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Cloudy in the West

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In the Old West, twelve-year-old Joey Shipman runs away from his stepmother's home, only to find that a murderous relative is on his trail and that his only hope lies in the help of a drunk, a prostitute, an outlaw, and a sheepman

255 pages, Hardcover

First published January 1, 1997

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Elmer Kelton

202 books268 followers
Elmer Kelton (1926-2009) was award-winning author of more than forty novels, including The Time It Never Rained, Other Men’s Horses, Texas Standoff and Hard Trail to Follow. He grew up on a ranch near Crane, Texas, and earned a journalism degree from the University of Texas. His first novel, Hot Iron, was published in 1956. Among his awards have been seven Spurs from Western Writers of America and four Western Heritage awards from the National Cowboy Hall of Fame. His novel The Good Old Boys was made into a television film starring Tommy Lee Jones. In addition to his novels, Kelton worked as an agricultural journalist for 42 years. He served in the infantry in World War II. He died in 2009.

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Profile Image for Cheryl.
1,161 reviews
April 30, 2017
Really two and a half stars. Western coming of age story about an orphan boy on the run from his step mother, who wants him dead so she can inherit the family farm. He tries to find his only living adult relative - a cousin with a knack for getting into trouble. Together, they find adventure and each one grows into a better person than they had been when apart.

I took off a half star, because sometimes the story seemed to drag, and nothing much happened. This is more a character study than an action novel. An ok read, but nothing special.
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57 reviews14 followers
January 20, 2012
There is a folksy delivery to Cloudy In The West that I enjoyed. It is essentially a coming of age story written from the perspective of a twelve year old boy. It is a combined adventure yarn and morality tale and has moments of insight and wisdom that caused me to read certain passages deliberately. It is the first Kelton book - a revered Texas author - that I've read and I'll likely read him again.
Profile Image for Fredrick Danysh.
6,844 reviews195 followers
August 1, 2019
When Joey Shipman's father dies his stepmother tries to murder in order to get the family farm. He runs away from home to search out his cousin in Bastrop. Almost immediately the two are on the run and are taken prisoners by outlaws. Kelton has produced anotjer enjoyable Western
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352 reviews10 followers
May 7, 2017
I really wanted to like this book, so I'm giving it the better of the two considered ratings. At first, I started to think that this kind of book might just not be for me; it looked like the author tried to use pretty much every cliche and dead horse trope he could find. But then, maybe after the first third, it got better. It still wasn't something I'd actively look for; but a lot more enjoyable than the few other books in this genre I've read. (I've listened to an audio version; in the first third, when I got bored, I wondered whether to drop it; I decided to listen to it at 1.6 speed instead. That might've helped. :)
Profile Image for Janet Popish.
124 reviews1 follower
March 26, 2019
If you like western novels and have never read Elmer Kelton's, you should give him a try. There is not a lot of sex or violence in them. His characters are well drawn. Some of them are stereotypes, but that is to be expected in a western, where the outlaw or wicked woman often ends up having a heart of gold.
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937 reviews7 followers
December 24, 2016
With this book, a True Grit type of story, I slowed down my reading when I got to the last 50 or so pages because I didn't want it to end. I liked the characters, the storyline, and the writing. I've read Kelton previously and this book met my expectations. Actually, exceeded them.
76 reviews1 follower
November 16, 2009
This is a fast-paced story with a lot of thrills and woes. But as usual, Elmer Kelton does his magic. You will not want to put it down.
661 reviews9 followers
January 27, 2020
There is plenty of action and suspense to keep the readers attention. Almost all of his villains had some redeeming characteristics. Only two were unredeemable bad. His good guys were mostly just good. The story did not have an ending that so evident that the reader could have guess correctly without reading the whole story. The author had his characters riding 250 mile on horse back without giving adequate time for the horse to rest and graze. To have ridden horses the way he describes they woul be dead long before he was half way finished with his story. His story works with cars in which you just fill up with gas. Horses must be rested every so often and they cannot be loped,trotted or run for very long.
Profile Image for G Alex Garver.
7 reviews2 followers
August 1, 2019
Great coming of age story! Read it out loud to my kids as a summer book. It held their attention (late elementary and middle school) and then we visted some places described in the book. Love this book.
58 reviews1 follower
September 20, 2025
A simple story about early Texas life. Simple but draws you into the lives of the characters. The more I read the more I wanted the story to continue until it reached a happy ending. That was achieved but with a few unexpected twists before the finale.
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338 reviews2 followers
July 31, 2018
Dependable old cowboy book. I do so enjoy westerns!
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356 reviews4 followers
March 14, 2019
It is a good western story but not in my top 10 list. Still like the author and will keep reading.
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1,204 reviews20 followers
July 20, 2019
Not bad for what it is. Plot kept moving and was interesting throughout.
Profile Image for Sandra Murphy.
Author 8 books34 followers
November 14, 2019
Always a treat to read an Elmer Kelton tale. He never fails to capture to heart of early Texas.
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24 reviews
March 21, 2020
It’s such a great western. Elmer Kelton is one of the best writers in this genre. He really knows how to build the characters and develop them to where you never want to put the book down.
93 reviews2 followers
January 1, 2024
Kelton the Best Ever

