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Mr Darcy: A Man with a Plan: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Fitzwilliam Darcy was a man in despair following his disastrous proposal in Kent. If only he had done this made, or said that! If only he had made more of an effort?
Was too late?
Perhaps it was not for soon after that fateful April day, Darcy unexpectedly sees Elizabeth in London. He seeks her out again, ostensibly to ensure she now thinks better of him. He quickly decides that he wants to win her affections.
It would require effort, perhaps a great effort, but Elizabeth Bennet was worth fighting for.
But in order to do so, he would need a plan.
Perhaps it was not for soon after that fateful April day, Darcy unexpectedly sees Elizabeth in London. He seeks her out again, ostensibly to ensure she now thinks better of him. He quickly decides that he wants to win her affections.
It would require effort, perhaps a great effort, but Elizabeth Bennet was worth fighting for.
But in order to do so, he would need a plan.
92 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 7, 2020
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Lucy Marin
32 books91 followersLucy Marin developed a love for reading at a young age and whiled away many hours imagining how stories might continue or what would happen if there was a change in the circumstances faced by the protagonists. After reading her first Austen novel, a life-long ardent admiration was borne. Lucy was introduced to the world of Austen variations after stumbling across one at a used bookstore while on holiday in London. This led to the discovery of the online world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction and, soon after, she picked up her pen and began to transfer the stories in her head to paper.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
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August 5, 2022
Don't be ashamed to fail. Be too proud to cease trying. ~ Minna Thomas Antrim
Rejected! Refused! Angry! Agitated!
And then … a second chance appears.
Darcy accidentally encounters Elizabeth Bennet in London after their disastrous quarrel in Hunsford. Can their relationship improve? How could it become any worse?
Determined to court and win his beloved, Darcy begins with Bingley’s separation from Jane Bennet. He confronts Bingley and searches for that man’s current feelings.
To describe Bingley in this story, I would use the immortal words of Charles Schultz speaking for Charlie Brown: “I’ll be wishy one day and washy the next.”
Not wishy-washy, however, is Elizabeth Bennet who is as stubborn about agreeing to marriage as Darcy is determined to marry. Her fear of her parents’ marital union is great.
Like all books from Quills and Quartos, this is well-written and edited. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
I received an ARC of this novella with no promise of a review, good or bad.
You can move a lot of water with a thimble. ~ Martin H. Fischer
Rejected! Refused! Angry! Agitated!
And then … a second chance appears.
Darcy accidentally encounters Elizabeth Bennet in London after their disastrous quarrel in Hunsford. Can their relationship improve? How could it become any worse?
Determined to court and win his beloved, Darcy begins with Bingley’s separation from Jane Bennet. He confronts Bingley and searches for that man’s current feelings.
To describe Bingley in this story, I would use the immortal words of Charles Schultz speaking for Charlie Brown: “I’ll be wishy one day and washy the next.”
Not wishy-washy, however, is Elizabeth Bennet who is as stubborn about agreeing to marriage as Darcy is determined to marry. Her fear of her parents’ marital union is great.
Like all books from Quills and Quartos, this is well-written and edited. I recommend it to anyone who enjoys JAFF.
I received an ARC of this novella with no promise of a review, good or bad.
You can move a lot of water with a thimble. ~ Martin H. Fischer
July 8, 2020
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
Ms. Marin is a talented writer, and she's penned a thoughtful Pride and Prejudice variation here showing the emotional results of Mr. Darcy's insulting marriage proposal to Elizabeth Bennet.
Mr. Darcy's disappointment at Elizabeth Bennet's refusal raises his ire and pricks his pride. When he presents her with his letter, it's important to him that she regret the shameful way she threw him off. As she reads it, he hides behind a tree to watch her reaction, which doesn't feel as gratifying as he'd expected.
The following week, he spots Elizabeth in London with Mrs. Gardiner - she's extended her stay in Cheapside when Jane returned to Longbourn. Darcy hopes, if he can determine that she thinks more kindly about him, he'll have some closure and be able to move on to a future without her.
The point of view shifts between Darcy's and Elizabeth's. First Darcy, in incremental steps, keeps revising his plan and what he needs from Elizabeth in order to feel satisfied. Then Elizabeth, who's been thoroughly bewildered by his unpredictable behavior, needs to come to terms with her deep-seated fear of marriage based on what she's seen in her parents' relationship.
