**don’t Let this book keep you from exploring this series!**
3 Stars
This book started with so much promise. The opening scene grabbed me and piqued my interest, I’m a huge CSI/Criminal Minds fan, and I quickly settled in for what I assumed would be a gripping, suspenseful mystery, with a side of smoking hot romance. Umm.. unfortunately, that’s not what happened. The content of the suspense/mystery portion started out so well, but it all quickly fell apart and the execution was just not good. The author would start a scene and it would get interesting, you’d get to edge of your seat to see how it was going to unfold and then suddenly the scene would jump to something else and at times, she never came back to that idea/scene. These scenes often felt like interrupted thoughts as if her train of thought had been lost mid-thought.
Now the romance, well, it suffered from the same issues. The development was okay, but it was also unfocused at times. I would be waiting for a big revelation and the scene would jump to something else. As for the chemistry, Elle nailed that, Adam and Micah’s chemistry was off the charts, but the sex, well, it was umm..somewhat awkward at times.
So, in closing, this story had so much potential, but it fell severely short. BUT, but, I started this series at book number four, so I KNOW the potential this series has, in-fact, after reading books 4, 5 and 6, my mind is completely blown that this is the same author. Her writing has improved TREMENDOUSLY, so if you’re reading my review, although it’s negative, please don’t give up, because if you move forward with this series, you’ll find an author that has learned to hone her craft nicely. I’m glad I started later in the series, because I’m not sure I would have gone further, and I now know, I would have been missing out. So, you don’t have to read this story, and I haven’t read books two or three YET, although I plan to, but I can definitely vouch for books four through six!