I have read all of Elmer Kelton’s novels at least once and thoroughly enjoy reading-reading e them. This coming of age tale is his better ones.
Profile Image for Jeff Tankersley.
1,031 reviews15 followers
February 5, 2025
"You're totin' around a lot of trouble for a boy your age."
"I reckon I'm big enough to carry it."

Joey Shipman's evil stepmother wants to sell the ranch that his father left him after his suspicious passing, and some frightful events and personal losses send 12-year-old Joey on the run to find his no-good cousin Beau to help him.

Verdict: A good Kelton western, "Cloudy in the West" (1997) can be a bit predictable at times but is overall a smart western tale of growth, survival, morality, and forgiveness.

Jeff's Rating: 3 / 5 (Good)
movie rating if made into a movie: PG-13
Profile Image for Jeff.
110 reviews
July 4, 2013
Cloudy in the West (1997)

This is another stellar western novel by Elmer Kelton. Joe Shipman is a twelve year old living with his hard scrabble farmer father in the Texas Llano River country. Ma dies and marries a hot young thing named Dulcie who ends up having an affair with Blair Meacham, a “cousin” who helps her kill Joey’s pa. Then they kill the Negro hand Reuben for protecting Joey. Joey takes off with Blair in pursuit. He connects with his father’s drunken cousin Beau, a hooker named Alta, and various sorts, including a likeable badman named Miller Dawson. One thing I like about Kelton is that his characters are, for the most part, good people or striving to be good people and when they do bad things you can see the human part of them anyway. This certainly has aspects of Huck Finn in it, and there is even a reference to the book Tom Sawyer, but it also reminds me a lot of Forrest Carter’s Outlaw Josey Wales, and the film made of same. Again, as I’ve written about Kelton before, he sticks closely to the frames of the genre, a journey, a conflict resolved through violence between a hero of sorts and a villain of sorts, but by this novel, written in the mid nineteen nineties, you have to look a little harder to find the formula. I don’t know if you can ever say one writer is the best representation of the genre for an entire century, but you can at least understand how Western Writers of America so praised Kelton. The greatest aren’t always the most influential, and certainly not the most read (Louis L’Amour and Zane Grey are both of those but neither is a great writer though both are historically important), but I get giving Kelton this title. Way to go, Elmer.
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287 reviews12 followers
May 19, 2017
Elmer Kelton. Enough said!
Another superb book from Kelton. Every one of his books that I have read, has been unique from the a-typical western. Yes, there are some characteristics that most westerns have: horses, guns, dust, cattle, slight romantic plot. But how he combines these pieces and sets a plot is quite special.

This along with Pumpkin Rollers have been some of my most favorite books I have read in the past year. Can't wait to read more of them!
1,818 reviews83 followers
March 19, 2012
Very good book (4 1/2 stars if I could) by Kelton about a 12-year old boy who goes on the lam from his murderous step-mother and her new husband. The only family he has is an older drunken 2nd cousin who wants nothing to do with him. Recommended!
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100 reviews1 follower
August 31, 2008
I don't know that I learned anything....but I like his books as I have indicated before
11 reviews2 followers
April 25, 2011
first book that i have read by Elmer Kelton. I like his different approach to eh western.
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203 reviews3 followers
August 28, 2011
12 year-old Joey Shipman runs away from home after his father dies, meets a cousin, and heads to California.
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17 reviews3 followers
September 25, 2014
This book opens with a boy hacking his stepmother to death with a hoe. I had to stop and make sure I was indeed reading Elmer Kelton and not Elmore Leonard.
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