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One Bad Apple
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs… reimagined.
When a wagon train of Black pioneers rescues the seven orphaned Dalton cousins from the side of the trail, it seems like an answer to their prayers. As they roll west toward Kansas, fourteen-year-old Levi Dalton is dazzled by the beautiful Mrs. Mallone. She's a healer, and her knowledge of medicines and herbs inspires Levi to want to become a doctor. Maybe then he can stop people from dying of fevers and illnesses like his folks did.
But Mrs. Mallone's stepdaughter, Hopeful, warns Levi not to become too attached to the healer. Levi dismisses her warnings and his own misgivings until the day he sees something dreadful.
Levi knows he needs to tell someone what he’s seen before it’s too late. But will anyone believe the story of a fourteen-year-old orphan? Will anyone stand up to evil, no matter how beautifully it’s packaged?
When a wagon train of Black pioneers rescues the seven orphaned Dalton cousins from the side of the trail, it seems like an answer to their prayers. As they roll west toward Kansas, fourteen-year-old Levi Dalton is dazzled by the beautiful Mrs. Mallone. She's a healer, and her knowledge of medicines and herbs inspires Levi to want to become a doctor. Maybe then he can stop people from dying of fevers and illnesses like his folks did.
But Mrs. Mallone's stepdaughter, Hopeful, warns Levi not to become too attached to the healer. Levi dismisses her warnings and his own misgivings until the day he sees something dreadful.
Levi knows he needs to tell someone what he’s seen before it’s too late. But will anyone believe the story of a fourteen-year-old orphan? Will anyone stand up to evil, no matter how beautifully it’s packaged?
253 pages, Paperback
Published July 28, 2020
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Rachel Kovaciny
25 books198 followersBorn only a few miles from where Jesse James robbed his first train, Rachel Kovaciny has loved the Old West all her life. She spends her days telling stories to her husband and their three homeschooled children. In her free time, Rachel writes a column on Old West history for the Prairie Times, reads, blogs, watches movies, and daydreams.
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August 10, 2024
It isn't the first "Snow White" retelling I read with a non-white Snow, no. Not even the first Western retelling of "Snow White" with a non-white Snow. That would've been Catherynne M. Valente's Six-Gun Snow White.
But that one was a Weird Western with fleeting touches of magic and its Snow was half-Crow (a Native American tribe), and this one is a traditional Western with zero traces of magic and its Snow is full-blooded Black.
Does it matter when Snow in a retelling doesn't follow the "skin as white as snow, lips as red as blood, hair as black as ebony wood" line in the Grimms' fairy tale? I'd answer with a resounding no to that. Sure, the fairy tale is said to have been based on a real-life German aristocrat, and thus it makes sense that the line alludes to a white girl's colouring, but the trifecta of colours in the Grimms' tale is meant as a metaphor (each of the three colours carries chromatic symbolism) more than as a recipe for how to apply beauty standards that exclude non-whites like some ignoramuses might argue. (Besides, even Disney's adaptation has Snow's features based on Hedy Lamarr, who was Jewish.) Like most other tales, this one has versions outside of Europe that put their own cultural spin on what Snow's looks have to be like for her to be considered beautiful.
So, yes, it doesn't matter if you rework Snow as a non-white; her race isn't the point of the story.
But that's a purely academic discussion and an exercise in geekery only trivia and fairy tale addicts like me will care about, so let's set that aside and go for the story here.
In Rachel Kovaciny's take on the tale, we hear it from one of the "dwarfs," who happen to be a gaggle of seven orphaned children trying to reach their uncle's ranch in the West so they can be taken care of by the only family left after a sickness took their parents. They are very young, scared, and have nothing to their name but their clothes, and the only one old enough to more or less be able to keep them from ending up as coyote dinner is Levi, the narrator of this, who is barely 14. What to do? They do have a measure of safety in numbers (it's harder to take down 7 children at once, they can't fight but can run like hares), but that isn't enough. So they find their salvation in a caravan of pioneers going to settle in the West.
There wouldn't be anything extraordinary about that, caravans of pioneers going West are one of the hallmarks of Westerns, in books and in films/TV. But, if popular media accustomed you to think everyone going West was white, I have a surprise for you: these pioneers are Black. Because the West attracted all ethnicities in reality; huge numbers of Asians, Blacks, Hispanics, etc., went West with the whites and worked in pretty much the same things (there were Chinese golddiggers and Black cowboys, for example). It's one of the things I like about Rachel Kovaciny's Westerns, though she hasn't written a book yet from the POV of a non-white, she has done her best to include all the other ethnicities that made the Old West what it was.
So, the seven Daltons join this caravan, and come under the protection of a preacher and his beautiful second wife, quickly becoming friends with the couple's daughter, Hopeful Mallone. Unbeknownst to Levi, Mrs Mallone is a vain and narcissistic woman that won't stop at the idea of committing crimes if it suits her purposes. Soon, he'll learn precisely what this purpose entails, when he witnesses her wickedness in action and must do something to save the sweet stepdaughter he and his siblings and cousins adore.
You see how the tale works now in spite of the cultural differences? It's always the metaphors, the themes, the symbols, because tales aren't literal. This retelling is fairly straighforward, it manages to stay faithful to the tale without aping it slavishly, and at the same time it conveys a slice of Western historical fact that isn't common in fiction.
But that one was a Weird Western with fleeting touches of magic and its Snow was half-Crow (a Native American tribe), and this one is a traditional Western with zero traces of magic and its Snow is full-blooded Black.
Does it matter when Snow in a retelling doesn't follow the "skin as white as snow, lips as red as blood, hair as black as ebony wood" line in the Grimms' fairy tale? I'd answer with a resounding no to that. Sure, the fairy tale is said to have been based on a real-life German aristocrat, and thus it makes sense that the line alludes to a white girl's colouring, but the trifecta of colours in the Grimms' tale is meant as a metaphor (each of the three colours carries chromatic symbolism) more than as a recipe for how to apply beauty standards that exclude non-whites like some ignoramuses might argue. (Besides, even Disney's adaptation has Snow's features based on Hedy Lamarr, who was Jewish.) Like most other tales, this one has versions outside of Europe that put their own cultural spin on what Snow's looks have to be like for her to be considered beautiful.
So, yes, it doesn't matter if you rework Snow as a non-white; her race isn't the point of the story.
But that's a purely academic discussion and an exercise in geekery only trivia and fairy tale addicts like me will care about, so let's set that aside and go for the story here.
In Rachel Kovaciny's take on the tale, we hear it from one of the "dwarfs," who happen to be a gaggle of seven orphaned children trying to reach their uncle's ranch in the West so they can be taken care of by the only family left after a sickness took their parents. They are very young, scared, and have nothing to their name but their clothes, and the only one old enough to more or less be able to keep them from ending up as coyote dinner is Levi, the narrator of this, who is barely 14. What to do? They do have a measure of safety in numbers (it's harder to take down 7 children at once, they can't fight but can run like hares), but that isn't enough. So they find their salvation in a caravan of pioneers going to settle in the West.
There wouldn't be anything extraordinary about that, caravans of pioneers going West are one of the hallmarks of Westerns, in books and in films/TV. But, if popular media accustomed you to think everyone going West was white, I have a surprise for you: these pioneers are Black. Because the West attracted all ethnicities in reality; huge numbers of Asians, Blacks, Hispanics, etc., went West with the whites and worked in pretty much the same things (there were Chinese golddiggers and Black cowboys, for example). It's one of the things I like about Rachel Kovaciny's Westerns, though she hasn't written a book yet from the POV of a non-white, she has done her best to include all the other ethnicities that made the Old West what it was.
So, the seven Daltons join this caravan, and come under the protection of a preacher and his beautiful second wife, quickly becoming friends with the couple's daughter, Hopeful Mallone. Unbeknownst to Levi, Mrs Mallone is a vain and narcissistic woman that won't stop at the idea of committing crimes if it suits her purposes. Soon, he'll learn precisely what this purpose entails, when he witnesses her wickedness in action and must do something to save the sweet stepdaughter he and his siblings and cousins adore.
You see how the tale works now in spite of the cultural differences? It's always the metaphors, the themes, the symbols, because tales aren't literal. This retelling is fairly straighforward, it manages to stay faithful to the tale without aping it slavishly, and at the same time it conveys a slice of Western historical fact that isn't common in fiction.
October 15, 2024
re-read 2024: Revisiting this story was just lovely. I think it might be my favorite from Rachel so far. The audiobook was also fabulous, which is great. Still 5 stars, still a brilliant retelling, I just love it.
original review 2020:
We had no home now, not even a hole or a nest, and neither did any of these people. We had wagons rolling over Missouri, aiming for homes we had not built yet, land we had not seen yet, not knowing where we'd stop each night. And the Lord knew how that felt. That was a comfort, I found. A comfort I hadn't realized I needed. A comfort I've carried with me ever since.
