#AD: gifted product
Thanks to the publishers, and NetGalley, for providing me with a free eARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.
Warning: this book contains discussions of racism, and the unfair trial and subsequent death sentence of a young boy.
Unfortunately, I find myself struggling to give this book a proper review. First, I would say this: pay heed to the word 'occasional' in the title. The majority of this book is prose vignettes, or prose poetry. This book, for me, is primarily a memoir, or perhaps a homage to the author's father. The writing itself is certainly competent, and often touching. The piece that stood out to me the most was one right towards the end, titled "Black Boy with Cow: A Still Life". This piece was by far the most emotionally of the book, mostly due to its subject matter, but also due to the portrayal it offers of the author's relationship to her father.
This was what I enjoyed about the book. However, I struggled to get involved in many of the prose vignettes, and I was often left wondering if what I was interpreting as prose poetry due to the line breaks was actually a formatting issue. There were many formatting issues with this book, to the point where I was often unsure if something was placed in error or intentionally. I hope this issues are resolved before the book is released, as I would be disapppinted had I paid for this, especially as I felt distracted from the writing itself by the errors with which it was riddled. With better formatting, and error corrections, I do feel as though this book could potentially gain an extra star, but the errors were too distracting for me to enjoy the writing as I perhaps could otherwise.
Rating: 3 stars, could easily be 3.5-4 if formatting errors are removed in the published edition.