It's primarily a psychological study of the two. I applaud the realistic, non-sensational approach here and appreciate the high quality of writing.
I do wish there was a BIT of drama. I kept wanting some precipitating event to inspire a change in attitude, but instead it continues along on a very low-key path throughout. I often criticize books for going overboard on angst, but this one could use more.
Overall though, this is a beautifully written story about two reasonable people who clearly belong together.
I received an ARC with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise.
Ms. Marin is a talented writer, and she's penned a thoughtful Pride and Prejudice variation here showing the emotional results of Mr. Darcy's insulting marriage proposal to Elizabeth Bennet.
Mr. Darcy's disappointment at Elizabeth Bennet's refusal raises his ire and pricks his pride. When he presents her with his letter, it's important to him that she regret the shameful way she threw him off. As she reads it, he hides behind a tree to watch her reaction, which doesn't feel as gratifying as he'd expected.
The following week, he spots Elizabeth in London with Mrs. Gardiner - she's extended her stay in Cheapside when Jane returned to Longbourn. Darcy hopes, if he can determine that she thinks more kindly about him, he'll have some closure and be able to move on to a future without her.
The point of view shifts between Darcy's and Elizabeth's. First Darcy, in incremental steps, keeps revising his plan and what he needs from Elizabeth in order to feel satisfied. Then Elizabeth, who's been thoroughly bewildered by his unpredictable behavior, needs to come to terms with her deep-seated fear of marriage based on what she's seen in her parents' relationship.
It's primarily a psychological study of the two. I applaud the realistic, non-sensational approach here and appreciate the high quality of writing.
I do wish there was a BIT of drama. I kept wanting some precipitating event to inspire a change in attitude, but instead it continues along on a very low-key path throughout. I often criticize books for going overboard on angst, but this one could use more.
Overall though, this is a beautifully written story about two reasonable people who clearly belong together.
I received an ARC with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise.
July 9, 2020
This is a short<100 pages, low angst book. Kudos for the author describing the Hunsford proposal as 'disastrous'.
In this version Darcy follows and observes Lizzy as she reads his letter (stalks?) and resolves to become a better man. Once Lizzy arrives in London Darcy does everything he can to maintain their acquaintance (stalks?)
Darcy is convinced he loves Lizzy and wants to spend the rest of his life with her. She is much less certain. He and Bingley hang around Meryton, he invites her to Pemberley. The Lydia /Wickham thing doesn't happen. She returns to Longbourn, he eventually returns Lizzy realizes she does love him The End.
In this version Darcy follows and observes Lizzy as she reads his letter (stalks?) and resolves to become a better man. Once Lizzy arrives in London Darcy does everything he can to maintain their acquaintance (stalks?)
Darcy is convinced he loves Lizzy and wants to spend the rest of his life with her. She is much less certain. He and Bingley hang around Meryton, he invites her to Pemberley. The Lydia /Wickham thing doesn't happen. She returns to Longbourn, he eventually returns Lizzy realizes she does love him The End.
June 23, 2020
This story ends at 96% on Kindle. I received an ARC of this book with no strings attached.
Darcy makes a plan after Elizabeth so vehemently turned down his proposal at Hunsford. She, wanting to settle her mind and spirit as she now finds shame in how she responded to his offer decides to spend some time with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner in London. Ironically Darcy comes upon her as she shops with her aunt and overhears their plans for the next day and so he is there with Georgiana. He succeeds in being in her presence several more times as well as during a dinner together. Elizabeth resists his overtures at first but when he makes clear that he is not going to stop with his plans to being near to her as much as possible so that she can come to know the reformed man she begins to take note of the changes and even to anticipate seeing him. She does travel to Derbyshire with the Gardiner while he travels back to Hertfordshire with Bingley. I don’t have to tell you how it all works out. However Lydia plays no part and Jane comes to judge Bingley by his actions…not his false words.
This was a pleasant read with no angst…just a thought as to when Elizabeth is going to come to the realization that he is best fitted to be her husband.