I've been wanting to read one of Rachel's books for what feels like forever. I'm happy to report that I absolutely adored it.
I don't think I've ever read a Snow White retelling from the point of view of one of the seven dwarves, but golly was it a lot of fun. Levi was such a unique protagonist - I always love when a story is told from a very specific point of view, which in this case was that of a 14-year-old boy. The whole book would have a completely different flavor if it had been told from the perspective of Hopeful or Jacob or Ness. But because it's Levi, the viewpoint is so unique.
The plot was fascinating, and I loved the way the fairytale was woven into the non-magical setting. Hopeful was such a perfect Snow White (plus her relationship with her Dad was so soft, my emotions ;-; ) She's just a good person, but she's not naive. Also her dad is an absolute sweetheart and I love them together. Also the Daltons are so wholesome and I just want these kids to be happy is that too much to ask?
Mrs. Mallone was an excellent villain - I absolutely hated her. Which, in my mind, is one mark of a well-written antagonist. What an awful person she is. xD
The historical element of this book was everything, you guys. You can truly tell that Rachel took her time researching - my inner ten-year-old that dreamed of being part of a wagon train was thriving as I read this. It was definitely educational, while also being entertaining, so basically my favorite thing ever? Oh, and the fairytale elements?? I mean?? One of the most unique Snow White retellings I've ever read while also including every important motif from the original? Heck yes!!
Basically, I absolutely devoured this book, and I need more of Rachel's books in my life as soon as possible please and thank you.
**I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author. A positive review was not required. All opinions are my own.**
original review 2020:
We had no home now, not even a hole or a nest, and neither did any of these people. We had wagons rolling over Missouri, aiming for homes we had not built yet, land we had not seen yet, not knowing where we'd stop each night. And the Lord knew how that felt. That was a comfort, I found. A comfort I hadn't realized I needed. A comfort I've carried with me ever since.
I've been wanting to read one of Rachel's books for what feels like forever. I'm happy to report that I absolutely adored it.
I don't think I've ever read a Snow White retelling from the point of view of one of the seven dwarves, but golly was it a lot of fun. Levi was such a unique protagonist - I always love when a story is told from a very specific point of view, which in this case was that of a 14-year-old boy. The whole book would have a completely different flavor if it had been told from the perspective of Hopeful or Jacob or Ness. But because it's Levi, the viewpoint is so unique.
The plot was fascinating, and I loved the way the fairytale was woven into the non-magical setting. Hopeful was such a perfect Snow White (plus her relationship with her Dad was so soft, my emotions ;-; ) She's just a good person, but she's not naive. Also her dad is an absolute sweetheart and I love them together. Also the Daltons are so wholesome and I just want these kids to be happy is that too much to ask?
Mrs. Mallone was an excellent villain - I absolutely hated her. Which, in my mind, is one mark of a well-written antagonist. What an awful person she is. xD
The historical element of this book was everything, you guys. You can truly tell that Rachel took her time researching - my inner ten-year-old that dreamed of being part of a wagon train was thriving as I read this. It was definitely educational, while also being entertaining, so basically my favorite thing ever? Oh, and the fairytale elements?? I mean?? One of the most unique Snow White retellings I've ever read while also including every important motif from the original? Heck yes!!
Basically, I absolutely devoured this book, and I need more of Rachel's books in my life as soon as possible please and thank you.
**I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author. A positive review was not required. All opinions are my own.**
September 17, 2024
5 stars. Ok, first let’s talk about how EPIC the title is. SO. FITTING. on so many levels! (Plus, have you noticed each book has an increasing amount of words in the title? Book 1 has 1, book 2 has 2, etc… And they fit the individual books’ stories and feels SO well.) Next, let us admire that LOVELY cover. Thanks. And now we can discuss the excellent story.
I loved Levi and his siblings pretty early on. They’re so sweet. Jacob I can completely feel for, and Levi is so true to life. But my favourite character was Hopeful. She’s so sweet and helpful and strong, the perfect Snow White—or at least all the best traits thereof. Her father was lovely too, and Ness was the perfect Prince. I liked Samson and Wallace also, eventually. The villain is evident very early on, but somehow she’s fascinating. Mildly disturbing at the earliest, and then growing more and more so as you realize how she’s got Levi (and most everyone else) tethered…
The plot was just as enjoyable as the cast. I love how the author handled slavery and racism, the blinding of beauty, the foolishness of beauty standards (ok, that was tiny, but still), the preciousness of all people and children, and how the reaction to racism can’t be racism in return. Also, I thought she did well with the mini theme abut how a child can have a crush on a predator and completely excuse away their misdeeds.
The retelling was great, and the unexpected twists kept me nailed right to the awesome climax. All in all, a hugely enjoyable ride and I’m almost sorry to be done.
Content: archaic, offensive terms for black people (always condemned); on-screen suicide.
A Favourite Quote: I’d learned to see the evil that lies behind believing your desires are worth more than someone else’s life. I’d learned that the loveliness of a face might not be matched by lovingkindness in the heart. And I’d learned that no matter how different folks look or sound or behave, they’re all the same mess of fears and hopes and wants on the inside.
A Favourite Beautiful Quote: “What’re you thinking on so hard, Levi?” Lillie asked me.
“I’m looking forward,” I said, slow and sleepy.
“To what?”
“Just forward. Instead of back.” I didn’t know how to explain myself better than that. For so long, I’d looked away from my future. Back to my parents, after they passed on. Back to Uncle Drew and Aunt Phoebe’s home after they sold it and headed west. Back to their graves after they died too. But now, I found myself looking forward, toward something coming up instead of back at where I’d already been.
A Favourite Humorous Quote: “You think a gunfight during a funeral is a good idea? You think that’s what she brought you here for? She promised you easy money. Take an unarmed youngster to jail. And now, you want to complicate that? If you shoot me, there’s a hundred people here will see to it that you’re the one trussed up and delivered to the law. And if I shoot you, then you can’t collect.”
I loved Levi and his siblings pretty early on. They’re so sweet. Jacob I can completely feel for, and Levi is so true to life. But my favourite character was Hopeful. She’s so sweet and helpful and strong, the perfect Snow White—or at least all the best traits thereof. Her father was lovely too, and Ness was the perfect Prince. I liked Samson and Wallace also, eventually. The villain is evident very early on, but somehow she’s fascinating. Mildly disturbing at the earliest, and then growing more and more so as you realize how she’s got Levi (and most everyone else) tethered…
The plot was just as enjoyable as the cast. I love how the author handled slavery and racism, the blinding of beauty, the foolishness of beauty standards (ok, that was tiny, but still), the preciousness of all people and children, and how the reaction to racism can’t be racism in return. Also, I thought she did well with the mini theme abut how a child can have a crush on a predator and completely excuse away their misdeeds.
The retelling was great, and the unexpected twists kept me nailed right to the awesome climax. All in all, a hugely enjoyable ride and I’m almost sorry to be done.
Content: archaic, offensive terms for black people (always condemned); on-screen suicide.
A Favourite Quote: I’d learned to see the evil that lies behind believing your desires are worth more than someone else’s life. I’d learned that the loveliness of a face might not be matched by lovingkindness in the heart. And I’d learned that no matter how different folks look or sound or behave, they’re all the same mess of fears and hopes and wants on the inside.
A Favourite Beautiful Quote: “What’re you thinking on so hard, Levi?” Lillie asked me.
“I’m looking forward,” I said, slow and sleepy.
“To what?”
“Just forward. Instead of back.” I didn’t know how to explain myself better than that. For so long, I’d looked away from my future. Back to my parents, after they passed on. Back to Uncle Drew and Aunt Phoebe’s home after they sold it and headed west. Back to their graves after they died too. But now, I found myself looking forward, toward something coming up instead of back at where I’d already been.
A Favourite Humorous Quote: “You think a gunfight during a funeral is a good idea? You think that’s what she brought you here for? She promised you easy money. Take an unarmed youngster to jail. And now, you want to complicate that? If you shoot me, there’s a hundred people here will see to it that you’re the one trussed up and delivered to the law. And if I shoot you, then you can’t collect.”
July 22, 2020
Let me say upfront, the writing and character development in One Bad Apple is excellent, and merits five stars. I'm rating the book three stars based on personal enjoyment: ie, it wasn't fully my cup of tea.
