What is with this series? It can’t keep a good thing going for more than one book at a time. Upon completing the previous book in the series, I found a renewed sense of optimism with the direction of things, but this book seems to have almost gone out of its way to systematically undo everything I loved.
At the end of Valiant, the previous book, I praised the series for finally giving Geary significant character development only to be not only immensely disappointed but also angry with the opening of this book. When we last left Geary, he was extremely optimistic about his present and future situation because he found a reason to fight. Although neither can legally admit or act upon it because of professional obligations, Geary’s relationship with Desjani became a driving force for his character. In narration, we’re told that it has become his reason for wanting to reach home and end the war.
So, how do we build upon this character development in the opening scenes of Relentless? Depressed Geary… again. Once again we see him brooding over the loss of his old ship, the passage of time, and blah blah blah blah blah blah… This is ancient news. If Geary hadn’t already for the most part dealt with these issues in the first handful of books, he certainly had in the most recent one. Worse, when Desjani confronts him about it, Geary accuses her of idolizing him and expecting him to have all the answers.
…Seriously? Ok, let me quote a passage from the previous book to highlight my point:
“‘Thank you. I know you’ve told me on a few occasions that you know I’m human, but sometimes I still think you expect me to be some perfect, godlike being.’ Desjani’s frown deepened. ‘That would be blasphemy, sir. And unfair to you.’”
We CLEARLY dealt with this issue before. Why is it being rehashed now as though it didn’t happen? What’s the matter, Jack Campbell? Don’t know how to deal with a main character who isn’t always beating themselves up? It stinks of retrograde character development.
However, Geary isn’t the only character with development issues, and he certainly doesn’t win the award for worst character progression. Oh, no. That award goes to Desjani. I found her admirable and respectful before this, but now… She’s begun to take on the qualities I hated in Rione while she and Geary were an item. She’s bossy and rude, especially towards Rione. They won’t talk or even use one another’s names because of their squabbles over Geary. It’s all very petty and unbecoming of a character I’ve grown to respect. More importantly, it’s beneath someone meant to be a strong female character.
Another reason I very much dislike this book is because it resolves plot points I enjoyed in the most unsatisfying way possible. The sabotage subplot essentially ended all at once because a character never directly spoken to released evidence saying “X Captain did it.” So, what happens? That captain is identified and exposes their accomplices. Spoiler: the culprit is obvious. The military coup in Geary’s name subplot? Geary talks with the captain who made the offer and convinces him it’s a bad idea. End of subplot. It seems to me that Campbell just wanted to wrap-up all the non-alien plot points as soon as possible because he didn’t know where else to take them. It’s very uncreative and as a result unimpressive in presentation.
Then, they get home, and aside from an underwhelming battle that’s it. Not much else to say. There’s very little praise to give, but I’ll allow it this, the one piece of dialogue I actually enjoyed:
“Captain Geary, this is… Captain Geary.”
One book left before I can call this series quits. In spite of everything, I’m too invested to bail out before the end, but I don’t think I’ll keep reading through to the sequel series.