So this is it, the final Horus Heresy book the big finisher and...... it is a letdown.
Every fan of warhammer 40k and especially those who are into the chaos marines know the story; Typhon tricked the legion and Mortarion in the warp after he had taken out their navigators to allow him and his fellow psychic marines to try guide the legion to Terra and the start of the siege. This allowed him to sent the fleet into the embrace of grand father Nurgle the chaos god of despair and plague which results in a broken Mortarion finally giving in his own and his legion's soul to the great chaos entity. It is an established story, so the book was not meant to be read or written like that, it should have been one of those "despite everything you kinda wish it doesn't end like you know it has to" books. Halass James Swallow bit of more then he could chew.
Were to start well for starters the "trick" what trick? Typhon literally drags a bunch of the fleet navigators in front of Mortarion and his inner circle of legionnaires, accuses them of treachery and then blasts them apart with his gun. Even Mortarion was like "dude..... WTF?" I mean where is the subtlety here? We read here and there that he has hoped and planned Mortarion's turn to the warp and nurgle as early as the days of Barbarus before the coming of the emperor and this is the best he could come up with? The character of Typhon feels like a hollow puppet, he is doing the stuff the plot is telling he is supposed to do but I just don't believe it. I don't see the charisma, the drive, the conviction, the strength of character that would have been necessary for any individual to plot against your own commander and legion like that. Qualities that Erebus had aplenty. Lore wise Erebus and Typhon are contenders of being the first chaos space marines but comparing them now would make that claim laughable, Erebus just knocks it out of the park while typhon is left wheezing at the first base.
That brings me to my second issue, namely we get so much hinted at but get to see so little. Yes we get the moment the infection hits the death guard but we get to see so little of it. Where is the buildup to the big breaking point? What happened to the bitterblood legionnaire confined in his dreadnought? Did he get changed like the rest of the legion or not? What I did like was the actual high point, which is mixed with the memory of Mortarion's failure to kill his stepfather, the overlord of Barbarus. The submission he had to make to the emperor and later to the chaos god, does feel as a painful familiar moment, a second realization that for all his claims of him being the most enduring warrior, the unbreakable soul, that in the end he does break and did so twice. His fate is to defy what he knows in heart is to be the truth, that he and his legion are not ever enduring, they break. It might take longer but in the end they do break. So it is even more painful for me as reader that it all happens so quickly and has so little emotional punch.
Why does it have so little built up? Why do we not get the story of Typhon scheming for years, his interactions and struggles with Erebus to let him turn his genefather on his terms? Why do we not get his pilgrimage with a part of the legion, which is only barely hinted at but yet noted as being crucial for what is about to happen? Why do we only get snips and bit of the past of Mortarion and his struggle on his own birth planet and his war against his stepfather? Why do we get so little of what this book claims to be the core story? For lords sake, Typhon's name is the name of the demon child of Gaia that ripped out the nervous system of Lord Zeus and had to be imprisoned under mount Etna, it is a name of terror and horror that should be earned, but he does not. And he does not even get a chance to earn it and why s that?
Because Malcador and the grey knights, that's why..... For at least a third of the book is dedicated to a mediocre subplot involving Nathanial Garro, the proto grey knights and Malcador that leads up to the final moment, when the grey knights chapter was born and sent off to prepare for what was to come after the Horus Heresy. Simply put.... I don't care and I hate that this is in this Death guard book. This should have been its own book. In stead of having so many anthology books or short stories involving the knights errant/ proto Grey knights, they should have made say book 53 on the grey knights and gotten that out of the way. Now because of this neither death guard fans nor grey knights fan have anything to be happy about.
Is there nothing redeeming about this book? Not really no. It is mediocre at best and primarily because they had to forcibly mix two stories that little to nothing to do with one-another. This should have been the final betrayal, the crescendo of treachery of a beloved brother betraying the legion he fought with, a horrible self delusion of endurance brought low, a gruesome story of how far a primarch has to fall before he breaks. In stead we get this, a sad rehash of story that had better been left to your own imagination.
A shame