This is a Snow White retelling with a strong and dynamic "Evil Stepmother," Mrs. Mallone, who gets a lot of narrative focus. As a rule, I never enjoy stories with highly present villains ... regardless of how well they're written. Just, not my thing, you know? A "villain connoisseur" I am most definitely not. ;) I understand that a strong, vivid antagonist usually works to raise the stakes and deepen the drama, but it has the opposite effect on me, causing me to emotionally disengage during the antagonist's scenes. There, I've admitted it. Now y'all can have fun psychoanalyzing my avoidance issues or whatever. :-P
BE THAT AS IT MAY, there's a lot to appreciate about One Bad Apple. Though not my favorite, it's definitely Rachel Kovaciny's best, most ambitious book yet.
First off: diversity and originality. This is Snow White like you've never seen her before: Snow White in a wagon train of Black pioneers. Yep, Black people were homesteaders, too, even if you never learned about it in history class! Beyond deconstructing white-centric beauty standards (the "fairest of them all" doesn't need to have white skin: S H O C K E R), One Bad Apple does important work in fully fleshing out its Black characters, letting them be entirely human ... good, bad, and indifferent. They make up the majority of the cast, so none of them has to represent their community on their own.
I especially liked the exploration of Black culture--like the Sunday church service, with its unique style of preaching and singing.
Second: characterization. It's a big cast, but I never felt lost, since all of them have vivid, three-dimensional personalities. Snow White, young Hopeful Mallone, is a sweet, spunky girl with zero illusions about her stepmother, which was refreshing. I'm tired of Snow Whites who get taken in by appearances! Ness, her Prince, has a WHOPPER of a scene where he gets into a gunfight with a white man who threatens Hopeful--and promptly gets accused of "starting trouble" by bystanders, just because he's Black. We then delve into his anger and frustration and sheer exhaustion over the pervasive racial injustice he faces every. single. day. Really solid stuff. I was blown away, I tell you. Meanwhile, Mrs. Mallone has some complex motivations for her evil actions which, while I didn't exactly enjoy reading about (see above), were still interesting, realistic, and quite believable. I always felt like I had a good handle on what she wanted and hoped to gain, which is important for a central villain.
And I loved Levi, our narrator, a white orphan whose only hopes of survival are the Black strangers in this passing wagon train. He's quiet, pensive, and very curious about the customs and culture of the people who've rescued him. He tries to be sensitive about it and avoid asking offending questions, though, which I thought was a nice touch.
I recommend One Bad Apple to anyone who enjoys clever fairy tale retellings, sweet romance, well-researched historical adventure, and diverse Westerns.
TRIGGER WARNING:
This is a Snow White retelling with a strong and dynamic "Evil Stepmother," Mrs. Mallone, who gets a lot of narrative focus. As a rule, I never enjoy stories with highly present villains ... regardless of how well they're written. Just, not my thing, you know? A "villain connoisseur" I am most definitely not. ;) I understand that a strong, vivid antagonist usually works to raise the stakes and deepen the drama, but it has the opposite effect on me, causing me to emotionally disengage during the antagonist's scenes. There, I've admitted it. Now y'all can have fun psychoanalyzing my avoidance issues or whatever. :-P
BE THAT AS IT MAY, there's a lot to appreciate about One Bad Apple. Though not my favorite, it's definitely Rachel Kovaciny's best, most ambitious book yet.
First off: diversity and originality. This is Snow White like you've never seen her before: Snow White in a wagon train of Black pioneers. Yep, Black people were homesteaders, too, even if you never learned about it in history class! Beyond deconstructing white-centric beauty standards (the "fairest of them all" doesn't need to have white skin: S H O C K E R), One Bad Apple does important work in fully fleshing out its Black characters, letting them be entirely human ... good, bad, and indifferent. They make up the majority of the cast, so none of them has to represent their community on their own.
I especially liked the exploration of Black culture--like the Sunday church service, with its unique style of preaching and singing.
Second: characterization. It's a big cast, but I never felt lost, since all of them have vivid, three-dimensional personalities. Snow White, young Hopeful Mallone, is a sweet, spunky girl with zero illusions about her stepmother, which was refreshing. I'm tired of Snow Whites who get taken in by appearances! Ness, her Prince, has a WHOPPER of a scene where he gets into a gunfight with a white man who threatens Hopeful--and promptly gets accused of "starting trouble" by bystanders, just because he's Black. We then delve into his anger and frustration and sheer exhaustion over the pervasive racial injustice he faces every. single. day. Really solid stuff. I was blown away, I tell you. Meanwhile, Mrs. Mallone has some complex motivations for her evil actions which, while I didn't exactly enjoy reading about (see above), were still interesting, realistic, and quite believable. I always felt like I had a good handle on what she wanted and hoped to gain, which is important for a central villain.
And I loved Levi, our narrator, a white orphan whose only hopes of survival are the Black strangers in this passing wagon train. He's quiet, pensive, and very curious about the customs and culture of the people who've rescued him. He tries to be sensitive about it and avoid asking offending questions, though, which I thought was a nice touch.
I recommend One Bad Apple to anyone who enjoys clever fairy tale retellings, sweet romance, well-researched historical adventure, and diverse Westerns.
TRIGGER WARNING:
August 4, 2020
One Bad Apple is a thrilling read. A fantastic historical based retelling. I was impressed at how seamlessly all the elements from the classic tale were woven in especially in the 1800’s setting. This is a testament to the author’s skill; she knows how to craft an engaging tale. I felt like I was eating the wagon dust right along with them. The characters pop off the page, having the story told through the eyes of fourteen-year-old Levi was brilliant. It brings a certain candor to everything. I appreciate the inclusion of a diverse cast, and how it dealt with racism and class issues. Which seemed to parallel what we’re still fighting presently and made it all the more profound.
Hopeful made for an excellent heroine I loved that while she was strong she had a kind spirit that showed even when she was facing injustice. She’s possibly my new favorite incarnation of Snow White.
A must-read!
Hopeful made for an excellent heroine I loved that while she was strong she had a kind spirit that showed even when she was facing injustice. She’s possibly my new favorite incarnation of Snow White.
A must-read!
January 8, 2024
This was a very creative retelling of Snow White! I've read several of Rachel Kovaciny's retellings now and it's always fun to see how she writes non-magical fairytales set in the old west. In this one, instead of seven dwarfs, we have seven orphans, one of whom tells us the tale. I thought he was an excellent narrator for the story, and I especially thought that it was a good choice to make it the older version of him doing the narration so he could look back on what happened with greater wisdom than he had when these events were happening. There were many creative twists here in order to make the story work without magic, specifically how the stepmother was a "healer" who carried around a box of medicines... and poisons.
I also liked how the story showed some real history in that there were a lot more Black pioneers than Old Hollywood would have us believe, and I especially liked the list of reading material at the end of the book so readers can learn more about this topic if they want to.
And also, the characterization. So many characters in this short book, but they were all so unique and felt like real people, no matter how much or how little time they got on the page. Love, love, LOVE!
The main reason I'm giving this four stars instead of five was that I had a little more trouble getting into this story than with other stories that I've read from Rachel. The main reason being that it starts on a pretty heavy note because our main character's parents died before the story started and then his cousin's parents, who'd been caring for him and his siblings, also died. (Thus the reason why they're seven orphans.) I'm not criticizing this or saying it should have been done differently, I'm just saying that I personally don't enjoy starting a book out feeling sad, and that made me struggle to read it at first. Though, I'm glad that things got better for our characters later, and the ending of the story was lovely. It also didn't become one of my favorite stories from Rachel ("The Man on the Buckskin Horse" remains my top fave), so that's why I'm going with four stars.
Still, this is an excellent story that many people will enjoy, and I recommend it.
Content Advisory:
The author acknowledges in her note at the beginning of the book that the historically accurate terms used for Black people in this story are not ones that we want to use today. The two terms that are used are "colored" (mainly used by a teenage boy who's never even seen Black people before) and "darkies" (used by a man who's unkind to everybody.)
Other content concerns are largely the same as in the original Snow White tale. The step mother is incredibly selfish and only married her husband for the house and money she thought he could provide rather than love. When she realizes he won't be able to provide this as soon as she thought, her interest changes to a man she's not married to. (We see some handholding and flirtation, but nothing more.) She starts using her box of medicines to slowly poison her husband and stepdaughter to death and also tries to poison a teenage boy who realizes the evil that she's doing.
Someone intentionally drinks poison and dies.
Guns get waved around and fired in the air, but no one gets shot.
The stepmother slaps her stepdaughter hard once.
In this version where the "Snow White" character ("Hopeful") and her family are Black, the evil stepmother engages in some colorism, outright stating that she is more beautiful than her stepdaughter because she has naturally lighter skin and straighter hair. (The big moral of the story combats this by saying that true beauty doesn't come from looks, it comes from what's inside your heart and the way you treat others.)
