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600 pages, Paperback
First published July 16, 2013
1.The action is interrupted numerous times to tell very long back stories of the characters. I simply didn’t care. Just get to the damn story.
2. Silva tucks lots of history lessons into the book. That’s great, but if you can’t do it without interrupting the flow of the story, then fucking don’t do it.
3. The characters are merely cardboard cut-outs of people. They barely make an impression on you and after 400 pages you really don’t give a damn about any of them.
4. Dialogue is HORRIBLE. Cringe-worthy. As is the one sex scene with Allon and Chiara. Yikes. Damn, man, read some bodice busters and take notes.
5. The characters don’t have personalities, they have tics. Shamron twisting his fucking Zippo lighter: “two turns to the right, two turns to the left.”
6. Silva also often repeats phrases. When he did it in the first chapter, I liked it. But then he did it so often that I became annoyed. Someone would ask Allon if he wanted champagne and he’d say no, it gives me a headache. Then at the end of the chapter, Silva would repeat the phrase: “Gabriel doesn’t drink champagne. It gives him headaches.” I’m guessing it’s supposed to be ominous, but it’s not.
7. Silva seems to think his readers are idiots because over-explains just about everything. And those last 30 pages or so are completely unnecessary. Why the hell his editor didn’t slash them is beyond me. I kept thinking, Christ, when will this shitty book end? What else can he possibly say?
8.The damn goat. Shut up about the fucking goat. And the old woman fortune teller and her damn olive oil. It’s for cooking, not scrying.
9. Really? Fallon killed himself? I don’t think so. He would have taken his Russian bribe money and snuck out of the country. What a bunch of shit.