Darcy makes a plan after Elizabeth so vehemently turned down his proposal at Hunsford. She, wanting to settle her mind and spirit as she now finds shame in how she responded to his offer decides to spend some time with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner in London. Ironically Darcy comes upon her as she shops with her aunt and overhears their plans for the next day and so he is there with Georgiana. He succeeds in being in her presence several more times as well as during a dinner together. Elizabeth resists his overtures at first but when he makes clear that he is not going to stop with his plans to being near to her as much as possible so that she can come to know the reformed man she begins to take note of the changes and even to anticipate seeing him. She does travel to Derbyshire with the Gardiner while he travels back to Hertfordshire with Bingley. I don’t have to tell you how it all works out. However Lydia plays no part and Jane comes to judge Bingley by his actions…not his false words.
This was a pleasant read with no angst…just a thought as to when Elizabeth is going to come to the realization that he is best fitted to be her husband.
June 23, 2020
“… you are stubborn, too stubborn for your own good at times.” Aunt Gardiner, a quote from the book.
This book is part of the Quills & Quartos Publishing Summer Short Reads. I volunteered to read an ARC with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. Rating: Clean: 4.5 stars
This story was a touchy one for those who love a good story with our D&E. There are so many things that I liked… but there was that fine line where things that bothered me began to creep in. We had a lot of page-time between our dear couple. That part I liked. I also liked this portrayal of Darcy. He was trying so hard. Oh, I just loved him. That poor boy was moving heaven and earth to please our girl and jumping over every hurdle thrown in his way. Every time he was on the page, I smiled. There were sparks flying all over the place and I could feel the heat from my reading device every time he looked at her. Then I would look at Elizabeth and this was where I ground to a halt. This had to be the most obstinate, headstrong Elizabeth that I have ever read. She frustrated the time out of me and I wanted to shake her silly and yell, ‘what is your problem?’ Whew! That was why I chose the above quote. GRRR!
I tried to give her some slack, I really did. I finally realized that she was terrified of getting married. Marriage was forever in her era and look at the examples before her. The Gardiner marriage, she could admire. But her parents… what a sad situation before their children. When she and Darcy FINALLY talked, she explained her parents’ marriage to him. I slowly began to see where her head was coming from but she was also denying her heart. This took way too long and only afforded us minimal time with them at the end. Sheeze, I wanted a bit more D&E time. This was probably me… I just didn’t have the patience to wait for her head to come to terms with her heart. I grew tired of her always wanting to be alone so she could think and figure it out.
The ending chapter settled them in their HEA. The situation with Jane and Bingley was a bit different. Not bad, but different. I highly recommend it.
This book is part of the Quills & Quartos Publishing Summer Short Reads. I volunteered to read an ARC with no expectations of a review. The views and opinions expressed are my own. Rating: Clean: 4.5 stars
This story was a touchy one for those who love a good story with our D&E. There are so many things that I liked… but there was that fine line where things that bothered me began to creep in. We had a lot of page-time between our dear couple. That part I liked. I also liked this portrayal of Darcy. He was trying so hard. Oh, I just loved him. That poor boy was moving heaven and earth to please our girl and jumping over every hurdle thrown in his way. Every time he was on the page, I smiled. There were sparks flying all over the place and I could feel the heat from my reading device every time he looked at her. Then I would look at Elizabeth and this was where I ground to a halt. This had to be the most obstinate, headstrong Elizabeth that I have ever read. She frustrated the time out of me and I wanted to shake her silly and yell, ‘what is your problem?’ Whew! That was why I chose the above quote. GRRR!
I tried to give her some slack, I really did. I finally realized that she was terrified of getting married. Marriage was forever in her era and look at the examples before her. The Gardiner marriage, she could admire. But her parents… what a sad situation before their children. When she and Darcy FINALLY talked, she explained her parents’ marriage to him. I slowly began to see where her head was coming from but she was also denying her heart. This took way too long and only afforded us minimal time with them at the end. Sheeze, I wanted a bit more D&E time. This was probably me… I just didn’t have the patience to wait for her head to come to terms with her heart. I grew tired of her always wanting to be alone so she could think and figure it out.
The ending chapter settled them in their HEA. The situation with Jane and Bingley was a bit different. Not bad, but different. I highly recommend it.
July 6, 2020
My Rating: 4.5 *
"SHE HAD DARED REFUSE HIM! (quote from the book)
We all know the disaster Mr. Darcy made of his proposal to Miss Elizabeth Bennet. But in this novella, we get to see a different perspective from both sides. For Elizabeth has a dilemma and Mr. Darcy is 'a man with a plan'. One is blind the other resolute.
