Good premise and promise of intrigue from this book but I just can’t with the writing. 🤷🏻♀️
Some examples and this is just the very beginning~
Ben, a true crime writer and widower with a teenage daughter, met Emma at a reading for one of his books and when she told him “your writing touches a part of me,” he did not see ANY red flags whatsoever, but instead fell for how much his TRUE CRIME books moved her, fell for her beautiful soul and Married her.
Okay, a gullible character, that’s probably integral to the plot so I kept reading… 🙄
Then we get to a scene where Ben’s daughter skipped school and he finds her and she is immediately apologetic and repentant, hugs him and then pours her heart out to him right then and there about everything that’s been bothering her. Sigh. She’s a TEENAGE Girl; It’s not that easy, I think to myself; So back to the reviews I go and then I see the name Harlequin amongst the reviews and think, okay, so this is the harlequin romance version of dramatic fiction, take a deep breath and continue to read.
I can’t even make it to page 78 when I read, as narrated from Ben’s point of view (about Emma) how he “loved her for her spirit”…, “she reached him”… she “brought him back to life”, “they bonded on another level”…. although “her eyes were tinged with sadness…” and I just can’t. This was all literally all thrown out at once at the reader all within a couple of short paragraphs. Sigh.
But I saw where this is going, a heinous murder (massacre actually) of a family with young kids occurred when “Emma” was a teenager, she was involved, and now her true crime writer husband
will innocently decide to write about it and she will let him without revealing her true identity while meanwhile being hunted down and harassed by some yet to be determined character from her past. In the meantime, by not telling, Emma is endangering and putting at risk her soulmate Ben and her new perfect family. Oh, the choices. The bad choices.
I totally skimmed through more drivel to get to the end and good grief, what a colossal waste of time it would have been continuing to read. Here’s some SPOILERS if you’re like me when a book never gets going for you but you want to see what happened:
Emma in present day is Jane from the flashback chapters of 2000 and she and her two besties, the Skull Sisters (yes 🙄), broke into the home of the well to do family Jane babysat for when they were supposed to be away as revenge to get Jane’s babysitting money they shorted her on.
The family returns early due to the little boy being sick (he and his little sister are very young and portrayed as sweet kids which makes what happens next truly horrible), and surprise the three 14 year old girls who’ve broken in. Two of the girls grab knives and jump on and attack the dad while the little children run screaming upstairs to escape. The dad is stabbed to death by the two while Jane tries fruitlessly to stop it, while the mom screams at the three girls that they are trash and how dare they be in her house. (Much is made in this book about how these girls are from “the wrong side of the tracks” and that later serves as motive for these two 30 years later to come back and hunt down “Emma” as she has made it good with her sweet true crime writer of a husband, his sweet daughter and their beautiful house and accoutrements). Of course mom gets murdered violently while Jane again tries to physically stop it. The two girls then go upstairs and mercilessly and violently kill the little children and write a message in their victims’ blood on the wall so police will think it’s a serial killer.
BC these are Jane’s “Skull Sisters” and they took a blood vow to keep each others’ secrets plus Jane feels at fault (she really is at fault as they’re in the house bc of her and with her help 🤷🏻♀️), she does not let her lawyer tell the truth and present that she tried to stop this as a defense and takes equal responsibility as the other two and all three are convicted of second degree murder and sentenced to 20 years. (Which is very very low ).
Plus, when the girls are released from jail years later, they are given false names and identities “to protect them” as they were so young at the time they decided to massacre an entire family. Yeah right, the Department of Corrections or the prosecutors want to protect them 🙄 and this really happens all the time in real life. Not.
Oh, the victim family does have a surviving member, an older sister who was institutionalized at the time with “mental issues” and she is also hunting down Emma and the girls to exact her revenge.
All of these girls end up dead at the end of the book, including Emma/ Jane, most of them hit by a car driven by one of the others as they imprison Ben’s (so sweet) teenage daughter and Emma saves her and fights for her family whilst Ben races to the scene in another car to save his daughter.
Bad Skull Sister friend tells Ben on her dying breath that Emma was the mastermind behind the original murders just because she hates Emma/Jane so much out of jealousy. (BC girls like them from the wrong side of the tracks don’t get to make it good, that’s why). Now poor true crime writer Ben doesn’t know who to believe as his wife Emma/ Jane is dead, too.
BUT to the rescue comes Sweet teenager and she maturely reminds Dad Ben that Emma was good to them and was such a kind person who changed and should not be blamed for bringing all this chaos and bloodshed into their lives.
Of course she does. 🙄