God I wish I could give this 0 stars. I truly do not know how this has so many high ratings.
The writing is awful. There are far too many “he said/she said”. I’m so, so sick of the word ‘said’ now that I was starting to cringe less than halfway through the book.
The characters were laughably ridiculous. There was one officer who went to arrest someone and was just shouting stupid villain phrases at the guy:
“you’re going down for good, sunshine… don’t mess with me, sunshine”.
I don’t know what it is with this book and repetition.
The whole build up of who the killer was, only for it to be over in less than 1 chapter was enough to make me nearly give up. If I didn’t have less than 15 minutes left, I think I would have. It would have been far more interesting to see him with the police, and his interactions with them, maybe get sent to the same prison as his dad.
Now on to the part where the woman officer:
1: has her head smashed into the wall after she fell into the bath
2: had a knife somehow, very movie like, thrown from a distance down some stairs to have it lodge in between her shoulder blades. But it also somehow pierces her lung and hits her ribs and she is then able to reach around and pull it free ???
3: has her head smashed into the door hard enough for her to feel her brain hitting her skull
4: has her head smashed into the tiled floor (and here is where she finally starts bleeding)
5: is stabbed in the stomach
6: has her ear bitten
7: is scratched, bitten, punched, kicked, etc.
And yet, she’s able to get through alllllll that, in that order, and manages to stab him. Seriously?!?
And the whole pointless thought process/inner monologue of why she chose to live where she did because it “made her feel safe” and there are “always people around”, only for her to think less than 30 seconds later, that if she screamed “nobody would hear her”. Make up your mind!! Are there people around or not?!
And what is with the sudden relationship?!? Where the fuck did that come from??!! And after all she went through, she’s up, walking around, cooking, cleaning, etc after 6 weeks?!? When her lung was punctured??? And the only complaint she has is when someone hugs her too hard.
“I was stabbed, remember?”
“Sorry, I forgot.
Overall this book made me want to scratch my eyes out multiple times and I lost count of how many times I said the words “what the fuck” and rolled my eyes. I’m still trying to work out if this was written by AI just to screw with people, but there is somehow another 9 books in the series!