*dnr, never-to-read, but i'm giving it a shot.
*H impregnates h; skipped over those two scenes.
*omg!! alien men come to earth, pick up 4 women, and accidentally, the h.... and guess what, she had 'bad genes' aka 'not blonde'!! ugh. i don't mind it when aliens are oohing and aahing over pale gold hair, but i have serious issues about 'dark hair = bad genes'.
*also, i'd rather not have alien bad guy paired up with an innocent earthling :| (Tin and Lovey). (Tin is the one trying to 'claim' Kelly as well, since Tau doesn't want her as mate)
*oops. apparently Lovey isn't much of an 'innocent' earthling. guess Tin's behavior had to be justified somehow. (lovey accuses kelly of tyring to seduce Tin and Kinko).
*hmm... other girls gang up on kelly, and she physically assaults sheryl to get them to leave her alone. first part: happens all the time! (girls ganging up against one member to promote solidarity within group). second part: not exactly a good, viable option in most cases. but hey, if it worked for h on alien-world, more power to her.
*so, to rescue the h, H first lets things get out of hand (aka, did not mate her), and when she's taken away to a lab to be dissected, he cuts of the fellows hand... and now if the attacked guy dies, H will be held accountable... sheesh.
* Testosterone didn't seem to be a good conductor for complex emotions
uh... blech
* Tin shrugged off-handedly. Osit knew very well that his woman had lost her cub because their love play had gotten a little out of hand
Tin and Lovey... ugh
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*Here's the thing, parts of the story are actually good. The main plot for instance. Actually, that's pretty much the only thing :|
*Okay, so the story got a lot better in the end. The court room drama was well done. And the book ends on a good note (I kindda forgot why I disliked it! ;))