I loved Jenifer Ruff’s 'The Numbers Killer'.
The story is whole and seductive, the main character (Agent Heslin) has depth and likeability, and as usual with Jenifer Ruff, there’s lots of body-bags.
From the very first pages, I had an instant connection to the tortured, disorganized soul doing the killing. I like the fact that Ruff identifies the killer to the reader and gives the killer a face, a body and a series of surmountable conflicts. I also like that the author gives the killer a voice and allows us to swim inside the mind of someone detached enough from good sense and reality to initiate a spree of murders in 36 hours. As a reader, I want to hear the killer try to sift through the details of the killings and I want to hear and see the battles going on inside the killer's head.
Why?
Because Ruff giving her killer an identity and a voice makes the killer more real, more human, more dangerous than some permanently twisted psychopath we don’t ever get to identify with, and we don’t ever get to see until he/she guts another character. As readers, we can see and hear and read the killer has no qualms, no guilt, no hesitation about killing, and we get to see and hear and read the killer has a purpose, has a plan, and has a methodology that never seriously considers getting caught. In fact, the numbers killer is more concerned with getting the proper credit for the murders, and 'protecting' Agent Heslin, than serving as a foil or combatant for the authorities hunting for the killer. Those qualities connect me as a reader to the killer, and any writer who’s successful in doing that, has created a successful character.
There is one area I think could use some improvement. The male characters all play off of the main female character, Agent Heslin, and while in the particular case of this story and Agent Heslin, that's a benefit, not a liability, the fact remains that the primary male characters in this book come off as soft and servile, rather than substantive and unique. I'm hopeful that in future books in this series, Rivera and Ned, the two male characters that Ruff introduces to me in this installment, will gain some much-needed personality and depth as well as more individual treatment. The male characters may gain more traction with me if Ruff gives them some of the same attention she’s given to her main character.