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Arc of Radiance/Fall of Radiance #1
Ranger's Oath
The barrier between worlds is broken. Only he knows the truth...
Magic has protected Tarsynium for a thousand years, shielding its people from being ravaged by bloodthirsty demons. When a young ranger's apprentice named Owyn Lund discovers that the Arc of Radiance has been breached, he tries to warn anybody who will listen.
But legends aren't supposed to be real.
When a village is mysteriously destroyed, rangers, mages, and rebels all point the finger, blaming each other for the demons' brutality. However, Zara Dennel, a mage's ward, has heard Owyn's tale—and she's inclined to believe him.
Together, they must prove that friendship is greater than intolerance, unity is more important than division, and that even the most powerful magic can sometimes not be enough.
Failure means the end of all things. A second—and lasting—Doom.
Experience the beginning of a thrilling Epic Fantasy series suitable for all ages. It's perfect for fans of Sabaa Tahir, Sarah J. Maas, and Brandon Sanderson.
Grab your copy today! It's also Available on Audible narrated by Michael Kramer and Kate Reading.
Magic has protected Tarsynium for a thousand years, shielding its people from being ravaged by bloodthirsty demons. When a young ranger's apprentice named Owyn Lund discovers that the Arc of Radiance has been breached, he tries to warn anybody who will listen.
But legends aren't supposed to be real.
When a village is mysteriously destroyed, rangers, mages, and rebels all point the finger, blaming each other for the demons' brutality. However, Zara Dennel, a mage's ward, has heard Owyn's tale—and she's inclined to believe him.
Together, they must prove that friendship is greater than intolerance, unity is more important than division, and that even the most powerful magic can sometimes not be enough.
Failure means the end of all things. A second—and lasting—Doom.
Experience the beginning of a thrilling Epic Fantasy series suitable for all ages. It's perfect for fans of Sabaa Tahir, Sarah J. Maas, and Brandon Sanderson.
Grab your copy today! It's also Available on Audible narrated by Michael Kramer and Kate Reading.
326 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 30, 2018
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About the author
Blake Arthur Peel
20 books74 followersBlake Arthur Peel has been coming up with stories ever since he was a kid. He inflicted his scribblings on family members and friends throughout his youth, always drawing maps in the back of notebooks and daydreaming when he probably should have been paying attention. It wasn’t until he was out of college that he finally decided to get serious about pursuing his career as a fantasy author.
His favorite stories have always been about good conquering evil, about fantastic worlds and wondrous magic systems. The works that have most inspired him are The Lord of the Rings, The Dragonlance Chronicles, The Riftwar Saga, The Stormlight Archive, and The Wheel of Time, among many others.
Blake was born and raised in Hemet, California. He loves playing games, being outside, and spending time with his wife and two sons.
Follow him at facebook.com/blakearthurpeel
His favorite stories have always been about good conquering evil, about fantastic worlds and wondrous magic systems. The works that have most inspired him are The Lord of the Rings, The Dragonlance Chronicles, The Riftwar Saga, The Stormlight Archive, and The Wheel of Time, among many others.
Blake was born and raised in Hemet, California. He loves playing games, being outside, and spending time with his wife and two sons.
Follow him at facebook.com/blakearthurpeel
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April 9, 2020
When I first read the synopsis for this book, I knew that I was going to enjoy it, but I was still so surprised by this book! Fantasy is my favourite genre, so it was only natural that I want to read this book, and as always with fantasy novels, I read this so fast.
I really liked the setting of this book, it was so different from anything I was used to. It was really interesting reading about the city where Zara left from, but then having the rest of the book set in the Emberwood, out in the "countryside" (or the wild you could say I suppose), it was really great and it made the book so unique. Zara, Owyn and Elias were such enjoyable characters and I loved my time with them.
I had never read a book like this one before with rangers and mages. The rangers made me think of Robin Hood and the mages made me think of Harry Potter, but it was actually so much more than that.
I absolutely adored this book, it was fast-paced, the characters were very well developed, realistic, relatable and just overall great! I really like books with different points of view, and having the book go back and forth between Zara and Owyn was really great, it's one of my favourite perspectives in a book and this one did not disappoint. This book really had so much, it was so unique, I felt as though I had known the characters for a very long time and I had such a great time reading this book. I'm keeping the full 5-stars for book 2, but I honestly enjoyed this book so much, I think it's safe to safe that this series might be among my favourites this year. I highly recommend!
I really liked the setting of this book, it was so different from anything I was used to. It was really interesting reading about the city where Zara left from, but then having the rest of the book set in the Emberwood, out in the "countryside" (or the wild you could say I suppose), it was really great and it made the book so unique. Zara, Owyn and Elias were such enjoyable characters and I loved my time with them.
I had never read a book like this one before with rangers and mages. The rangers made me think of Robin Hood and the mages made me think of Harry Potter, but it was actually so much more than that.
I absolutely adored this book, it was fast-paced, the characters were very well developed, realistic, relatable and just overall great! I really like books with different points of view, and having the book go back and forth between Zara and Owyn was really great, it's one of my favourite perspectives in a book and this one did not disappoint. This book really had so much, it was so unique, I felt as though I had known the characters for a very long time and I had such a great time reading this book. I'm keeping the full 5-stars for book 2, but I honestly enjoyed this book so much, I think it's safe to safe that this series might be among my favourites this year. I highly recommend!
June 13, 2021
A good example of generic fantasy. Very little novelty and of average quality writing. The narrators on audible were, however, fantastic.
July 22, 2021
This was every bit as enjoyable as I anticipated it to be. It did start out a bit slow but once the action picks up, it really picks up and the next thing you know we're swimming in a sea of terrifying demons (almost literally). The characters were authentic and easy to empathise with. Both Zara and Owyn are young and slightly naive, with their own misconceived ideas about each other (or rather what they are) that made for some slight tension, but I thought they made a really great team. I really enjoyed watching their friendship (and possibly more!) grow throughout the many life-threatening trials they face and their banter was fun to read. I thought the world-building was well done although I still have a lot of questions about the history and magic, thought this was a good introduction to it.
Overall, I felt this was a very promising start to what seems like a fast-paced and action-packed YA fantasy full of magic and demons! I’ve got the whole series lined up on my Kindle already and I can’t wait to continue it soon :)
Overall, I felt this was a very promising start to what seems like a fast-paced and action-packed YA fantasy full of magic and demons! I’ve got the whole series lined up on my Kindle already and I can’t wait to continue it soon :)
April 9, 2020
*3.75 STARS*
June 4, 2018
4.25 - Amazingly Captivating and Satisfyingly entertaining
Ranger’s Oath by Blake Arthur Peel is an exciting new fantasy series with a unique and engaging storyline that takes you on a thrilling journey as you explore a world filled with magic, mystery, and danger. It’s amazingly captivating and satisfyingly entertaining with an ending that will have you anxiously anticipating the next installment.