The spiritual content is all Christian. Hopeful's father is a minister who conducts a Christian funeral at the start of the story, during which he quotes scripture. He and his daughter also hold themselves to Christian morals, whereas the stepmother does not.
I also liked how the story showed some real history in that there were a lot more Black pioneers than Old Hollywood would have us believe, and I especially liked the list of reading material at the end of the book so readers can learn more about this topic if they want to.
And also, the characterization. So many characters in this short book, but they were all so unique and felt like real people, no matter how much or how little time they got on the page. Love, love, LOVE!
The main reason I'm giving this four stars instead of five was that I had a little more trouble getting into this story than with other stories that I've read from Rachel. The main reason being that it starts on a pretty heavy note because our main character's parents died before the story started and then his cousin's parents, who'd been caring for him and his siblings, also died. (Thus the reason why they're seven orphans.) I'm not criticizing this or saying it should have been done differently, I'm just saying that I personally don't enjoy starting a book out feeling sad, and that made me struggle to read it at first. Though, I'm glad that things got better for our characters later, and the ending of the story was lovely. It also didn't become one of my favorite stories from Rachel ("The Man on the Buckskin Horse" remains my top fave), so that's why I'm going with four stars.
Still, this is an excellent story that many people will enjoy, and I recommend it.
Content Advisory:
The author acknowledges in her note at the beginning of the book that the historically accurate terms used for Black people in this story are not ones that we want to use today. The two terms that are used are "colored" (mainly used by a teenage boy who's never even seen Black people before) and "darkies" (used by a man who's unkind to everybody.)
Other content concerns are largely the same as in the original Snow White tale. The step mother is incredibly selfish and only married her husband for the house and money she thought he could provide rather than love. When she realizes he won't be able to provide this as soon as she thought, her interest changes to a man she's not married to. (We see some handholding and flirtation, but nothing more.) She starts using her box of medicines to slowly poison her husband and stepdaughter to death and also tries to poison a teenage boy who realizes the evil that she's doing.
Someone intentionally drinks poison and dies.
Guns get waved around and fired in the air, but no one gets shot.
The stepmother slaps her stepdaughter hard once.
In this version where the "Snow White" character ("Hopeful") and her family are Black, the evil stepmother engages in some colorism, outright stating that she is more beautiful than her stepdaughter because she has naturally lighter skin and straighter hair. (The big moral of the story combats this by saying that true beauty doesn't come from looks, it comes from what's inside your heart and the way you treat others.)
The spiritual content is all Christian. Hopeful's father is a minister who conducts a Christian funeral at the start of the story, during which he quotes scripture. He and his daughter also hold themselves to Christian morals, whereas the stepmother does not.
January 14, 2022
Wow, this was so well done! Levi's voice was amazing and so perfect for the subject matter--just young enough for the childish innocence that let him ask questions and make observations that wouldn't have worked for anyone older, but just old enough for more grown-up feelings and understanding to begin stirring and growing. The kids' plight had my heart bleeding in sympathy, and I felt for them all so much--yes, even (and maybe especially) Jacob. <\3 And then Hopeful--I adored Hopeful so much! She was so sweet and wonderful and amazing...and yet, still human, with her own weaknesses and troubles. The Reverend Eli was also amazing, and I loved Ness...and even came to appreciate several more people by the end. <3
I thought the race angle was handled very well--focusing mostly on the beauty of difference while not ignoring the lingering pain, racism, and bad attitudes in the hearts of some people. And yet it wasn't portrayed as one-sided or unable to be overcome, and it wasn't laid on too thickly, like it was all about trying to make a point--which I really appreciated! And I loved the way the author described the differences in things like skin tones and speech cadence without trying to write out a thick dialect that might offend on one hand or be difficult for readers on the other. As noted in the preface, she does use period-appropriate words to describe her black characters--either "colored" when speaking respectfully or "darky" as more of a slur (although it's worth noting that this is also used once or twice by black characters). I appreciated that she was able to walk the line of historical accuracy without resorting to terms that would be much harder for a modern reader to stomach. Also, without being a story that was all about race, the racial angle was woven into the fabric of it in such a way that it didn't feel slapped on or gimicky. Basically, I guess, there were a lot of ways that this angle could have gone wrong, but I thought the author did a great job of navigating it. <3
I could talk a lot more about specific characters or plot points or nods to the original, but it's all much too good to spoil. I'll just say once again, it's an incredible translation of an old fairytale to a western setting, and I loved every minute of it. <3<3<3
4.5 stars
Content--mentions of racist behaviors and attitudes (against multiple races); the period terms "colored" and "darky" are used to refer to black people; mentions of deaths; guns fired and people threatened;
I thought the race angle was handled very well--focusing mostly on the beauty of difference while not ignoring the lingering pain, racism, and bad attitudes in the hearts of some people. And yet it wasn't portrayed as one-sided or unable to be overcome, and it wasn't laid on too thickly, like it was all about trying to make a point--which I really appreciated! And I loved the way the author described the differences in things like skin tones and speech cadence without trying to write out a thick dialect that might offend on one hand or be difficult for readers on the other. As noted in the preface, she does use period-appropriate words to describe her black characters--either "colored" when speaking respectfully or "darky" as more of a slur (although it's worth noting that this is also used once or twice by black characters). I appreciated that she was able to walk the line of historical accuracy without resorting to terms that would be much harder for a modern reader to stomach. Also, without being a story that was all about race, the racial angle was woven into the fabric of it in such a way that it didn't feel slapped on or gimicky. Basically, I guess, there were a lot of ways that this angle could have gone wrong, but I thought the author did a great job of navigating it. <3
I could talk a lot more about specific characters or plot points or nods to the original, but it's all much too good to spoil. I'll just say once again, it's an incredible translation of an old fairytale to a western setting, and I loved every minute of it. <3<3<3
4.5 stars
Content--mentions of racist behaviors and attitudes (against multiple races); the period terms "colored" and "darky" are used to refer to black people; mentions of deaths; guns fired and people threatened;
July 13, 2020
The hot sun bears down on the backs of a group of orphans, digging a grave. Fourteen-year-old Levi finds it hard to believe his aunt and uncle have died of the fever amid the prairie wilderness. But then a stranger rides into their midst, a handsome Black cowboy named Ness. He climbs down off his horse and helps Levi’s cousin Jacob bury his folks.
Left with nowhere to turn and a desperate need to reach their new home in Kansas, the seven orphans join a wagon train of Black pioneers. Levi soon becomes besotted with the beautiful Mrs. Mallone, wife of the preacher, and a healer. But her stepdaughter, Hopeful, does not seem to share his high view of the woman and warns him to take care, her stepmother is not all she appears to be…
Rachel Kovaciny writes westerns based on popular fairy tales, and this one, inspired by Snow White, is my favorite of her books so far. The setting reminds me of my childhood days of reading Little House on the Prairie and watching the mile fall away beneath a wagon train. Levi is also a wonderful narrator – a believable teenager in a previous century with all the mixed feelings and desires for manhood that you expect from him. Compassionate, sweet, eager to help, and kind, he is very much an active participant in events but also allows room for the memorable members of the wagon train to shine. Hopeful is a lovely Snow White, with her basket of apples and tenderness for five small children crying in a wagon after losing their mother and aunt. Ness, however, is my favorite character – a strong, protective man who rides all night to make sure the kids and the woman he loves is safe.
Then there is Mrs. Mallone, a charming, devious and believable villain whose Cruel Stepmother lingers in your mind. As do many of the other scenes, from a lantern-lit wagon interior and a box of mysterious medicines to the dust kicked up in the boys’ faces riding at the end of the wagon train.
Rachel has a gift for picturesque writing that makes it all feel real, a love of happy endings, and a style suitable for even youngsters to read.
Buy it and read it. You’ll love it, as I did.
Left with nowhere to turn and a desperate need to reach their new home in Kansas, the seven orphans join a wagon train of Black pioneers. Levi soon becomes besotted with the beautiful Mrs. Mallone, wife of the preacher, and a healer. But her stepdaughter, Hopeful, does not seem to share his high view of the woman and warns him to take care, her stepmother is not all she appears to be…
Rachel Kovaciny writes westerns based on popular fairy tales, and this one, inspired by Snow White, is my favorite of her books so far. The setting reminds me of my childhood days of reading Little House on the Prairie and watching the mile fall away beneath a wagon train. Levi is also a wonderful narrator – a believable teenager in a previous century with all the mixed feelings and desires for manhood that you expect from him. Compassionate, sweet, eager to help, and kind, he is very much an active participant in events but also allows room for the memorable members of the wagon train to shine. Hopeful is a lovely Snow White, with her basket of apples and tenderness for five small children crying in a wagon after losing their mother and aunt. Ness, however, is my favorite character – a strong, protective man who rides all night to make sure the kids and the woman he loves is safe.
