After an incident at school, Caroline hides in the small museum inside the City Hall. A group of thieves hold up the small museum, taking with them some relics, and Caroline. They throw her into a locked room with the hope of getting some ransom money for her. She finds she’s not alone in the locked room. Her fellow prisoner claims to work for a federal agency known as Federal Paranormal Activities Agency, and he’s a vampire. He tells her that the group that took them prisoner are elves, and that his agency won’t be coming for him because his agency sees him as a problem, so it’ll be up to the two of them to escape their captors.
I liked this story. It’s aimed at a young audience, with Caroline being a typical teenager. She’s awkward, and bullied by other students, but she’s also smart to know when people are lying to her and devises an escape plan, and she keeps an open mind, allowing her to accept the idea of Darien being a vampire and a good guy. And I loved that she was able to hold her own without being a cliched shoot-first black leather wearing tough chick. I liked Darien, too, who was a nice guy in a bad predicament, and relatively young, so still a rookie, and I liked his determination not to let prejudice of his species and other species ruin his job, and I loved that he had flaws to him, like his hero complex which seemed to get him into bad situations, and his problematic previous relationship that got him black balled with the entire agency, and that he was talkative. The plot is a fun one, though straight forward with the two of them locked up together with plenty of time to build the paranormal world around them. And I liked that there was chemistry between Darien and Caroline, though at this point it was just a nice blossoming friendship topped with Darien’s hero complex wanting to protect her. And I liked Point who had a lot of humor to him. The copy I obtained did have typos in it. Not a lot, but I noticed them every couple of pages. My largest quibble with the story was that the copy I had never really described what happened to Caroline that prompted her to seek refuge in the museum. All it mentioned what that something happened during gym and that the bully Monique was involved. I really have no idea what happened. I liked both Caroline and Darien enough that I’m eager to see further adventures of them working together, but I’m really not a fan of paranormal organizations -they’re just so cliché.