The concept of this book was really fascinating. Even if a few parts were a little slow, the writing was vivid, incredibly illustrative and enjoyably easy to read that I had a difficult time putting the book down. I thought the world building was wonderfully enthralling and I can’t wait to read more about mages, rangers and demons. The plot was fast-paced, fun, and delightfully engaging. With thrilling action scenes, heart-pounding situations, and jaw dropping twists, I found myself completely immersed in the story. The characters were also all well-developed, intriguing, and relatable. They had their own quirks and charming personalities that made it easy for me to like them. The ending scenes were absolutely epic and had me glued to the pages. This novel was just so much fun to read and I truly enjoyed going on this amazing adventure with Owyn and Zara.
Speaking of Owyn and Zara. I thought they were solid characters and such great heroes. They’re both strong-willed, smart, dedicated, and determined to do whatever it takes to protect their world. As they worked together and broke the rules to investigate and discover the true nature of the dangers threatening their people, I couldn’t help but admire and root for them. Even when the odds were against them, they still fought to do what was best. I also thought they had amazing chemistry and I absolutely enjoyed their playful bantering. There’s a hint of romance there, but it was very very subtle. If romance isn't your thing, don’t worry about it… there’s plenty of action, suspense, and excitement. Personally though, I cannot wait to find out if their friendship will grow into a romantic relationship. I sure hope it does, but even if it doesn't, I'll definitely continue on with the series.
Overall, Ranger’s Oath is a wonderful new fantasy adventure that will leave you wanting more. It's thrilling, mysterious, suspenseful and so fascinating. I honestly cannot wait to see what happens next.
I recevied an advanced reader copy of this book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Ranger’s Oath by Blake Arthur Peel is an exciting new fantasy series with a unique and engaging storyline that takes you on a thrilling journey as you explore a world filled with magic, mystery, and danger. It’s amazingly captivating and satisfyingly entertaining with an ending that will have you anxiously anticipating the next installment.
The concept of this book was really fascinating. Even if a few parts were a little slow, the writing was vivid, incredibly illustrative and enjoyably easy to read that I had a difficult time putting the book down. I thought the world building was wonderfully enthralling and I can’t wait to read more about mages, rangers and demons. The plot was fast-paced, fun, and delightfully engaging. With thrilling action scenes, heart-pounding situations, and jaw dropping twists, I found myself completely immersed in the story. The characters were also all well-developed, intriguing, and relatable. They had their own quirks and charming personalities that made it easy for me to like them. The ending scenes were absolutely epic and had me glued to the pages. This novel was just so much fun to read and I truly enjoyed going on this amazing adventure with Owyn and Zara.
Speaking of Owyn and Zara. I thought they were solid characters and such great heroes. They’re both strong-willed, smart, dedicated, and determined to do whatever it takes to protect their world. As they worked together and broke the rules to investigate and discover the true nature of the dangers threatening their people, I couldn’t help but admire and root for them. Even when the odds were against them, they still fought to do what was best. I also thought they had amazing chemistry and I absolutely enjoyed their playful bantering. There’s a hint of romance there, but it was very very subtle. If romance isn't your thing, don’t worry about it… there’s plenty of action, suspense, and excitement. Personally though, I cannot wait to find out if their friendship will grow into a romantic relationship. I sure hope it does, but even if it doesn't, I'll definitely continue on with the series.
Overall, Ranger’s Oath is a wonderful new fantasy adventure that will leave you wanting more. It's thrilling, mysterious, suspenseful and so fascinating. I honestly cannot wait to see what happens next.
I recevied an advanced reader copy of this book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
March 6, 2020
Excellent start to a new epic fantasy that is sure to become a classic.
March 6, 2020
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
Ranger's Oath is an excellent story. The descriptions are lush but not excessive. The characters are distinct and realistic and delightful. The worldbuilding is rich! The first chapter ends with an amazing hook that makes you forget you had any other obligations, like dishes or errands.
The only thing I didn't love about this story was it being in first person present. First person I don't mind, but present always has a way of tripping me up periodically while reading. But that's a personal preference, and I can objectively say that even though it's not my favorite, it is well done here.
The ending was satisfying, even while leaving questions to be answered.
I will definitely be continuing on to the next book, and probably any other books Blake Peel writes. His storytelling is worth it.
Ranger's Oath is an excellent story. The descriptions are lush but not excessive. The characters are distinct and realistic and delightful. The worldbuilding is rich! The first chapter ends with an amazing hook that makes you forget you had any other obligations, like dishes or errands.
The only thing I didn't love about this story was it being in first person present. First person I don't mind, but present always has a way of tripping me up periodically while reading. But that's a personal preference, and I can objectively say that even though it's not my favorite, it is well done here.
The ending was satisfying, even while leaving questions to be answered.
I will definitely be continuing on to the next book, and probably any other books Blake Peel writes. His storytelling is worth it.
July 29, 2021
Set in a world infested by demons you follow a ranger and a mage as they try to unravel the mystery that their superiors refuse to believe. Filled will cliché and many YA tropes the book starts out strong but quickly fizzles out and turns into a slog to get through. While there are interesting worldbuilding concepts explored (like the demons) it is not enough for me to continue reading more books in this series. If you are into YA fantasy this might be worth reading, for the rest of is fantasy readers it's better to skip this one.
March 9, 2020
Ranger’s Oath is a fun read for any fantasy lover.
It’s set in the world of Radiance, where a magical light barrier protects the human kingdom from demons living beyond.
It features two protagonists, Owyn, a Ranger apprentice, and Zara, a Mage wars. Both are brought together when a village is mysteriously attacked out in the forest.
Owyn and Zara must combine forces to seek the truth about the demon threat that no one else believes in.
Overall I very much enjoyed this book. The beginning was a little too slow-paced for my taste, too much description of everyday stuff but once Owyn and Zara meet the action picks up and then it’s none stop until the end.
Owyn is a serious down to earth type while Zara is more easy-going and interacts well with Owyn bringing out his personality more. I can see the two slowly forming a bond stronger than friendship that will turn into romance in future books and I hope that’s what the author is intending as it can add more tension to the overall plot.
I will definitely be picking up book 2 when it comes out!
It’s set in the world of Radiance, where a magical light barrier protects the human kingdom from demons living beyond.
It features two protagonists, Owyn, a Ranger apprentice, and Zara, a Mage wars. Both are brought together when a village is mysteriously attacked out in the forest.
Owyn and Zara must combine forces to seek the truth about the demon threat that no one else believes in.
Overall I very much enjoyed this book. The beginning was a little too slow-paced for my taste, too much description of everyday stuff but once Owyn and Zara meet the action picks up and then it’s none stop until the end.
Owyn is a serious down to earth type while Zara is more easy-going and interacts well with Owyn bringing out his personality more. I can see the two slowly forming a bond stronger than friendship that will turn into romance in future books and I hope that’s what the author is intending as it can add more tension to the overall plot.