Then there is Mrs. Mallone, a charming, devious and believable villain whose Cruel Stepmother lingers in your mind. As do many of the other scenes, from a lantern-lit wagon interior and a box of mysterious medicines to the dust kicked up in the boys’ faces riding at the end of the wagon train.
Rachel has a gift for picturesque writing that makes it all feel real, a love of happy endings, and a style suitable for even youngsters to read.
Buy it and read it. You’ll love it, as I did.
August 31, 2025
This was such a good read
July 30, 2020
One Bad Apple is my favorite book in the Once Upon a Western series (so far). Though I dearly love a laugh, I tend to enjoy and appreciate serious stories more than humorous ones. OBA is definitely a serious book (though it’s not depressing or gloomy or anything like that). And don’t worry–the weightier subject matter does not mean weightier content (in terms of swearing, sex, and so on). This book is still clean and, I think, appropriate for twelve and up.
Each character really comes alive on the pages of One Bad Apple–from the narrator, Levi, to the villainous Mrs. Mallone, to our sweet ‘Snow White’, Hopeful Mallone. I almost felt like I was watching a movie–or even real life–in places because the characters, setting, writing, everything were all so realistic. These aren’t simplistic, stereotypical Western characters. Yes, you have a tough trail boss (at least, at first appearance) and a kindly old preacher and a handsome cowboy. But every main (or main-ish) character is well-rounded with their own separate goals, fears, dreams, and lives.
The setting was another aspect of One Bad Apple that I really enjoyed. A dusty wagon train, slowly creaking its way West toward hope and a future. Rachel’s descriptions were on point (her writing, in general, was the best I’ve ever read from her) and I also think that her balance in conveying fourteen-year-old Levi’s youthful naivety and older Levi’s hindsight was done very well. (That sentence sounds awkward, but I hope you get what I mean!)
I really can’t say enough good things about One Bad Apple. It gives important representation to a part of history (Black pioneers heading West) that I honestly hadn’t known about before hearing of OBA. Rachel even includes a list of suggested further reading at the back of the book if you want to learn more about this topic. The writing feels authentically ‘old West’, the characters are lovely people (with the exception of, y’know, Mrs. Mallone and this one male character–Sanderson–who’s a brat), and the story itself is a neat retelling of Snow White that’ll really grip your interest. (The final showdown takes a while to come, but it’s worth waiting for.)
Overall, I’d highly recommend One Bad Apple for those who love Western fiction, fairytale retellings, or clean historical fiction in general. (Also, for those romantics out there, there is a super sweet romance within the pages of One Bad Apple. It’s not front and center, but it’s verrrrry ship-worthy.)
I received a free copy of this book from the author. Opinions expressed are entirely my own.
Each character really comes alive on the pages of One Bad Apple–from the narrator, Levi, to the villainous Mrs. Mallone, to our sweet ‘Snow White’, Hopeful Mallone. I almost felt like I was watching a movie–or even real life–in places because the characters, setting, writing, everything were all so realistic. These aren’t simplistic, stereotypical Western characters. Yes, you have a tough trail boss (at least, at first appearance) and a kindly old preacher and a handsome cowboy. But every main (or main-ish) character is well-rounded with their own separate goals, fears, dreams, and lives.
The setting was another aspect of One Bad Apple that I really enjoyed. A dusty wagon train, slowly creaking its way West toward hope and a future. Rachel’s descriptions were on point (her writing, in general, was the best I’ve ever read from her) and I also think that her balance in conveying fourteen-year-old Levi’s youthful naivety and older Levi’s hindsight was done very well. (That sentence sounds awkward, but I hope you get what I mean!)
I really can’t say enough good things about One Bad Apple. It gives important representation to a part of history (Black pioneers heading West) that I honestly hadn’t known about before hearing of OBA. Rachel even includes a list of suggested further reading at the back of the book if you want to learn more about this topic. The writing feels authentically ‘old West’, the characters are lovely people (with the exception of, y’know, Mrs. Mallone and this one male character–Sanderson–who’s a brat), and the story itself is a neat retelling of Snow White that’ll really grip your interest. (The final showdown takes a while to come, but it’s worth waiting for.)
Overall, I’d highly recommend One Bad Apple for those who love Western fiction, fairytale retellings, or clean historical fiction in general. (Also, for those romantics out there, there is a super sweet romance within the pages of One Bad Apple. It’s not front and center, but it’s verrrrry ship-worthy.)
I received a free copy of this book from the author. Opinions expressed are entirely my own.
February 14, 2021
I'm going to be up front and honest and tell you that Christian fiction isn't necessarily (necessarily!) my jam and neither are westerns. They aren't genres that I really gravitate towards but I DO gravitate towards books in general and every so often I like to throw something outside of my norm into the mix!
I haven't picked up a piece of legit Christian fiction in some time but I did because (true confessions) I know the author here. That's also one of the reasons I *didn't* want to pick it up because what if I didn't like it!? Then what to say?!? But I'm delighted (and relieved? ha!) to say that I actually really did quite enjoy this story. I think Kovaciny has really developed as an author and that is so telling in this story. It was clear to me that she had put a lot of thought, attention to detail, and research into this story. And it's really a brave one to write as it is about Black Americans traveling west in a wagon train, as well as a Snow White retelling.
I loved the narrator's voice very much. I thought the dialogue in this story was really well done and I was never jarred out of the story in an unpleasant way. It was intriguing, informative and the best thing about it is that although I knew this was a Snow White retelling with a western twist going in to it, it still took me a little bit to see exactly how she was going to pull this all together. That's a compliment. I suppose I could have just not been paying close enough attention to be all that discerning, but I was pulled into the story by a plot which was set up for intrigue and so curious was I with where this was going I quit paying attention to looking for the Fairy Tale and just got to know the characters in the book for character sake. Well done to the author on that one!
Maybe Westerns aren't your thing. Christian fiction might not be either. But if you want to check out something a little different, I've noticed that other reviewers of this title only give it less than 5 stars because it's not a genre that they find great appeal in, but that they liked the story. I would say that's fair and accurate. It's not my thing on the whole but, goodness! Variety is the spice of life, as they say, and I'm GLAD I read this one! It was....diverting. :)
I haven't picked up a piece of legit Christian fiction in some time but I did because (true confessions) I know the author here. That's also one of the reasons I *didn't* want to pick it up because what if I didn't like it!? Then what to say?!? But I'm delighted (and relieved? ha!) to say that I actually really did quite enjoy this story. I think Kovaciny has really developed as an author and that is so telling in this story. It was clear to me that she had put a lot of thought, attention to detail, and research into this story. And it's really a brave one to write as it is about Black Americans traveling west in a wagon train, as well as a Snow White retelling.
I loved the narrator's voice very much. I thought the dialogue in this story was really well done and I was never jarred out of the story in an unpleasant way. It was intriguing, informative and the best thing about it is that although I knew this was a Snow White retelling with a western twist going in to it, it still took me a little bit to see exactly how she was going to pull this all together. That's a compliment. I suppose I could have just not been paying close enough attention to be all that discerning, but I was pulled into the story by a plot which was set up for intrigue and so curious was I with where this was going I quit paying attention to looking for the Fairy Tale and just got to know the characters in the book for character sake. Well done to the author on that one!
Maybe Westerns aren't your thing. Christian fiction might not be either. But if you want to check out something a little different, I've noticed that other reviewers of this title only give it less than 5 stars because it's not a genre that they find great appeal in, but that they liked the story. I would say that's fair and accurate. It's not my thing on the whole but, goodness! Variety is the spice of life, as they say, and I'm GLAD I read this one! It was....diverting. :)
August 7, 2020
When a non-magical Snow White western retelling was up for grabs I had to give it a shot. I was even more intrigued because Snow White is black. The author did wasn't isn't normally done...showing that POC's were pioneers as well.
Don't let my 3 stars scare you. This book had great character development and the research was absolutely done. I simply found out that I'm not that big on westerns. It's not the books fault I didn't fully realize that I'm just not that into that particular genre.
The ONE thing I do wish were different is that it instead of Levi narrating that it was Hopeful instead(Snow White).
Don't let my 3 stars scare you. This book had great character development and the research was absolutely done. I simply found out that I'm not that big on westerns. It's not the books fault I didn't fully realize that I'm just not that into that particular genre.
The ONE thing I do wish were different is that it instead of Levi narrating that it was Hopeful instead(Snow White).
March 1, 2021
A solid 4.5 if not higher!