"If the goal is worth attaining...the effort is as nothing." (quote from the book)
Not only does Mr. Darcy have a plan, but the execution of it was well done. I just loved this Darcy. Elizabeth is frustrated by Mr. Darcy's presence when he first 'accidentally' runs into her and continues to find ways to be together. She needs time to work through her thoughts. There were moments, when I was sounding like Lady Catherine as I spoke out loud "Obstinate, headstrong, girl!" And, there were times, where I could appreciate her reluctance. Aunt Gardiner was such a wise woman.
"Regret is bitter pill with which to live." (quote from the book)
I thoroughly enjoyed this novella, for it not only looks at Elizabeth and Darcy's relationship, it touches on Jane and Bingley's. I had to laugh at Darcy as he offers advice to Bingley on marriage! But does he take it?
So if you are pressed for time, but need your Darcy and Elizabeth fix, I highly recommend this short story.
I was fortunate to receive an ARC of this book with no expectation for a review.
July 7, 2020
This is a short read of 10 chapters but it has the feel of a longer story. Following the disastrous proposal, Darcy hands Elizabeth his letter the following day but instead of leaving, he hides just out view to watch her reading, hoping to see her realise how mistaken she'd been in refusing him. But he doesn't get his satisfaction and doesn't quite realise why. We then get a shift in the timeline when he meets Elizabeth in London on her way home from Kent and he puts some serious effort into trying to win her over.
I really really enjoyed this book - we spend time with Darcy or Elizabeth and see their perspectives changing. I didn't really like sneaky Darcy to begin with and wondered where we'd be going with quite a spiteful start... but when he starts speaking more openly and really trying his best, you can't help but love him! The majority of the book is about Elizabeth trying to make her mind up about him.... she is right there on the brink of being too stubborn for her own good and making so much hard work of it, you start to wonder whether she actually deserves him. She keeps saying she wants time on her own to think... let's be honest, in this time period there would be ALOT of time doing nothing that would be perfect for thinking time. It's a bit of a naff excuse I think but one we see used quite often to bring about delay. Anyway... I think being a short story, she just about gets away with it and we do get some insight into things she worries about and it is lovely to see them start talking about these things together...
Being a short story, it all felt a bit... short... at the end. I'd have like a bit more of seeing these two happy as goodness knows poor old Darcy had to work for it!! Despite bring a short story, Jane and Bingley also get a story of their own that doesn't go as we might expect.
Overall this is probably a 4.5 for me.... Elizabeth was annoying at times but I can't deny I really enjoyed the story and read it in one sitting and was not putting it down till I'd finished for anything!... always the sign of a really good read!!
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher with no promise of a favourable review.
I really really enjoyed this book - we spend time with Darcy or Elizabeth and see their perspectives changing. I didn't really like sneaky Darcy to begin with and wondered where we'd be going with quite a spiteful start... but when he starts speaking more openly and really trying his best, you can't help but love him! The majority of the book is about Elizabeth trying to make her mind up about him.... she is right there on the brink of being too stubborn for her own good and making so much hard work of it, you start to wonder whether she actually deserves him. She keeps saying she wants time on her own to think... let's be honest, in this time period there would be ALOT of time doing nothing that would be perfect for thinking time. It's a bit of a naff excuse I think but one we see used quite often to bring about delay. Anyway... I think being a short story, she just about gets away with it and we do get some insight into things she worries about and it is lovely to see them start talking about these things together...
Being a short story, it all felt a bit... short... at the end. I'd have like a bit more of seeing these two happy as goodness knows poor old Darcy had to work for it!! Despite bring a short story, Jane and Bingley also get a story of their own that doesn't go as we might expect.
Overall this is probably a 4.5 for me.... Elizabeth was annoying at times but I can't deny I really enjoyed the story and read it in one sitting and was not putting it down till I'd finished for anything!... always the sign of a really good read!!
I received a free copy of this book from the publisher with no promise of a favourable review.
June 13, 2023
A short story, but one which we get to see Darcy properly woo Elizabeth till she falls for him.
July 14, 2020
Why the 3 stars? I never felt E's love. I never felt it grow.
The other problem was the ending. I really dislike a quick wrap up ending just to let you know how the story worked out.