I will definitely be picking up book 2 when it comes out!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 3, 2020
Mr. Peel is a new author to me, so I didn't know what to expect. Well, my expectations were exceeded with this book. This is an exciting action packed page turner with engaging characters. In fact all the characters were brought to life by the author. I was drawn in from the beginning and couldn't put it down. The blurb tells you what it's about so I'm not going to repeat it but I want to say I was impressed how the author told the story from two points of view, ( not many can do that well). I thought this one was very well done. Owyn, apprentice ranger and Zara, initiate mage, two exceptional characters. The story is well written and held my attention throughout. This is book one and it ended satisfactorily for me yet left me wanting more. I highly recommend this book!
March 6, 2020
A fascinating tale of two young wards; a ranger and a mage. I found myself engrossed in the vivid details through the whole novel. A new twist on the typical good vs evil. A few sections I found a bit slow but overall I loved the story. The background, the world building and the massive fight/battle at the end really tied it all together.
Only a spark of romance, dark fantasy battle novel is recommended for all.
Only a spark of romance, dark fantasy battle novel is recommended for all.
March 2, 2020
Very well written fantasy story. The two main characters sucked me in, and world wouldn’t let me go. If you’re a big fan of action and adventure, this book is for you! With twists and turns and fantastical legends, this surely won’t disappoint. Thankful I picked this up!
August 18, 2024
I am more of a Sci-Fi fan than full Fantasy, but every now and then, I get captured by a good quality Fantasy story, and Ranger’s Oath definitely falls into that category. There is something different about the nature of this story, the feel of how it is written, that immediately captures you, and draws you in, and you find that a few hours later, you are half way through the book, and have lost a bunch of time.
The story is told from the point of view of two main characters, the younger apprentices of the two experienced masters in two very different fields, the first, Elias, a respected Ranger of the area of Tarsynium, and the other, a the Arch-Magister of the Realm, Elva Tyrande.
Owyn Lund is the apprentice Ranger, and whilst still learning, he is accomplished at what he does, fast learning to become a Ranger in his own right. Likewise, Zara Dennel is the star pupil of her Academy, and this is the reason that the Arch-Magister chose her to go with her as an apprentice on a mission.
At the start of this book, we learn a little about these characters, and there is some subtle world building, done in a clever way to provide us with sufficient background of both the Ranger and Mage classes, as well as the world that they live in, but also leaving us wanting more.
And this is where we are introduced to a savage and brutal attack on a village. An outlying Village of the settlements has been totally decimated, every man, woman and child in a horrific scene. (Note, there is some graphic violence here, so this book is probably not for really younger readers, but those in early/late teens will be ok)
It is from here that the story really gets its full plotlines – who did this? Why did they do it?
You find out there is rather a complicated network of Political intrigue in the area, and that there could have been several possible groups, and that this could be a pre-cursor to war.
But young Owyn is also worried that it might be something else, even though he is laughed at for his suggestion, for long ago, Demons walked the lands of Tarsynium, until a magical barrier was erected, and is now constantly powered by a special magical gem, that is always monitored, so no Demon can pass – or can they? Owyn is sure he saw something, and Zara is confused that what Owyn saw matches the description of a creature not seen since the Demon Wars, and there is no way Owyn could know what it is – so how did he describe it so well, just as the ancient texts describe it? Could this have been what destroyed the village?
And thus begins a mystery, a desperate hunt, and an area full of people who are al suspicious of each other, and were other people are in danger.
This is a brilliant, exciting adventure story, that is not only a lot of fun, but it is just one thrill to the next, with exceptional character work. You have a great feel for our two young apprentice characters, you get a great understanding for them, an in-depth feel for who they are as the story is told. At the same time, with both of their Mentors, there is more secrecy, and this adds to the intrigue of the story, it is very clever, and an outstanding bit of writing, The Author has done a remarkable job with both the characters and the story.
Doesn’t matter your genre, you will love this story, it is compelling, creative, and enthralling, everything you want in a good Fantasy book.
The story is told from the point of view of two main characters, the younger apprentices of the two experienced masters in two very different fields, the first, Elias, a respected Ranger of the area of Tarsynium, and the other, a the Arch-Magister of the Realm, Elva Tyrande.
Owyn Lund is the apprentice Ranger, and whilst still learning, he is accomplished at what he does, fast learning to become a Ranger in his own right. Likewise, Zara Dennel is the star pupil of her Academy, and this is the reason that the Arch-Magister chose her to go with her as an apprentice on a mission.
At the start of this book, we learn a little about these characters, and there is some subtle world building, done in a clever way to provide us with sufficient background of both the Ranger and Mage classes, as well as the world that they live in, but also leaving us wanting more.
And this is where we are introduced to a savage and brutal attack on a village. An outlying Village of the settlements has been totally decimated, every man, woman and child in a horrific scene. (Note, there is some graphic violence here, so this book is probably not for really younger readers, but those in early/late teens will be ok)
It is from here that the story really gets its full plotlines – who did this? Why did they do it?
You find out there is rather a complicated network of Political intrigue in the area, and that there could have been several possible groups, and that this could be a pre-cursor to war.
But young Owyn is also worried that it might be something else, even though he is laughed at for his suggestion, for long ago, Demons walked the lands of Tarsynium, until a magical barrier was erected, and is now constantly powered by a special magical gem, that is always monitored, so no Demon can pass – or can they? Owyn is sure he saw something, and Zara is confused that what Owyn saw matches the description of a creature not seen since the Demon Wars, and there is no way Owyn could know what it is – so how did he describe it so well, just as the ancient texts describe it? Could this have been what destroyed the village?
And thus begins a mystery, a desperate hunt, and an area full of people who are al suspicious of each other, and were other people are in danger.
This is a brilliant, exciting adventure story, that is not only a lot of fun, but it is just one thrill to the next, with exceptional character work. You have a great feel for our two young apprentice characters, you get a great understanding for them, an in-depth feel for who they are as the story is told. At the same time, with both of their Mentors, there is more secrecy, and this adds to the intrigue of the story, it is very clever, and an outstanding bit of writing, The Author has done a remarkable job with both the characters and the story.
Doesn’t matter your genre, you will love this story, it is compelling, creative, and enthralling, everything you want in a good Fantasy book.
May 8, 2018
In the realm of Tarsynium, man lives beneath a massive dome of magic, which keeps demons and evil at bay. It has stood for thousands of years, stoked by the mages at the capital, unwavering. So when Owyn, an apprentice ranger out training with his master, Elias, stumbles upon what he thinks might be a demon, it throws everything he knows into chaos.
Zara is training to one day become a mage, and so far has shown prodigious talent. When the Arch-Magnus herself wishes for Zara to accompany her to visit the edge of the realm, she leaps at the opportunity to learn from the best and show her talent to the world's most powerful mage.
