First in a Kindle Unlimited series. This isn’t a book that I would ever have bought, but since I’ve got free KU for one month, I am exploring what books are offered. I’m up for a light summer read, and since I like historical mysteries, I thought I’d try this series set in the 1920s with a protagonist whose father, a British governor general in India, was just murdered along with her mother by a bomb tossed into their car. Rather improbably, Rose, our heroine, survived with only a fractured, lacerated cheek: seriously? After telling us how packed into the car she was with the other passengers?
MAJOR SPOILER ALERT: PLEASE DO NOT READ FURTHER IF YOU HAVE NOT FINISHED THE BOOK
The identity of the murderer was no real surprise, but there was one major twist near the end that I did not expect. Rose is an impostor, an American orphan with a secret in her abusive past who somehow ended up as a lady’s maid to the real Rose’s family, and even more improbably as a friend and surrogate daughter. The real Rose was killed in the explosion along with her parents, but was burned beyond recognition so Nellie Dennet, her real name, assumed Rose's identity.
An heiress, Rose is traveling back to England with a middle-aged married couple as chaperones, and she seems to turn off her feelings about the horror she just endured rather easily. The writing is competent, even pleasant to read, but everything is a bit shallow and superficial: characterization, emotions, and plot logic. And rather shamelessly, the author even created a French detective with whiskers à la Hercule Poirot, someone named Achilles Pridoux. Maybe it’s meant to be an homage.
One note: she named her ocean liner the RMS Star of India, but the only boat I can find by that name is a famous windjammer built in 1863. The story seems to be filled with anachronisms as well. The characters do not speak nor conduct themselves the way the upper crust British did in the 1920s, and the details of shipboard routine don’t seem accurate to the era either. The examples are too numerous to list, but here is one: Mrs. Worthy brings Rose a kiwi for breakfast. Oh no, she didn’t! :D That word wasn’t even invented by New Zealand farmers until 1962 as a marketing ploy for what had been called up until then a Chinese gooseberry. This is 1926! I very much doubt they would be serving Chinese gooseberries at all, and they certainly would not be calling them kiwis.
There are also are a number or typos and other errors. At one point, Rose mistakenly refers to the murdered woman, Ruby, as Rose. [This is one reason why you never name two characters with the same first initial.] There were several other simple issues like this.
I ended up skimming the book and will only skim the others to find out what else Rose is hiding.