As research for a novel I'm writing, I'm reading detective fiction and ripping off everything of value. My story takes place in L.A. of the early '90s, but I'm traveling to all eras and hiring all manner of sleuth to serve as tour guide thorugh the City of Angels. Working my way backwards in time through the Philip Marlowe series, next up is The Lady in the Lake. Published in 1943, I found myself less interested in who shot whom from where and why this time and allowed Chandler's slowly aged and robust prose to intoxicate me. If the best style is that which is invisible, that's Chandleresque.
Philip Marlowe goes to see about a new client, Mr. Derace Kingsley, a big shot businessman who takes to Marlowe's nonchalant backtalk. Mr. Kingsley is also desperate to locate his wife Crystal, missing for a month. Last seen at their in the mountain town of "Puma Point," Crystal's disappearance hadn't raised much concern from her husband due to a telegram she sent announcing her intention to obtain a divorce in Mexico and to marry a fop named Chris Lavery. The playboy has assured Kingsley that this is untrue, which Kingsley believes.
Asking Kingsley's bewitching secretary Miss Adrienne Fromsett for Lavery's address, Marlowe detects poison in her attitude. Knocking on the fop's door at his home in "Bay City," Marlowe is assured, for the time being, that Lavery did not run off with, marry or has any notion of Crystal Kingsley's whereabouts. Watching the house, Marlowe attracts the attention of a neighbor, Dr. Albert Almore, who becomes so agitated by the presence of the private dick that he calls a cop, Det. Lt. Degarmo, who assumes Marlowe has been hired by the family of Almore's deceased wife to watch the doc. He gets told to beat it. Next stop: Puma Lake.
San Bernardino baked and shimmered in the afternoon heat. The air was hot enough to blister my tongue. I drove through it gasping, stopped long enough to buy a pint of liquor in case I fainted before I got to the mountains, and started up the long grade to Crestline. In fifteen miles the road climbed five thousand feet, but even then it was far from cool. Thirty miles of mountain driving brought me to the tall pines and a place called Bubbling Springs. It had a clapboard store and a gas pump, but it felt like paradise. From there on it was cool all the way.
The Puma Lake dam had an armed sentry at each end and one in the middle. The first one I came to had me close all the windows of the car before crossing the dam. About a hundred yards away from the dam a rope with cork floats barred the pleasure boats from coming any closer. Beyond these details the war did not seem to have done anything much to Puma Lake.
Marlowe is shown around the lakeside cabin by Kingsley's neighbor Bill Chess, a temperamental sod who maintains that Mrs. Kinglsey was here a few weeks ago, but went down the hill and hasn't been back. Marlowe works it out that Chess's wife Muriel caught him in a compromising position with Crystal Kingsley and left him the same day that Mrs. Kingsley was last seen. Walking near the lake, Chess gets even more reason to become mopey when he spots something in the water, the badly decomposed corpse of Muriel Chess. Marlowe goes to fetch the local law, Sheriff Jim Patton.
While Bill Chess produces an undated letter from his wife that could be construed as a suicide note, suspicion falls on him for murdering Muriel. Marlowe learns through the local gossip queen that a few weeks back, a man claiming to be a Los Angeles copper named DeSoto came around asking rude questions about someone named Mildred Haviland. No one cooperated with him, but the photo he flashed looked like Muriel Chess. Marlowe phones the copper switchboard but can find no detective named De Soto. He breaks into the Chess cabin for a look-see and is caught by the sheriff. Marlowe shares his theory that Muriel wasn't killed my her husband, but someone out of her past.
Confirming that Lavery was seen at the San Bernardino hotel where Crystal Kingsley's car was located with a woman who looked just like Crystal Kingsley, Marlowe returns to Bay City to confront the fop. Snooping around the place, he's confronted by Lavery's landlord Mrs. Fallbrook, who holds a pistol on him she found on the stairs. Marlowe manages to avoid getting shot and after getting rid of the nosy woman, finds Lavery shot dead in the bathtub. It looks as if a woman surprised Lavery shaving and emptied the pistol that Marlowe just had pointed at him. He finds a handkerchief on the bed with Adrienne Fromsett's initials.
