. (Sorry, adult women should not like unicorns.) But sometimes, she also came across as someone with a mental age of a child, which made all the sex pretty disturbing.
There was a lot of detail of the food everyone ate, which is nice to read, but I can't believe that there were common things that Amy had never eaten... like mushrooms on burgers?!
The lovefest began quite quickly, but there was very little real bonding, let alone a spark. Amy and Victor didn't have any deep conversations and most of the time, we are told what happened, not shown.
The next day, Victor cut the grass.
Strictly speaking, he probably didn’t need to cut the grass...When he turned off the lawn mower, he glanced next door, and he couldn’t help the pleasure that swelled in him when he saw Amy staring at him, her lips parted.