At the start Martha Quest is a fifteen year old English girl (though time flows quickly... she’s 19 or 20 at the 40% mark and remains about that age for the rest of the book). At the beginning, it’s about 1935: between the World Wars, Hitler is name-dropped, and Martha lives on a farm in Africa. She’s isolated and doesn’t really have a friend her age, another girl, to talk to except for one whose outlook doesn’t match hers. She’s literary, argumentative, and sometimes perplexing, at least to me.
The narrative is not 1st person but it is very intimate. Martha Quest’s thoughts dominate. Occasionally there are brief jumps to other points of view, such as her mother’s and that of an older, inappropriate man. (There is even a longer passage later that is from an omniscient point of view and details the establishment of a Sports Club, and it is engrossing.) Martha is a very interesting girl who terrorizes her parents and others around her. If you don’t like her or can’t sympathize with her or don’t find her interesting, then, you may want to pass, but I was fascinated most of the time and/or flabbergasted.
Doris Lessing won the Nobel Prize in 2007. The quality of her writing here is definitely of the highest caliber. Her portrayal of Martha as a feisty thinker who is interested in various -isms such as socialism and racism and colonialism and women’s emancipation (before it became an -ism?) seems to indicate a historical claim that may explain the Nobel. Based on this one work, I do wonder about the award and her worthiness or distinctnessiness, because other writers, other women, are also close observers who produce vivid amusing prose that gets to the heart of interesting things. I guess I’ll have to read more of her work to judge...
There are scenes, very vivid scenes. At first I did not necessarily think they linked together and built on each other except to develop Matha’s character or to put aspects of her on display. Later, after I read three-fifths of the story or so, I began to sense how the scenes did build toward a theme or conclusion or maybe only a feeling about people, especially young adults and how they interact and explore the world. Some things did not necessarily make sense to me, such as when Martha avoided Joss or when she backed out of her college exams or kept hanging around with Donovan or...
The novel may appear plotless at first, and to some extent, maybe it is, though I did not find it boring. Far from it, though my true rating is probably somewhere between 3 and 4 stars, not 4. There were times at the beginning when what was on display - Martha’s musings - did not fully enchant me, but those doubts did not last.
Observing Martha as a young woman in pre-World War 2 Africa filled me with wonder because her experiences and the people she met reminded me of being that age in the late 80s and 90s, not that her details and my details were exact matches of course, but I developed a real affinity for Martha (and therefore Doris Lessing who was a contemporary of my grandparents!). People may tell you that times were different and people were different (and of course in ways they were), but Lessing proves that like-minds transcend generations and circumstances and even genders (even if they aren’t necessarily passed on through the same families).
I don’t know what my expectations were exactly or why, but the story is more conventional, more ordinary, than I thought it would be. It’s a coming of age story. Martha escapes the farm when a friend arranges a job for her at his uncles’ law firm in the city. She hangs out with a guy named Donovan, who has hang ups or ways that annoy Martha (and amused me), and then falls in with... and so on.
Here are only a few of many things that I enjoyed. They are random and not necessarily representative or what you, in your infinite wisdom, would highlight:
“Martha followed her mother obediently, and suddenly found herself saying, in a bright flippant voice, ‘That dirty old man, Mr. McFarline, he tried to make love to me.’ She looked at her father but he was slowly crumbling his bread in time with his thoughts.”
- Despite detailing Martha’s internalizations closely, Lessing does offer the reader opportunities to observe and judge her environment without spelling everything out, such as here.
“At one moment she scorned him because he had dared to treat her like an attractive young female; and the next because he had taken her at her word, and simply offered books; and the confusion hardened into a nervous repulsion: Well, she could do without Joss!”
- Lessing often captures the chaotic thoughts of adolescents quite well, at least as I remembered them while reading her writing.
“Martha, at first sight, might pass for the marriageable and accomplished daughter it seemed that Mrs Quest, after all, desired. In her bright-yellow linen dress, her face tinted carefully with cosmetics, she appeared twenty. But the dress has grass stains on it, was crumpled, she was smoking hungrily, and her fingers were already stained with nicotine, her rifle was lying carelessly across her lap, and on it was balanced a book which, as Mrs Quest could see, was called The Decay of the British Empire.”
- Hilarious, isn’t it? There are quite a few moments like this.
“...she looked from him to the charming young man, his son, and wondered how soon the shrill and complaining strand in his character would strengthen until he too became like his father, a bad-tempered but erudite hermit among his books…”
- Good thing my wife did not read this book before we met. If she had had the opportunity to compare me with these guys, I’d probably still be a bachelor.