The other problem was the ending. I really dislike a quick wrap up ending just to let you know how the story worked out.
June 10, 2021
Resolute Darcy
Darcy and Lizzy run into each other in London after ‘The Proposal’. He decides to change himself and try to change how Lizzy feels about him. Well written, fun read.
Lizzy wants to hold on to her dislike and when that passes she is very worried getting into a bad marriage like her parents’.
Darcy will not take no for an answer so at times he seems like a bit of a stalker. Goodness knows there are lots of variation where a man of power and connection with a bad character forces himself on Lizzy. Darcy, of course, is not like that…but Lizzy doesn’t know that.
In the end there is a good HEA to enjoy. There is nice change of story arc for Jane and Bingley, which was fun. Not a huge plot thread in the story though.
Darcy and Lizzy run into each other in London after ‘The Proposal’. He decides to change himself and try to change how Lizzy feels about him. Well written, fun read.
Lizzy wants to hold on to her dislike and when that passes she is very worried getting into a bad marriage like her parents’.
Darcy will not take no for an answer so at times he seems like a bit of a stalker. Goodness knows there are lots of variation where a man of power and connection with a bad character forces himself on Lizzy. Darcy, of course, is not like that…but Lizzy doesn’t know that.
In the end there is a good HEA to enjoy. There is nice change of story arc for Jane and Bingley, which was fun. Not a huge plot thread in the story though.
July 15, 2021
A cute short story that picks up about a week after the Hunsford proposal with a very persistent Darcy and an Elizabeth who is willing to admit she was wrong, but reluctant to follow her heart. I enjoyed seeing Darcy make an effort to actually court Lizzy. She is so reluctant for so long, but there were many sweet moments between them and a few straightforward conversations. I didn’t like the Bingley and Jane storyline, but that’s just a personal preference.
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July 10, 2020
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This book was fun to read, but I got tired of Elizabeth 's fear of being married because of parents. Darcy wisely explained that her parents ' marriage didn't have to be the way that it was. I think that he insinuated that Mr.Bennet should and could have taken more interest in helping his wife adjust to being a gentlewoman.
This book was fun to read, but I got tired of Elizabeth 's fear of being married because of parents. Darcy wisely explained that her parents ' marriage didn't have to be the way that it was. I think that he insinuated that Mr.Bennet should and could have taken more interest in helping his wife adjust to being a gentlewoman.
July 12, 2021
I enjoyed this author's previous book, so I was excited to see this story pop up in the Quills & Quartos upcoming novella series. This short story focuses on the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth, and we get to see how Darcy goes about proving himself to Elizabeth after the disastrous proposal at Hunsford. It's always fun getting to read from Darcy's POV; it makes the love story more complete for me. Minimal angst, although Elizabeth does seem to try to throw roadblocks up everywhere until she finally accepts Darcy in a lovely reunion scene.
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Bingley was even more of a doormat than normal here, so I was glad when Jane recognized that he would not make her happy and she found true love elsewhere. I enjoy stories where Jane stands up for herself, so I really enjoyed this subplot.
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This was a well-written and enjoyable story, especially if you like books that focus on Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship without all the other distractions.
Received an ARC for an honest review.
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Bingley was even more of a doormat than normal here, so I was glad when Jane recognized that he would not make her happy and she found true love elsewhere. I enjoy stories where Jane stands up for herself, so I really enjoyed this subplot.
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This was a well-written and enjoyable story, especially if you like books that focus on Darcy and Elizabeth's relationship without all the other distractions.
Received an ARC for an honest review.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 29, 2020
In this Pride and Prejudice variation, Darcy makes an effort to win his lady love, Elizabeth Bennet. It is amazing what can happen if you try!
July 13, 2020
Elizabeth Bennet quote that pretty much sums up this book-
“I feel that—I know—I am questioning myself endlessly.”
I would rate this between a 3 and a 3.5. It is well written, but I started to tire of Elizabeth’s indecision & confusion which seemed to last way too long (endlessly in her own words) for such a confident & intelligent young woman.
There wasn’t much else going on to hold my interest. Overall, I did enjoy it, but Elizabeth was a bit too stubborn & hesitant and Darcy was a bit too much of a door mat. Maybe that’s not the right word, but even though he was in love, he was still a man of confidence, honor & pride and it’s hard to imagine he would pursue her so aggressively without some encouragement. Unfortunately, I started getting bored.