Owyn and Zara are thrown together as their elders try to dissect the mysterious occurrences which have been plaguing the realm. But when two apprentices have a theory, who's going to listen to them? They have to take matters into their own hands before it's too late.
While the plot was a little slow to get into at first, it quickly picks up the pace as we explore this world through the eyes of Owyn and Zara. The two make quite a pair: forced to trust each other in order to uncover the truth, it doesn't mean that they're going to like it. Zara is strong-willed and a perfectionist, think Hermione born in the middle ages, while Owyn is searching to define himself and carve an identity outside of the shadow of his father. Both must learn to bend the rules in order to do what is right.
Though the story is mildly predictable, it's nevertheless a fun and engaging read, mainly for the brilliant characters. They're incredibly relatable and draw you right into the world. One thing the author writes particularly well is the threatening demonic hordes, which are incredibly creepy, and lead to some fantastic fight scenes. I'm excited to see where the series intends on going next!
Zara is training to one day become a mage, and so far has shown prodigious talent. When the Arch-Magnus herself wishes for Zara to accompany her to visit the edge of the realm, she leaps at the opportunity to learn from the best and show her talent to the world's most powerful mage.
Owyn and Zara are thrown together as their elders try to dissect the mysterious occurrences which have been plaguing the realm. But when two apprentices have a theory, who's going to listen to them? They have to take matters into their own hands before it's too late.
While the plot was a little slow to get into at first, it quickly picks up the pace as we explore this world through the eyes of Owyn and Zara. The two make quite a pair: forced to trust each other in order to uncover the truth, it doesn't mean that they're going to like it. Zara is strong-willed and a perfectionist, think Hermione born in the middle ages, while Owyn is searching to define himself and carve an identity outside of the shadow of his father. Both must learn to bend the rules in order to do what is right.
Though the story is mildly predictable, it's nevertheless a fun and engaging read, mainly for the brilliant characters. They're incredibly relatable and draw you right into the world. One thing the author writes particularly well is the threatening demonic hordes, which are incredibly creepy, and lead to some fantastic fight scenes. I'm excited to see where the series intends on going next!
June 27, 2018
A land shielded by a protective magic dome, shielded for demons. A land torn by politics, with different factions, who all know what is best. A land which needs saving by two young apprentices.
Owyn is a young rangers apprentice, zara is a mage apprentice. Without their permission, they become responsible for saving the land of the savage tribes of demons which are crossing the dome.
This was such a satisfying read. I liked the story line, and the division between the characters. One chapter you follow a young ranger, the next chapter you are in the world of magus and magic. Starting the story, I was wondering how these two lives would meet and how the characters would interact. And I just love Elias, he is so like halt (rangers apprentices). For young readers, and also for older readers, this is a recommendation and add it to your to read list!
(I received an arc from the author)
Owyn is a young rangers apprentice, zara is a mage apprentice. Without their permission, they become responsible for saving the land of the savage tribes of demons which are crossing the dome.
This was such a satisfying read. I liked the story line, and the division between the characters. One chapter you follow a young ranger, the next chapter you are in the world of magus and magic. Starting the story, I was wondering how these two lives would meet and how the characters would interact. And I just love Elias, he is so like halt (rangers apprentices). For young readers, and also for older readers, this is a recommendation and add it to your to read list!
(I received an arc from the author)
May 19, 2020
This was a let down for me.
I listened to it as an audiobook and the Kramer/Reading pair again did their usual high quality performance. Unfortunately that's the best thing to say about this book.
The tone more than once resembles the Wheel of Time series, but while WoT managed to remain consistent this one couldn't.
The plot is ok even if it's far from original, but somehow the characters and their reactions to events are not natural for me at all and most of the time feel strange. Also lots of things in the worldbuilding are not explained, thus the whole setting feels blank and not very insteresting. There are also a handful of logical flaws in the story that are very difficult to explain and also undermine the whole structure.
This book is in a different leauge than eg. the Malazan-cycle books, the Cosmere-books, etc..
I listened to it as an audiobook and the Kramer/Reading pair again did their usual high quality performance. Unfortunately that's the best thing to say about this book.
The tone more than once resembles the Wheel of Time series, but while WoT managed to remain consistent this one couldn't.
The plot is ok even if it's far from original, but somehow the characters and their reactions to events are not natural for me at all and most of the time feel strange. Also lots of things in the worldbuilding are not explained, thus the whole setting feels blank and not very insteresting. There are also a handful of logical flaws in the story that are very difficult to explain and also undermine the whole structure.
This book is in a different leauge than eg. the Malazan-cycle books, the Cosmere-books, etc..
May 20, 2022
It had good bones. An interesting if a bit cliche world and a possible promising start to a series. But it had a few significant flaws that left it mediocre instead of good.
1) Character development. There was none, just characters who do things because that's how it is. If he had added another 100 pages of character development the decisions would have made a lot more sense and the book much better.
2) Tell, not show. Rather than using imagery, actions, or events to show motivations, etc. Instead, it's a lot of telling. Such-and-such person has this personality trait, etc. It left a lot of the characters feeling very shallow and the world felt surface level.
1) Character development. There was none, just characters who do things because that's how it is. If he had added another 100 pages of character development the decisions would have made a lot more sense and the book much better.
2) Tell, not show. Rather than using imagery, actions, or events to show motivations, etc. Instead, it's a lot of telling. Such-and-such person has this personality trait, etc. It left a lot of the characters feeling very shallow and the world felt surface level.
November 17, 2020
Not sure how anyone could think of this book as anything but filler. There are basically no characters. There are people, but they're shallow, useless people. There's no reason to hang a story on any of them.
Sure, you could DEVELOP a character out of one or two of them, but (SPOILER ALERT:)
You didn't.
There is ZERO REASON for anyone that's a "Fantasy" reader to read this book or this series. You've already read this same story, but more well written, or you don't have to subject yourself to this.
Sure, you could DEVELOP a character out of one or two of them, but (SPOILER ALERT:)
You didn't.
There is ZERO REASON for anyone that's a "Fantasy" reader to read this book or this series. You've already read this same story, but more well written, or you don't have to subject yourself to this.
March 22, 2021
This book is beautifully written. It has some sort of musicality to it and when I'm big I want to write as well as the author does.
However, the plot is quite predictable. So much, that I was kind of bored for most of it. I guessed almost all of the plot twists. I was certain of not continuing the series, but then the epilogue happened and now I need to know more.
So I will carry on, hoping that the following ones are less predictable.
However, the plot is quite predictable. So much, that I was kind of bored for most of it. I guessed almost all of the plot twists. I was certain of not continuing the series, but then the epilogue happened and now I need to know more.
So I will carry on, hoping that the following ones are less predictable.
May 22, 2022
Super cheesy, characters are caricatures. Not my type of fantasy.