I love the fairy tale of Snow White and therefore have read many versions. This was new in all ways! Ms. Kovaciny is not lacking creativity in any ways
The reason that I enjoy it so much is because it is told through Levi’s perspective! It is the perfect basis for the story. I wouldn’t have thought of it, but nothing could’ve fit it better. Grief has made him grow up quickly, but he is still very much a child.
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I love the fairy tale of Snow White and therefore have read many versions. This was new in all ways! Ms. Kovaciny is not lacking creativity in any ways
The reason that I enjoy it so much is because it is told through Levi’s perspective! It is the perfect basis for the story. I wouldn’t have thought of it, but nothing could’ve fit it better. Grief has made him grow up quickly, but he is still very much a child.
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January 25, 2025
Wonderful story. The more of Rachel's books that I read, the more I am impressed by her ability to write the voice of her character. This book was written perfectly as if narrated by a 12 year old country boy.
The story itself was wonderfully written, in fact, it was a little too well-written for me to fully enjoy it. I've never been a big fan of the Snow White story, and the suspense of knowing that Bad Things were coming made me set aside the story several times to take a break from it. That's my personal preference, however, and actually reflects how good the writing is.
If you like audiobooks, definitely try the audio of this story. The narration is EXCELLENT. Rachel is masterful at capturing different voices in print, and the audiobook narrator perfectly captures the sound of those voices.
The story itself was wonderfully written, in fact, it was a little too well-written for me to fully enjoy it. I've never been a big fan of the Snow White story, and the suspense of knowing that Bad Things were coming made me set aside the story several times to take a break from it. That's my personal preference, however, and actually reflects how good the writing is.
If you like audiobooks, definitely try the audio of this story. The narration is EXCELLENT. Rachel is masterful at capturing different voices in print, and the audiobook narrator perfectly captures the sound of those voices.
January 14, 2023
Probably just as well written as the others, but the sinister plot makes it less enjoyable and therefore not my favorite. I do enjoy this author's insight into human nature.
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June 17, 2021Nifty hook, well paced and plotted, with hat-tips to Snow White and Hamlet. A 14-year-old orphan in a wagon train heading for Kansas has to grow up fast to take care of younger siblings while trying to figure out his future, manage his first serious crush, rescue a damsel in distress, and prove he's innocent of a double murder. Nifty complication: Eli's family is the only white-skinned party in a company of free and formerly enslaved Black people.
Serious topics, but a quick light read.
Serious topics, but a quick light read.
March 16, 2021
Typically, if you were to give me a book that marketed itself as being 'inclusive' on some level, I would find that a turn off. I don't read books for how inclusive they are. I don't actually care. I read books for a good story.
Inclusive generally means preachy.
So, I was a little nervous going into this, but I've enjoyed this authors other retellings and decided to give it a go.
I was pleasantly surprised. This book is so well balanced that it absolutely avoids being preachy. Even when there's preaching, it's not preachy. It feels really genuine with thoughts and questions and curiosity natural to people of different skin tones meeting. It didn't try to eradicate color, but embraced its beauty and delightful diversity.
I think what really helped was heroes and villains weren't based on gender or skin color, but on actions. So there was good and evil in both camps. That too felt balanced and refreshing. That felt real.
As to the actual writing and story, this was a really fun retelling of Snow White from the perspective of one of the dwarves, with a bit of Hamlet thrown in, set in a wagon train going west.
I loved how subtle the retelling is. It's not in your face. You almost don't see it as you get into the story, and then it suddenly hits you what you're reading. I love every description of the evil-step mother. She was very well done.
This is a simple, easy read with a great cast of characters, not preachy while being diverse, brought me to tears a few times, but I have a soft spot for orphans, and Jacob was quite possibly my favorite character.
PG: loss of parents, evil stepmother is seductive.
Inclusive generally means preachy.
So, I was a little nervous going into this, but I've enjoyed this authors other retellings and decided to give it a go.
I was pleasantly surprised. This book is so well balanced that it absolutely avoids being preachy. Even when there's preaching, it's not preachy. It feels really genuine with thoughts and questions and curiosity natural to people of different skin tones meeting. It didn't try to eradicate color, but embraced its beauty and delightful diversity.
I think what really helped was heroes and villains weren't based on gender or skin color, but on actions. So there was good and evil in both camps. That too felt balanced and refreshing. That felt real.
As to the actual writing and story, this was a really fun retelling of Snow White from the perspective of one of the dwarves, with a bit of Hamlet thrown in, set in a wagon train going west.
I loved how subtle the retelling is. It's not in your face. You almost don't see it as you get into the story, and then it suddenly hits you what you're reading. I love every description of the evil-step mother. She was very well done.
This is a simple, easy read with a great cast of characters, not preachy while being diverse, brought me to tears a few times, but I have a soft spot for orphans, and Jacob was quite possibly my favorite character.
PG: loss of parents, evil stepmother is seductive.
July 6, 2020
I received a free ARC of this book with no obligation to post a review.
I’ll admit that I went into this book with some trepidation - the author is a friend of mine from “Bookstagram” but I’ve never read any of her books before. What if I didn’t like it? Plus, I’ve been in a bit of a reading slump - what if it took me ages to read, thus defeating the purpose of an ARC?
My fears were quickly laid to rest - I read the entire book in less than 24 hours, and *loved* it!
Levi is a believable 14 year old boy, with his mingled insecurities and know-it-all moods (I have a 14 year old son, so I feel qualified to judge here 😉). Hopeful is kind and lovely, but not annoyingly Disney Princess perfect.
I thought the incorporation of the Snow White tropes was extremely well done - the familiar elements were all there, but the story still felt fresh and unpredictable.
The western setting and characters were well researched and sensitively drawn. I could tell that the author was trying to be as respectful as possible to her Black characters, while maintaining historical authenticity.
There are decidedly Christian elements to this story. I am a Christian myself, but I often find Christian fiction forced and fake. Not so here. The Old West setting made the Christian elements feel organic and fully integrated into the story.
After finishing, I immediately bought all the other books and short stories in this series from Kindle, and I look forward to reading them! I also think my son and tween daughter will enjoy them.
Thank you, Rachel, for gifting me the ARC!
I’ll admit that I went into this book with some trepidation - the author is a friend of mine from “Bookstagram” but I’ve never read any of her books before. What if I didn’t like it? Plus, I’ve been in a bit of a reading slump - what if it took me ages to read, thus defeating the purpose of an ARC?
My fears were quickly laid to rest - I read the entire book in less than 24 hours, and *loved* it!
Levi is a believable 14 year old boy, with his mingled insecurities and know-it-all moods (I have a 14 year old son, so I feel qualified to judge here 😉). Hopeful is kind and lovely, but not annoyingly Disney Princess perfect.
I thought the incorporation of the Snow White tropes was extremely well done - the familiar elements were all there, but the story still felt fresh and unpredictable.
The western setting and characters were well researched and sensitively drawn. I could tell that the author was trying to be as respectful as possible to her Black characters, while maintaining historical authenticity.
There are decidedly Christian elements to this story. I am a Christian myself, but I often find Christian fiction forced and fake. Not so here. The Old West setting made the Christian elements feel organic and fully integrated into the story.
After finishing, I immediately bought all the other books and short stories in this series from Kindle, and I look forward to reading them! I also think my son and tween daughter will enjoy them.
Thank you, Rachel, for gifting me the ARC!
July 31, 2020
This delightful middle grade book is the perfect introduction to stories about the pioneer experience in the American West. There is a diverse cast of characters, and young readers will feel an affinity with Levi and his orphaned status.
The people of color that save Levi and his siblings by allowing them to join their wagon train remind us that we are a country of many complexions and backgrounds. Hopeful, Ness and the rest of those on the wagon train are wonderful representations of the diversity that is ignored in most historical narratives.
As a young reader, I loved Laura Ingall's Wilders Little House series. This finely crafted tale belongs in that canon for all of those who dream of freedom on a farm of their own, or yearn for adventure.
The people of color that save Levi and his siblings by allowing them to join their wagon train remind us that we are a country of many complexions and backgrounds. Hopeful, Ness and the rest of those on the wagon train are wonderful representations of the diversity that is ignored in most historical narratives.
As a young reader, I loved Laura Ingall's Wilders Little House series. This finely crafted tale belongs in that canon for all of those who dream of freedom on a farm of their own, or yearn for adventure.
July 28, 2020
I really love the latest installment of the Once Upon a Western series by Rachel Kovaciny. Best one yet. Tensions and griefs, hopes and fears were all handled well: smoothly and convincingly. Powerful use of flashback. I was invested in the characters, who spanned spectrums of background, temperament, profession, etc.
It was very satisfying. Elements of nostalgia, tenderness, and keen advice. I could have tasted that apple! I was really drawn in.
