HR with a Difference – 3.5 stars
When Captain Merridene dies in 1828, he has little to leave his two daughters, Martha and Penelope, and in his will commends them into the care of their cousin Edward (who resembles a rabbit) of Poolerby Hall. However, the sisters are not entirely penniless, with about two hundred pounds from their father and a small annuity from their mother, so they reject Edward’s kind offer of a home with him and his wife, Rosemary. He assures them they will not be a financial burden as he will be able to then dispense with the housekeeper and not have to hire a governess.
Martha has thought for a couple of years about what she and Penelope could do, and decided on starting a school for young ladies, hoping at the same time that there would be some eligible gentlemen around for Penelope. Surprisingly, it is Edward who comes to them with a solution, although he insists on taking them to meet the parties involved.
Living in a Lancashire mill town is vastly different from the life they had been living, but although they are of gentle birth, they had both been used to working in the house as well as acquiring the refinements expected of ladies of their station. Shortly after their arrival, Penelope is caught up in a riot, and together with mill “engineer” Daniel Porter, they hide out in the sisters’ empty house just in time. There are other plots being hatched and the story held my interest to the end, although the outcome is predictable. After all, it is an HR.
There is no sparkling dialogue but the author has a good turn of phrase and I found myself looking out for little gems as I read. There are also evocative descriptions that captured my attention. The writing and editing are reasonable, and I found the story easy to read. I did notice the odd typo and two places where the wrong character’s name is used, but didn’t really keep a lookout for errors. While I thoroughly enjoyed the first few chapters, I feel the rest of the book doesn’t quite live up to the initial promise.