“I feel that—I know—I am questioning myself endlessly.”
I would rate this between a 3 and a 3.5. It is well written, but I started to tire of Elizabeth’s indecision & confusion which seemed to last way too long (endlessly in her own words) for such a confident & intelligent young woman.
There wasn’t much else going on to hold my interest. Overall, I did enjoy it, but Elizabeth was a bit too stubborn & hesitant and Darcy was a bit too much of a door mat. Maybe that’s not the right word, but even though he was in love, he was still a man of confidence, honor & pride and it’s hard to imagine he would pursue her so aggressively without some encouragement. Unfortunately, I started getting bored.
July 18, 2020
❤️ this Darcy ~ a man with a plan who is not just consistent, but witty and thoughtful.
January 1, 2022
This is what happens when Darcy doesn't learn his lesson.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 8, 2023
Good Story
I liked the new approach to the love story of Darcy and Elizabeth! The needed time to get to know each other and fall in love together. Loved the fact that Wickham was off Page and Caroline also. Good story.
I liked the new approach to the love story of Darcy and Elizabeth! The needed time to get to know each other and fall in love together. Loved the fact that Wickham was off Page and Caroline also. Good story.
December 16, 2021
Free on Amazon Dec 16th/17th to celebrate Jane Austen's birthday!
October 4, 2021
2.75 stars
(Note to self: you tried to review this.
But you couldn't remember any specifics of the plot outside of the synopsis.
In your defence, it's been over 2 weeks since you read it and it couldn't have made that much of an impact on you, since you clearly remember NOTHING about it.
And if that doesn't tell you about how much you actually enjoyed it (aka about how much of an afterthought it has come to be), then I don't know what will.
So in the unlikely event that you stumble across this book and are wondering if you've read it before and if it's worth a re-read, I implore you, Celeste, to instead choose a novel that you can actually remember.
Not just from a plot perspective, but from the reading experience itself.
One that played with your heartstrings, that made you notice your heart undergoing each individual palpitation; an elevating blood pressure riding the wave behind a rush of endorphins.
One that you can recall with perfect clarity, the whirl of emotions inhabiting you as you turned the page to each new chapter; every gasp, every sigh, every gripe, smile, and squeal.
One that made you fall in love with every single character (and out of love, and in and out and in again), that made you dream about all the unexplored cities or worlds worth visiting, and that made you wish you could experience all over again as if it was for the first time.
Pick up something that inspires you, that makes your heart feel that tiny little bit more fuller.
Not this.)
(Note to self: you tried to review this.
But you couldn't remember any specifics of the plot outside of the synopsis.
In your defence, it's been over 2 weeks since you read it and it couldn't have made that much of an impact on you, since you clearly remember NOTHING about it.
And if that doesn't tell you about how much you actually enjoyed it (aka about how much of an afterthought it has come to be), then I don't know what will.
So in the unlikely event that you stumble across this book and are wondering if you've read it before and if it's worth a re-read, I implore you, Celeste, to instead choose a novel that you can actually remember.
Not just from a plot perspective, but from the reading experience itself.
One that played with your heartstrings, that made you notice your heart undergoing each individual palpitation; an elevating blood pressure riding the wave behind a rush of endorphins.
One that you can recall with perfect clarity, the whirl of emotions inhabiting you as you turned the page to each new chapter; every gasp, every sigh, every gripe, smile, and squeal.
One that made you fall in love with every single character (and out of love, and in and out and in again), that made you dream about all the unexplored cities or worlds worth visiting, and that made you wish you could experience all over again as if it was for the first time.
Pick up something that inspires you, that makes your heart feel that tiny little bit more fuller.
Not this.)
July 8, 2020
Entertaining
Lucy Marin is a talented writer and storyteller. After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, Darcy sees Elizabeth in London, and begins a campaign to change her mind about him. The campaign goes on further at Longbourn and Pemberly, as Darcy follows wherever Elizabeth goes.
This is a sweet and low drama tale, where the only obstacle is Elizabeth herself. Elizabeth is at her most stubborn and prejudiced. For a good portion of the story, she holds on tightly to her initial feelings of disdain for Darcy, in spite of his letter to her, and in spite of the advice she gets from several of her relations. Darcy is single minded in his pursuit, and has no problem with groveling before her. I found the almost annoying, stalker like behavior of Darcy a little off putting, and too demeaning for him in the face of her continual rejection. I wanted him to have more self respect.