World and magic pretty cool, but the rest couldn't keep up.
World and magic pretty cool, but the rest couldn't keep up.
March 6, 2021
4.5
Book source ~ BBNYA Tour
The Arc of Radiance has been protecting Tarsynium for a thousand years. Made of magic it keeps the demon horde from obliterating the last humans on the planet. Until the day some demons manage to get through. Ranger’s Apprentice Owyn Lund is the only one who believes the terrible things happening in the town of Forest Hill and surrounding areas are the work of demons. But then a mage’s ward shows up and she does believe him. It’s up to Zara Dennel and Owyn to convince the adults that what they say is true. Not as easy as it sounds.
There’s this group of rebels (there’s always a group of rebels in these stories) called the Nightingales and they are getting blamed for this horrendous demon rampage. Because can you say scapegoat? Except, not everyone believes it’s the Nightingales. Like Owyn’s Master, Ranger Elias Keen. Elias is also not convinced it’s demons, because who would? They’ve been gone so long that they’ve passed into legend. It would be like a teenager running from the woods yelling about a sabre-toothed tiger, but it vanished and no one else saw it. Who would believe such a tale? Regardless of who or what is out there they do know that people are being slaughtered. And that’s a huge problem in a kingdom that is mostly idyllic.
This is a rich world full of magic and sudden unexpected danger. Owyn and Zara are wonderful characters and there are some great secondary characters, too. I especially like Elias, but I suspect we’re meant to. There’s action and horror and a mystery to be solved. HOW are the demons getting through after all this time? I had a suspicion, but it was put to rest by book’s end. However, I’m now setting my sites on something else. I’ll be reading book 2 to see if what I think is what is actually going on. Or will I need to revise my opinion again? Hmmm…bring it on.
Book source ~ BBNYA Tour
The Arc of Radiance has been protecting Tarsynium for a thousand years. Made of magic it keeps the demon horde from obliterating the last humans on the planet. Until the day some demons manage to get through. Ranger’s Apprentice Owyn Lund is the only one who believes the terrible things happening in the town of Forest Hill and surrounding areas are the work of demons. But then a mage’s ward shows up and she does believe him. It’s up to Zara Dennel and Owyn to convince the adults that what they say is true. Not as easy as it sounds.
There’s this group of rebels (there’s always a group of rebels in these stories) called the Nightingales and they are getting blamed for this horrendous demon rampage. Because can you say scapegoat? Except, not everyone believes it’s the Nightingales. Like Owyn’s Master, Ranger Elias Keen. Elias is also not convinced it’s demons, because who would? They’ve been gone so long that they’ve passed into legend. It would be like a teenager running from the woods yelling about a sabre-toothed tiger, but it vanished and no one else saw it. Who would believe such a tale? Regardless of who or what is out there they do know that people are being slaughtered. And that’s a huge problem in a kingdom that is mostly idyllic.
This is a rich world full of magic and sudden unexpected danger. Owyn and Zara are wonderful characters and there are some great secondary characters, too. I especially like Elias, but I suspect we’re meant to. There’s action and horror and a mystery to be solved. HOW are the demons getting through after all this time? I had a suspicion, but it was put to rest by book’s end. However, I’m now setting my sites on something else. I’ll be reading book 2 to see if what I think is what is actually going on. Or will I need to revise my opinion again? Hmmm…bring it on.
March 4, 2021
Ranger's Oath by Blake Arthur Peel is the first book in the Fall of Radiance series.
Peel builds an epic world for his characters to play in. full of magic and mystery. You can certainly see everything play out like a movie in your mind. The story is told from dual POVs, one male, and one female, giving it a unique perspective. Owyn and Zara, ranger and mage struggle throughout to save their realm.
The action is nonstop and captivates you from the opening to the close. Naturally, there are cliffhangers as this is meant to be an epic series. But you can expect a satisfying amount of closure.
When you finish, you'll be reaching for book 2 right away.
I received a copy of the book as a panelist for the Book Bloggers Novel of the Year Award. This review is my honest, unbiased opinion.
Peel builds an epic world for his characters to play in. full of magic and mystery. You can certainly see everything play out like a movie in your mind. The story is told from dual POVs, one male, and one female, giving it a unique perspective. Owyn and Zara, ranger and mage struggle throughout to save their realm.
The action is nonstop and captivates you from the opening to the close. Naturally, there are cliffhangers as this is meant to be an epic series. But you can expect a satisfying amount of closure.
When you finish, you'll be reaching for book 2 right away.
I received a copy of the book as a panelist for the Book Bloggers Novel of the Year Award. This review is my honest, unbiased opinion.
March 4, 2021
Immersive, creative, thrilling and clever, this is not just another fantasy story about mages, rangers and demons, Ranger’s Oath is another level of fun.
I don’t know if I’ve ever read a book about rangers before but now, I want to read more. The truth is when I read the blurb I wasn’t that excited to read the book because I thought it would be just another fantasy story involving apprentices or novices who happen to be stronger than people think they are. I thought it would be just another book about a world where demons once walk amongst humans and wreak havoc but was cast away and now the world is protected by some ancient magic done by some ancient magical people.
In my defense, this book is exactly what I thought it would be, only MORE, so the final verdict is this is not just another fantasy book, it’s on another level.
I think what sets this one apart or what makes Ranger’s Oath special in its own way is the writing. The author’s writing style is very descriptive but not excessive. The descriptions are just vivid enough to make the story immersive. I felt like I was there in the story with the main characters, Zara and Owyn. The world comes alive on the screen of my kindle. I love it. But be warned, when I said the world comes alive because of a well-descriptive writing style, that means all the bad, gruesome, violent parts of the story are vivid too such as that scene of the village that was clearly attacked by some monsters. It was a horrific scene.
The characters were portrayed well too. I enjoyed the story more because the characters, Zara, Owyn and Elias feltfamiliar to me. And no, I don’t mean that they’re cliche. Not really. It’s just that they seem so alive on the pages. I love that the story is told in both Zara and Owyn’s perspective because Zara and Owyn are two very different person (aside from being a girl and a boy. LOL). Owyn is a Ranger’s apprentice and Zara is a mage’s ward. But despite them being different, it’s obvious they have similarities as well and that’s why I love their chemistry. They’re both strong-willed and have sense of what’s right and is willing to do whatever it takes to save their world. I think they’re great heroes. I love their friendship and playful exchanges. Of course there’s a hint of romance and I’m so excited to see it bloom in the next book.
The plot is filled with thrill and adventure but also with intrigues and mystery. There’s definitely something going on that our main characters need to discover. I love how the author played with the plot. I think it’s very well-crafted and just plain clever, actually. Even the ending is amazing. I enjoyed the scenes towards the ending and the ending itself made me excited and yearn for the next book.
My only little complain is that there were times that it’s a bit slow. Overall, the story is fast-paced but there were times that it’s not. But this is just a very minor complain.