I appreciated the care with which this was written, and I love that additional resources are included at the end for further study.
Easy to give this 5 stars. Whether you typically reach for westerns or not, this one is for you!
It was very satisfying. Elements of nostalgia, tenderness, and keen advice. I could have tasted that apple! I was really drawn in.
I appreciated the care with which this was written, and I love that additional resources are included at the end for further study.
Easy to give this 5 stars. Whether you typically reach for westerns or not, this one is for you!
April 30, 2025
I loved this! My favorite of the series so far. The fairy tale aspects were so cleverly done and I didn't want to stop reading. I thought she did a great job of narrating from a 14 year old boy's point of view. I was so excited to get a glimpse of Hauer from the first book too! A very satisfying end, though I was worried about how things would turn out after that beginning. Such a memorable story, and I can't wait to continue with the series.
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December 2, 2020Rachel Kovaciny’s “One Bad Apple” was truly such a thoughtfully crafted fairytale retelling of “Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs”. Being the first western novel I’ve ever read I wasn’t sure what to expect, I can honestly say from as early on as the first 5 pages I was instantly immersed into Levi’s story. The characters were all so diverse, which was quite refreshing to read. As silly as it sounds, I was so invested into Kovaciny’s picturesque and engaging writing I often forgot the plot was a rendition of Snow White! That being said, I believe this was the most unique retelling I’ve read thus far, and it genuinely was really such an enjoyable read. These are intricate characters you’ll sure to become fond of! If you’re looking for a cleverly crafted novel with action, suspense, love, friendship and immense character growth and development— definitely pick up a copy of “One Good Apple”!
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April 29, 2024Excellent, as always! (I read this back when it was published, but I never got around to marking it as such, so here we are. 😉)
March 9, 2024
𝗢𝗻𝗲 𝗕𝗮𝗱 𝗔𝗽𝗽𝗹𝗲 (𝗢𝗻𝗰𝗲 𝗨𝗽𝗼𝗻 𝗮 𝗪𝗲𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿𝗻 #𝟯) 𝗯𝘆 𝗥𝗮𝗰𝗵𝗲𝗹 𝗞𝗼𝘃𝗮𝗰𝗶𝗻𝘆
I’m definitely a mood reader and my reading tastes vary. That being said westerns are not usually my thing, and neither is Christian fiction. However, I love reading fairytale retellings and this sounded really interesting so I’m really glad I decided to read it.
One Bad Apple is a non-magical Snow White retelling and it features Snow White as you’ve never seen her before: a black pioneer in the old West heading towards Kansas in a wagon train.
The plot was original and instead of seven dwarfs we have seven orphans, one of whom, Levi Dalton, is the narrator of the story.
The seven Dalton orphans ride at the end of a dusty wagon train of black pioneers, anxious to get to their Uncle in Kansas. Hopeful Mallone (Snow White) is a kind person who adores her father, Reverend Eli, while being suspicious of her Stepmother’s motives. Hopeful befriends the orphan children, bringing them apples when she knows they are hungry and singing them to sleep when they are missing their parents.
Mrs Mallone (Evil Queen) is a perfect villain, a healer who appears charming on the surface but is actually scheming and manipulative, with her mysterious box of medicines never far from her side.
This is the most unique retelling that I’ve read, so much so that I forgot until near the end of the book that this is a Snow White retelling.
I loved Rachel’s style of writing and her descriptions were on point, the story well researched and the characters are diverse. I love how well elements of the original story have been woven into One Bad Apple and overall it was a quick but thoroughly enjoyable read.
“And I’d learned that no matter how different folks look or sound or behave, they’re all the same mess of fears and hopes and wants on the inside”.
I’m definitely a mood reader and my reading tastes vary. That being said westerns are not usually my thing, and neither is Christian fiction. However, I love reading fairytale retellings and this sounded really interesting so I’m really glad I decided to read it.
One Bad Apple is a non-magical Snow White retelling and it features Snow White as you’ve never seen her before: a black pioneer in the old West heading towards Kansas in a wagon train.
The plot was original and instead of seven dwarfs we have seven orphans, one of whom, Levi Dalton, is the narrator of the story.
The seven Dalton orphans ride at the end of a dusty wagon train of black pioneers, anxious to get to their Uncle in Kansas. Hopeful Mallone (Snow White) is a kind person who adores her father, Reverend Eli, while being suspicious of her Stepmother’s motives. Hopeful befriends the orphan children, bringing them apples when she knows they are hungry and singing them to sleep when they are missing their parents.
Mrs Mallone (Evil Queen) is a perfect villain, a healer who appears charming on the surface but is actually scheming and manipulative, with her mysterious box of medicines never far from her side.
This is the most unique retelling that I’ve read, so much so that I forgot until near the end of the book that this is a Snow White retelling.
I loved Rachel’s style of writing and her descriptions were on point, the story well researched and the characters are diverse. I love how well elements of the original story have been woven into One Bad Apple and overall it was a quick but thoroughly enjoyable read.
“And I’d learned that no matter how different folks look or sound or behave, they’re all the same mess of fears and hopes and wants on the inside”.
July 12, 2020
One Bad Apple by Rachel Kovaciny is the third book in her Once upon a western series. I have not read the first two books in this series so believe me when I say that this episode stands on it's own 100%. You do not have to read the first two books to enjoy this one.
I was so enthralled by this story. I was like constantly guessing how the Snow White story was going to intertwine with the real world non magical setting. But let's ignore the fairytale aspect and look at the historical part of it for a bit.
I could tell that a lot of research went into this novel. Nothing sounds modern or out of place for a post civil war wagon train. The wagon train itself is well described and the people feel real, or at least they feel like people you would see on a western. I did think it was weird that a caravan would leave behind so many children to fend for themselves. Yes the parents were sick, but having that many young children to worry over and care for, certainly wasn't going to get them any better. That's my only, nitpick. It did, however, give the story a boxcar children vibe which is a book I loved and think fondly of.
The fairy tale aspect was also well done. The tale of Snow White was adapted to fit the western theme rather than being stripped of it's wonder and shoehorned into a new setting. Everything was a fresh take. Not, Snow White and the seven orphans. Rather the seven Orphans and the preacher's daughter. It worked as a retelling, but it also works as it's own thing and is all the better for it.
*I was given an e-ARC of this novel for review purposes. I was not obligated to reed or review this book, but I did because that's just good manners. My opinion is my own honest one.*
I was so enthralled by this story. I was like constantly guessing how the Snow White story was going to intertwine with the real world non magical setting. But let's ignore the fairytale aspect and look at the historical part of it for a bit.
I could tell that a lot of research went into this novel. Nothing sounds modern or out of place for a post civil war wagon train. The wagon train itself is well described and the people feel real, or at least they feel like people you would see on a western. I did think it was weird that a caravan would leave behind so many children to fend for themselves. Yes the parents were sick, but having that many young children to worry over and care for, certainly wasn't going to get them any better. That's my only, nitpick. It did, however, give the story a boxcar children vibe which is a book I loved and think fondly of.
The fairy tale aspect was also well done. The tale of Snow White was adapted to fit the western theme rather than being stripped of it's wonder and shoehorned into a new setting. Everything was a fresh take. Not, Snow White and the seven orphans. Rather the seven Orphans and the preacher's daughter. It worked as a retelling, but it also works as it's own thing and is all the better for it.
*I was given an e-ARC of this novel for review purposes. I was not obligated to reed or review this book, but I did because that's just good manners. My opinion is my own honest one.*
August 22, 2024
One Bad Apple
Once Upon a Western Story Three
Rachel Kovaciny
YA Western-style Fairy Tale
⭐⭐⭐⭐
What do you get when you combine a favorite fairy tale with a wholesome Western? You get intriguing story-telling by Rachel Kovaciny. Snow White is reimagined westward.
Seven young orphaned cousins were traveling to Kansas to meet their relatives after losing their parents, when they met another party of pioneers headed west. The pioneers somewhat reluctantly consented to take them into their care.
Soon after, fourteen-year-old Levi was captivated by the enchanting Mrs. Mallone and her claims to heal others with special secret potions. Levi wanted to know more about medicine, as one day he may like to be a doctor. Mrs. Mallone agreed to teach Levi her methods; but Hopeful, Mrs. Mallone's step-daughter, cautioned him to beware of her ways. She was not all that she seems.
Ever trustful, Levi was caught up in the middle of a scheme that would likely pin him as the obvious guilty party leading to instant hanging -- being that side of the Mississippi -- if he didn't have any witnesses to vet him.
Did Mrs. Mallone intentionally set him up? And if so, why? Without witnesses, will anyone be able to come to his rescue? Will he ever learn his lesson about trusting others based only on their outward appearances?