The sad side story about Jane and Bingley was, I felt, kind of an unnecessary downer. It was already depressing that Darcy had to work so hard for Elizabeth's favor, and I just didn't want any more bad news. Also, the summary at the end seemed like a rush job.
Everything turns out well, of course, and thank goodness for that. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it.
Lucy Marin is a talented writer and storyteller. After the disastrous proposal at Hunsford parsonage, Darcy sees Elizabeth in London, and begins a campaign to change her mind about him. The campaign goes on further at Longbourn and Pemberly, as Darcy follows wherever Elizabeth goes.
This is a sweet and low drama tale, where the only obstacle is Elizabeth herself. Elizabeth is at her most stubborn and prejudiced. For a good portion of the story, she holds on tightly to her initial feelings of disdain for Darcy, in spite of his letter to her, and in spite of the advice she gets from several of her relations. Darcy is single minded in his pursuit, and has no problem with groveling before her. I found the almost annoying, stalker like behavior of Darcy a little off putting, and too demeaning for him in the face of her continual rejection. I wanted him to have more self respect.
The sad side story about Jane and Bingley was, I felt, kind of an unnecessary downer. It was already depressing that Darcy had to work so hard for Elizabeth's favor, and I just didn't want any more bad news. Also, the summary at the end seemed like a rush job.
Everything turns out well, of course, and thank goodness for that. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it.
August 10, 2020
Mr Darcy: A Man with a Plan is a beautifully written Pride and Prejudice variation that is nonetheless not very angsty, or full of conflict. The main conflict seems to take place within Elizabeth Bennet's mind and heart as she attempts to resolve her feelings about Mr. Darcy. The story is changed from the original P&P so that Mr. Darcy decides very soon after his failed proposal at Hunsford to find a way to improve his behavior and convince Elizabeth that he's the man for her, and he approaches her while she is staying with the Gardiners in London before returning home. The story moves quickly from Kent to London, and later to Hertfordshire, and even to Pemberley.
There is less conflict here than even the original, which is a change from most P&P variations I've read lately. Most seem to exaggerate characters, events, problems. This one reduces all that down to one problem. Can Darcy convince Elizabeth that he's the man for her? Can she overcome all her past rancor against him and learn to love him?
Highly recommended for those who like a story with more thought and less action.
There is less conflict here than even the original, which is a change from most P&P variations I've read lately. Most seem to exaggerate characters, events, problems. This one reduces all that down to one problem. Can Darcy convince Elizabeth that he's the man for her? Can she overcome all her past rancor against him and learn to love him?
Highly recommended for those who like a story with more thought and less action.
April 22, 2021
After the failed proposal in Kent, Darcy happens to see Elizabeth, who extended her stay in London to come to terms with her feelings. Darcy develops a plan to show Elizabeth his better character hoping to gain her hand.
The plot here has real potential and there are some very sweet scenes where E and D develop a closeness that is missing in the original. That said, Darcy is pretty pushy with his plan. I was tempted to ditch this story bc it seemed that Darcy hadn’t learned that forcing his feelings on Elizabeth is not a display of real love, which would involve considering her feelings. At the beginning she honestly wants him to go away, but he won’t.
In the end, I think the author’s intent is to show Darcy as someone determined to demonstrate his improvement and convinced they could be happy, but I found it veered too close to being pushy and trying to wear her down. It is a shame because there are some very sweet scenes that I enjoyed, but I personally think Darcy did not demonstrate he was thinking of Elizabeth in this version.
The plot here has real potential and there are some very sweet scenes where E and D develop a closeness that is missing in the original. That said, Darcy is pretty pushy with his plan. I was tempted to ditch this story bc it seemed that Darcy hadn’t learned that forcing his feelings on Elizabeth is not a display of real love, which would involve considering her feelings. At the beginning she honestly wants him to go away, but he won’t.
In the end, I think the author’s intent is to show Darcy as someone determined to demonstrate his improvement and convinced they could be happy, but I found it veered too close to being pushy and trying to wear her down. It is a shame because there are some very sweet scenes that I enjoyed, but I personally think Darcy did not demonstrate he was thinking of Elizabeth in this version.