I don’t know if I’ve ever read a book about rangers before but now, I want to read more. The truth is when I read the blurb I wasn’t that excited to read the book because I thought it would be just another fantasy story involving apprentices or novices who happen to be stronger than people think they are. I thought it would be just another book about a world where demons once walk amongst humans and wreak havoc but was cast away and now the world is protected by some ancient magic done by some ancient magical people.
In my defense, this book is exactly what I thought it would be, only MORE, so the final verdict is this is not just another fantasy book, it’s on another level.
I think what sets this one apart or what makes Ranger’s Oath special in its own way is the writing. The author’s writing style is very descriptive but not excessive. The descriptions are just vivid enough to make the story immersive. I felt like I was there in the story with the main characters, Zara and Owyn. The world comes alive on the screen of my kindle. I love it. But be warned, when I said the world comes alive because of a well-descriptive writing style, that means all the bad, gruesome, violent parts of the story are vivid too such as that scene of the village that was clearly attacked by some monsters. It was a horrific scene.
The characters were portrayed well too. I enjoyed the story more because the characters, Zara, Owyn and Elias feltfamiliar to me. And no, I don’t mean that they’re cliche. Not really. It’s just that they seem so alive on the pages. I love that the story is told in both Zara and Owyn’s perspective because Zara and Owyn are two very different person (aside from being a girl and a boy. LOL). Owyn is a Ranger’s apprentice and Zara is a mage’s ward. But despite them being different, it’s obvious they have similarities as well and that’s why I love their chemistry. They’re both strong-willed and have sense of what’s right and is willing to do whatever it takes to save their world. I think they’re great heroes. I love their friendship and playful exchanges. Of course there’s a hint of romance and I’m so excited to see it bloom in the next book.
The plot is filled with thrill and adventure but also with intrigues and mystery. There’s definitely something going on that our main characters need to discover. I love how the author played with the plot. I think it’s very well-crafted and just plain clever, actually. Even the ending is amazing. I enjoyed the scenes towards the ending and the ending itself made me excited and yearn for the next book.
My only little complain is that there were times that it’s a bit slow. Overall, the story is fast-paced but there were times that it’s not. But this is just a very minor complain.
January 2, 2021
Ok, so I really enjoyed this book and loved following the two perspectives that we are given, from the characters Owyn and Zara. Owyn is a ranger and Zara is a mage in training and so we get two quite different views on the events, due to the varying outlooks that the two main characters were taught however we see how they join together by the end as Owyn and Zara are not only united in location but also in experience and I loved how the two started to flow so much easier.
I loved reading all about the two characters as they tackled the demons that threatened the magical shield surrounding their country as well as they learned more about themselves and the world around them, including obviously the existence of demons. Zara and Owyn were honestly just great protagonists and I really want to read more about them in the next book!
The writing too was wonderful and I think that Blake Arthur Peel really managed to create a brilliant world in the framework of a really cool story!
I loved reading all about the two characters as they tackled the demons that threatened the magical shield surrounding their country as well as they learned more about themselves and the world around them, including obviously the existence of demons. Zara and Owyn were honestly just great protagonists and I really want to read more about them in the next book!
The writing too was wonderful and I think that Blake Arthur Peel really managed to create a brilliant world in the framework of a really cool story!
May 13, 2018
Protected from the demon-ravaged world outside by a magical shield known as the Arc of Radiance, Tarsynium is a kingdom of relative peace. Guarded by the power of the mages and watched over by the mysterious rangers, everything is set to continue much as it always has. But when apprentice ranger Owyn and his master make an unsettling discovery at the edge of the realm, he has questions. What was the red-eyed beast he spied amoungst the trees? And why won't anyone believe him when there's even the slightest chance that a demon has breached the Arc? Only Zara, mage initiate and devoted scholar, has any time for his story. If they can overcome their own mistrust of each other, and that of their mentors, they may be able to uncover the greatest threat the land has faced in centuries.
It's an interesting adventure story with dual protagonists who won't take no for an answer. They're both strong-willed and carry with them a set of beliefs that shape the chapters they narrate. They both have an idealistic naivety about them that keeps them relatable despite the trials they face. It is a young adult story, so don't expect anyone's actions to be too subtle; characters are who they are. There's also a touch of boy-meets-girl, but only a very light one (if the idea of YA romance sends you running for the hills, it's safe to come back now!)
The story is well-paced, spreading discoveries and danger throughout. There's a hint of Terry Brooks to the demon hoards, but nothing that a young adult audience couldn't handle. The scope of the setting is quite small, but this allows more time to appreciate the handful of locations that feel vivid and fantastical. They truly have stepped out of a traditional fantasy story. This is definitely one to watch as the author grows and explores the world.
Overall an engrossing fantasy-adventure tale perfect for a young adult audience that promises we haven't seen the last of the dangers from outside the Arc.
-I received an ARC copy of this ebook-
It's an interesting adventure story with dual protagonists who won't take no for an answer. They're both strong-willed and carry with them a set of beliefs that shape the chapters they narrate. They both have an idealistic naivety about them that keeps them relatable despite the trials they face. It is a young adult story, so don't expect anyone's actions to be too subtle; characters are who they are. There's also a touch of boy-meets-girl, but only a very light one (if the idea of YA romance sends you running for the hills, it's safe to come back now!)
The story is well-paced, spreading discoveries and danger throughout. There's a hint of Terry Brooks to the demon hoards, but nothing that a young adult audience couldn't handle. The scope of the setting is quite small, but this allows more time to appreciate the handful of locations that feel vivid and fantastical. They truly have stepped out of a traditional fantasy story. This is definitely one to watch as the author grows and explores the world.
Overall an engrossing fantasy-adventure tale perfect for a young adult audience that promises we haven't seen the last of the dangers from outside the Arc.
-I received an ARC copy of this ebook-
March 19, 2020
This was a good book that had a great premise with an interesting take on a post-apocalyptic world.
The team of Kramer and Reading narrating really can't be beat. Both are excellent narrators, and together they are absolutely phenomenal. My one disappointment, and this goes for nearly all books the pair have narrated, is I wish that the two collaborated more closely on the quality/tonality of voices as well as how various words and names are pronounced.
Now, the story.
Although the world and the basis of the story are clearly very different, there is a strong Wheel of Time feel to this book, and not only because the narrators are the same. Many expletives and general tone are clearly borrowed from the iconic series.
This is not necessarily a bad thing, except in that in the WoT books, those things make sense with the history and culture of the world, where here they seem to be there for no better reason than to draw one's mind back to the epicness of the Wheel of Time.
The characters are reasonably well drawn, and some of the conflict feels very natural. However, there is another level of conflict, primarily between the main characters, that feels almost entirely contrived and I feel the novel would have been stronger without it.