You'll have to read it yourself to find out what happened to innocent Levi.
One Bad Apple is engaging and absorbing, while the characters are perceptible and convincing. It kept me wondering all the time what would happen next, and at one point, I was biting my nails. LOL!
This is the third book in the Once Upon a Western Story. I've read Cloaked, Dancing and Donuts, and I've also read Blizzard at Three Bears Lake (Once Upon a Western 1.5). I've enjoyed them all! Next up is My Rock and My Refuge.
Once Upon a Western Story Three
Rachel Kovaciny
YA Western-style Fairy Tale
⭐⭐⭐⭐
What do you get when you combine a favorite fairy tale with a wholesome Western? You get intriguing story-telling by Rachel Kovaciny. Snow White is reimagined westward.
Seven young orphaned cousins were traveling to Kansas to meet their relatives after losing their parents, when they met another party of pioneers headed west. The pioneers somewhat reluctantly consented to take them into their care.
Soon after, fourteen-year-old Levi was captivated by the enchanting Mrs. Mallone and her claims to heal others with special secret potions. Levi wanted to know more about medicine, as one day he may like to be a doctor. Mrs. Mallone agreed to teach Levi her methods; but Hopeful, Mrs. Mallone's step-daughter, cautioned him to beware of her ways. She was not all that she seems.
Ever trustful, Levi was caught up in the middle of a scheme that would likely pin him as the obvious guilty party leading to instant hanging -- being that side of the Mississippi -- if he didn't have any witnesses to vet him.
Did Mrs. Mallone intentionally set him up? And if so, why? Without witnesses, will anyone be able to come to his rescue? Will he ever learn his lesson about trusting others based only on their outward appearances?
You'll have to read it yourself to find out what happened to innocent Levi.
One Bad Apple is engaging and absorbing, while the characters are perceptible and convincing. It kept me wondering all the time what would happen next, and at one point, I was biting my nails. LOL!
This is the third book in the Once Upon a Western Story. I've read Cloaked, Dancing and Donuts, and I've also read Blizzard at Three Bears Lake (Once Upon a Western 1.5). I've enjoyed them all! Next up is My Rock and My Refuge.
September 6, 2023
While this wasn't my favorite from the series, I did still enjoy parts of it. I loved Hopeful and the Reverend and Ness and the children and some of the other character's whose names I'm forgetting. The portrayal of sorrow grief was so well done and heartbreaking. I was intrigued to read a Snow White retelling.
I think a couple things that held me back was 1.) The narrator was a 14-year-old boy, which maybe just made it hard for me to connect with. 2.) I hate it when boys/men make idols out of a beautiful woman, being blind to her evil. It just makes me really mad, so a lot of the book I was struggling to want to read because I was just mad at Levi for being stupid. 3.) Maybe I'm not a fan of the approach of telling the climax of the story at the beginning, then going back to the start of the story. Because then the whole time I was just waiting for the bad things to happen. Though I did appreciate a twist I wasn't expecting which was quite genius on the author's part. Convincing you of one thing and really it's another thing. But I won't say more because spoilers.
This was well written and an excellently told story with a great moral. The good characters were good, and I wanted to cheer them on while I wanted the bad characters gone. I also loved the historical side to this story. And the western style and the Christian themes. So yes, there was a lot to love, and I think the things I struggled with was more personal preference.
Oh, and by the way, the skull in the apple was quite genius as well but it took my husband pointing it out to me for me to see it.
I think a couple things that held me back was 1.) The narrator was a 14-year-old boy, which maybe just made it hard for me to connect with. 2.) I hate it when boys/men make idols out of a beautiful woman, being blind to her evil. It just makes me really mad, so a lot of the book I was struggling to want to read because I was just mad at Levi for being stupid. 3.) Maybe I'm not a fan of the approach of telling the climax of the story at the beginning, then going back to the start of the story. Because then the whole time I was just waiting for the bad things to happen. Though I did appreciate a twist I wasn't expecting which was quite genius on the author's part. Convincing you of one thing and really it's another thing. But I won't say more because spoilers.
This was well written and an excellently told story with a great moral. The good characters were good, and I wanted to cheer them on while I wanted the bad characters gone. I also loved the historical side to this story. And the western style and the Christian themes. So yes, there was a lot to love, and I think the things I struggled with was more personal preference.
Oh, and by the way, the skull in the apple was quite genius as well but it took my husband pointing it out to me for me to see it.
July 12, 2020
This is part of the "Once Upon a Western" series, but it's not a cowboys and gunfights and bank robbery kind of story. Instead it's about pioneers traveling west in wagon trains, and it focuses on an often overlooked part of history — that some of those pioneers were people of color.
The author used loads of creativity to incorporate elements from the original Snow White fairytale. They all fit naturally like plausible parts of the plot. The evil stepmother character is truly terrifying. Snow White (aka Hopeful) presents a sharp contrast to her stepmother as she is lovely inside and out with a beautiful spirit of humility and forgiveness. She takes after her father who is one of my other favorite characters.
I wish Hopeful were the narrator, but instead a 14-year-old boy named Levi fills that roll. He's not an interesting character and he doesn't have much personality beyond his fascination with medicine and Mrs. Mallone. While I enjoyed some of the other characters and the plot was very interesting, having to see it all through Levi eyes ruined some of that enjoyment for me.
Because of the well researched historical setting, intriguing plot, creative retelling, and unique characters I give this book a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars.
*I received a complementary ARC copy from the author. A review, positive or otherwise, was not required.*
The author used loads of creativity to incorporate elements from the original Snow White fairytale. They all fit naturally like plausible parts of the plot. The evil stepmother character is truly terrifying. Snow White (aka Hopeful) presents a sharp contrast to her stepmother as she is lovely inside and out with a beautiful spirit of humility and forgiveness. She takes after her father who is one of my other favorite characters.
I wish Hopeful were the narrator, but instead a 14-year-old boy named Levi fills that roll. He's not an interesting character and he doesn't have much personality beyond his fascination with medicine and Mrs. Mallone. While I enjoyed some of the other characters and the plot was very interesting, having to see it all through Levi eyes ruined some of that enjoyment for me.
Because of the well researched historical setting, intriguing plot, creative retelling, and unique characters I give this book a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars.
*I received a complementary ARC copy from the author. A review, positive or otherwise, was not required.*
May 9, 2024
“Don’t matter what you look like so much as what you do.”
𝑶𝒏𝒆 𝑩𝒂𝒅 𝑨𝒑𝒑𝒍𝒆 is a non-magical, historical western inspired by the fairytale, Snow White. I love variety in my reading, and this was definitely a unique perspective that I really enjoyed!
Told through the eyes of the character Levi, who is grown but looking back to a time when he was 14, we get a glimpse into a not-so-known part of America’s Old West. Levi and his six orphaned cousins are rescued by a wagon train of black pioneers as they head west to Kansas.
There are mixed feelings regarding the white newcomers, but many are kind and helpful, including Hopeful who represents Snow White. She’s such a sweet, honorable character with plenty of apples to share. She’s the perfect contrast to her “healer” step-mother, Mrs. Mallone. Levi is completely besotted by Mrs. Mallone’s beauty which leads him to second guess his instincts regarding some shocking behavior.
The author handles sensitive topics with such grace and includes a helpful author’s note at the beginning of the book. Discussion questions are also included at the end. Would be great for teen homeschoolers! This is my third book in the Once Upon a Western series, and now I’m looking forward to reading My Rock and my Refuge, the Beauty and the Beast reimagining.
𝑶𝒏𝒆 𝑩𝒂𝒅 𝑨𝒑𝒑𝒍𝒆 is a non-magical, historical western inspired by the fairytale, Snow White. I love variety in my reading, and this was definitely a unique perspective that I really enjoyed!
Told through the eyes of the character Levi, who is grown but looking back to a time when he was 14, we get a glimpse into a not-so-known part of America’s Old West. Levi and his six orphaned cousins are rescued by a wagon train of black pioneers as they head west to Kansas.
There are mixed feelings regarding the white newcomers, but many are kind and helpful, including Hopeful who represents Snow White. She’s such a sweet, honorable character with plenty of apples to share. She’s the perfect contrast to her “healer” step-mother, Mrs. Mallone. Levi is completely besotted by Mrs. Mallone’s beauty which leads him to second guess his instincts regarding some shocking behavior.
The author handles sensitive topics with such grace and includes a helpful author’s note at the beginning of the book. Discussion questions are also included at the end. Would be great for teen homeschoolers! This is my third book in the Once Upon a Western series, and now I’m looking forward to reading My Rock and my Refuge, the Beauty and the Beast reimagining.
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