I really wanted to like this book and give it a higher rating. I kept trying. One of the reasons I like reading a lot is to get lost in the story. Setting the scene helps that a lot, but I feel like Foster lacks a bit here. She gives names of towns, but doesn’t really give you a context of where the story takes place, making it a little difficult to picture in my mind. Eventually, I just decided that, being a Canadian author, the story must take place in North America. Therefore, I am picturing the landscape of Northern Montana, Alberta Canada area. Next up for me, the storyline. The family lives in a dystopian world, completely different than what we know in modern day. I had trouble determining what time era this was set in. It has to be more modern because one of the characters has a cell phone, but there is no clear definition of this.
The story dives right into the point, The Captive, which is fine, but it seems to be a little lost at first. I spent so much time trying to figure out what was going on that it was hard to enjoy the story. The characters - Holly, the daughter, what a pain. She is attitude and teenager all wrapped into one little package. Lots of sass at every opportunity. The constant pushback got a old quickly. Milo, he is so weak. He is definitely a follower and not a leader. At the same time, I cannot imagine what it is like to be lied to and kept in the dark for so many years and finding out the person you love is not who you thought they were. Brooke, the complete flip on her personality was a little head spinning. If she just communicated with Milo, all of this could have been resolved and they could have worked together for their family. But, Brooke didn’t give Milo the opportunity, instead choosing to continue to lie to him. But I guess had she just communicated, we wouldn’t have a book.
After the story tried to take a turn, it felt like more of the same patterns. Finally we come to a "are they dead?" part related to multiple characters, including a chapter walking us through a fantasy world. I had a feeling the book was going to head in one direction and was so glad it didn't. I would have been rather angry had it. Then the ending. It just ends. No closure, no finality to the story, it just ends. Almost like the author ran out of time mid thought.
I wanted to give the book 2 stars, but decided to be generous with 3 since I felt compelled to keep reading just to see what would happen. The ending irritated me enough to wish I could give it 2.5 stars.