There is a nice progression of story while revealing various character traits that makes the book more compelling than some. Unfortunately, neither of the main characters really grabbed me. The book has a very strong YA feel, in that the characters are whiny and selfish and extraordinarily awkward. Yet, at the same time, stand up for one another in ways that just don't feel natural.
All that aside, there are some really cool things being done with both the world and the plot that make this a very worthwhile read. There is a greater conflict in the offing that seems to have a lot of promise in future books.
Now, there are some minor kinks in the writing that make the text a bit awkward at times. As mentioned above, I found the interaction between characters a bit unrealistic at certain points, and the budding romance just feels completely unnatural and unnecessary.
In the end, though it is clearly trying to be something similar, this book just utterly fails to carry anything remotely close to the incredibly deep and epic feel of the Wheel of Time.
Coming to the ending, things build to a very strong climax. Unfortunately, rather than letting the book end in a natural way, it is saved by a Deus Ex Machina of sorts. Not in that it is completely unforeseen, but in that it doesn't make sense with the previous actions and attitudes of the characters.
I would just add, on a final note, that the author seems to have missed a golden opportunity for a huge conspiracy that could have fueled much conflict for many future books.
The team of Kramer and Reading narrating really can't be beat. Both are excellent narrators, and together they are absolutely phenomenal. My one disappointment, and this goes for nearly all books the pair have narrated, is I wish that the two collaborated more closely on the quality/tonality of voices as well as how various words and names are pronounced.
Now, the story.
Although the world and the basis of the story are clearly very different, there is a strong Wheel of Time feel to this book, and not only because the narrators are the same. Many expletives and general tone are clearly borrowed from the iconic series.
This is not necessarily a bad thing, except in that in the WoT books, those things make sense with the history and culture of the world, where here they seem to be there for no better reason than to draw one's mind back to the epicness of the Wheel of Time.
The characters are reasonably well drawn, and some of the conflict feels very natural. However, there is another level of conflict, primarily between the main characters, that feels almost entirely contrived and I feel the novel would have been stronger without it.
There is a nice progression of story while revealing various character traits that makes the book more compelling than some. Unfortunately, neither of the main characters really grabbed me. The book has a very strong YA feel, in that the characters are whiny and selfish and extraordinarily awkward. Yet, at the same time, stand up for one another in ways that just don't feel natural.
All that aside, there are some really cool things being done with both the world and the plot that make this a very worthwhile read. There is a greater conflict in the offing that seems to have a lot of promise in future books.
Now, there are some minor kinks in the writing that make the text a bit awkward at times. As mentioned above, I found the interaction between characters a bit unrealistic at certain points, and the budding romance just feels completely unnatural and unnecessary.
In the end, though it is clearly trying to be something similar, this book just utterly fails to carry anything remotely close to the incredibly deep and epic feel of the Wheel of Time.
Coming to the ending, things build to a very strong climax. Unfortunately, rather than letting the book end in a natural way, it is saved by a Deus Ex Machina of sorts. Not in that it is completely unforeseen, but in that it doesn't make sense with the previous actions and attitudes of the characters.
I would just add, on a final note, that the author seems to have missed a golden opportunity for a huge conspiracy that could have fueled much conflict for many future books.
August 10, 2020
It didn't take me long to realize that this was the author's first book. It's okay, everyone has to start somewhere- and thankfully, unlike certain other fantasy epics that I did not enjoy (The Name of the Wind, The Licanius Trilogy), at least this book didn't overstay its welcome.
The book is very much like baby's first epic fantasy. All the characters are generics that have been done before - I couldn't help but think of the other series that this book borrows from. The Rangers are identical to the Ranger's Apprentice series, the walled off demons are from the Licanius Trilogy (and other books as well), the magic is bland enough that it fits any genre. The two main characters are thrown at each other in over-the-top fashion. From the moment they make eye contact (first impressions for both are: s/he belongs to a different group that is mysterious but inferior to mine; but dang is s/he good looking!), they're constantly fawning over each other, with the light resistance that lets you know that they're eventually getting together. Two separate worlds, two separate specialties, but only one heart.
Then there's the questionable plot points:
1. Owyn decides to follow Zara on a two day trek without telling his master, and without asking her to gain approval from her superiors?
2. Zara shows Owyn a fireball, and Owyn internally states that he didn't understand the power that a mage could bring to bear up until that point, even though just the night before he saw mages lighting enemies on fire. He even mentions this event, but says that seeing Zara just conjure a fireball was more impressive than *seeing people spontaneously combust into flames*.
3. Zara has her talisman taken from her, removing her power to use magic. When they come across some unconscious mages, it is *Owyn* who suggests that she take one of their talismans. Why wouldn't she already instinctively know this?
4. Why didn't a veteran fighter like Elias notice the grey eyes in the zombified enemies, and point this out to the mages? As far as we know, only Owyn noticed, and he only told Zara.
5. The trap laid in the last quarter of the book was pointless - not only was it blatantly obvious, but it could've been removed entirely as it had no impact on the ending of the book.
Alright, maybe I'm being overly critical. In all honesty, I could give the book 4 stars, but only with the caveat that I wouldn't recommend it to adults; it's for young readers, and they would probably find it to be amazing. I'm giving 3 for being so generic.
The book is very much like baby's first epic fantasy. All the characters are generics that have been done before - I couldn't help but think of the other series that this book borrows from. The Rangers are identical to the Ranger's Apprentice series, the walled off demons are from the Licanius Trilogy (and other books as well), the magic is bland enough that it fits any genre. The two main characters are thrown at each other in over-the-top fashion. From the moment they make eye contact (first impressions for both are: s/he belongs to a different group that is mysterious but inferior to mine; but dang is s/he good looking!), they're constantly fawning over each other, with the light resistance that lets you know that they're eventually getting together. Two separate worlds, two separate specialties, but only one heart.
Then there's the questionable plot points:
1. Owyn decides to follow Zara on a two day trek without telling his master, and without asking her to gain approval from her superiors?
2. Zara shows Owyn a fireball, and Owyn internally states that he didn't understand the power that a mage could bring to bear up until that point, even though just the night before he saw mages lighting enemies on fire. He even mentions this event, but says that seeing Zara just conjure a fireball was more impressive than *seeing people spontaneously combust into flames*.
3. Zara has her talisman taken from her, removing her power to use magic. When they come across some unconscious mages, it is *Owyn* who suggests that she take one of their talismans. Why wouldn't she already instinctively know this?
4. Why didn't a veteran fighter like Elias notice the grey eyes in the zombified enemies, and point this out to the mages? As far as we know, only Owyn noticed, and he only told Zara.
5. The trap laid in the last quarter of the book was pointless - not only was it blatantly obvious, but it could've been removed entirely as it had no impact on the ending of the book.