July 7, 2020
Stubborn!
Enjoying the summer short stories being released by Quills and Quartos Publishing. This one by the author of Being Mrs. Darcy, which I highly recommend if you haven’t already had the pleasure.
In this short, zero angst read, it seems a story of determination and stubbornness. For Darcy, it’s his determination and persistence in his efforts to make Elizabeth believe his love for her and wanting to marry her. For Elizabeth, it’s her stubbornness, and may I add obtuseness in believing his love for must be impossible in view of what was said on both their parts at Hunsford. After she is told to listen to her heart instead of her head, she finally finds her way to a HEA. In the meantime, Jane and Bingley are also finding their way to the truth about their own relationship. Good story, but some emotion seemed lacking and it didn’t move me much.
Enjoying the summer short stories being released by Quills and Quartos Publishing. This one by the author of Being Mrs. Darcy, which I highly recommend if you haven’t already had the pleasure.
In this short, zero angst read, it seems a story of determination and stubbornness. For Darcy, it’s his determination and persistence in his efforts to make Elizabeth believe his love for her and wanting to marry her. For Elizabeth, it’s her stubbornness, and may I add obtuseness in believing his love for must be impossible in view of what was said on both their parts at Hunsford. After she is told to listen to her heart instead of her head, she finally finds her way to a HEA. In the meantime, Jane and Bingley are also finding their way to the truth about their own relationship. Good story, but some emotion seemed lacking and it didn’t move me much.
July 12, 2020
Oh my goodness, what a charming novella! Darcy's adoration of Elizabeth is particularly endearing in this sweet story. He's trying so hard to be the stoic gentleman, while also following her around like a lovesick schoolboy. Elizabeth was incredibly stubborn, but I could certainly understand her reluctance. I adored how our dear couple gradually learned to understand each other. A lovely, quick read for Pride and Prejudice fans.
January 16, 2023
A Plan and Lots of Fortitude
This variation stresses the stubbornness of Elizabeth, but does finally explain it. She thought she had ample reason to despise Mr Darcy but his letter proved otherwise.
But she refused to accept that he was truly different from what their first impression showed. Could she grow to love him? It took her most of the book to find out. But Darcy never gave up trying to win her good opinion and ultimately her love.
Nicely done.
This variation stresses the stubbornness of Elizabeth, but does finally explain it. She thought she had ample reason to despise Mr Darcy but his letter proved otherwise.
But she refused to accept that he was truly different from what their first impression showed. Could she grow to love him? It took her most of the book to find out. But Darcy never gave up trying to win her good opinion and ultimately her love.
Nicely done.
March 10, 2023
Wonderful Alternative P&P
I love how this story concentrated on Elizabeth and Darcy. Yes Jane and Bingley were part of the story but didn’t take center view.
This story is about transformation, forgiveness, and determination (Darcy) to be better. It was romantic and not silly with too much stubbornness from Elizabeth or too much prejudice from Darcy.
Sweet, simple, and clean romance. I recommend this story.
I love how this story concentrated on Elizabeth and Darcy. Yes Jane and Bingley were part of the story but didn’t take center view.
This story is about transformation, forgiveness, and determination (Darcy) to be better. It was romantic and not silly with too much stubbornness from Elizabeth or too much prejudice from Darcy.
Sweet, simple, and clean romance. I recommend this story.
March 27, 2024
I enjoyed this novella by Lucy Marin. Ms. Marin is able to capture the characters of both Elizabeth and Darcy in her story. This was a unique Pride and Prejudice variation with Darcy learning how to win Elizabeth's affections after his first awful proposal in Hunsord. I would say this novella showed a determined Darcy and I liked how Ms. Marin showed this character trait of Mr. Darcy. I highly recommend this to all JAFF lovers.
July 9, 2020
Interesting and enjoyable
Truly enjoyed reading this variation. This was more the point of view of Elizabeth and how she realized how much she loved Fitzwilliam Darcy. Most interesting point is Jane and her choices. I loved how this author made her more assertive. Highly recommended to read
Truly enjoyed reading this variation. This was more the point of view of Elizabeth and how she realized how much she loved Fitzwilliam Darcy. Most interesting point is Jane and her choices. I loved how this author made her more assertive. Highly recommended to read
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