Updating his client, Marlowe goes on the theory that Lavery got killed over whatever business happened with Dr. Almore, whose wife officially died of carbon monoxide poisoning and was discovered by Lavery. Her parents suspect foul play and visiting them, Marlowe discovers the private eye they hired was set up by the Bay City cops and sent to get his mind right in jail. That's exactly where Marlowe ends up, with Lt. Det. Degarmo hoping the private dick starts feeling unwelcome in Bay City. Interrogated by a sympathetic police captain, Marlowe learns that Degarmo was once married to Dr. Almore's nurse, Mildred Haviland.
"Is it your line that you can tie this Almore business a year and a half ago to the shooting in Lavery's place today? Or is it just a smoke screen you're laying down because you know damn well Kingsley's wife shot Lavery?"
I said: "It was tied to Lavery before he was shot. In a rough sort of way, perhaps only with a granny knot. But enough to make a man think."
"I've been into this matter a little more thoroughly than you might think," Webber said coldly. "Although I never had anything personally to do with the death of Almore's wife and I wasn't chief of detectives at that time. If you didn't even know Almore yesterday morning, you must have heard a lot about him since."
I told him exactly what I had heard both from Miss Fromsett and from the Graysons.
"Then it's your theory that Lavery may have blackmailed Dr. Almore?" he asked at the end. "And that that may have something to do with the murder?"
"It's not a theory. It's no more than a possibility. I wouldn't be doing a job if I ignored it. The relations, if any, between Lavery and Almore might have been deep and dangerous or just the merest acquaintance, or not even that. For all I positively know they may never even have spoken to each other. But if there was nothing funny about the Almore case, why get so tough with anybody who shows an interest in it? It could be coincidence that George Talley was hooked for drunk driving just when he was working on it. It could be coincidence that Almore called a cop because I stared at his house, and that Lavery was shot before I could talk to him a second time. But it's no coincidence that two of your men were watching Talley's home tonight, ready, willing and able to make trouble for me, if I went there."
If there's an aspect of Raymond Chandler's books that stand out most for me, its discipline. Philip Marlowe is a man with no past (his lack of military service isn't explained, not in this book) and dubious future. He has no friends, no exes, no pets. We don't know where he grew up or what made him want to become a private dick. We learn about Marlowe by watching in action, how he gets information from lowlifes and liars, or how he responds to pressure from those in authority. That's Marlowe, not where he went to college or what happened to him to make him like he is. And yet there is a lot to him.
"Let me see your identification."
I handed him my wallet and he rooted in it. Degarmo sat in a chair and crossed his legs and stared up blankly at the ceiling. He got a match out of his pocket and chewed the end of it. Webber gave me back my wallet. I put it away.
"People in your line make a lot of trouble," he said.
"Not necessarily,' I said.
He raised his voice. It had been sharp enough before. "I said they make a lot of trouble, and a lot of trouble is what I meant. But get this straight. You're not going to make any in Bay City."
I didn't answer him. He jabbed a forefinger at me.
"You're from the big town," he said. "You think you're tough and you think you're wise. Don't worry. We can handle you. We're a small place, but we're very compact. We don't have any political tug-of-war down here. We work on the straight line and we work fast. Don't worry about us, mister."
"I'm not worrying," I said. "I don't have anything to worry about. I'm just trying to make a nice clean dollar."
"And don't give me any of the flip talk," Webber said, "I don't like it."
My only complaint with The Lady in the Lake is how Marlowe seemed to fade into the background by the climax. He's not so much driven by a mystery he has to solve as sort of going through the motions, and Chandler introduces so many characters that they end up doing almost as much detecting or scene stealing as Marlowe. I could feel Chandler sort of give up toward the end, let Marlowe take note of what other characters were doing and end the book. He became more of a passive hero as far as the story went, but Chandler gets away with it by writing such smooth and unadorned prose.