Alright, maybe I'm being overly critical. In all honesty, I could give the book 4 stars, but only with the caveat that I wouldn't recommend it to adults; it's for young readers, and they would probably find it to be amazing. I'm giving 3 for being so generic.
February 14, 2021
Ranger's Oath by Blake Arthur Peel tells the tale of a world surrounded by a magical barrier that keeps demons away from human lands. Despite of this, the young ranger apprentice Owen encounters something that resembles a demon in a forest, but before his master, the ranger Elias can confirm the creates presence, it is gone. They are later taken into custody of the mages guild, where they are under suspicion of helping a rebellion. Here they also meet the young mage in training, Sara, who is the only one who believes Owens demon story.
The writing as such is acceptable, but the story is simple and the characters quite generic. Dialog is equally simple and some of it is borderline cringe worthy, which emphasize the cookie cutter characters. Overall it works, but don’t except a master piece here. The story drags on for most of the time, which is mostly down to a simple character gallery, and waaay too much filler content. We are given the characters thoughts and feelings all the time, for everything little thing they do, and every area they enter is described in way too much unneeded detail. The book also ends with a prolonged battle which isn’t very interesting. With a proper editor, this book could easily have had 25% removed. Mostly this comes down to uninteresting and generic characters, that one doesn’t feel anything for, as they don’t really evolve at all. Even the protagonist is a cookie cutter model, that provides us with multiple dull “i will kill you now” speeches.
I listened to the audiobook narrated by Michael Kramer and Kate Reading, so there’s not anything particular to criticize there, as they are very experienced narrators. But having also listened to the Wheel of Time series narrated by these two narrators, in comparison, this book comes off as Wheel of Time light. The quality difference is quite stark, as the writing here is not nearly as tight, and the story and characters not very interesting. I do wonder though, if this book was directly inspired by the Wheel of Time series, because I do see quite a number of similarities?
Overall a simple, predictable and generic fantasy story. It has its moments, but overall it is not interesting enough to make much of a mark. There is minor setup to a sequel, in case you find it interesting.
I received this audiobook for free in return for a review. I have no affiliation with the author, the narrator, the publisher, or their pets (Although I am sure the latter are quite nice!).
The writing as such is acceptable, but the story is simple and the characters quite generic. Dialog is equally simple and some of it is borderline cringe worthy, which emphasize the cookie cutter characters. Overall it works, but don’t except a master piece here. The story drags on for most of the time, which is mostly down to a simple character gallery, and waaay too much filler content. We are given the characters thoughts and feelings all the time, for everything little thing they do, and every area they enter is described in way too much unneeded detail. The book also ends with a prolonged battle which isn’t very interesting. With a proper editor, this book could easily have had 25% removed. Mostly this comes down to uninteresting and generic characters, that one doesn’t feel anything for, as they don’t really evolve at all. Even the protagonist is a cookie cutter model, that provides us with multiple dull “i will kill you now” speeches.
I listened to the audiobook narrated by Michael Kramer and Kate Reading, so there’s not anything particular to criticize there, as they are very experienced narrators. But having also listened to the Wheel of Time series narrated by these two narrators, in comparison, this book comes off as Wheel of Time light. The quality difference is quite stark, as the writing here is not nearly as tight, and the story and characters not very interesting. I do wonder though, if this book was directly inspired by the Wheel of Time series, because I do see quite a number of similarities?
Overall a simple, predictable and generic fantasy story. It has its moments, but overall it is not interesting enough to make much of a mark. There is minor setup to a sequel, in case you find it interesting.
I received this audiobook for free in return for a review. I have no affiliation with the author, the narrator, the publisher, or their pets (Although I am sure the latter are quite nice!).
March 27, 2020
This book is hard to review... I fell in love with Owyn and Zara right from the get go! Owyn is a Rangers apprentice and Zara's a ward of the Mages. It's a coming of age story and of the friendship that they form...
And the narration is top-notch as Michael Kramer and Kate Reading are tops in the field!
But, the plot holes, inconsistencies, illogic, and inhumane treatment of animals just dragged me down! For instance when we first meet Owyn he seems like a young boy, of 7 or 8, out on his first hunt, asking questions like "how do you know which way to go"... then seemingly a day later, when Owyn secrets Zara out to the woods, he's like a serious 18 year old, and the Ranger that he's been trained to be! Zara's story also had some plot holes that I just couldn't reconcile, but to describe them would be a bit too on the nose and spoilery. As far as the animal abuse goes, let's just say that you'd never ever ride a horse hard, have it lathered up, and then leave it standing in a stall with plenty of water without a cool-down walk! That is unless you want to lame it or possibly kill it... hummm... I can't believe how much this scene actually bugged me!
And the narration is top-notch as Michael Kramer and Kate Reading are tops in the field!
But, the plot holes, inconsistencies, illogic, and inhumane treatment of animals just dragged me down! For instance when we first meet Owyn he seems like a young boy, of 7 or 8, out on his first hunt, asking questions like "how do you know which way to go"... then seemingly a day later, when Owyn secrets Zara out to the woods, he's like a serious 18 year old, and the Ranger that he's been trained to be! Zara's story also had some plot holes that I just couldn't reconcile, but to describe them would be a bit too on the nose and spoilery. As far as the animal abuse goes, let's just say that you'd never ever ride a horse hard, have it lathered up, and then leave it standing in a stall with plenty of water without a cool-down walk! That is unless you want to lame it or possibly kill it... hummm... I can't believe how much this scene actually bugged me!
April 18, 2020
A Simple Story
The plot is a simple one: demons break through the magical barrier which is supposed to keep them out and invade the land. Our characters discover this and try to stop them.
The author writes the story from the perspective of both main characters which is disconcerting as it switches between the two MCs every chapter. This is a technique that works well for Romance novels but as this story has the makings of epic fantasy it only serves to irritate.
My big dislike of this novel is the characters ' lack of depth. They all come across as wooden and two dimensional. Consequently I found it difficult to become involved with any of the characters or the story. For this minus one star.
Although the original idea is a good one, the novel does not make good on its potential. There was nothing to really hold the reader 's attention and I couldn't have cared less if I never finished the novel or if the demons won. Minus the second star.
This story does not contain a cliffhanger but will definitely be continued.
The plot is a simple one: demons break through the magical barrier which is supposed to keep them out and invade the land. Our characters discover this and try to stop them.
The author writes the story from the perspective of both main characters which is disconcerting as it switches between the two MCs every chapter. This is a technique that works well for Romance novels but as this story has the makings of epic fantasy it only serves to irritate.
My big dislike of this novel is the characters ' lack of depth. They all come across as wooden and two dimensional. Consequently I found it difficult to become involved with any of the characters or the story. For this minus one star.
Although the original idea is a good one, the novel does not make good on its potential. There was nothing to really hold the reader 's attention and I couldn't have cared less if I never finished the novel or if the demons won. Minus the second star.
This story does not contain a cliffhanger but will definitely be continued.
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