Okay, so normally if I don’t read at least fifty or so pages, I don’t bother with a review, but ugh, I had some thoughts I need to share. One, I shouldn’t have bothered because I’m not into thrillers and in those early pages, there wasn’t anything else to attract my attention.
What is it with the trope of having a main character who is so messed up? Esp. one who works in law enforcement. I’m very much over the tortured soul becomes federal agent thing. Don’t they have to go through rigorous background checks and psychological exams? The main character here comes across as a ticking timebomb or maybe a mental breakdown looking for a place to happen.
Speaking of overused tropes, don’t even get me started on what’s her name’s perfect looks. Five foot six, blonde hair, green eyes, runner’s physique, trilingual, blah, blah, blah. I guess because she’s mentally flawed, she doesn’t have to have any physical flaws? I hate when characters are described as being so perfectly attractive – sounds fake but okay. I thought the boyfriend leaving after buying himself a watch (so he was conveniently spotted a jewelry store) was another eye roll put in just to break the girl’s heart so she can get together with a hot agent later.
And then there’s a character named Lee Grant. And she’s referred to as either Agent Lee or Grant. That’s backwards, but okay. And really, she’s named after two civil war generals? That’s dumb.
All and all, skip the hell out of this one. Trust me.