I struggled to even finish this one. It had a predictable, and nonsensical plot. The villain's plan/plot was unbelievably weak and could have easily been thwarted had the characters not been such morons. Amelia especially made my blood boil. Her decision making was absolutely ridiculous and the way she'd actively convince herself that her stupid decisions were the right ones, just to suit her own goal, it was beyond annoying. For a seemingly "smart and educated" lady, she was a naive idiot.
Jamie, he felt so two-dimensional. His past is only brought up in idle conversation, never once divulging deeper into how these traumatic events affected him in the present. He had nothing really going for him other than arrogance.
Marianne and William's heavy involvement in the first novel makes the second installment less exciting for me to want to read. They've already met and exchanged heated flirtations. So much so, that it feels like nothing is left to include in the second novel, apart from the glaringly obvious hurdle they will have to jump that's already been eluded to.
Not to mention, the grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and plot holes were too many to count. The characters would flip-flop very easily, going against their previous claims, only to make it convenient in forcing a happy outcome.
I'm disappointed that Cobalt Fairy seems completely disinterested in substance, not to mention, their notoriety for accepting completely unedited manuscripts and never bothering to correct them. This is supposed to be an ADULT historical romance, but I felt like I was being treated like a child whilst reading.